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Dead on Arrival
ok so i have been working on this theory horatio has a daughter! but im not gonna give to much away :devil: so your gonna have to read it chapter by chapter! lol,.... please comment on whst you think!
Fade in
[ cue gunshot]
Girl: what do you want please don’t hurt me …. Please
Man: I wanted you, but you rejected me bitch, for that you must suffer
Cut to: [ man pushes her down on the ground hitting her with a plank of wood}
[girls screams until is eventually knocked out]
Cue titles: { the who – wont get fooled again} we don’t get fooled again. Don’t get fooled again. No, no!
Cut to: daylight ( sirens wailing as we see Horatio climbing from the hummer and walking up to Calleigh.
Horatio: [ looks at Calleigh] so, what do we have here.
Calleigh: well, I haven’t gone inside yet as I am waiting for back up, but eye witnesses say there was a man in a costume mask, which looked like Tony Blair, with a gun dragging in a young female, there was a single shot fired. Suspect could still be in the building.
Horatio: ok follow my lead
[ both head to the door of the building, the door is jarred open, they both pause outside the door guns positioned to the door, Horatio kicks the door open.]
Horatio: Miami dade police!
[ they look around, seeing no one around they holster there weapons]
Cut to: Calleigh looking around
[ Horatio walks up to Calleigh]
Horatio: ok you take upstairs I’ll stay downstairs; you see anything, shout immediately.
Calleigh: you know it!
Cut to: Horatio pushing a door open with the tips of his fingers and walking inside
Cut to: Calleigh searching upstairs,
Calleigh: [shouting] Horatio I’m not seeing anything up here I’m coming down
Horatio: [ sees a familiar face shot dead on the ground. Looks further in the room to see a young woman.]
[ runs up to the female]
Horatio: ma’am! [no response] ma’am! [ still no response, checks for pulse]
Get me rescue now!
Calleigh: we’ve got a live one?
Horatio: yes, a young female. But not so much luck for the other guy [ Calleigh tilts here head to the side to see a black man dead]
Calleigh: oh my!
Horatio: Fed,
Calleigh: no not that, I know who he is! Look at her though, she looks just like you!
Horatio: [looks at her face] Elouisa?
Calleigh: Elouisa? Who’s that?
Horatio: years ago I was in a relationship, we had one child, a little girl we named Elouisa, but we were still young and put her up for adoption, could this be her? It’s the only way I could explain the alikeness between myself and her.
Calleigh: I seriously don’t know what to say, it could be her. She certainly does look like you!
[ resue walks in]
Man: ooooo, she’s pretty badly beaten, any name?
Horatio: not at this minute we need to find ID
Man: ok
[ rescue lifts girl onto trolley and starts wheeling her out]
Calleigh: go with her, look, I’m sure she’ll be fine and if it is her, I think it would be nice for her waking up to see her real Dad!
Horatio: but…
Calleigh: but nothing! I can manage here, I’m not a little girl anymore
[Horatio chuckles]
Calleigh: go! Now! That’s an order from a lieutenant!
Horatio: maybe I should have thought before I gave you that promotion!
[they both chuckle]
Calleigh: look, if you don’t go this instant I might get a bit angry with my LT!
Horatio: ok I’m off now! See you back at the lab
[ follows after rescue]
Calleigh: bye!
*****
Fade in
[ cue gunshot]
Girl: what do you want please don’t hurt me …. Please
Man: I wanted you, but you rejected me bitch, for that you must suffer
Cut to: [ man pushes her down on the ground hitting her with a plank of wood}
[girls screams until is eventually knocked out]
Cue titles: { the who – wont get fooled again} we don’t get fooled again. Don’t get fooled again. No, no!
Cut to: daylight ( sirens wailing as we see Horatio climbing from the hummer and walking up to Calleigh.
Horatio: [ looks at Calleigh] so, what do we have here.
Calleigh: well, I haven’t gone inside yet as I am waiting for back up, but eye witnesses say there was a man in a costume mask, which looked like Tony Blair, with a gun dragging in a young female, there was a single shot fired. Suspect could still be in the building.
Horatio: ok follow my lead
[ both head to the door of the building, the door is jarred open, they both pause outside the door guns positioned to the door, Horatio kicks the door open.]
Horatio: Miami dade police!
[ they look around, seeing no one around they holster there weapons]
Cut to: Calleigh looking around
[ Horatio walks up to Calleigh]
Horatio: ok you take upstairs I’ll stay downstairs; you see anything, shout immediately.
Calleigh: you know it!
Cut to: Horatio pushing a door open with the tips of his fingers and walking inside
Cut to: Calleigh searching upstairs,
Calleigh: [shouting] Horatio I’m not seeing anything up here I’m coming down
Horatio: [ sees a familiar face shot dead on the ground. Looks further in the room to see a young woman.]
[ runs up to the female]
Horatio: ma’am! [no response] ma’am! [ still no response, checks for pulse]
Get me rescue now!
Calleigh: we’ve got a live one?
Horatio: yes, a young female. But not so much luck for the other guy [ Calleigh tilts here head to the side to see a black man dead]
Calleigh: oh my!
Horatio: Fed,
Calleigh: no not that, I know who he is! Look at her though, she looks just like you!
Horatio: [looks at her face] Elouisa?
Calleigh: Elouisa? Who’s that?
Horatio: years ago I was in a relationship, we had one child, a little girl we named Elouisa, but we were still young and put her up for adoption, could this be her? It’s the only way I could explain the alikeness between myself and her.
Calleigh: I seriously don’t know what to say, it could be her. She certainly does look like you!
[ resue walks in]
Man: ooooo, she’s pretty badly beaten, any name?
Horatio: not at this minute we need to find ID
Man: ok
[ rescue lifts girl onto trolley and starts wheeling her out]
Calleigh: go with her, look, I’m sure she’ll be fine and if it is her, I think it would be nice for her waking up to see her real Dad!
Horatio: but…
Calleigh: but nothing! I can manage here, I’m not a little girl anymore
[Horatio chuckles]
Calleigh: go! Now! That’s an order from a lieutenant!
Horatio: maybe I should have thought before I gave you that promotion!
[they both chuckle]
Calleigh: look, if you don’t go this instant I might get a bit angry with my LT!
Horatio: ok I’m off now! See you back at the lab
[ follows after rescue]
Calleigh: bye!
*****
more? please?