Re: Horatio & Yelina #7 - "So Much Unresolved Love" (we quot
Hrocks I'm glad to hear you and your baby are doping well!!!
Thanx for the comments on my poem, everyone! It's the first one I wrote thinking about H/Y so I really appreciate it!

I really gave it a lot of though so I wanted to share with you exactly what I was thinking about and what I meant with it. I hope you don't mind
I think its pretty clear but just in case, it’s from H’s point of view.
Now tell me, will this pain ever end?/Now tell me, will his shadow ever leave my face?
This is referring to H’s personal demons, and what he sees when he looks at himself.
Back in time, I smiled/Back in tears, I shared/Back in time, I admire/Back then she was there/For my eyes, a sight of hope/For my heart, a glimpse of love
This is about when things where good with Y (before Madison, after Stetler and before Ray). Like some of you, I think that one of the reasons he changed in s4-5 is because Yelina went away so it makes sense that we could see more of his feelings and passion when she was still there
Then this world, then this life, then just my luck?/Said goodbye, said good luck/Said I’m sorry, said its right/Said nothing, impossible to give back
"10-7" When Raymond came back to life and H had to send them away, specially regarding the moment the say goodbye
Invisible wound, invisible blood/Spilled over my body, tasted it in my mouth/Unbreakable glass, unreachable my eyes/Into pieces my soul, let nobody know/For that’s what I’ve learned/For that’s what I know
What he was going through after they went away and I should include after Speed’s death. I wasn't actually thinking about it when I wrote is but is another reason why he could have change too.
Tried hard to care, tried hard to trust/Guess sweetness won me over/Guess with my head couldn’t deal no more/That spark kept loneliness at some distance/That spark kept me around/Never lost the cold sweat at night
This is about Marisol…PLEASE don’t shoot me!!! I had to add her as she was a part of his story. I didn’t talk about love…I don’t think there was real love but something was there…even if it was just H needing some company or needing someone to protect…I don’t know
Blink of an eye, her smile was stabbed Marisol’s death.
Blink of an eye, her face was back Yelina re-appears
Blink of an eye, again, the devil charges Raymond is killed
Flew back, moved over, moved home?/Huge distance there, hard to take any step/Thinks hard on this one, needs space
This is about Yelina comeing back to Miami and what distance made to their relationship.
The rest is obvious, it’s talking about what happened in “Burned” and with “Maybe some day I’ll have both” I MEAN Ray Jr. and Yelina.
I’m sorry for that! It was a little bit to long!
Here’s a little present
It's not my favourite but it's still cute!
