MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
btw what would happen if Danny left? Couldn't someone just stay with him?
hey Lynn,you can't be in Mac's arms 'cause I'm already there
hey Lynn,you can't be in Mac's arms 'cause I'm already there
CSI:NY...Don't forget to say Good-bye
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
hey Lynn,you can't be in Mac's arms 'cause I'm already there
No way Melly. I gave you the clone....hehehe
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Back at the Hospital Flack left to get a coffee. As he returned to the room he noticed Danny was trying to put on his pants.
"Where ya going Danno?"
"Home man. I can't stay here Don. I really can't." He sobbed.
Placing the coffee down Don wrapped him in his arms.
"Come on Danny, you need to stop this. You're only hurting yourself. Get back into bed. Come on."
Walking him back to the bed, Don covered him back up.
"You know. If you keep trying to escape they will have to strap you down."
Don wasn't trying to be mean. But he also knew if worse came to worse he wouldn't hesitate to strap him himself.
"Let's see what's on TV."
Turning the channels Don found Cheech and Chong on.
"Here we go Danno. Look it's you and me in a few years."
Danny laughed.
"Yeah man. Without the weed."
"Good evening Detectives. Danny it's time for your sponge bath."
Don choked on his coffee.
"Sponge bath?? What for. He can walk, can't he use the shower?"
"Of course he can. But I thought he might prefer a nice sponge bath tonight. We wouldn't want him to fall and hurt himself in the shower would we?"
Don looked at Danny as if to say....
"You lucky bugger. Look at her."
"Be gone Don. I'll see you soon. I need to have my bath." He winked.
"Uhuh...I bet. I'll be right outside incase you decide to escape again."
Danny thought to himself...."Yeah, like that's going to happen right now."
Feeling the warm sponge wipe across his chest Danny closed his eyes and enjoyed his bath. About an hour later the nurse walked out with a smile on her face.
"Okay Detective, you can go back in now."
Laughing Don whispered to her...."You forgot your third button."
Smiling seductively she walked away.
"How do you feel now Danno?"
"Aww man. You have no idea. She has the most hottest fingers."
"I bet. Did you get her number?"
"I got better then that. I got two numbers. One for you and one for me. Once I'm outta here they want to double date. Know what they said...
"Detectives make them pant."
Wiggling his eyebrows Don smiled wickedly.
Back at the house Mac and Stella were still wrapped within each other.
"Mac...I don't want to move. But my thighs are sleeping. She whispered.
"I don't want you to move either love. But we need to make you comfortable."
Releasing himself from her she sighed deep as the cold air hit her heated body. Flipping her on her side, he pulled her into the spoon position and snuggled her right under his neck.
"Better love?"
"Mmmhm. Thank you Mac."
"For what Stella."
"For giving the most passionate night of my life. For giving me the tenderness and care I never knew existed."
"You're welcome love. And you can expect more endless nights of passion. Hopefully for the rest of our lives. I love you Stella Bonasara. Forever if you'll have me."
"Hmm..I don't know. I think I need to think about that." She laughed.
Swatting her bum she owwed.
"Okay you win. I love you Mac Taylor. Forever if you'll have me."
Bitting down on her shoulder, he turned her towards him and gave her one last deep kiss before falling into sleep.
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
haha you wish!
what would happen if he did go home? I think like I said that someone should stay with him so he can go home.
what would happen if he did go home? I think like I said that someone should stay with him so he can go home.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Ummm....No like your SMac. I gave you lots of it no review Did you not check up at ff.net???? Naughty you. Sends another MacClone to SMac ya:guffaw:
Cause he's on blood thinners to break up the clot. Can't do that at home.
besides they are having alot fun in the Hospital, don't ya think:lol:
Did you not check up at ff.net???? Naughty you. Sends another MacClone to SMac ya:guffaw:Cause he's on blood thinners to break up the clot. Can't do that at home.
besides they are having alot fun in the Hospital, don't ya think
:lol:
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
*nod* hehe Very naughty Linda :lol:besides they are having alot fun in the Hospital, don't ya think
Great updates, Great Smacked moments
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
*ducks* it's still confusing, lots of people take blood thinners at home. Unless they're still adjusting the amount or aren't sure if the clot's gone or something. It's probably good Flack's there or he would check out AMA. LOL I'm dense I guess.
