Hidden Revenge: CSI:NY

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MacsLovlyAngl

Head of the Graveyard Shift
Danny had finished his shift and was heading home when he came across a robbery in progress. Picking up his cell phone he called for back up.

"Dispatch", this is Messer CSI-NY Division, there is a robbery in progress at the Bank of NY I'm requesting back-up. Two suspects on scene, both male, Hyspanic,
approximetly 20 to 22yrs of age.

10-4", All units robbery in progress at the Bank of NY. Officer already on scene requesting back-up.

Danny decided not to wait for back-up and entered the bank.

"Police", freeze".

(Bang, bang) (bang,Bang) Shots could be heard as the other officers arrived. Upon them entering the bank they seen both robbers with their hands in the air and Danny laying in a pool of blood.

"Hey, Hey, We didn't shoot that officer". "I swear he was shot by someone else who took off out the side door". "I'm telling you man", "we didn't do it.

As the rest of the team arrived Mac knelt down beside Danny.

"Danny, "Danny, can you here me it's Mac".

All that came out was a gurgle followed by a spatter of blood.

"Where the hell are the Medics", yelled Mac.

The Medics arrived on scene and assesed Danny's situation.

"It's not good", "We need to transport him immedialty".

After Danny had left the scene Mac approched the two robbers.

"Did you shoot my CSI"? and you better tell me the truth".

"I swear man", we did not touch your officer". When he came into the bank he told us to freeze and we put our arms up". "Then out of nowhere some guy fired two shots at your officer".

"What did he look like"? asked Mac.

"I don't know man", "it happened so fast". One minute your officer was aiming at us and than he was on the ground".

"Take them", "If I find out you are lying to me, I'll make sure you both end up on death row, understand"?

"Yeah man", I swear we are not lying".

"Any word on Danny"? Mac asked Stella.

"Not yet Mac".

Leaning close to his ear Stella whispered.

"Try and focus hun", you need to calm down". "I love you".

After Mac heard stella's words he began to focus on the case. They had been married for 3yrs now and were pregnant with their second child. Their first daughter Claire who was now one and quite beautiful with dark chestnut hair and brown doe eyes.

"Flack", you and Lindsey look for evidence and trace". "Stella and I will talk with the witnesses", "someone had to see something".

"You got it Mac".

Mac and Stella informed everyone to relax.

"Okay", I want you all to relax and calm down". We are going to ask you all some questions". "So please be patient because this going to take a while".

With that said Mac and Stella began to question the witnesses.

"I need you tell me what you seen Mrs".

"I didn't see anything officer", "I was to scared to notice".

After about talking with 5 of the 10 witnesses Mac and Stella realized that they were all to afraid too talk.

"Mac", What's going on"?

"I'm not sure love", "I'm thinking these people seen more than they are letting on and it's our job to figure out what it is".

After Mac and stella finished up they headed over to the hospital too check on Danny.

"Det. Taylor's, it's good to see you both, though I wish it was under different circumstances".

The doctor looking after Danny was the same one who took care of Stella 3yrs ago.

"Danny is in critical condition". He has a large hole in his chest from the bullet that went straight through and lodged into his spine". "We have a specialist flying in to
assess Danny's situation. He should be arriving shortly".

"Thank-you Doctor". "We'd like to see him now".

"Sure come with me".

As they entered the room Mac's memories of Stella came rushing back.

"Mac", What's the matter"?

(tears in his eyes) "Nothing Stella". "I'm fine".

"Danny " it's Mac", "I want you to listen to me". "You have to fight Danny", "don't give up", "you hear me", "don't give up".

With that said Mac leaned over and whispered in danny's ear.

"I need you too live danny", without you we would all be lost".

When Mac stood up he could see tears in Danny's eyes.

End Scene
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Yay sequel! *hugs you* But I'll get out the sharp objects if you're mean to my Smacked lolol more soon!!
 
YAY! SEQUEL!


*ahem* Now that this is over with, I have to say that this is great. The smacked things is always awesome ot see. Keep up the good work.
 
Thanks :D Big smiles all around.


Meanwhile back at NYPD Hawkes and Lindsey were watching the tapes from the bank.

"Hawkes", do you think we are going to find anything on tape"? "wouldn't it be better to go back too the witnesses"?

"Lindsey", as right as you are Mac asked us to watch the tape the through incase we missed something".

"Hawkes I'm telling you these people know more than they are saying". "God" we are supposed to be helping Danny". "If he dies Haw...(crying).

