Hidden Revenge: CSI:NY

Yes you do' :D I love your little diaper scene. I wish I could be more comical with stories, but everything I write comes out serious but with happy endings. Anyways, one more chapter to go after this one.


With Mac and Danny still in the hospital the rest of th CSI's went back to NYPD.

"Ryan and Lindsey", I'd like you two to work trace. Eric and Calleigh you'll be with me".

"What about me Horatio"?

Well Stella you need to stay here in case any new leads come in".

"He told you", "didn't he"?

"Who told me what Stella"?

"Mac", he told you I was pregnant again".

"Oh my God", you are"? Calleigh screamed. "Oh Stella", I'm so happy for you two".

"Stella", Mac asked me to take care of you", but I also can't allow anything to happen to my childrens Godmother. "So you will contact us with any new information".

Flack enters the office.

"Horatio", we have a lead on the brother's". "They are at Matt's Bar with the rest of the gang". From what I was told, they are not known as Tanglewood anymore". "Some new guy took over and changed the name to "Cruz gang".

When Horatio heard this he looked shocked.

"Cruz", "H", it can'tbe". Can it"?

"Oh Horatio", not more Cruz brothers". "I thought we had them all put away"? said Calleigh.

"You know these Bozo's"? said Flack.

"I'm not sure yet", said Horatio. "Let's go find out".

With that said "H", Eric, Calleigh and Flack headed out to Matt's bar.

Upon arrival at Matt's Bar the CSI's entered with caution.

"NYPD", yelled Flack. "We're looking for the Cruz Gang".

Hearing that everyone in the bar started laughing.

"Go away copper", you have no buisness here"? said the leader of the gang.

"Why does that voice sound like", "like"....

"Horatio Caine", said a voice with an accent.

Horatio flashed his smile and said "Clavo Cruz", "I thought I killed you in Miami after you and your friend tried to take down my officer".

"You thought wrong "Horatio", Do you think I'd be stupid enough to lay down my life for you without a fight"? "That was my twin you killed", "that's right Horatio", "I had a brother", stupid as he was to take the fall". "It's amazing what you find out in Prison". "My mom brought him to visit after you destroyed my family and ruined my mama".

"You did that to your family yourself Clavo". "Always thinking you were untouchable". "Why did you shoot Danny Messer".

"Caine", "I ain't shot no one".

"Well one of your guy's did and he's now in the hospital with a bullet lodged in his spine".

"That's a shame Caine", "Like I care".

Caine took off his glasses and grabbed Clavo and threw him against the wall. "Now you listen to me", "I want the guy that shot that officer now".

(gasping) "I'm telling you Caine", you got the wrong Gang".

"Well now that's a shame Clavo", because now I have you", "back to prison you go for good". "Take him".

After Clavo was removed from the Bar Horatio noticed a young man with a fair size cut on his face.

"Young man", "Come here".

Looking left to right he tried to run but Flack caught him and tackled him to the ground.

"The officer asked you your name"? said Flack.

"Sonny", Sonny Sassone Jr".

"Tell me son", "Did you shoot Danny Messer"? asked Horatio.

"Yes", "I shot him", he and his brother sent my father away to prison". "My mom cried herself to sleep every night because of Messer" and you other coppers".

"Well son", said Horatio. "You now get to see your Dad everyday in a 4x4 jail cell". Doesn't that make you feel proud"?

"Whatever". said Sonny Jr.

"Take him" said Horatio.

Once they had Clavo booked Horatio sent him back to Miami with Eric and Ryan to stand trial. Then Calleigh and Horatio headed to the hospital to say good-bye to Mac and stella.

"Horatio", I can't thank you enough for all you've done". said Mac.

"Well that's what we do", we take care of each other". "It's as you said Mac we are all connected".

"You're right", "we are one big family".

"Danny", you have a long road ahead of you", "stay strong".

"I will", "thanks for everything".

When Horatio turned around Calleigh was hugging Stella.

"I'm going to miss you Stella".

"I'm going to miss you too". "But you'll be back beofre you know it".

"Oh", why is that"?

"You and Horatio have to be here for the Christening of your Godchildren".

