Have I Told You About My Father?

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  1. ladyhunter

    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    A little drabble (100 words exactly) based on the episode: Yahrzeit

    Have I Told You About My Father?​

    Mac lay in the warm comfort of their bed. The city lights crept through the blinds on the window. He watched the ceiling fan circle round. His eyes tried to shut but the motion of the fan kept him from sleeping.

    Her head nestled in the crook of his neck. He felt her warm breath as she slept. He placed a hand on the small bump forming in her belly. She stirred some and flicked her eyes open.

    “Mmm, you’re awake,” she muttered.

    “Have I told you about my father?
     
  2. Ghawazee

    Ghawazee CSI Level Three

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    Oh Heather!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I love you! Thanks for starting this one, any chance you could extend it??????? I want details how they got there! (and i *know* by heart who they are :D
     
  3. shazza_018

    shazza_018 A Daily Anthem Moderator

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    this is awesome Heather!! More, more, more! :D
     
  4. ladyhunter

    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    Thanks for the feedback. Sofia and Debbie :D

    Actually it was just a small piece (to challenge myself more than anything) but thanks again for the reviews.
     
  5. MacsLady

    MacsLady CSI Level Two

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    Love it! Really intense, I could 'see' the scene.:bolian:
     
  6. Catu

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    Loved it!!
    Keep going please!:)
     
  7. lostladyknight

    lostladyknight Pathologist

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    You're going to keep going, right? This is so cute/sweet. Especially after the last couple of episodes. :-D
     
  8. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    Do you post on Livejournal too?

    nice work either way :)
     
  9. ladyhunter

    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    Yeah, that's me ;) in the Mac/Stella community on LJ
     
  10. Mac's Girl

    Mac's Girl Witness

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    Great piece of writing :)
     
    Last edited: Sep 5, 2009
  11. egeria

    egeria This mod is Ready for the Laughing Gas!

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    That was really sweet...what a great challenge too! A story in 100 words. Well done!
     

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