"Lindsey come here". (holding each other) I understand how emotional this is for you because of how you feel for Danny", "but I need you to focus on the case in front of us".

After Lindsey compossed herself, her and Hawkes got back to work on the tapes.

(Back at the hospital)

"Det.Taylor", the specialist has arrived. He's assessing Danny now and will be with you shortly".

"Thank-you nurse".

When Mac looked over at Stella she was sleeping.

"Sweetheart", wake up".

"Mac", "is it Danny"?

"NO", I want you to go home and get some rest". "You have to think of the baby and I'm sure Claire is missing us". "One of us should be home for her".

"Okay hun", I'll go home, but you have to call me if there are any changes".

"I will love", I promise". "Give my Claire Bear a big hug from her daddy".

"I will". "I love you". And with that said Stella gave Mac a passionate kiss and headed home to Claire.

When the specialist had completed his exam on Danny he went to talk with Mac about what should be done.

"Det.Taylor"?

"Yes".

"I'm Dr.Francis and I'd just like to let you know that I've assessed your officer and I must tell you it's not good. "From what I can see the bullet has lodged itself between the fourth and fifth vertabra". If I remove the bullet your officer could die and if I leave the bullet
the chances are 60/40 that he'll be paralized from the waist down".

"Is Danny awake yet"?

"No not yet", but he's been heavely sedated to keep his muscles relaxed because the slightest movement could disrupt the bullet". I feel it's best to leave him sedated for now".

"I would really like to talk too my officer right now", "so I'm going to ask you not to sedate again until I have a chance to talk with him about what he wants to do".

"Sure", then he should wake up shortly", "but you must keep him still, understand"?

"I do" and thank-you".

"You're welcome", I wish I could do more".

Once the doctor left Mac headed down to Danny's room. Danny was just waking up when Mac entered.

"Danny", "don't move", "stay down".

As he got to Danny's side he held him down.

"Listen Danny", the bullet is lodged in your spine", "if you move you could dislodge it causing serious damage". "Please don't move".

"Mac", "It hurts".

"What hurts Danny"?

"My chest", I can't breathe in", hurts".

Mac hit the call button and the doctor ran into the room. The only thing Mac could think of was this was Stella all over again.

"Danny" what is it"? asked the doctor.

"My chest", hurts to breathe in".

"Okay Danny", we are going to insert a small breathing tube through your nose and into your throat for a little while to assist in your breathing", "do you understand"?

"Yes", hurts so bad".

"Now Danny", I need you to inhale deeply and hold your breath". "I know it's going to hurt", but it's very important you don't move".

And with that said the doctor inserted the breathing tube and turned on the ventilator.

"Is that better Danny"?

Danny shook his head and very quietly said "Yes".

(whispering) "Mac", I need to know", "am I going to be okay"?

"Danny" as I was telling you, the doctor said if he removes the bullet from your spine you could die" and if you decide to leave the bullet it's a 60/40 chance you'll be paralized from the waist down".

As Mac looked at Danny he was crying again.

"I'm sorry danny". and with that Mac leaned over Danny touched his head to his and said,

"I know Danny", "I'm here", "let it out". "Just let it out".

End Scene
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*cries* waaaaah! that's so sad. Please post more soon! *hopes Stella and baby are okay at home*
 
After Mac posted two officers outside Danny's door he headed home to see Stella and claire. As he walked in Claire's room she was sound asleep.

Bending down.

"Hello", my little Claire Bear", "Daddy missed you tonight". "I love you".

Giving her a kiss he left the room and got ready for bed. Upon entering his room Stella was laying on top of the covers wrapped in her towel.

"Stella", "I'm home sweetheart". After he got no response he removed her towel and started talking into her tummy to his baby boy.

"Hi little Mac", it's Daddy". "I love you my boy".

As he kissed his son goodnight he layed his head on Stella's tummy.

"Mac", I love you".

"I love you too sweetheart".

"How's Danny"?

"Not to good". "The specialist said if he has the surgery he could die, but if he doesn't have it removed chances are 60/40 that he'll be paralized from the waist down".

"Oh Mac", "what is he going to do"?

"I don't know love", "but what I do know is that I need you to love me until my body is drained of past memories and today's events".

With that Stella brought her lips to Mac's and kissed him with fire and passion until all was forgotten, at least for tonight.

"Dada, dadaaadaa (Claire crying for daddy)

"Hi Claire Bear", Daddies here". "I love you". "How bout daddy change your bum and we go downstairs and make mommy breakfast"?

