MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
Holy Hotness, you all made such great poems, it's hard to hide. Don't we love them guns
FanFic Poetry
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Sorry, I must have hit a wrong button; I got one of those "post already exists" things and thought the board was acting up.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
ericloca
Lab Technician
A stupid poem I made one day , after I watched A walk to remember .
She :
I want to cry but tears are not falling
I want to talk but the words are not coming
I feel so empty , so powerless , so fool .
I am alone into a world that’s cruel .
I miss you every day , I think at you every night
You left long ago and I still have your shadow in my sight
I close my eyes , and think at the good times ,
I take your photo and sleep with it sometimes .
He:
I came as a phantom , to protect you , my love
I’ve been watching you from above .
I am the one who kisses you goodnight
The one that ask you if you’re alright
She :
I think a spirit is kissing me goodnight
But it’s nothing there when I turn on the light .
He:
I’ll hold you in my arms , I’ll whisper in your ear
I’ll wipe away your tears , I’ll fight away your fears
We are so close , my love and yet so far away
You cannot see me , you do not hear what I say
She :
My heart is beating faster , I look at the picture in my hand
I kiss your face and remember the times we played in the sand
I’m thinking at you every moment , I imagine you’re still alive
I dream , I scream , I fight , I’m waiting for you to arrive
He:
I want to leave , but you won’t let me go
You’re keeping me on Earth because you loved me so
She :
I still try to forget the day he left and died
They told me you’re dead and I denied .
Your memory haunts , than live without you I’d better die
I want to die , to be with you , I cannot say goodbye
I want to be next to you , in heaven or hell
Wherever you are , I’ll find you by your smell
I want to climb up there , and you to take my hand
To kiss me tenderly and lead me to your land
He:
Then close your eyes my lover , and let your body fall
A light will guide you and you’ll hear my call
She :
I am so tired , I want to sleep . I see something that’s bright
I hear a voice , I feel like I’m flying on the light .
I open my eyes , I’m on the grass . I smell the flowers , and see the sky
I am in some unknown place , I’m scared , I cannot cry
And then I turn my head and look at the sun .
I whisper “Greg …” and I hear “I love you hun”
He :
She’s here … next to me . She’s on the ground .
I run to her , without making a sound
She :
I feel my feet weakening and I fall to my knees
If this is a dream , wake me up , please !
He:
“I love you … my Sara” she reached to touch my face
Her body’s trembling with so much grace .
“I’m not a dream , I’m real !” I hug her to my chest
We lower to the ground and she grippes on my vest .
She the lifts her head and asks me loudly
“Together forever ?” I just nod , proudly .
And this is the story of a love that may not happen again ,
Because the real love hardly finds someone to chain .
She :
I want to cry but tears are not falling
I want to talk but the words are not coming
I feel so empty , so powerless , so fool .
I am alone into a world that’s cruel .
I miss you every day , I think at you every night
You left long ago and I still have your shadow in my sight
I close my eyes , and think at the good times ,
I take your photo and sleep with it sometimes .
He:
I came as a phantom , to protect you , my love
I’ve been watching you from above .
I am the one who kisses you goodnight
The one that ask you if you’re alright
She :
I think a spirit is kissing me goodnight
But it’s nothing there when I turn on the light .
He:
I’ll hold you in my arms , I’ll whisper in your ear
I’ll wipe away your tears , I’ll fight away your fears
We are so close , my love and yet so far away
You cannot see me , you do not hear what I say
She :
My heart is beating faster , I look at the picture in my hand
I kiss your face and remember the times we played in the sand
I’m thinking at you every moment , I imagine you’re still alive
I dream , I scream , I fight , I’m waiting for you to arrive
He:
I want to leave , but you won’t let me go
You’re keeping me on Earth because you loved me so
She :
I still try to forget the day he left and died
They told me you’re dead and I denied .
Your memory haunts , than live without you I’d better die
I want to die , to be with you , I cannot say goodbye
I want to be next to you , in heaven or hell
Wherever you are , I’ll find you by your smell
I want to climb up there , and you to take my hand
To kiss me tenderly and lead me to your land
He:
Then close your eyes my lover , and let your body fall
A light will guide you and you’ll hear my call
She :
I am so tired , I want to sleep . I see something that’s bright
I hear a voice , I feel like I’m flying on the light .
I open my eyes , I’m on the grass . I smell the flowers , and see the sky
I am in some unknown place , I’m scared , I cannot cry
And then I turn my head and look at the sun .
I whisper “Greg …” and I hear “I love you hun”
He :
She’s here … next to me . She’s on the ground .
I run to her , without making a sound
She :
I feel my feet weakening and I fall to my knees
If this is a dream , wake me up , please !
He:
“I love you … my Sara” she reached to touch my face
Her body’s trembling with so much grace .
“I’m not a dream , I’m real !” I hug her to my chest
We lower to the ground and she grippes on my vest .
She the lifts her head and asks me loudly
“Together forever ?” I just nod , proudly .
And this is the story of a love that may not happen again ,
Because the real love hardly finds someone to chain .