With tears in both their eyes they embraced again.

"Take care Stella".

"You too Calleigh".

Horatio walked over and gave Stella a gentle hug. "Take care sweetheart".

After Horatio and Calleigh left, the doctor came into the room.

"Okay", Mac", you can go home". "Danny we are taking you down to x-ray too have another look at that bullet".

With that said Flack, Lindsey, Hawkes and little Claire came walking in.

"Lindsey", what is that in your hand"? asked Stella.

"Oh" "it's from Eric", his phone number along with an open invitation to visit".

"I think he likes you".

"I know he does", but I had to let him down".

"Why", "he's kind of sweet". said Stella.

"I know", "but he's just not my Danny".

With that Danny smiled as they took him down to x-ray.

End Scene
TBC



Meanwhile everyone waited patiently for Danny to return.

"How much longer", "he should be up by now"?

"Lindsey" relax", they could be busy".

Claire had fallen asleep in Mac's arms. He didn't look burned to bad on his face. A couple spots were worse than others.

"Mac you look tired", why don't you let me take Claire for a while". Said Lindsey.

"I'm fine Lindsey", but thanks for the offer".

Just then the doctor returned to the room.

"Hello", I need to let you know that Danny is being taken to surgery as we speak". "It appears the bullet has inflamed the tissue around the bone". "I'm sorry we have no choice but to operate".

"Thanks doctor".

At that moment Lindsey started crying.

"This can't be happening", "I can't lose Danny now", "We've just started getting our lives together".

"Calm down Lindsey", "Danny is very strong", if anyone can come through it he can". "We are all here for you Lindsey". Said Stella.

(8hrs later)

Stella and Claire were fast asleep in his hospital bed, while Mac comforted Lindsey.

"Lindsey", "you remember what I went through when I thought I was losing Stella and our baby".

"Yes Mac", "I remember you praying all through each night and day".

"That's right Lindsey", "how about you and I pray together".

After they had finished praying, Danny returned from surgery.

"Det.Taylor", said the nurse quietly because she seen Stella and Claire sleeping.

"Danny is out of surgery", "we won't know anything for 24-48 hrs". "Why don't you take your family home".

"Yeah Mac", you go ahead I'll stay with Danny", said Lindsey".

"Are you sure"?

"Possitive Mac", you go ahead, I'll call you if anything changes".

Mac walked over to see Danny and told him to stay strong and then he woke up his family and took them home.

Lindsey sat on the chair beside Danny's bed and took his hand.

"Danny", "I know you can hear me", I need you to pull through for us". "We are just starting this relationship and I'm not ready to let go". "You hear me Danny", "I will not let go".

Lindsey laid her head beside Danny's thigh and fell asleep. A few hours later Lindsey felt someone stroking her hair and neck softly. She awoke and sat up.

"Hello Montana", "I knew I'd get you in bed sooner or later".

(laughing) "Yeah" you did Danny" and it looks like you won this round".

"Then get over hear and give me a kiss Montana".

With that said Lindsey kissed Danny with such emotion that they both cried.

"I love you Danny".

"What was that you said Montana"?

"I love you Danny"?

"I love you too Montana". "Always and forever".

With that said Lindsey climbed in beside Danny and laid her head on his shoulder with gentle care as they fell asleep.

(Morning) Mac and Stella walk in.

"Well, well", what do we have here".

"Quiet Mac", don't wake them". "It's kinda like Beauty tames the Beast".

"Hey there is a poem on TalkCSI about Beauty tames the Beast".

"No Mac", that's Stella and the Beast", that one of the talkcsi girls wrote".

"Oh", that's right". "Danny", wake up".

Lindsey woke up in a full blush and jumped off Danny.

"Owww Montana", 'that hurt".

"Wait a second", Danny did you just say that hurt"?

"Yeah Montana", you pushed on my leg".

It took a few seconds for the realization to set in.

"Oh my God", said Stella. "You felt that danny", "Mac get the doctor".

As Mac went down the hall, Stella had Danny try to move his toes.

"Try that again Danny", "wiggle them"?

"Look", they're moving". "They're moving".

