The Storm (CSI: LV, for RocketScientist)

It's so good! I cannot wait until the next chapter!
Fantastic!!
Can't you just see Grissom being all heroic? They don't let him do that enough!!!
 
A/N: Thanks yet again, for reading and/or reviewing this fic! I hope you like the next chapter!

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Disclaimer: I do not own any part of CSI or its characters. That honor goes to the good folks over at CBS.

Title: Mr. Peanut

Summary: A raging storm, four trapped children, and an exploding vehicle. Will Grissom be able to save the day?

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Grissom blinked at Katie, before standing up, and frowning. How am I going to find this bear? He thought to himself. And more importantly, how am I going to get these kids out of the car, before it explodes? If I don’t do it soon, then there won’t be any kids left to actually rescue.

“Mr. Gil?” Katie nervously asked, trying to push open her door. “Where did you go, Mr. Gil?” she frowned, trying not to jump, as another thunder clap seemed to rumble directly over her head. “Are you there? Where did you go?” she repeated her question, sniffling, as the rain continued to pelt the broken car, and the wind continued to rustle and whoosh through the surrounding trees.

“Huh?” Grissom snapped to attention, wiping the ice-cold water off of his face. “I’m right here, Katie; but I’m thinking.” I’m thinking about how to save all of your lives, as a matter-of-fact.

“Oh,” she trailed off, biting her lip. “Are you thinking about Mr. Peanut? I’m thinking about Mr. Peanut,” she informed him. “Jake said that he’s dead, but I know that he isn’t; Mommy said that Mr. Peanut can never die. Do you think that my Mommy is right?” she swallowed, waiting for Grissom to reassure her of the fact that her bear was going to be just fine.

Grissom nodded, barely paying attention to the young girl’s words, lost in his own thoughts. “Well, your Mommy is a very smart woman,” he finally replied, glancing up as he heard another tree fall in the distance. “And Mr. Peanut is very much alive, I’m sure.”

“Really?” Katie brightly asked, her tone of voice instantly sounding more hopeful.

Ignoring her question for a moment, Grissom cleared his throat, before sighing. “Katie, we need to do this fast, okay?” he anxiously asked her. “Can you stand up and move around a little bit?”

“Uh-huh!” she told him, standing up on her feet, and looking through the dirty window at him. “See, Mr. Gil?”

“I see that,” Grissom quietly replied, rubbing his beard in anxiety. “Do you see Mr. Peanut anywhere in the car?” he then asked, trying to keep his voice calm for Katie’s sake.

Scrunching up her face, the four-year-old girl bit her lip. “I don’t think so,” she frowned. “I don’t think that he’s under the seat, either. Do you think that the Boogeyman has him?” she asked, her eyes widening in fear.

As another tree fell in the distance, Grissom tried not to jump. “We have to get out of here, Katie,” he told her, desperation filtering into his voice for one of the first times of the evening. “Mr. Peanut will have to wait until later. I need you to climb across your sister, to get to the broken window. Now!”

“Nuh-uh!” Katie immediately shouted, moving her head from side to side. “Not without Mr. Peanut! Daddy says that good people don’t leave their friends behind, and he’s the bestest friend that I have in the whole-wide-world! He’s even more bestest than Jake or Bobby!”

Grissom tightly closed his eyes, attempting to swallow his nerves. But if I don’t get you out of here soon, I’ll be leaving YOU behind!

“Mr. Gil?” Katie softly asked, blinking her tears away. “I think that he flew out of the window. I was holding him, and then I jumped when the car went over the cliff. What if he’s outside, right now? I think that he’s probably scared, and wet, and cold, and—”

“That’s fine, Katie. I’ll look outside of the car, and you look inside,” Grissom started to panic, flicking on his flashlight, and panning the ground with it. What would Sara do in this situation? What would Catherine do? Would they just yank her out of the car? We don’t have time right now to be looking for her bear! This car could explode at any moment! Stepping away from the Saturn for a second, Grissom sighed, as he knelt over, looking for clues as to where Mr. Peanut could possibly be. This thing could be anywhere! He thought to himself, before straightening up once again. It could be in a tree, it could be in a bush, hell, it could even be under the car itself! Unless, he mused, raising an eyebrow. “Katie?” he suddenly called out.