I went and looked. Smacked smut is good hehe It's unpredictable with me whether I read adult parts or not. I can never tell if I'll want to for some reason.
I went and looked. Smacked smut is good hehe
It's unpredictable with me whether I read adult parts or not. I can never tell if I'll want to for some reason.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Is confusing me
First you want me to get to the smex then you don't know. Make up my mind:lol::lol: Screams in confusion:guffaw::guffaw:I worte that scene beautifully with passion. Is sad:lol::lol:Will have next chapter up soon. Almost at the end with this story.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Okie Dokie *waits quite patiently as she laughs at Melly and Linda*
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
it was yummy though Don't be sad about it I should know that FF.Net doesn't allow true adult anymore anyway, because they have that R limit now. I do read R sometimes, which accounts for most of yours,just not NC-17.
Don't be sad about it I should know that FF.Net doesn't allow true adult anymore anyway, because they have that R limit now. I do read R sometimes, which accounts for most of yours,just not NC-17.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
The following morning Mac woke to Stella softly snoring on his chest. Gently shaking her she woke.
"Morning sweetheart."
"Mmm...morning Mac." She purred as she caressed her hand down his chest.
"I thought you might like to go see Danny today at the Hospital. I'm sure he'd like some visitors."
"Sounds great. I'll start the coffee if you start the shower."
"I can do that. But before that I would love a kiss."
"Sorry Mac."
Leaning up she softly touched his lips, as he brought up his hand around her head pulling her in deeper. Both becoming lost in the passion again, Mac broke the kiss.
"Up and at em love. The day is disappearing."
While Stella walked to the kitchen she pulled down the can of coffee and started a pot. Then hearing the water running she dropped her gown. Stepping into the shower Mac felt her warm sweet hands slide over his shoulder, as she kissed his back.
Turning in her arms, he washed his hands all over her body soaping them both with passionate caresses, until they were both lost in a whirlwind of pleasure. Leaning her up against the stall, she wrapped her legs around his waist as he merged their souls as one. So much sensuality was forcing them both to lose themselves.
Not wanting to slow down they loved each other with endless cries of purrs and sighs. Coming back to their reality Mac knew he would never want to survive without it. He would never want to spend his nights alone. Thinking to himself he wondered if she would marry him.
"Mac...you okay? Mac, you look upset."
"I'm fine love. I love you so much Stel. I never want to stop loving you."
Stella was trying to understand where he was coming from. It was as if he was all of a sudden insecure about them. Leaving her thinking she had done something wrong.
"Please Mac. Please tell me what's wrong."
"I'll explain tonight love. I have alot to do before tonight. But for now let's get dressed and go see Danny."
Stepping out of the tub Stella was still confused as she watched Mac lost in a fit of smirks and smiles. Seeing her expression of confusion he kissed her smartly and said...
"Don't pout Stella. I'll tell you tonight. Now let's go."
Once they were dressed they shared their coffee and headed out with Mac still smiling away.
At the Hospital
When they walked into Danny's room they found Don sleeping in the chair.
"Hey Don, wake up where's Danny?"
Jumping up quickly, they all laughed.
"Not funny Mac. Oh God you brought coffee. Thanks."
"You're welcome Don. How you feeling Danny?"
"Better Mac. I can go home tomorrow with a babysitter for a few days." he laughed.
"I take it Don's your babysitter?"
"Yeah. Couldn't ask for a better one. I love ya man."
"I know Danno. Right back at ya man."
"Awww...my boys. You make me cry."
"Don can I talk to you for a minute in the hall?"
"Sure Mac. Watch him Stel."
"I will. No worries there."
