MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
lol...it's not the offical Pitchfork of Doom but ever since I heard about that it's been a frequent weapon for NY fics as well as GSR.
Black Eyes, Blue Tears
- Thread starter vexus
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vexus
Pathologist
The only sound Danny heard was the sound of his heartbeat as it pounded in his chest. It was a constant reminder of what was partaking in his soul, the agonizing pain radiating through him, coursing through his blood, bringing him into a period of despair and rage.
He showed up at the crime scene 10 minutes after hearing the call on the radio. Crowds of people loitering around like ants only made the scene worse. Danny reached in the backseat and grabbed his kit and went up the stairway past the yellow crime tape.
Waiting at the doorway was Don. “Danny”, Flack said, grimly. “I know you heard the call, I’m sorry.” Danny heard Don but the only thing that was heard was the muffling of Don’s voice as he walked into Lindsay’s living room. He didn’t care about anybody else at this point, his only concern was Lindsay.
Looking around the room, techs and other investigators were gathering evidence and with all the commotion, the rage gathered again in Danny. He found Lindsay on the floor, surrounded by paramedics and Mac. Danny looked down at Lindsay and tears welled up in his eyes. He quickly wiped them away, so nobody would seem him cry and focused again on her. She had been through so much. Her broken body looked pale and weak and that was not the same woman that had been through thick and thin with him and who had his back. This can’t be happening.
“Mac,” Danny said. “How is she?” Mac looked at him straight in the eye and sighed. “She’s hanging in there. She’s been unconscious for 20 minutes. The neighbor called 911 when she heard Lindsay scream.”
“Who did this to her!” Danny said angrily. “Was it the blind date that she had tonight? If it’s him, he’s going to pay.”
“We don’t know at this point, Danny.” Mac said trying be the voice of reason for Danny. “We are gathering evidence, but we need her conscious again so we can nail this perp.”
There was no way he was going to leave her alone, not again. “Mac, let me ride to the hospital with her and when she regains consciousness. I’ll have a nurse gather a rape it and when she wakes up I’ll question her.”
Mac nodded and that was understood, given the circumstances.
How could this happen to her?
To be continued…
He showed up at the crime scene 10 minutes after hearing the call on the radio. Crowds of people loitering around like ants only made the scene worse. Danny reached in the backseat and grabbed his kit and went up the stairway past the yellow crime tape.
Waiting at the doorway was Don. “Danny”, Flack said, grimly. “I know you heard the call, I’m sorry.” Danny heard Don but the only thing that was heard was the muffling of Don’s voice as he walked into Lindsay’s living room. He didn’t care about anybody else at this point, his only concern was Lindsay.
Looking around the room, techs and other investigators were gathering evidence and with all the commotion, the rage gathered again in Danny. He found Lindsay on the floor, surrounded by paramedics and Mac. Danny looked down at Lindsay and tears welled up in his eyes. He quickly wiped them away, so nobody would seem him cry and focused again on her. She had been through so much. Her broken body looked pale and weak and that was not the same woman that had been through thick and thin with him and who had his back. This can’t be happening.
“Mac,” Danny said. “How is she?” Mac looked at him straight in the eye and sighed. “She’s hanging in there. She’s been unconscious for 20 minutes. The neighbor called 911 when she heard Lindsay scream.”
“Who did this to her!” Danny said angrily. “Was it the blind date that she had tonight? If it’s him, he’s going to pay.”
“We don’t know at this point, Danny.” Mac said trying be the voice of reason for Danny. “We are gathering evidence, but we need her conscious again so we can nail this perp.”
There was no way he was going to leave her alone, not again. “Mac, let me ride to the hospital with her and when she regains consciousness. I’ll have a nurse gather a rape it and when she wakes up I’ll question her.”
Mac nodded and that was understood, given the circumstances.
How could this happen to her?
To be continued…
CHILI_PEPPERS
Pathologist
Cant wait for more! its so sad!!! poor lindsay
CSI_in_training
CSI Level Two
Poor lindsay! Danny will be there for you. update soon!
vexus
Pathologist
part 5...
To Danny, the ride to the hospital was the constant reminder that he went through the same Hell with the attack on Louie as he was experiencing with Lindsay. His nerves were frayed and could unravel at any given moment. Once they arrived at Trinity Hospital, her life was out of his hands that was a shot through the heart. Even though she was not his yet, he protected her fiercely; she was his light to his darkness.
The paramedics took her to a exam room and Danny proceeded to enter when he was sidestepped by the attending emergency room doctor. "Sir," the doctor said, "You can't go in there, we haven't finished examining her yet." Danny started to pace back and forth. "Excuse me, Doctor, but I'm her partner, she's a CSI and I need to see her, at least let me have her clothes for evidence. And do a rape kit on her please?" The doctor nodded his head. "Yes, I'll do that detective. I'll send in a nurse to collect the rape kit and I'll bag her clothes." With that last remark, the Doctor opened the exam room door and entered, leaving Danny alone with his lingering thoughts on Lindsay.