“Did you find him? Did you find him? Did you find him?” Katie anxiously asked Grissom.

“No, but when do you think that you let go of him? Just after you went over the cliff? Or after you were already down on the ground?”

“Um,” she screwed her face up in thought. “I think that I lost him before we hit the ground.”

Grissom nodded, as he took another couple of steps away from the car. So, if she had the bear at the top of the hill, but not at the bottom, then the search area is going to be even more limited than I first thought. Glancing at the embankment, and then at the final resting location of the car, Grissom took a deep breath. Factoring in the speed of the car as it flew over the cliff, and the arc that it took to have landed where it did, then the bear has to be fairly close to the base of the cliff.

Looking down at the flooded ground around his feet, Grissom slowly made his way back over to the cliff, keeping his eyes open for any signs of a bear. “Katie? What color is Mr. Peanut?” he then asked. Say purple, or even yellow. Just don’t say brown!

“He’s brown, Mr. Gil,” Katie replied. “Do you see him yet?”

“Not yet,” he mumbled, as another ten, very important seconds, ticked by. Scanning the ground with his flashlight, Grissom blinked, as he moved toward the left-hand side of the embankment. The driver’s side windows are broken, which means that the bear must have fallen out on that side. It has to be here; please, just find it, before it’s too late!

All of a sudden, another loud crack filled the air, as a second tree fell dangerously close to the car. “Mr. Gil?” Katie suddenly shouted. “I wanna get out of here!” she sniffled, before breaking out into sobs. “I love Mr. Peanut, but I don’t wanna die, too!”

Grissom nodded, before turning around on his heels, and attempting to make his way back to the car. Five feet away from the embankment, however, and on his way back to Katie and her siblings, Grissom’s flashlight fell on something glittery. Squinting his eyes in order to try to get a better look at the object, he let out a snort of surprise, as he realized that the glint was actually the bead from one of Mr. Peanut’s eyes. Reaching down, and quickly grabbing the muddy stuffed animal, Grissom shuffled back to the car, clearing his throat. “Katie, can you help me?” he asked, peering through the back driver’s side window at her.

“Uh-huh,” she continued to sob, terrified over the storm, and sad that she was going to single-handedly be responsible for Mr. Peanut’s death.

“I have a little friend here who needs some help,” he quietly and calmly said, very carefully sticking his hand through the broken window, and tossing Mr. Peanut over to Katie. “Can you give him a hand, please?” he asked. That was good! That was something that Catherine or Sara would have said and done… I think!

Katie sniffled, blinking once, and then twice, and then a third time. “Mr. Peanut?” she whispered, reaching for the bear, and pulling him tightly to her chest. “Mr. Peanut, it’s you!” she yelled in relief. “Thank you, Mr. Gil!”

“Don’t thank me yet, Katie, because now we need to get you out of there.”

“But Mr. Peanut can help us now!” she happily told him. “He’s a special bear, ‘member?”

“I remember,” Grissom softly said. And we could really use some special help right about now, he mused, glancing at Katie, followed by her three unconscious siblings, and then at the smoke still pouring out of the Saturn’s hood. “Let’s get you out of there!” he hurriedly added, as something at the front of the car made a pop, sizzle, and crackle noise. “Let’s get you out of there now!