"What's that about?"
"I'm not sure Danny. We could listen," she giggled.
"I'll pass Stel. Though you look different somehow, almost glowing."
"I know. I'd share but I'm not ready."
As Danny snorted Stella wondered what was going on in the hall.
"What's up Mac?"
"I need your help. I need you to come with me right now and pick Stella out a ring."
"A what!!! You, her. You asked her already?"
"I plan to tonight. It has to be special for her. better then romantic."
"Wow!! Does this mean I can tell Danny?"
"After we pick out the ring. I don't want him to let it slip."
"What about the others?"
"They can find out later too. Now let's go get the soon to be Mrs.Taylor her ring."
Letting Stella know that he and Don would be back soon, Stella and Danny both wondered what was going on.
"Morning sweetheart."
"Mmm...morning Mac." She purred as she caressed her hand down his chest.
"I thought you might like to go see Danny today at the Hospital. I'm sure he'd like some visitors."
"Sounds great. I'll start the coffee if you start the shower."
"I can do that. But before that I would love a kiss."
"Sorry Mac."
Leaning up she softly touched his lips, as he brought up his hand around her head pulling her in deeper. Both becoming lost in the passion again, Mac broke the kiss.
"Up and at em love. The day is disappearing."
While Stella walked to the kitchen she pulled down the can of coffee and started a pot. Then hearing the water running she dropped her gown. Stepping into the shower Mac felt her warm sweet hands slide over his shoulder, as she kissed his back.
Turning in her arms, he washed his hands all over her body soaping them both with passionate caresses, until they were both lost in a whirlwind of pleasure. Leaning her up against the stall, she wrapped her legs around his waist as he merged their souls as one. So much sensuality was forcing them both to lose themselves.
Not wanting to slow down they loved each other with endless cries of purrs and sighs. Coming back to their reality Mac knew he would never want to survive without it. He would never want to spend his nights alone. Thinking to himself he wondered if she would marry him.
"Mac...you okay? Mac, you look upset."
"I'm fine love. I love you so much Stel. I never want to stop loving you."
Stella was trying to understand where he was coming from. It was as if he was all of a sudden insecure about them. Leaving her thinking she had done something wrong.
"Please Mac. Please tell me what's wrong."
"I'll explain tonight love. I have alot to do before tonight. But for now let's get dressed and go see Danny."
Stepping out of the tub Stella was still confused as she watched Mac lost in a fit of smirks and smiles. Seeing her expression of confusion he kissed her smartly and said...
"Don't pout Stella. I'll tell you tonight. Now let's go."
Once they were dressed they shared their coffee and headed out with Mac still smiling away.
At the Hospital
When they walked into Danny's room they found Don sleeping in the chair.
"Hey Don, wake up where's Danny?"
Jumping up quickly, they all laughed.
"Not funny Mac. Oh God you brought coffee. Thanks."
"You're welcome Don. How you feeling Danny?"
"Better Mac. I can go home tomorrow with a babysitter for a few days." he laughed.
"I take it Don's your babysitter?"
"Yeah. Couldn't ask for a better one. I love ya man."
"I know Danno. Right back at ya man."
"Awww...my boys. You make me cry."
"Don can I talk to you for a minute in the hall?"
"Sure Mac. Watch him Stel."
"I will. No worries there."
"What's that about?"
"I'm not sure Danny. We could listen," she giggled.
"I'll pass Stel. Though you look different somehow, almost glowing."
"I know. I'd share but I'm not ready."
As Danny snorted Stella wondered what was going on in the hall.
"What's up Mac?"
"I need your help. I need you to come with me right now and pick Stella out a ring."
"A what!!! You, her. You asked her already?"
"I plan to tonight. It has to be special for her. better then romantic."
"Wow!! Does this mean I can tell Danny?"
"After we pick out the ring. I don't want him to let it slip."
"What about the others?"
"They can find out later too. Now let's go get the soon to be Mrs.Taylor her ring."
