Heart Of Gold - A SMacked story...

hey guys... thanx for all the great reviews!!! here's
Chapter three...
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They had gotten looks from people, when they finished each others sentences, saved each others lives, that sort of thing. Colleagues weren’t supposed to know, or care that much. She had always found it funny how different they were, like water and oil. He was methodical, logical, professional. She got way too involved, she got angry too fast. But somehow, like oil and water, they were always side-by-side, and they fit together like pieces in a puzzle.

Dr. Lewis was a woman, he realised when she came out into the waiting room holding a folder. “Stella Bonasera?”
They had been talking about food, cannelloni to be exact, or more, she had brought up the fact that he still owed her. He stood up, after her, but hesitantly. He wasn’t sure whether she wanted him to come. Her eyes locked with his before she took her first step and he followed. She had asked him to stay with her. He wondered whether he would ever be able to read someone like he could read her.

The Doctor smiled and started reciting what was probably a well-rehearsed speech. But Stella wasn’t really paying attention, at this point, there were only two words she would be able to register: ‘positive’ and ‘negative’. They sat in matching, upholstered chairs opposite the desk on which lay her folder, with her results. He sat on her right, and made a quick grab for her hand when it started to shake. She tried to remember if she had ever been there for him, like he had been there for her many times. She hadn’t known what to do when Claire died, so she did what she could: sit there, listen and offer him a shoulder to lean on. On the Doctor’s desk she saw a photo from her wedding day, Stella realised it had been to long she had last imagined herself having one. Had she given up?

At first, the Doctor looked at him reluctantly, “If you want your…partner can wait outside.”
He glanced at Stella, making it clear it was her decision.
“No, he stays. He stays.” Stella said, first to the Doctor, then to him. Later on, he realised the neither of them had said anything about the Doctor’s “partner” remark.
“Ok then, I have some good news.” Dr. Lewis got straight to the point, “you tested negative for HIV and AIDS, you’re pretty much safe now. But be careful in the future.”
A weight lifted off his shoulders, she didn’t have the virus, she was safe. Stella wasn’t going anywhere, and everything would be okay.

Everything would be okay. He was grinning; she could tell even with her back turned. They stepped outside and before she could even turn around, his arms enveloped her in a hug. This wasn’t like other hugs, it wasn’t for her comfort. This hug was for him; he needed to make sure that this was real. She found she liked that. He needed her.
“Mac”, was all she could really say.
“You’re gonna be okay, Stella.” He smiled, but she felt it was more to himself.
She squeezed his shoulder and gave him a genuine Stella Bonasera smile, “We’re both gonna be okay, Mac. Don’t doubt it.”
It seemed good to him, and as they started walking, his hand found his way to her back again. Now she wasn’t running anywhere, but the touch felt warm and nice and natural. As did most thing involving him.
 
I was on a roll this weekend... lol hope you like... bit of a twist in this chapter.
chapter four...
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They went back to the lab after that. He had offered to drive her home, but she said they had to solve the case they were working on because it was driving her crazy. She didn’t tell him, though, that she wouldn’t know what to do with herself if she went home. But she figured he knew.

“Stella.”
She looked up from her computer and saw a certain ME. at her door.
“Peyton. Hi.” They were friendly towards each other, had been since before she a Mac became … an item. Unfortunately, it was in Stella’s nature to stand guard in case anyone holding Mac’s heart were to drop it. She wouldn’t let him get hurt. She couldn’t let him get hurt, because it would be like hurting herself.
“How’s the case going?” Peyton smiled.
“Pretty good, why do you ask?” She watched as the ME looked over the items on her walls and realised she had probably never been in her office before.
“Oh, Mac and I were supposed to have lunch, but he called and cancelled. I just assumed you had a jam.” Peyton’s eyes were fixed on a particular framed photo on top of her filing cabinet.
Stella raised her eyebrows, then dropped them quickly, hoping Peyton didn’t notice. “Oh that! We had a lead and want to follow it.”
The photo was of them, a couple of winter’s ago, after an office Christmas thing. They were walking back to the car, but the ground was covered in melted snow, not good for her black heels. Mad had insisted on carrying her to his S.U.V. She resisted but let him pick her up. Out of nowhere, Danny appeared, camera in hand and blinded them with the flash. He gave her the photo a few days later for New Years, with a short note: 'a night to remember?'
She was slightly embarrassed that Peyton had seen it without knowing the full story.
The ME pulled her head back to Stella, “I’m glad it worked out, speaking of, is Mac around?”
“No, he’s out with Danny, sorry.”
“Ok then, I’m off. But when he comes back, could you do me a favour? Could you tell him that dinner is at my place, 8 o’clock. My battery ran out, I can’t call him.” Peyton looked uncomfortable involving her so much in their relationship. She wasn’t sure how she felt about it. Mac and Peyton weren’t really any of her business, but Mac was.
“Sure, I’ll tell him as soon as he comes back” she smiled.

Peyton turned to leave but stopped and looked back at her. “Stella, while were alone, I wanted to thank you.”
She was confused, “For what?”
“For being there for him. For being his partner and his friend. He wouldn’t be who he is now if it weren’t for you.”
Stella opened her mouth but didn’t know what to say and Peyton took the opportunity to leave.

She had never thought of it like that. If anything, if went both ways. She stood up and picked up the picture on her filing cabinet. They weren’t look at the camera, and she realised they hardly ever do. As if each other’s faces are far more interesting that the gadget that will capture that moment forever. She saw his arms around her and remembered how it made her feel weightless. More significantly, she remembered what happened once they got inside the car.
“Thanks for saving my shoes” she had joked.
He tucked a strand of hair behind her eyes and smiled, “Like I wouldn’t do anything for you.”
 
Great chapters!!I like the memories Stella had about the two!..It's really interesting..Write more soon!
 
hey guys!!! thanks for all the great coments i'm glad i hit the mark :D *{hugs all}*. i'm thinking whether the chapter im working on now should be the last or not. hopefully ill finish it soon!
 
Yes, you can have this longer. Having the HIV issue behind them, maybe Stella and Mac realize how dangerous the world is and then take their chance with each other lol.....

But then again, this is good as it is.
 
That was good. You should write more. God knows we need good sMacked writers around :cool:

And I love this line:

Mac and Peyton weren’t really any of her business, but Mac was.

I'm not really a fan of an overtly jealous!stella or overtly jealous!peyton for that matter. I just can't see them that way, so I'm happy with the path you took.

It's fanfiction I know but the way you portrayed all three seem downright feasible.

I *really* hope to see more your writing! :)
 
thanx for ur comments guys!!! and ranma ...
ranma said:
It's fanfiction I know but the way you portrayed all three seem downright feasible.
what u said made me soo happy, im a picky fanfic writer coz, i'm only happy if its seems in character. lol
 
what u said made me soo happy, im a picky fanfic writer coz, i'm only happy if its seems in character. lol

Me too. I don't really enjoy a fic if it goes OOC.

But here, you're doing a pretty good job keeping in character.
 
hey guys, i'm doing my best... but chpater 5 isnt really coming to me at the moment. (although i usuually get the best ideas at 2 in the morning). but ive leaving on a 3 week trip on sunday... so how bout i promise youll get it straight afta i come back. ill dedicate my plane trip(s) to writing it, and itll be great. *{i hope}*

lol and chaostheory... i totally agree, ooc just doesnt cut it for me...
 
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