"Mama".

Stella still had a hard time getting up in the morning with the discomfort of nausea. Once dressed and ready the Taylor family headed out the door. Mac went back to the hospital and Stella took Clair to the sitter.

(The hospital)

"Hey Danny", how you feeling this morning"?

"A little better", still very sore".

Mac had noticed they had removed Danny's breathing tube.

"Danny", can you remember anything about yesterday, before the shooting".

"No Mac", "I told the suspects to freeze they did and then I woke up here".

"Okay Danny", you get some rest I'll be back soon".

On his way out the door Lindsey showed up.

"Morning Mac".

"Morning Lindsey". "Any leads"?

"Actually yes", do you remember the Tanglewood Boyz".

"Yeah" "what about them". "We put them all away".

"I know", but we found some blood at the scene and when we tested it, it came back with a relative match to Sonny". "Flack and I think it may be his son".

"Lindsey are you sure"?

"Possitive Mac", so we checked deeper and found that Sonny fathered two children by the same woman a Laura Rugosa who is living in Sonny's home", 18 and 19 yrs. "That's why we thought they were Hyspanic because they got their mother's coloring".

"Lindsey if you and Flack are right that means Danny is still in danger".

"That's right Mac", he is".

"Okay", I'm going to post more officers and than Stella and I will pay a visit to Laura".

With that said Mac posted officers not only on Danny's door but also the entire floor along with one in his room.

End Scene
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Wow, just read now the three parts of the story, and OMG...absolutely LOVE it! I was like crying for Danny, feeling for Lindsay, happy for Mac and Stella. I just hope everything turns OK. Continue soon...
 
You're evil hurting Danny so bad...
Better he will be fine at the end or I come after you :devil:

But great story so far... ;)
 
Thanks, :D I never kill off anyone :devil: or do I :eek:


Upon arrival to Laura's home Mac asked Stella if she was wearing a vest.

"Stella", do you have your vest on"?

"Yes", I told you that", "don't worry".

Knocking on the door Mac and Stella could hear whispering.

"NYPD" Crime Scene we need to talk with Laura Rugosa"

"She's not here right now", "I'm just the sitter".

"Mac", whispered Stella. "Look in the side window".

After Mac seen the two boys he and Stella decided it would be best to call for back-up.

"Please, tell Laura that we will be back to talk with her".

"Sure", I'll give her the message".

Mac and Stella then left the home.

(Back at NYPD)

"Flack", you and I need to go back to that house". "Now", well Stella is busy". "I don't want her involved in this mess". "She has enough stress with our new baby on the way".

"You got it Mac", "give me five".

(Mac went to talk with Stella.)

"Stella", Flack and I are going to go back and get those boys before they disppear somewhere". "I want you to stay her love", "it's safer for the baby".

"Mac this is a major case and you're asking me to step down"?

"Yes", "that's an order Stella".

"An order", What the hell Mac"?

"Listen", if something happened to both of us who would take care of our child"?

"If you get hurt or killed Mac", who's going to take care of us"?

"Stella", come here love". Holding her tight he whispers, "I love you" and promise to come back alive". Then he gave a kiss full of passion and love to last her till he returned.

Mac knew they would be waiting for him and Flack to return.

"You know Mac", they already know we're here".

"I know", we need to be really careful". "All the officers are posted around the house"?

"Yeah", everything is a go".

(Knock,knock) "Open up this is the police".

"You have five seconds and we break the door". "one,two,three".

(Door Breaks) "KABOOM". Everything exploded.

End Scene
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OMG, you're good! You really know how to keep things interesting. But you seem to want to hurt everybody!...Gladly Stella stayed in the lab. And please, do not leave Mac really injuried. Danny in the hospital is enough...And I hope he gets better!
 
Thanks :DThat's the idea of my stories. There is so much romance which I love but this is FanFiction and sometimes a good action picture is just as good as a love story. Don't take the writting to heart. It's just my way of sending something diffrent. If this offends anyone than please don't read any further. NONE of my main characters ever die. So just sit back and enjoy the twists and turns. Most of all remember this is FanFiction. Also H/C and M/S our my favorite couples. Just read the poetry and you'll see.

"Officers down,Officers down", we need back, medics, send all units". Yelled an officer.

Mac, Flack and three other officers laid motionless on the ground.

(Stella on Scene)

"Mac", "Mac", someone help, "MEDIC", he's not breathing", "God" not now, please".

"Give us some space maam, let us do our job".