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
TWO MORE MACKY POEMS....ONE POST UP
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
*sallows a cold drink away* I can see the hands and everything else, but... please...., please.... turn him around, so I can see his butt. Thats an aweome pic and poem Luving. Your album here is gettting bigger. Soon I'll need a larger memory card. :devil: :devil: O gosh, I'm drooling overhere. :lol:
Damn, I just love your poems :lol:
Damn, I just love your poems :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
tWO MORE FOR YOU ALL.....PLEASENT DREAMS :devil:
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
mmmmm extremely pleasant :devil:
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
That does it.... Goodnight, I'm off... :devil: and I'm taking Macky with me *so don't you dare Luving....*. You can have him back when I'm awake in a few hours. Darn... I've gotta get to those New York shores sometime *better start a piggy bank or something... *
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
The pic didn't give me much creativity, but I gave it my best shot, hope you like it.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
uh uh don't *you* dare, he's with me and you know it!
There's a fic in this somewhere I know it lol
There's a fic in this somewhere I know it lol
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
Good morming ladies,
I knew that pic was a tough one for poetry, but you did great on it. Just imagine waking up with such a delicious view. Holliday-vibes are heading this way. Thanks Luving. And now that I'm awake I hand Macky over to you. Come and get him girls! *Ducks especially from Mel*. :devil:
I knew that pic was a tough one for poetry, but you did great on it. Just imagine waking up with such a delicious view. Holliday-vibes are heading this way. Thanks Luving. And now that I'm awake I hand Macky over to you. Come and get him girls! *Ducks especially from Mel*. :devil:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Thank-you Senna...He is now safely cuffed to me and these cuffs cannot be unlocked, they can only be opend, with my voice, and a certain word, so if Mel wants him, she's gonna have to take me too.
Glad you enjoyed the poem, and yes it was a tuff to do. I think it was the coffe cup, that threw me off, that and the fact, he wasn't half nakkid, or wet :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
ericloca
Lab Technician
Angel
There is an angel without white wings
Who sits in a window and gently sings
I watch the angel , I watch her tears
Since I was a kid , over twenty years .
I never dared to go and say good bye
Sit next to her and ask “why you cry ?”
Today she was in her garden , so sweet ,
Walking on the grass with her bare feet
She kneeled and took a flower
That was wet from her morning shower
I made a noise , she turned around .
I saw her eyes that were so brown …
She looked at me , and smiled , but ran away
The flower fell to the ground and there it lay
I took it in my hand and held it to my chest
To feel the warmth of the body who got me obsessed
Now I see her daily and still don’t dare to talk
Afraid that she’ll scare and walk .
I have butterflies in my stomach , I feel not good at all
Everyone is worried , but my sickness is called love
An angel conquered my heart , my soul my mind at once
When I walk near her house my head starts to bounce
I don’t know what to do , how to tell her what I feel ?
She will think I’m nuts , she’ll say my words are not real .
I dress and leave the house , I’ve thought all night
I will go and show her that to love is right
Taking deep breaths I enter her garden and knock on the door
She opens , and seeing me drops her juice on the floor
She wants to close the door , I stop her with a touch
I look at her and whisper “I love you so much …”
She is shocked , and quiet . I’m waiting for an answer
We look at each other , and she jumps , like a dancer
In my arms , she hugs me and her touch is warm
I hold her to my chest , she grips on my arm
“My knight , I knew you’d come” she says taking my hand
It’s like a fairytale , where nothing is as planned
I then remember about the story of a bewitched girl
Who was the keeper and guardian of a pearl
Who gave her life to a mortal and was cursed to never feel and love again
Until someone will fall for her , and then the freedom she’ll regain
This is my fairytale , she’s the princess , I’m her knight
We broke the spell together and this is our night
If you’ll ever hear about a princess who got saved by the power of love ,
Just remember that her name was Sara and his name was Greg .
There is an angel without white wings
Who sits in a window and gently sings
I watch the angel , I watch her tears
Since I was a kid , over twenty years .
I never dared to go and say good bye
Sit next to her and ask “why you cry ?”
Today she was in her garden , so sweet ,
Walking on the grass with her bare feet
She kneeled and took a flower
That was wet from her morning shower
I made a noise , she turned around .
I saw her eyes that were so brown …
She looked at me , and smiled , but ran away
The flower fell to the ground and there it lay
I took it in my hand and held it to my chest
To feel the warmth of the body who got me obsessed
Now I see her daily and still don’t dare to talk
Afraid that she’ll scare and walk .
I have butterflies in my stomach , I feel not good at all
Everyone is worried , but my sickness is called love
An angel conquered my heart , my soul my mind at once
When I walk near her house my head starts to bounce
I don’t know what to do , how to tell her what I feel ?
She will think I’m nuts , she’ll say my words are not real .
I dress and leave the house , I’ve thought all night
I will go and show her that to love is right
Taking deep breaths I enter her garden and knock on the door
She opens , and seeing me drops her juice on the floor
She wants to close the door , I stop her with a touch
I look at her and whisper “I love you so much …”
She is shocked , and quiet . I’m waiting for an answer
We look at each other , and she jumps , like a dancer
In my arms , she hugs me and her touch is warm
I hold her to my chest , she grips on my arm
“My knight , I knew you’d come” she says taking my hand
It’s like a fairytale , where nothing is as planned
I then remember about the story of a bewitched girl
Who was the keeper and guardian of a pearl
Who gave her life to a mortal and was cursed to never feel and love again
Until someone will fall for her , and then the freedom she’ll regain
This is my fairytale , she’s the princess , I’m her knight
We broke the spell together and this is our night
If you’ll ever hear about a princess who got saved by the power of love ,
Just remember that her name was Sara and his name was Greg .
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