[SMACKED] Since that Cold November Day

[chaostheory08]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3305179/17/

 

[MacsGirlMel]

Good keep going! hehe

 

[chaostheory08]

Forgot to add...

comments about Dylan?

 

[MacsGirlMel]

I think you're doing good with him. I'm not terribly great at feedback but I like how you're writing it.

 

[athens]

I like how you are making Dylan!>..He seems so adorable and both Mac/Stella kid!...The idea with the tie is genius as I said in FF.net!>..update soon to see Mac's ideas!!..and hey,no bad suprises..He is single :lol: ..

 

[chaostheory08]

^Lol, yeah... Peyton's out of the picture.

And well, I am not really good on writing children -- not really accurate on how toddlers act but I'm tryin hahaha....

 

[athens]

Well,I think you are doing pretty good!!I am not an expert on children so whatever you have written until now,from what I already know are OK! ...

 

[chaostheory08]

All I know is... they're cute.

hahahah....

I hope Dylan's cute enough.

 

[MacsGirlMel]

I think he is *pokes you* Now go update LOL

 

[chaostheory08]

*ouchies* lol...

I'm still blowing off steam from all the D/L I read over at the NY spoiler thread.

But I will... promise.

 

[athens]

..You better keep that promise! :lol:

 

[chaostheory08]

Like I promised.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3305179/18/

But these writers are still..... argh! *mantra*This is a SMACked story. This is a SMACked-centered thread.*mantra*

 

[athens]

That's a really good chapter!...Mac and Andrea can be friends!...I can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!..

 

[MacsGirlMel]

I'm not sure I'd say cliffie lol but I can't wait for the next one

 

[kismet]

I was reading this fic last night, went to bed at 1 LOL! I couldn't stop reading! And now there is a new chapter and you end it with a cliffhanger!?! haha! Are you trying to kill me here!? :lol: