Horatio & Yelina #3 ~Goodbye Doesn't Mean Forever~

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Glad you guys like the fic. I think that was the hardest update to write. I never really was very interested in Rebecca :) and writing her dialouge felt a little odd. Great that it worked out!

For the pic: I like that both that their eyes are closed. Seems like they're enjoying scent of the other person :devil:!
 
HEY!! It's been WAY too long since i posted! Hey to all newcomers! Lovely to ;see' new faces here in the thred!

Ok, now on to the many things i must say. Hmmm where to start. Lost2MuchSpeed, i love the avatar and the comment about Yelina loving Horatio. And the add on that you love him too but thats not the point! I totally agree. DeWacko, the penguins are GREAT! ummm HoratioandMe, the little rabbit cracks me up. umm i was supposed to say something to Pusher. What was it? I remember now!! It was awesome that someone else finally saw Hoyay in Mr.Lonely!

Ok, now, to mention 10-7 again, love the pics, but every time i think about it i want to rage at Those who should be ashamed. *deep cleansing breaths* *long silence* *Deep cleansing breaths aren't working*

I severely dislike TWSBA
 
Good to see you again Gillian. :)

Hey, they've woken up! :D

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Yelina looks a little preoccupied!
 
:lol: Definately a game of footsie!

Hi guys, long time. I've just caught up on the fic HnM and it's totally great! You've inspired me and I'm working on my next bit.
 
when i read HnM update for Rebecca to my mind come a lot of old memory...when i first see epi 'Hel Night' and R/H chat with this part "H: I'm full of surprises" and the way R look at him just know it that there will be something new for CSI M. it was like oracle by my side :D but in 'Crime Wave' i was too confounded why H (or writers) decided to make this H/R dinner in the same epi where S hit Y...i was angry at H coz hi don`t punish S and even make one date. hum ?! ok in the end of this epi H smile for the first time from very long time but i personally don`t like the way writers push so fast this friendship R/H...after this come epi. 'After The Fall' and i start to change my opinion for R. S was force H to go to psychoanalyst for Speed death and who was there for H not Y but R and she was so nice with him..and there realy for me was something - maybe even chemistry. this chat between H/R was well done...H deserve to be happy even for a little and i agree hi to be with R. (comparison with Marisol Rebecca was much better choice for character who will be involve with H). but here come epi. 'Cop Killer' and R lose all the hard win points that i give to her...she try to 'fight' with Y and after this make deal with coop killer and this is the end...hum ?! 1. i don`t like the way H break with her - too rough and too quick overwork of the writers. 2. for me here was one possibility to CSI M plot to move forward - Y go with S, H go with R and H/Y jealousy one other...cool not like now in S4..we all know S and R from a lot of previous epi...and this M come 1 epi and after few days merry H ...

don`t know if all this post of mine make sense or is out of topic but just want to tell my opinion for Rebbeca..


here some quotes H/R/Y
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'Hell Night'

R: The other three boys gave him (Rj) up as the shooter.
H: I guess that puts you in a funny position, and you're gonna take their word or wait for the evidence, right?
R: Exonerating evidence? Didn't know you had any.
H: Stick around. I'm full of surprises.

'Crime Wave'

R: I was worried you were going to cancel dinner tonight.
H: That would not be possible.
R: But?
H: I've got to push it back an hour.
R: Drinks with someone?
H: No. There's a victim in the hospital,and I have to go see him and his wife, so, about an hour.
R: Okay, 9:00 then, my place. I'll leave the door unlocked.
H: See you.
R: Yes, you will.


'After The Fall'


H: No, it's always the same. I'm in the jewellery store. It's slow-motion... I withdraw my weapon. I brandish it. I squeeze the trigger... and... nothing. Nothing happens. It jams.
R: Yours didn't. Speedle's did. Horatio... there's nothing you could have done.
H: I wish I felt that way.
*she take his hands*
H: Ma'am.
R: Sir.


