Have I Told You About My Father?

[ladyhunter]

A little drabble (100 words exactly) based on the episode: Yahrzeit

Have I Told You About My Father?​

Mac lay in the warm comfort of their bed. The city lights crept through the blinds on the window. He watched the ceiling fan circle round. His eyes tried to shut but the motion of the fan kept him from sleeping.

Her head nestled in the crook of his neck. He felt her warm breath as she slept. He placed a hand on the small bump forming in her belly. She stirred some and flicked her eyes open.

“Mmm, you’re awake,” she muttered.

“Have I told you about my father?

 

[Ghawazee]

Oh Heather!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you! Thanks for starting this one, any chance you could extend it??????? I want details how they got there! (and i *know* by heart who they are

 

[shazza_018]

this is awesome Heather!! More, more, more!

 

[ladyhunter]

Thanks for the feedback. Sofia and Debbie

Actually it was just a small piece (to challenge myself more than anything) but thanks again for the reviews.

 

[MacsLady]

Love it! Really intense, I could 'see' the scene.:bolian:

 

[Catu]

Loved it!!
Keep going please!

 

[lostladyknight]

You're going to keep going, right? This is so cute/sweet. Especially after the last couple of episodes. :-D

 

[MacsGirlMel]

Do you post on Livejournal too?

nice work either way

 

[ladyhunter]

Do you post on Livejournal too?

Yeah, that's me in the Mac/Stella community on LJ

 

[Mac's Girl]

Great piece of writing

 

[egeria]

That was really sweet...what a great challenge too! A story in 100 words. Well done!