FanFic Poetry #3..."Who says you can't Sensually Combust?"

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  1. katpin31791

    katpin31791 CSI Level Three

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    Hey girl these r all awesome. Have snagged some along the way. Thanks.
     
  2. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    The group wall poem looks great. I love the Smacked one. Love the pics and background. :)
     
  4. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Yes it does, we all did great, and it was alot of fun. Hopefully we can do another soon.:)
     
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  5. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    *sticks out tongue* *runs and hides* *yells "Smacked rules** lol Im just playing with you. Love the promo pic one :D
     
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    MarineGirl#1 CSI Level Three

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    Those poems are all so wonderful. Thanks for the bait Linda. I've been gone too long. :evil: It was fun to do the group poem. I'm gonna stick around for a while :lol: I'm not best poet, but if anyone needs help with grammar I'd like to help ;)
     
  8. EmeraldEyes06

    EmeraldEyes06 Lab Technician

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    Hi everyone! :) All the poems are really good, MLA!! And the 'Poetry Group' one was really cool as well! So much talent!!

    Nice work everyone!! :) I'm still waiting on my poetic muse to return to me! I'll be joining ye in the 'Poetry Group' very soon when I can come up with a nice verse. :)
     
  9. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    You have Jools. I'm glad you're back:)


    Tell your muse to hurry:lol:
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Very nice. I love the shape of it and the colors... and the pics and the font... all of it. :lol:
     
  12. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    ooh nice one :)
     
  13. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Thanks, I really like the oval effect. It made the wall look framed.
     
  14. EmeraldEyes06

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    Hi!! My muse hurried at your kind request, MLA, and has returned!!:) :)

    This is something I wrote just now, while listening to 'Canon in D' by Johann Pachelbel. They always play this at weddings, so I was really inspired. :)

    I see this as a love poem that Horatio might send to Calleigh on their wedding day, sticking with the theme of weddings and the inspiration from Pachelbel's Canon. Here it is:

    Calleigh...

    My dearest love,
    I have waited so long,
    To hear your voice sing to me
    Like the sweetest song.

    I see Heaven in your smile,
    I see love in your eyes,
    Even after all this time,
    You never fail to surprise.

    I could never picture my life
    Without your guiding light,
    That releases my heart from sadness,
    And makes my darkness bright.

    You make my lies my truths,
    You make my wrongs my rights,
    You hold me when I feel alone,
    You dry the tears I've cried.

    You're more than I ever wanted,
    All I ever dreamed of,
    The one who truly completes me,
    The only one I ever loved.

    These words I give to you,
    As a sign of my love for you,
    And never forget, my Calleigh,
    To you I will always be true.

    Love, Horatio.

    Loved the Mac Taylor poem, MLA! It was really full of emotion, and I really liked the oval effect. :)

    Great work!! :) Hope you liked my contribution! :)
     
  15. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    *Claps*....:thumbsup:

    Emer that was truely beautiful. And I'm so happy your muse came back to say hello.:) Every word of your poem is so true when it comes to DuCaine. The power, the love, the glances that say....

    "I wish, I wish they would allow me to love you Horatio. I wish they would allow our love to shine across Miami, and in our show.

    It truely is a shame that they are waiting so long for their time to finally come. But then again, that's why they are "End Game". I'll tell you this much, their already relationship has come to light, in our eyes, and the viewers eyes. Now we just need to get it in the writer's eyes;)
     

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