here my idea for an episode

[csinickhill]

i'll start my idea off if people want me to finish let me know it's based on csi miami

im new here so please be gentle


At a park

Alex,tripp and Hortio are standing over a little girls body. The girl is lying in a pool of blood,Alex bends down to check the body,next to a sand pit.

Alex= H somethings wrong here this girl has no woundthis is not her bllod(h takes his shades off)
Tripp= WHAT!!!!!
Hartio= ok alex get the girl back to the mourge find out how she died.
Tripp= H there like five pints of blood here.
Hartio= then i guess........
(puts shades back on and looks away from the body and says)
I know were missing a body.

music wont get fooled again

what you guys think let me know if ya want me to continue

 

[Forensics_annie]

i would like to see it.

 

[sissi59100]

Please check out your grammar and the other mistakes while you're writing it.
and his name is Horatio

 

[MacsLovlyAngl]

Start: At Marisol's grave
Horatio bending down on one knee.
Tripp interupts on the moment.
Tripp: Horatio we have a double homicide over at the next section of the cemetary.

Horatio: " Well then lets go"!

Tripp: There is just one thing "H". There is a witness and you better brace yourself.

Horatio: "why"?

Tripp: It's Marisol

Horatio: (shocked look) "what"!

Theme song starts...

What happens next?.....

 

[csinickhill]

will do good piont just my bad spelling

 

[Forensics_annie]

lol spelling isnt everything, its the point you get across.

 

[saraholic]

But it's sometimes hard to read if there are too many spelling errors.

 

[Hunter]

Spelling errors and bizarre stuff happening. Marisols alive?

(I don't want to impersonate a Mod but..
...but there's a topic of 'Your idea for an Episode'.

Topic: Your idea for an Episode

You could post this over there if you'd like.