Mac and the doctor came into the room.

"Danny", "can you wiggle for me"?

Sure enough Danny wiggled his toes more.

"Well", let's get an x-ray and run some muscular tests", "Okay"?

"Sounds great Doc".


(Six Months Later)

Danny was now getting around with a cane for support and of course with Lindsey by his side. Stella had 2 more months to go before her and Mac shared their second child, and most of all New York's finest CSI's were back to normal everyday routine.

Meanwhile over in Miami....

Horatio and his team had gotten over the shock of Clavo being alive. Calleigh and Horatio were expecting again and Eric was still waiting by the phone for Lindsey to call.

The End
 
Good for you that you didn't hurt Ryan, too, and that Danny is ok again...
I want to see the baby, too... and perhaps another one of another two people? ;)
 
Beautiful end, I think! Glad Danny is now OK, with Lindsay by his side...I wait for more fanfiction of you. Thanks.
 
The continuing story of Hidden Revenge. Montana's Home

This takes place in Montana. When Danny and Lindsay return to her home to fullfil a promise she gave her parents. At first they don't approve of Danny until Sonny Jr. gets released on parole for his first offence and comes looking for them to finish what he started. Through the story it will prove that love does always win over evil.

Danny had finished his appointment at the hospital and was waiting for Montana to pick him up. As she arrived he couldn't help but notice how beautiful she was. Her innocent looks always drove him to distraction, ecspecially when it had to do with working together. "Hi danny, said Lindsay, you ready to go"? "As soon as you plant me one of your Montana kisses". Lindsay grabbed danny by the collar and gave him a quick kiss on the lips, "there you go big boy". "You call that a kiss? this is a kiss Montana and Danny pulled her into his arms, pinched her bum, as she said ouch he fed her his kiss with passion and delight. Lindsey was so shocked, never had any man kissed her like that. She swore she seen stars coming from afar. Breaking apart Danny realized he was effected more then he cared to admit. "Now I'm ready Montana, you coming"? Lindsay picked up what was left of her mind and caught up to Danny.

Once Danny was resting at home Lindsay decided she'd make him some Southern Fried Chicken. She remembered how much Stella enjoyed it and figured Danny would too. After she had gotten everything prepared and in the oven she went to check on Danny. He was sleeping on top of his covers with nothing on but his boxers. She could see the massive scaring on his back and felt aweful because of what he had been through. Walking over she took a blanket that was sitting at the end of his bed and covered him with it. Tucking the corner under his neck Danny woke up and looked into Montana's big dow eyes. "Montana, why don't you come lay with me"? "I promise to behave myself. Lindsay knew she shouldn't give in but harm could he do, he was still pretty sore.
She crawled in beside him and nestled herself under his neck. "I love you Montana", everything about you, your beauty, your wit, your loving nature, but most of all your innocence of life". "Danny if I asked you something would you concider doing it"? "It would depend Montana, on what the favor was". Montana gathered up her nerve, she knew she was going to need it, she could never deny her parents wishes. With one breath the next words out of her mouth were, "Danny, will you come to Montana and Marry me"? Shock and horror appeared on his face, he was at a loss for words and then it came to him, "Montana are you insane"?

TBC
 
Hey Mel :D


"No I'm not Danny, I'm serious". "Montana sit down love". Montana sat down next to Danny. "Where is this coming from, we've only been dating for a year, I think you need to tell me the whole story". "When I came here it was to get away from my haunting past, my home and the people that live there". "So before I left I told everyone that besides my job, I was coming to New York to get married. After I had to return for the case of my friends everyone asked where my husband was". "I wasn't sure what to say, So I told them that you had to stay here because you were working on a case". "Everyone was fine with that, until you showed up and one of the town people seen you, they went and told my parents that I had indeed married and now they are waiting to meet my husband". "I'm asking you again Danny please marry me"? "Montana", "I always swore I'd never marry it's not who I am Montana". Lindsay started to cry as she said "I understand Danny, and you're right, I should just tell the truth about everything". Never had he seen her look so sad. Danny said to himself "You sucker", because he knew he was going to give in to Montana's proposol. "I'll tell you what Montana, we will go buy a couple rings and I'll borrow someones wedding Licence, we'll forge it with our names and then I'll take you home to Montana as my wife". "That's the best I can do Lindsay, "I can give you make believe for now, the rest will have to come with time". Lindsay knew she had no choice but to accept, "Deal Messer", "we have a deal". With that Danny and Montana sat down to Southern fried Chicken.