30 minutes had passed and still no word about Lindsay. His mind kept flashing back to her apartment, seeing her helpless body lying on the tile floor and being helpless to do anything. Danny was so absorbed in his thoughts, that he didn't even hear doctor come out of the room.
"Detective Messer?"
Oh God, Danny thought. Where is this conversation going and what does he have to say about Lindsay?
to be continued....
To Danny, the ride to the hospital was the constant reminder that he went through the same Hell with the attack on Louie as he was experiencing with Lindsay. His nerves were frayed and could unravel at any given moment. Once they arrived at Trinity Hospital, her life was out of his hands that was a shot through the heart. Even though she was not his yet, he protected her fiercely; she was his light to his darkness.
The paramedics took her to a exam room and Danny proceeded to enter when he was sidestepped by the attending emergency room doctor. "Sir," the doctor said, "You can't go in there, we haven't finished examining her yet." Danny started to pace back and forth. "Excuse me, Doctor, but I'm her partner, she's a CSI and I need to see her, at least let me have her clothes for evidence. And do a rape kit on her please?" The doctor nodded his head. "Yes, I'll do that detective. I'll send in a nurse to collect the rape kit and I'll bag her clothes." With that last remark, the Doctor opened the exam room door and entered, leaving Danny alone with his lingering thoughts on Lindsay.
30 minutes had passed and still no word about Lindsay. His mind kept flashing back to her apartment, seeing her helpless body lying on the tile floor and being helpless to do anything. Danny was so absorbed in his thoughts, that he didn't even hear doctor come out of the room.
"Detective Messer?"
Oh God, Danny thought. Where is this conversation going and what does he have to say about Lindsay?
to be continued....
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Guest
Guest
PLEASE update. Gotta know what happens to Linds. Is she all right?? 
**Milshakes and M&M's all around**
**Milshakes and M&M's all around**
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I agree, update soon!
vexus
Pathologist
part 6.....
"Detective Messer?", the doctor said, concerned "All you alright?"
Danny looked at the doctor and then hung his head down. "No, I'm not. I want to know what has happened to Lindsay." The suspense was killing him, not being able to help her was the most agonizing experience he had ever had.
"Miss Monroe, was beaten and assaulted tonight. It's unclear if she was raped but we did a rape case as you instructed. And we are testing her blood to see she was drugged or if anything is in her system that would make her incapicated."
"Can I go in and see her?"
The doctor smiled, "Yes, but don't be surprised in how she looks. Her bruising has become more visible since she has been brought in."
Danny turned the door knob and trying to not make too much noise, quietly entered Lindsay hospital room. He grabbed the nearest chair that he could find and sat down next to her bed. The sight of her brought him to tears, and it didn't take the tears long to go streaming down his face. He wiped them away and gingerly clasped her hand and gently rubbed the back of it.
"Perfect fit."
He felt movement in her hand and noticed that she was gently squeezing her hand in his palm. He rose from the chair and gave her the smirk that she secretly loved and ever so carefully, kissed her on the forehead.
"How you doin." He said smiling. Lindsay slowly shifted in the bed and recoiled in pain. "I feel like I've been hit by a bus."
"Well you've always been beautiful, always will be." Danny said, smiling.
Lindsay dropped Danny's hand and started to stare off into space. She turned to him with big, fat tears dropping down on the covers and asked Danny:
"What did I do to deserve this?"
to be continued...
"Detective Messer?", the doctor said, concerned "All you alright?"
Danny looked at the doctor and then hung his head down. "No, I'm not. I want to know what has happened to Lindsay." The suspense was killing him, not being able to help her was the most agonizing experience he had ever had.
"Miss Monroe, was beaten and assaulted tonight. It's unclear if she was raped but we did a rape case as you instructed. And we are testing her blood to see she was drugged or if anything is in her system that would make her incapicated."
"Can I go in and see her?"
The doctor smiled, "Yes, but don't be surprised in how she looks. Her bruising has become more visible since she has been brought in."
Danny turned the door knob and trying to not make too much noise, quietly entered Lindsay hospital room. He grabbed the nearest chair that he could find and sat down next to her bed. The sight of her brought him to tears, and it didn't take the tears long to go streaming down his face. He wiped them away and gingerly clasped her hand and gently rubbed the back of it.
"Perfect fit."
He felt movement in her hand and noticed that she was gently squeezing her hand in his palm. He rose from the chair and gave her the smirk that she secretly loved and ever so carefully, kissed her on the forehead.
"How you doin." He said smiling. Lindsay slowly shifted in the bed and recoiled in pain. "I feel like I've been hit by a bus."
"Well you've always been beautiful, always will be." Danny said, smiling.
Lindsay dropped Danny's hand and started to stare off into space. She turned to him with big, fat tears dropping down on the covers and asked Danny:
"What did I do to deserve this?"
to be continued...
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
aww, don't stop there, more!! * waves pitchfork*
CSI_in_training
CSI Level Two
Oh! Poor lindsay...It's okay! *pats on back* keep going!
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Guest
Guest
You are so evil to leave it. Please write more and longer.