I finally read it - borrowed my friends and finished it when I couldn't sleep. The only way I can think to describe it is bad fanfiction. Bella's basically the ultimate Mary-Sue character.
The biggest WTF for me (besides the end) was definitely Renesmee. Not the character, that was a pretty obvious "twist" but the name. Ugh. Terrible.
The biggest WTF for me (besides the end) was definitely Renesmee. Not the character, that was a pretty obvious "twist" but the name. Ugh. Terrible.