When Danny and Lindsay showed up at work they stopped in to talk with Stella and Mac. Now there was a couple Danny thought to himself. They started out as colleges then as friends to lovers and now they were happily married with two kids. "Hey Mac, how ya doing"? "I'm fine Danny what do you need"? "How do you know I need anything Mac, I haven't asked" It's your look Danny, the one that says I need to talk". "You look like you've been wearing it all night". "Oh Mac you have no idea, Montana wants me to marry her and take her home to meet her parents". "What was that"? "Montana wants me to marry her", please don't make me say it again Mac". "Why"? asked Mac. "She told her friends that she was coming to New York not only for her job but also to get married and now her parents want to meet the husband, me Mac, meeting parents, that should go over real well". "So you told her yes then"? "No Mac, I told her we'd buy a couple rings, get a fake licence and play make believe". "Like I said Danny, you told her yes". "Mac you're not being fair, we're not married for real, it's just pretend". "Of course it is Danny, you and your pretty little wife have a great vacation", see you in 4weeks". "Ah! Listen Mac, you'll not going to tell anyone right"? "Who me Danny of course not" "Okay, I'll see you in 4 weeks" said Danny. As soon as he left Mac's office, Mac called Stella and told her what Messer was up too. So of course Stella set up a little going away party for the happy couple. Just as Danny and Lindsay were about to leave, all of NYPD yelled "CONGRATULATIONS on your wedding day". Danny turned to Mac and said "Thanks alot Mac for not mentioning it". "Your welcome Danny, have fun". As Danny and Lindsay looked back Mac was laughing.
 
Danny decided he would drive first. As the were headed out of town Danny started having different thoughts. "Montana, what if your parents don't approve of us as a couple"? did you think of that"?
"There going to love you danny". "How do you know that Montana"? "Simple, because I love you", and if I love you so will they". Danny took Lindsay's hand and gave it a squeeze. Later that evening they stopped at a Hotel for some sleep. "Are you hungry Montana"? "No not really Danny, just tired". Lindsay went into the bathroom to change, when she came out she was wearing pajama's, Danny had to look twice and couldn't help but say, "Montana, you look damn sexy tonight". Lindsay laughed and said in her accent, "Well there partner, we ain't married yet, so this is what ya get". "Funny Montana", just go to sleep". During the night it turned very chilly and Lindsay could feel Danny's heat against her arm. She figured if she turned on her side she may be able to get some of his body heat without disturbing him. Yeah right, Danny woke up and said "You cold Montana"? "Just a little Danny". Danny grabbed Montana pulled her against him and fell asleep.
Lindsay felt warm, loved and just a little bit more trusting around Danny. In the morning they got an early start so they could get to Lindsay's home by supper. As they got closer Danny could feel his heart rate increase from the nervousness of meeting Lindsay's family. Danny noticed the beautiful scenery around him and the smell of country air with hints of dung, pulling up into Lindsay's driveway he seen her parents standing outside. "You ready Danny"? "No Montana, I'm not ready", and your parents don't look very happy". "c'mon partner", let's see if we can't change yur mind about us country folk". "Your Hilarious Lindsay". "I know that's why ya love me". Taking a deep breath Danny exited the car took Montana's hand and went to meet the parents. "Hi mom" said Lindsay, "this is my husband Danny Messer, Danny this is my mother Lisa and my dad Frank"
"It's very nice to meet you, you have a lovely home". "Thank-you young man", "come in". As they entered the home Danny could see that Montana grew up with alot of love. Her parents had pictures all over the place from childhood to now and the furniture was beautifully hand crafted. The home spoke of happiness and warmth, something that made Danny very uncomfortable. As they sat down to have some Ice tea Danny's phone rang. "excuse me for a moment please". "Messer" said Danny. "Danny it's Mac, we have a problem". "Can't it wait Mac", I'm meeting the parents". "No Danny it can't wait, Sonny Jr is out on parole". "What, How"? "First offence Danny, the kid didn't have so much as citation". "Do you think he'll come looking for me"? "It's a possibilty that he will". "Okay, Mac I'll come home until this is straightened out". "No Danny", "we are keeping an eye on him from here". "If anything changes I'll let you know". "Thanks Mac", see you". Walking back into the Living room Lindsay knew something was wrong. "Danny"! "is everything okay"? "everything is fine Montana". When Danny looked up Lindsay's parents were looking at him with shock and distain. "Did I say something wrong", asked Danny. "What did you call my daughter"? "Montana", "it's the nick name I gave her when she first started at NYPD". "Lindsay a word please". Lindsay new her dad was angry, he didn't approve of her nick name she had been given. "Why does he call you that", "Why do you let him degrade your name like that"? "dad it's just a name and I happen to like it". "I'm not liking this Lindsay", you come home with a husband who isn't even anywhere near your standards". "My standards". "Don't you mean yours Dad"? "It's always been what daddy wants, you have to marry a rich man Lindsay, you have to make something of your life Lindsay". "Well no more dad I love Danny and you best get use to seeing him because he's in my life, now and forever dad. With that said Lindsay stormed out the door.
 
