"...lika a lover and a best friend..." *smacked* fanfic

Im so sorry for this late update, I hope you still like my fic =)...So here you go:
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It was 1 minute to midnight and everybody was all excited and counting down, holding a champagne glass when they suddenly realized Mac was gone.
Mac was so nervous that he could hardly breathe, now he was going to settle it, but what if she refused. Damn, the doubts were coming back, what if this , what if that… But he kept telling himself that everything was going to be fine.
He walked across the room with the little blue box in his pocket.
Covering her eyes with his shivering hands, he whispered in her ear.
„Will you…“ Kneeling down he continued: „Stella Bonasera marry me?“
Everyone was so stunned and no one expected that. Stella the least. She tried not to cry so hard, but she couldn‘t. This was the most beautiful moment or her life.
She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him with such a passion that he was literally overwhelmed.
„Of course, I will, Mac. I love you more than anything else in this world. You are my life , too.“


-Two months later-
„Mac! When are you going to tell me where you‘re taking me.“
They had gotten married just few days ago and Mac wanted to surprise Stella with their honeymoon. He blindfolded her and wasn‘t going to let her see anything until they actually arrived.
„No, it‘s supposed to be a surprise.“
Sighing she gave in.
„Ok, but only because it‘s you.“
The plane landed after 8 long hours. Stella had no clue where they were and still Mac didn‘t let her open her eyes.
He lead through a city, that was sure, but which one. I seemed as they took a cab and were on a big place. Then suddenly she heard lots of cars driving around and it really smelled like a big city. Mac whispered into Stella‘s ear:
„I think it‘s too dangerous to let you walk around like that.“
„Yay! Finally you‘re saving me!“
„You wish!“ He replied and started carrying her in his arms.
„Ok this is embarrassing.“ Stella said. „I‘m so glad I don‘t see anyone.“ She added laughing.
Soon Stella found herself back in an elevator between lots of people talking so many different languages. French, German, English even Greek.
Now she was confused.
„Mac are you trying to kidnap me or something? Where are we?“
„Just wait few more minutes.“
„I‘ve been waiting for hours and getting tired…but if you say so.“
When the elevator stopped, Mac carefully lead her out . It was cold and windy, that much she knew.
„Ok , Stella. We just arrived. I‘ll take off you blindfold now and you can open your eyes when I say so, ok?“
„Whatever you want.“
Stella was so excited she could hardly wait for Mac to say the magic words in her ears.
„Alright, open your eyes, sweetheart.“
Her mouth fell open, she couldn‘t believe she was actually here. That has always been her dream. She was standing high above everybody else on the Eiffel Tower. It took a long time for her to be able to speak again, she was so overwhelmed by everything, the view, the city and most importantly Mac.
„Mac, this is awesome. Thank you so much, I‘ve always wanted to come here.“
„You are so welcome. I‘d do anything for you. But this is just the beginning of it…I truly love you Mrs. Taylor.“
„I love you too, Mr Taylor.“ She replied with tears in her eyes. „I‘ve always had and I always will.“

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Got another update for today:
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-2 days later-
„Morning sweetheart, do you want some coffee?“ Mac asked entering their hotel room, he‘s been spoiling Stella ever since they were on their honeymoon.
„What are we gonna do today, Mac?“ Stella asked.
„Well, I thought you‘d might want to do a boat trip on the Seine.“
„Oh yeah that sounds awesome! I have a thing for boats.“
„And later in the afternoon I got another surprise, that‘s why we have to pack our bags.“
„Mac you surprise me more every day. Come here sit down beside me“
„Here‘s your breakfast, enjoy!“ Mac said while he sat down beside his lovely wife. Kissing her he asked:
„You‘re becoming more beautiful everyday. I suppose our kids would be the most beautiful ever.“
Stella stopped. She didn‘t expect that. It has always been her dream to have children with the man she loves. She failed so often with her choice of men and now that she had finally found her save harbour, she couldn‘t believe. They were going to be parents and having a baby Taylor.
„Oh Mac, I love you! The boat can wait Let‘s try our best every day..“ She chuckled. „Starting today.“

They left their hotel room pretty late so Mac realized they didn‘t have much time left to actually make the boat trip.
„Oh damn Stella, I think we were way too enthusiastic. But I have a better idea, why don‘t we go on walk on the bank of the Seine.
„Yeah that sounds like a good alternative for me .Let‘s go“ She said and grabbed his hand.

„Wow I wish New York was that beautiful look at all those lovely houses her.“ Stella commented while they were walking along with other couples in love.
Suddenly Mac realized a car driving on the sidewalk.
„STELLA! Watch out! What the heck is that idiot doing here?“
But it was too late he tried anything to pull Stella back towards him, but the next thing he realized was that she was gone.
„Stella! Love where are you? This is so not funny!“ He was about to break down. What happened to his wife? „Stella. Please where are you?“
He was worried sick, ever since the car drove beside them Stella had gone.
Maybe she fell in the water, he told himself. He ran over to the bank and he actually saw some bubbles on the water. Damn. That stupid jacka** made Stella fall in the water. He didn‘t hesitate one second and jumped into the cold water to save his wife. He could quickly reach for her arm and pulling her out he realized she wasn‘t breathing.
„Come on, Stella. Don‘t give up on me now.“ He yelled while performing CPR. „Please, Stella. What about the Taylor babies.“ He could barely breathe now, he was that worried about his wife, but she was tough. „Help! Anyone! Help! Please.!“ Suddenly she took a deep breath and spit out a lot of water.
„It‘s gonna be okay, Stella. I‘m with you . We‘ll take you to the hospital.“ Pulling out his cell phone he called the ambulance.
„Mac what happened?“ She asked in a whiny voice.
„Psshh don‘t talk. You have to go to hospital. Don‘t worry my love, you‘re gonna be fine…“ Now he couldn‘t stop himself anymore. Tears were running down his cheeks. Kissing her cold forehead he swore to himself that he was going to find that guy who almost killed his wife, his life. Why did it always to be Stella.
„Mac why are you crying?“ Stella asked.
„It‘s nothing. I … just thought I had lost you. I thought I lost my life again…I‘m so happy that you‘re alive…“

--In the hospital--
„How is she?“ Mac asked the doctor. „She‘s going to be fine, right?“
„Yes she is.“ He replied with his French accent. „You saved her life. You can be proud of yourself. But still there‘s one thing I have to ask you, Has she been shot lately or lost a lot of blood?“
„Actually yes, we‘re crime scene investigators, you know. She‘s got shot somewhere in her stomach area. Why?“
„I‘m sorry to tell you that your wife won‘t be able to have children anymore…“

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stella and no children nooooooooooooooooooooooo
Noo little smackieess ,,, :(:eek: that can't be true,,
tell me that docter was talking about someone els..

but it's a really good story!! LufIt<33
 
This is a great story hun. The last chapter made me sad though. :( Let's hope that by some miracle she'll be able to have kids. Great update dear, can't wait for more. :D
 
great story and i can not wait for the next update so please try to update really soon. thanks and take care, anne
 
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