FanFic Poetry #3..."Who says you can't Sensually Combust?"

Hi guys, newbie to the poetry thread. Im a lurker & love all the poems.
@ EMEYES....that was beautiful...loved it.:p

I haven't written since high school, many many moons ago, but here's one I wrote for Eric about his injury & Natalia, I hope your able to follow it, the timeframe is from Eric's shooting to present.:D

"Finding the light"

I awake in this room
my head is heavy, it's hard to see
my past so unclear
this bullet now living inside of me

I hear a woman's voice outside my door
suddenly I feel no sorrow
the Doctor says "visiting hours are over, Miss
you'll have to come back tomorrow"
my heart can feel her
my head can't seem to place her
~~~
Her scent fills the air
it brings me back to a time I can't recall
I hear her speak, her voice so familiar
she gives me a contagious smile, a laugh i've heard before
my heart feels her
my head can't place her
~~~
I hold her in comfort
an image flashes in my mind
brown hair lays across my pillow, i'm unaware why
I suddenly feel like a man I used to know
my heart feels her
my head doesn't place her though
~~~
Today my friend lays in this bed
a room where I once have been
I'm reminded of my sister, his wife
I ask God if they'll be together again

I find myself back at her bedside, not his
facing the sadness I had buried within
memories begin to flood my mind
bloody images...dirt covered caskets
gunshots echo...I relive the fear
my head starts spinning
scribbles in my mind
now are written so clear
~~~
I see myself wrapped in her arms, her body bare
brown hair spread across my pillow
her soft voice says to me "it'll be alright"
as her fingers gently stroke my hair

all the darkness I had put to rest
my life, nothing but a blurr
she was the light
that got buried along with it
my heart can feel her
through darkness...
I've now found her.
 
That was absolutely beautiful, MJ. :) I loved it. :)

edited to add my Greg poem (written for my fic "Acting on Impulse & Love"). I finally put the poem on a wall (its a screenshot I made of a ep of CSI Vegas, the pics of Greg are screenshots I made from the "Harvest" ep):

 
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Great job to both of you. *Claps*:)

Wonderful and lovely, so nice to see more poetry:)

Is anyone else having trouble with photobucket?
 
Maybe they were updating their server or something. :shrug:

Very nice poems. I love the backgrounds, they are very pretty. :)
 
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