'Cop Killer'

Y: We're still trying to reach her mother.
R: You can't talk to her alone. She's a 16-year-old.
Y: Who may know the location of a 17-year-old hostage.
R: Well, it's my duty to warn you anything she says in there may not be admissible in court.
Y: Right, I understand, but I think right now,the most important thing is to find that boy. Wouldn't you agree?
R: Not if it means undermining this entire case.
Y: I have ethical problems with this type of behavior.
R: Are you questioning my conduct?
Y: Maybe it needs to be questioned. This is my case. I don't need you to tell me
how to run it.
R: Yours for now, but it's going to be mine later. Seems like there's a lot of that going around these days.


R : We're going to trial Patrick Brookner as an adult. With your evidence, it looks like a sure thing.
H: Glad I could help. It's frightening, some of the people who want to work in law enforcement.
R: Not everybody is cut out to be a police officer.
H: No kidding.
R: Well, it only takes a second to make a bad decision, doesn't it?
H: Yeah.
R: So, dinner tonight, my place?
H: I’m not going to be able to do that.
R: Let me guess. You're visiting Insko's widow?
H: Yeah. I'm going to go see her and the kid.
R: Okay, dessert, then. I'll just leave the door...
H: That's not going to happen, either.
R: What's going on? Is this about what I said to Yelina?
H: Um... no.
R: Oh. So, it's the deal I made. I stand by my decision.
H: And I stand by mine.


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Thanks for all the dialouge, Ani. It's entertaining to read all that again. I do think that H should've talked more with Yelina about her black eye. Afterall, H did say 'To be continued.' Of course there's not much more you could add to that conversation.
 
Oh yeah, I was definately thinking she was talking about H when she said that. I really would've loved to have the rivalry continue between Rebecca and Yelina. Would've made for some entertainment.

By the way, good to see you come in Casper :D!
 
R: Yours for now, but it's going to be mine later. Seems like there's a lot of that going around these days.

Oh yeah, I was definately thinking she was talking about H when she said that.

yes yes that`s why i post this quote. i regert that we can`t have the luck to see this woman "fight" for H, as like miss Ray and H 'crash' for Y...

and i was forgot to say this morning welcome back GillianSGrissom :)

Casp u must come here more often cos S4 soon will end and we will say one BIG welcome back to Yelina ;)
 
Thanks for the dialogues Pusher. :) I agree, there was so much potential for Yelina/Rebecca rivalry that would have been great to see. I feel the writers missed an opportunity there.

Even so, I did love Yelina's reaction to Rebecca's catty remark. She was very much, yeah, whatever! :rolleyes: That's our girl! ;)

Good to see you here again Casper. :D
 
Well, technically, I didn't really leave but, nevermind! Glad to be back :). And thanks much for the dialogues Pusher.

Rebecca is fiesty. Most women who are fiesty are really sexy but.....I don't really detct that in her :lol:.

Wouldn't it have been awkward? Two women chasing after the same man in a Science-based show?

Sherry posted:Of course there's not much more you could add to that conversation.

How 'bout...

*Later that day...*
H: If Rick hurt you in anyway, you should report it.
Y: It was nothing. We argued and it got out of hand.
H: And it might not be the last....Leave him and come with me.
Y: What?
H: You heard me! *grabs Y' s hand and run towards the horizon*

:lol: Yeeahhh, I'm psycho like that bunny.
 
^ I would say mainly because of Horatio's guilt issues over his brother Raymond. Misguided maybe, but we know how H loves to impose these self-sacrificial barriers. :rolleyes:

Also, the writers would introduce barriers between them (Stetler for example), as they preferred to keep this a 'will they/won't they?' type of relationship. It was always so evident how strongly they felt towards each other, but in a way, there was far more drama in keeping them apart as opposed to getting them together. Heartbreaking, frustrating, bittersweet - but always so great to watch. :)
 
I love the happy ending its way better than the real one. H/Y need a happy ending after all the pain they endured together.
 
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