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TO BE CONTINUED
 
Aww, thanks, Mel! And thank you, GSRfan 4ever! I'm so glad that you two are liking this story :). I'll do my best, but I have a feeling that you won't get another chapter until next Friday! Sorry! hehe.... *cough*
 
Great Story!
I just started to read this, and I'm about to fall off of my chair with excitement, tehe. I neeeeed an update. ;)
 
Yes! Grissom found Mr. Peanut! He's my hero! :D I really, really like this story, Zan! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
 
Guys, I'm not sure if Mr. Peanut is actually out of the woods just yet! I mean, he's a muddy mess right now, and Grissom still has to get the kids out of the car (ooh, I should go write that scene, because I already know how he's going to do that!). But thanks for your support, Shipwrecked, GGgirl, and RocketScientist!

In any event, I'll keep plugging away at the next chapter, but... you probably won't see it before Saturday or Sunday. That being said, I've already read all of the homework for one of my classes, so... ya never know!

Thanks for your patience, and I'm glad that you all like the story so far!
 
(Thank you again to everyone who is reading and/or reviewing this fic! I hope you enjoy the next chapter! I don’t think there will be much more after this one!)

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Disclaimer: I do not own any part of CSI or its characters. That honor goes to the good folks over at CBS.

Title: It Gets Worse

Summary: A raging storm, four trapped children, and an exploding vehicle. Will Grissom be able to save the day?

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“What do we have to do, Mr. Peanut?” Katie anxiously asked her stuffed bear, holding him up to her ear, and waiting for him to reply to her. When Mr. Peanut refused to answer her back, Katie just assumed that she couldn’t hear him, because he was speaking too softly. “What was that? I didn’t hear you,” she mumbled pulling him closer to her ear.

“Katie,” Grissom spoke up, trying to get her attention. “I need you to listen to me, okay?” he quietly asked her, peering in through the crushed and broken driver’s side window.

“And Mr. Peanut,” she reminded him. “Mommy always says that two heads are better than one, whatever that means, so if Mr. Peanut has a head, and I have a head, then we have two heads,” she pointed out. “And two is better than one. I think.”

“Fine,” Grissom immediately replied. “Then I need you and Mr. Peanut to listen to me. Can you do that?”

“Uh-huh!” Katie whispered, wiping the remnants of her tears away. Holding Mr. Peanut up to her ear, she nodded. “He says ‘uh-huh,’ too.”

“Okay,” Grissom calmly told her. “Then I need you—” Katie started to open her mouth. “—And Mr. Peanut,” he continued, “to crawl toward me. Here’s what’s going to happen. You can’t squeeze through this window, because it’s too smashed,” he told her.

“Smooshed!” Katie eagerly corrected him.

“It’s too… smooshed,” Grissom nodded at her. “So you and your siblings all need to come out through the passenger side. The only problem, is that both of the doors on that side of the car are stuck shut, so—”

“Mr. Peanut just said that you have to break the windows,” Katie nervously smiled up at Grissom.

“That’s right, honey,” he sighed, rubbing his beard. If we keep going at this rate, I’ll never you get you all out of there in one piece. “I’m going to have to break the windows, so I want you and Mr. Peanut to sit as far away from the passenger side as you can, so that I can break the windows, without hurting you. Do you know how to play hide-and-go-seek?” he then asked.

“Uh-huh! Jake plays that all the time with me, and I’m such a good hider,” she grinned. “I’m so good, that he can never find me! Sometimes he looks all day long for me, but me and Mr. Peanut hide in the bestest places!”

Or perhaps Jake just tries to get rid of you, Grissom couldn’t help but think. Sometimes, siblings can be very cruel. “Good,” he nodded at her. “Then when you sit on your sister’s lap, I want you to cover up your face, as if you are going to be the seeker. In fact,” he continued, “Why don’t you have Mr. Peanut cover up your face, and then you can cover up his, by pressing your face against the side of the car?” he suggested.

“Yeah, that’s a good idea!” Katie bobbed her head up and down in agreement, already crawling toward her sister’s prone body. Moving into her lap, and pressing herself against the window, she peered up at Grissom. “You’re wet,” she pointed out, blinking, as the rain continued to pour into the car.

“Yes, I am,” Grissom frowned. “Now cover your eyes.”

“‘Kay!” she chuckled, as she pressed Mr. Peanut to her eyes, and then rested her head against the side of the car, holding Mr. Peanut in place. “Now I’ll start counting, Mr. Gil, and then I’ll come get you!” she grinned.

“Okay,” Grissom mumbled, as he quickly moved around to the passenger side of the car, looking for something to break the window with. If the roof wasn’t so caved in, and if the doors weren’t so dented, I could just open up the doors naturally. I hope that I don’t hurt these kids, he thought to himself, as he found a suitably heavy tree branch. “Okay, Katie,” he loudly spoke up. “I’m going to break the window on the count of three. You’re going to hear a really loud banging noise, and then breaking glass. No matter what happens, keep your face down. Do you understand me?” he asked her, just to make sure.

“‘Kay, Mr. Gil! Ready!”

Grissom closed his eyes for a moment to collect his thoughts, before realizing that breaking the glass could potentially cut his hands. Setting the branch down for a moment, he immediately tore off his dress shirt, wrapping it around the fist that that would be holding the branch. Glancing down at his now dirty undershirt, he took a deep breath, preparing himself for what was to come. “Okay, on the count of three,” Grissom shouted. “One,” he pulled the tree branch back. “Two,” he gripped it more tightly. “Three!” he yelled, as he connected the tree branch with the window. Cringing at the sound of the breaking glass, he peered in through the now shattered backseat window. “Are you okay, Katie?” he instantly questioned her.

“I’m scared!” she screamed back, tightly clutching Mr. Peanut to her face.

“I know you are, but I’m not done yet, honey,” he quietly told her, staring at the smoke still pouring out of the engine. Wiping the rain out of his eyes with his forearm, he frowned. “Keep your face covered, until I tell you that it’s okay to come toward me. Do you understand?”

“Uh-huh,” Katie sniffled, this time burying her head against her sister’s shoulder.

I have to clear the glass away, he thought to himself, not wasting any time. “Here I go, Katie,” he warned her, as he immediately shoved the tree branch back into the window, knocking the rest of the glass out of the way, and creating a hole large enough for at least Katie to fit through. “Okay, honey,” he quietly said, unwrapping the shirt from his arm, and throwing it down on the ground for a moment. “I need you to crawl toward me, and I need you to do it fast.”

“I can pick my head up now?” she questioned Grissom, cracking an eye open, and staring at him.

“Yes, Katie, but I need you to move quickly,” he repeated, holding his arms out toward her, and throwing a glance at the front of the car. “Come on!” he tried to hide his annoyance from her.

Katie bit her lip, looking at her Lucy. “But what about my sister?” she whispered.

“Katie, move it, now!” Grissom finally just yelled at her.

Katie’s lower lip began to quiver, as tears filled her eyes. “I’m sorry, Mr. Gil,” she told him, starting to sob.

“Katie, please,” Grissom tried again, taking a deep breath to steady his nerves. “Crawl toward me; it’s okay, but crawl toward me.”

Although she was still crying, Katie did as he asked of her, crawling across the back seat to the passenger side of the car. “Now what…?” she asked, staring at the window.

Without saying a word, Grissom very carefully reached his arms into the car, yanking her right off of the seat.

“Mr. Peanut!” Katie shrieked, as Grissom wrapped his arms tightly around her, starting to move away from the smoking vehicle. “We left Mr. Peanut!”

“I’ll go back for him later,” Grissom told her, jogging back toward the embankment. “But right now, I need to get the rest of your family out, first,” he added, as he set her down at the very base of the hill. Kneeling down beside her, he raised an eyebrow. “I need you to stay here for me, okay, Katie?” he asked.

“Nuh-uh, I want Mr. Peanut!” she wailed, staring at the car, which was now a fair distance away from them. “And Bobby, and Lucy, and Jake,” she added, before flinging her arms around Grissom’s neck in absolute terror.