"NOOooooooooooooooooooooo!" screamed Stella as Mac was showing flatline on the monitor.

Lindsey arrived grabbing Stella.

"Stella", c'mon", Come here". Lindsey embraced Stella in her arms as her screams could be heard down the street.

"MACCC!, "NOooooo!, Please Mac".

The Medics loaded Mac into the ambulance and took off for the hospital.

"Flack are you okay"? asked Lindsey.

"Yeah" just a little burned on my arms". "Mac and the three officers took the worse of it".

"C'mon Stella", let's get you to the hospital".

At the hospital complete mayham was going on in the E.R.

"All doctors to Trauma one stat", "Code blue", I repeat Code blue".

"Oh my God", "Mac"?

"Stella calm down", we don't know if it's Mac or one of the other officers".

"How are we going to catch these guys"? Mac's down and may not survive, Danny's down" and three other officers".

"Stella", we will get them I promise". Said Flack.

"You're right", we will.

And with that Stella called Horatio.

"Caine"

(crying) "Horatio" it's Stella".

"Stella", what's the matter sweetheart"?

"Mac's been seriously injured along with Danny and three other officers". "We need your teams help". "There is no one to help us".

"Okay Stella", calm down". "How did Mac get hurt"?

"Explosion", everyone with him".

"Stella", the team and I are on our way". "You hold on sweetheart", "hold on".

After hanging up the phone the doctor came out to talk with stella.

"Stella" how you doing"?

"How is he doctor", "please tell me he's fine".

"I need you to calm down Stella", remember the baby". "Mac is going to be fine. He has burns on his face, chest and hands". "Though I'm sorry to inform you that the three officers died". "I take it they were closest to the door"?

"Yes they were". Replied Flack.

"I'm sorry for your loss".

Stella and Flack headed down to Mac. Upon arrival they realized Danny and Mac were together in the same room. Stella ran over to Mac and held him tight in her embrace.

"Mac you promised me", you told me you'd be fine".

"C'mon love, calm down". "I'm fine sweetheart"., said Mac as Stella rained little kisses all over his face.

"Hey danny", how ya feeling? asked Flack.

"Not with my legs that's for sure",(laughing)

"Well at least you're in good spirits". said Mac.

"Mac", I called Horatio", he and his team are on their way down to help with the case".

"When did you talk to Horatio"?

"When I thought you were dying"?

Just as Mac was about to say something else the Miami crew walked in.

"Stella", yelled Calleigh" as she ran over and embraced her now best friend and Godmother of her children.

"Hi Calleigh", "How are my twins"?

"They're great", we left them with my dad".

"Horatio", how are you"?

"I should be asking you that". "What happened Mac"?

"Well Danny got shot at the NY bank trying to stop a hold-up. A suspect we believe to be related to one of the nortorious Tanglewoods we put away years back", so as Flack and I went to the home of Laura Rugosa who we believe is girlfriend to Sonny, we busted in the door and there was an explosion killing three officers and almost Flack and myself".

"Well Mac", We will start right away". "First I'll introduce you all to some of my team". This is Eric Delko my brother in law, Ryan Wolfe and of course you all know Calleigh".

"It's great to meet you all and this is part of my team, Danny is the one opposite bed, this is Flack, then there is Hawkes and Lindsey who are just coming in the door".

When Lindsey walked in Eric stood in shock. He thought her to be very pretty and available, but little did he know that she belonged to Danny. After introductions were done, they all sat around to discuss the case in more detail.

End Scene
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luvingmyHoratio, I am really loving your fanficiton. Hopefully it's just that and not a true story. I always apreciate some action, and I love stories/episodes when our CSIs get hurt. I'm an angst whore, that's it. Though I am not that much for H/C, I will read it and apreciate the story as it is, just that, and nothing else. I can't take it too seriously. Everybody says that I am already obsessed, it can't go that far, or my mother would not allow me to continue here :lol: really, keep up the good work!
 
Good, they're okay. Now get them in gear so they can catch the *censored* lol And LOL at Danny's comment about his legs

*likes writing angst but hates being left hanging* *gets into fluff bubble*

Too bad we missed the first few weeks home...Mac's response to diapers would be priceless lol

Stella: Mac, could you...?
Mac: Do I have to?
Stella: What is mister Marine afraid of a little diaper? It's no worse than what we smell on the job
Mac:*Grits teeth* is to9

I forgot to say how cute the little Mac scene was *giggles* I soo need to get in gear and write on mine.
 
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