Letting Stella know that he and Don would be back soon, Stella and Danny both wondered what was going on.
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
mmmm yay
lol at Danny and Don
lol at Danny and Don
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Natty cant waint
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When they arrived at the Jewelers Mac was shown several rings.
"Hmm..what do you think Don?"
"I wouldn't go big Mac. Stella's not into that. I'd go with something dainty. Not to small, or to big, just in between. Something like this one."
Picking up the ring Mac admired it. It was a half carat diamond with little smaller ones around it.
"You think she'll like this?"
"I do Mac. I can tell you if I was Stella. I'd marry ya if you bought me that ring."
Mac gave a Don one of those looks.
"Don't look at me like that Mac. I'm just saying."
"Okay. I'll take this one. Can you tell me if you do engraving? And how long it will take."
"We do. It will take about three hours. What would you like written on it?"
"Always my Forever."
"That's beautiful Mac. Wow. Powerful."
"What the hell is wrong with you Don? You're acting strange."
"Nothing Mac. Now tell me, how are you going to propose?"
"At the Zoo."
Don gave his what the "F" look.
"The Zoo??? What would posses you to propose at the Zoo?"
"That is where we had our first official date. I took her to see the new born cubs. This is where it all began Don."
"I thought it started with movies?"
"No. That was when we realized we loved each other. The Zoo was our first real date as a couple."
"Okay then. What do you need me to do Mac?"
"Well. I have to call the Zoo and see if they will allow us a private picnic table by those cubs. What I need you to do is set up the dinner and Champagne for me. I also need candles."
"Then we should split up Mac. I'll get everything picked up and taken over. You go talk to the Zoo keeper and get that all in order. We'll meet at the Zoo in three hours. Her ring should be ready by then too."
"Okay Don. Thanks for everything. You really think she'll be surprised?"
"I'm telling you Mac. She's going to be passed excitment."
Meanwhile at the Hospital...
"Hey Stel, where do you think they are? It's getting late."
"I'm not sure Danny. They've been almost five hours now. I'm getting kind of hungry."
"I have some Pretzels Stel. Want some?"
"Sure. Thanks Danny."
Sitting down beside him on his bed Mac and Don finally walked in.
"Christ man it's about time."
"Sorry Danno. We got held up."
"I'm starving Mac. Can we go home and have dinner?"
"Sure Stel. But we have to make one stop first."
"Mac it's six in the evening. I'm starving."
"I know that Stella. Trust me okay. Just one small stop and then we will eat."
"Alright." Kissing Danny on the cheek they left.
"What was that about Donnie? Mac looked scared to death."
"Brace yourself Danno. Mac is asking Stella to marry him tonight."
"WHAT!!!! Get out man. I didn't even know they were dating. Are you serious?"
"I am Danno. By this time tomorrow morning she'll be wearing his ring."
Smiling wildly Don grabbed the Pretzels and turned on the game.
Leaving the Hospital Stella asked...
"Where are you taking me Mac?"
"You'll see Stella. You trust me right?"
"I trust you with my life Mac. I always have."
"Then trust me when I say you will love it."
When they arrived at the Zoo Stella was confused.
"The Zoo?? Why are we here Mac. They're closed."
"I know sweetheart. But I made a special arangement with them. Now close your eyes and no peeking."
Closing her eyes he brought her to the table.
"Okay Stella. Open them."
Opening her eyes she cried. Never had she seen anything so beautiful. The table was decorated in a beautiful lace, along with the napkins. The glasses where plastic Champagne, and the plates were paper. But what set off her tears were the candles. They were in the shape of hearts interlocked with each other.
"Oh Mac. This is beautiful."
"Thank you. Your seat my lady."
Sitting down Mac reached behind and pulled out a small boom box. Playing the music he smiled and lifted the dinner tray. Inside was two hotdogs with the works. Just like they had that day.
"Aww..Mac. Even the hotdogs. How did you do all this? And why?"
He was nervous now. He could feel his nerves begin to dance. Getting down on his knee, he said...