Grissom awkwardly wrapped his arms around the little girl, gently patting her back. “It’ll be okay, honey,” he whispered to her, clearing his throat. “But I still need you to be brave for me. I’m going to go back to the car to get your brothers and sister, but I need you to stay here.”

“And Mr. Peanut?” she sniffled, trying to brush the rain and tears off of her face.

“Of course,” Grissom flashed her the smallest of smiles. “And Mr. Peanut, too. Can you stay here for me, though?”

“Uh-huh,” Katie whispered, as she hunkered down on the ground. “I’ll stay right here, as long as you don’t forget about me. I’m still scared, Mr. Gil,” she admitted, hiccupping.

“I know you’re still scared,” Grissom acknowledged her. “But this will all be over soon enough.”

“‘Kay…” Katie trailed off, rubbing her runny nose.

With one final nod to Katie, Grissom turned around, immediately jogging back toward the Saturn. “How am I going to get them out of here?” he mumbled to himself, glancing at the totaled car. Rubbing his beard in thought, he leaned through the back passenger side window of the car, glancing at Lucy. “I’m not supposed to move you,” he muttered under his breath. “But this car could explode at any moment!”

“Mr. Gil?” Katie called out, watching him from beside the embankment.

Ignore Katie, and stretching his arms out as far as he could, Grissom groaned, when he was just shy of Lucy’s body. “Damn it,” he quietly hissed to himself, glancing through the window. I’m going to need to get in there, in order to get you out. Very carefully climbing through the window itself, Grissom moved far enough in, so that only his legs were hanging out of the window. Grunting, he once again stretched his arms out as far as he could, until he was able to unbuckle Lucy from her seatbelt. Then, grabbing one of her arms, he gently tugged her toward him, so that he could get a better grasp on her body, without hurting her any further.

“Mr. Gil?” Katie tried again, taking a couple of steps back toward the car. “What are you doing?”

“Come on, Lucy,” Grissom mumbled, as he managed to pull her close enough to him so that he could safely wrap an arm around her waist. Yanking her the rest of the way back toward the passenger-side window, he slid his body out, before reaching back into the car, and pulling her up and through the window, as well. “I’m sorry,” he whispered to her, as he repositioned his hands underneath her armpits, starting to drag her back to the embankment. “I’m sorry,” he repeated, as he finally scooped her up in his arms, carrying her through the rain and the mud to safety.

“Lucy!” Katie screamed, running to her sister’s side the moment that Grissom set her down. “Lucy!” she grinned, throwing her arms around her sister. Realizing that Lucy had yet to say a word, she looked up at Grissom, sniffling. “Is she okay…?” she softly asked him, tears once again threatening to slide down her cheeks.

“I don’t know, honey,” Grissom quietly replied. “But she’s better off here than in the car,” he finally admitted.

Lucy slowly nodded her understanding, glancing over at the car. “Mr. Gil…?” she whispered, rubbing her eyes. “I don’t think that that’s supposed to be there!” she informed him.

When Grissom turned around, he couldn’t help but swear under his breath. “Stay here, and don’t you dare move a muscle!” he yelled at Katie, as he took off toward the Saturn, which was now giving off flames.

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TO BE CONTINUED
 
Oh, that's REALLY good! And now, my hero needs to get the others out of there, and soon!!! And I hope he doesn't forget Mr. Peanut... Keep it up, Zan! :D
 
I already have my hypothesis of the story line, and I pray so heavily that it doesn't come true because it is a very upsetting plot but I can't continue in fret that it might be it. But besides, this is awesome! Keep posting, and fast!
 
GGgirl1 I'm so glad you liked the chapter... Woo! Hopefully, Grissom won't forget Mr. Peanut. The jury is still out on that one, though (actually, nope, it isn't. I know exactly what's going to happen to Mr. Peanut... although as I'm writing this, a new idea is coming to me! Yea!). And GSRfan 4ever, this could go either way, you're right! We'll have to see what happens! Hehe. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far, though!
 
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