I don't think you need to poke this time. Poor Danny get's eaten by Mosquitoes :lol:


Heading back into the Living room Danny noticed Lindsay hadn't returned. "Excuse me please, Danny got up and went outside to find her. He could see her crying against the fence. Knowing the only thing he could do was hold her, he turned her in his arms and held her tight as she cried. "Shh! Montana, It;s okay love, I'm here for you". Lindsay looked up into Danny's eyes as he wiped away her tears. "Maybe we should call the whole thing off Montana and go home"? "No Danny, I will not give my dad the satisfaction of thinking he's won". "Lindsay this isn't a competition", this is a very hurtful game we are playing". "It doesn't have to be a game Danny", not if you really marry me". "We've been through this Montana, I'm not ready for marriage, it scares the hell out of me". I know Danny, I thought for sure things would be wonderful and Daddy would accept you". "Lindsay, it's not that he doesn't accept me, he just doesn't like his little girls nick name". "No Danny, it's more then that, he wanted me to marry someone rich with lots of money, great job, great values". But most of all he wants lots of grandchildren running around our land. "Look Montana, maybe one day I can give you all that, but now isn't the time". "I know, what did Mac want"? "He called to tell me that Sonny Jr. is out on Parole and he may be coming for me". "Does Mac want us back"? "No he said to stay here that NYPD is keeping tabs on him". "Okay, Montana, my little woman, let's go face your parents again and see if we can't get them to their minds about us". Walking back into the house Frank asked Danny if he and Lindsay would be staying in her old room. Danny replied, "we've booked a room already at the little B&B just down the road". "Okay everyone", yelled Lisa, dinner time". After dinner Lindsay showed Danny around her home as they walked down towards the lake to talk. "Well what do you think Danny"? "I think I'm getting eaten alive Montana", I have bites on top of bites". "Oh Danny look at you", "you should have said something". "I didn't want to interrupt you Montana, I love listening to you talk". "C'mon Danny let's get something on those bites". Once they got back to the house Lindsay grabbed some Lotion for Danny's bites. "Lindsay", everything okay love"? "Fine Mom, Danny just got eaten alive by mosquitoes". "Oh my, is he okay"? "He will be, in a few days". "Dad", we're going to go now". "We'll see you in the morning". "Okay Lindsay". "Goodnight Lisa, Frank, "it was nice to meet you". "Yeah! take care of my daughter". "Of course Sir always".
 