"Stella....I know it seems like a whisper of time has only gone by. But during that time it felt like we already started our forever. I only wish we hadn't waited so long to realize we were in love. What I'm trying to say is that I want to spend the rest of my life you. I want to spend every waking, every sleeping moment with you. I want us to have a family, a dog, even some cats. But most of all I want you to marry me Stella. I want you to "Always be my forever. Marry me Stella."
Pulling the ring from his pocket, he opened the box. Lifting it out he showed her the inscription inside. As she read it she cried again.
"Always my Forever. Oh Mac. That's so beautiful. Yes. Yes I'll marry you. Yes I'll be your forever."
Slipping the ring onto her finger he kissed it. Then pulling her up into his arms he gently pulled her close and passionately kissed her. So deep into each other as the music filled the Zoo around them, leaving them swaying long into the night.
After finishing their hotdogs they headed home. Unlocking the door Mac picked her up and carried her.
"This is for practice Stella."
"You've done wonderful Mac. Everything was so romantic, so well thought out. How could you think I wouldn't marry you? I love you Mac, always."
"I know that Stel. I just wasn't sure if it was to soon. The last thing I wanted to do was scare you. Or have you shy away from what we already shared."
"I'd never shy away Mac. That much I can honestly say."
"So I guess the next thing to plan is when."
"Hmm..I know. How about this exact day next year. That way we would never forget tonight."
"I like that sweetheart. So November 8th 2009 we will be Mr.Mrs.Taylor."
"Yes we will Mac. Now love me please. Take me to our room and love me."
Picking her up in his arms, he carried her up to bed. Where he loved her in fevered passion till the light shone through their window bringing their wedding date one more day closer to a future full of passion and love.
The End.
Epi
November 8th 2009
He was waiting at the alter as Sid appeared with her on his arm. Watching her waddle down the aisle placed a sweet loving smile on his face. For here was his Stella, carrying their first child within her. A child that would know what true passionate love was made from. A child that would know his parents were rooted from the strongest values and the most compassionate souls. A child that would soon become known as Mitchell Mackenzie Taylor.
"Hmm..what do you think Don?"
"I wouldn't go big Mac. Stella's not into that. I'd go with something dainty. Not to small, or to big, just in between. Something like this one."
Picking up the ring Mac admired it. It was a half carat diamond with little smaller ones around it.
"You think she'll like this?"
"I do Mac. I can tell you if I was Stella. I'd marry ya if you bought me that ring."
Mac gave a Don one of those looks.
"Don't look at me like that Mac. I'm just saying."
"Okay. I'll take this one. Can you tell me if you do engraving? And how long it will take."
"We do. It will take about three hours. What would you like written on it?"
"Always my Forever."
"That's beautiful Mac. Wow. Powerful."
"What the hell is wrong with you Don? You're acting strange."
"Nothing Mac. Now tell me, how are you going to propose?"
"At the Zoo."
Don gave his what the "F" look.
"The Zoo??? What would posses you to propose at the Zoo?"
"That is where we had our first official date. I took her to see the new born cubs. This is where it all began Don."
"I thought it started with movies?"
"No. That was when we realized we loved each other. The Zoo was our first real date as a couple."
"Okay then. What do you need me to do Mac?"
"Well. I have to call the Zoo and see if they will allow us a private picnic table by those cubs. What I need you to do is set up the dinner and Champagne for me. I also need candles."
"Then we should split up Mac. I'll get everything picked up and taken over. You go talk to the Zoo keeper and get that all in order. We'll meet at the Zoo in three hours. Her ring should be ready by then too."
"Okay Don. Thanks for everything. You really think she'll be surprised?"
"I'm telling you Mac. She's going to be passed excitment."
Meanwhile at the Hospital...
"Hey Stel, where do you think they are? It's getting late."
"I'm not sure Danny. They've been almost five hours now. I'm getting kind of hungry."
"I have some Pretzels Stel. Want some?"
"Sure. Thanks Danny."
Sitting down beside him on his bed Mac and Don finally walked in.
"Christ man it's about time."
"Sorry Danno. We got held up."
"I'm starving Mac. Can we go home and have dinner?"
"Sure Stel. But we have to make one stop first."
"Mac it's six in the evening. I'm starving."
"I know that Stella. Trust me okay. Just one small stop and then we will eat."
"Alright." Kissing Danny on the cheek they left.
"What was that about Donnie? Mac looked scared to death."
"Brace yourself Danno. Mac is asking Stella to marry him tonight."
"WHAT!!!! Get out man. I didn't even know they were dating. Are you serious?"
"I am Danno. By this time tomorrow morning she'll be wearing his ring."
Smiling wildly Don grabbed the Pretzels and turned on the game.
Leaving the Hospital Stella asked...
"Where are you taking me Mac?"
"You'll see Stella. You trust me right?"
"I trust you with my life Mac. I always have."
"Then trust me when I say you will love it."
When they arrived at the Zoo Stella was confused.
"The Zoo?? Why are we here Mac. They're closed."
"I know sweetheart. But I made a special arangement with them. Now close your eyes and no peeking."
Closing her eyes he brought her to the table.
"Okay Stella. Open them."
Opening her eyes she cried. Never had she seen anything so beautiful. The table was decorated in a beautiful lace, along with the napkins. The glasses where plastic Champagne, and the plates were paper. But what set off her tears were the candles. They were in the shape of hearts interlocked with each other.
"Oh Mac. This is beautiful."
"Thank you. Your seat my lady."
Sitting down Mac reached behind and pulled out a small boom box. Playing the music he smiled and lifted the dinner tray. Inside was two hotdogs with the works. Just like they had that day.
"Aww..Mac. Even the hotdogs. How did you do all this? And why?"
He was nervous now. He could feel his nerves begin to dance. Getting down on his knee, he said...
"Stella....I know it seems like a whisper of time has only gone by. But during that time it felt like we already started our forever. I only wish we hadn't waited so long to realize we were in love. What I'm trying to say is that I want to spend the rest of my life you. I want to spend every waking, every sleeping moment with you. I want us to have a family, a dog, even some cats. But most of all I want you to marry me Stella. I want you to "Always be my forever. Marry me Stella."
Pulling the ring from his pocket, he opened the box. Lifting it out he showed her the inscription inside. As she read it she cried again.
"Always my Forever. Oh Mac. That's so beautiful. Yes. Yes I'll marry you. Yes I'll be your forever."
Slipping the ring onto her finger he kissed it. Then pulling her up into his arms he gently pulled her close and passionately kissed her. So deep into each other as the music filled the Zoo around them, leaving them swaying long into the night.
After finishing their hotdogs they headed home. Unlocking the door Mac picked her up and carried her.
"This is for practice Stella."
"You've done wonderful Mac. Everything was so romantic, so well thought out. How could you think I wouldn't marry you? I love you Mac, always."
"I know that Stel. I just wasn't sure if it was to soon. The last thing I wanted to do was scare you. Or have you shy away from what we already shared."
"I'd never shy away Mac. That much I can honestly say."
"So I guess the next thing to plan is when."
"Hmm..I know. How about this exact day next year. That way we would never forget tonight."
"I like that sweetheart. So November 8th 2009 we will be Mr.Mrs.Taylor."
"Yes we will Mac. Now love me please. Take me to our room and love me."
Picking her up in his arms, he carried her up to bed. Where he loved her in fevered passion till the light shone through their window bringing their wedding date one more day closer to a future full of passion and love.
The End.
Epi
November 8th 2009
He was waiting at the alter as Sid appeared with her on his arm. Watching her waddle down the aisle placed a sweet loving smile on his face. For here was his Stella, carrying their first child within her. A child that would know what true passionate love was made from. A child that would know his parents were rooted from the strongest values and the most compassionate souls. A child that would soon become known as Mitchell Mackenzie Taylor.
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