Lindsay sees something :eek: :eek: :eek:


When Lindsay and Danny got back to the B&B, Danny hopped into the shower. While he was in there Lindsay walked in and asked what he thought of her parents. "There very nice Lindsay" and I can understand where your Dad is coming from he just wants to make sure his baby girl is happy with the life she has chosen". Danny had thought that Lindsay was talking to him from out the door so he stepped out of the shower right infront of Lindsay. Well by God, Lindsay swore she seen stars, he was well endowed and she got one hell of a look. Her cheeks went bright red as she yelled "Danny". Seeing Lindsay Danny grabbed a towel and wrapped around himself. "Christ Montana, you could have knocked". Then Danny realized she was embarrased, her face must have turned three shades of red as she said "Danny you could poke someones eye out with that" and she ran from the bathroom. She could here Danny laughing from behind the door as she thought to herself, "If I ever marry him i'll be one hurting bride on my wedding night". When Danny came out of the bathroom he looked right into Montana's eyes and said, "Don't worry love I won't poke your eyes out and he picked her up and kissed her deeply, intensely forcing her mouth to accept his kiss and as he felt her start to relax he broke the kiss. "Goodnight Montana". Well by God she was left hot and panting as she headed to the shower to cool off. In the morning Danny was the first one up. He walked downstairs and ordered breakfast for him and Lindsay. While he waited he turned on the news and listened to what was going on in the world. "Well, well, you must be Lindsay's new husband"? "I am yes and you are"? "I'm gus, I run the Gas Station across the street there". "Where is little Lindsay"? "She's still sleeping". "Heard yur made quite an impression on the old man, "he's talkin about ya already". "Oh yeah, that's good then". "Not really concidering he'd like to string you from a tree for stealing his daughter away". "Sorry to hear that, but I loved her so I married her". "She's my beautiful flower and I'll treasure her forever". Lindsay was listening on the stairs, never had she ever heard Danny talk so poetic. She was finding out more and more secrets he had kept hidden and loving every one of them.
 
Once the breakfast was ready Danny took it up to Lindsay. "Good morning Montana", how are you feeling today"? "Funny danny, you're a riot". "So seriously, what's on the agenda for today"? "Family Barbecue", you get to meet the rest of the Monroe family". Danny thought to himself, "Great there goes my happiness shot to hell". Danny had to admit that the mother was very nice but the father, now him Danny wasn't sure of. "What time do we leave wife"? "In about 5 minutes, Danny behave yourself and get that look out of your eyes". "What look"? "The look that says I want you right now". Walking over Danny took Lindsay in his arms and sat down with her. "Listen Montana", "I love you alot, and maybe one day we can make it forever, but I can make you one promise". "When we make love the only thing you will feel is my heart beating with yours". "That much I can promise you". "Now let's go meet the rest of your family". Upon arrival to Lindsay's home Danny's phone rang. "Hello"! "Danny it's Mac". "What is it Mac"? "It looks like the guys lost Sonny Jr.". "You're kidding right"? "No Danny, I'm serious". "He could be on his way up there". "Oh this is great, I'm trying to make an impression on Lindsay's family and we got Sonny Jr. on his way up". "Great Mac, just wonderful". "Yeah but Danny you're forgetting you're not really married". "Shut up Mac", just shut up". "Danny what's wrong"? "the idiots in NYPD lost the tail they had Sonny Jr.". "Mac thinks he may be on his way up here". "Not today Danny, please not today". Lindsay introduced Danny to her Uncles, Aunts, Cousins, Nieces, family freinds. Everyone seemed to enjoy Danny, they thought he was very polite and they could tell how much he loved Lindsay. "Lindsay", said her Uncle, "You have a great man here, don't let him get away". "I won't, but I wish Daddy felt the same way". "Give it time Peanut, your Dad will come around". After the party was over Danny helped Frank clean up outside. "Thanks for the wonderful Barbecue, it was nice to meet such a warm family". "Do you have family son"? Danny hated talking about his family and was relieved when Lindsay interrupted. "Danny we have to go, I need to check on a case with NYPD". "Sure, I'll be right there love". "Sir thank-you again for the Barbecue and I'll see you again". "You bet you will said Frank". After Danny and Lindsay were headed back to the B&B, Lindsay asked Danny if he was okay. "Are you okay Danny"? "What's wrong"? "Nothing Montana", "just a little tired". Lindsay knew it was more then just being tired and she'd find out more once they got back to the B&B.
 
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