Greg's emotional side-more then just a CSI.

ericisacutie

Lab Technician
Well y'all, this is my first time doing this, I hope you all like it, please let me know what you think. :)

Chapter 1.

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Grissom walked by the break room as he says, "Nick, Warrick, Greg, you're all with me, I want my guys on this case."
Sara and Catherine look at each other, then Sara stands up and says, "Well fine then, we're busy anyway, thanks for asking."
Grissom raised one eyebrow as he walked off, yelling for the guys after him. As Nick, Warrick, and Greg leave after him, Greg cathes up to Grissom and says, "Hey Griss, what's the case about, you souded pretty serious back there."
"I'm always serious Greg, but it's about a missing teenage girl, now go get your stuff and meet me out by the cars."
Greg stopped, and Grissom kept walking. Warrick and Nick stopped by Greg, then Nick said, "I'd do what he said if I were you."
Grissom popped his head out from around the corner and said, "I heard that Nicky, you get your stuff too, and hurry up!"
So all three of the guys went and got their bags and met Grissom by the cars as he said to do.
They drove down Pecos in Henderson for a while, then they finally came to a stop. They all got out of their cars and Grissom went up to the front door of the house they had stopped at. Nick, Warrick and Greg all looked at each other, and then Greg said, "This place seems familiar to me."
Nick and Warrick nodded as if it was to them too.
Anyway, Grissom rang the doorbell, and two people came to the door. They looked quite weird actually, and that's what the three guys were thinking, but Grissom didn't seem to really take time to think about that. So Warrick, Nick and Greg all got up beside Grissom, then Grissom said, "Good afternoon Mr. and Mrs. Thompson, my name is Gil Grissom, this is Warrick Brown, Nick Stokes, and Greg Sanders, we're all from the Las Vegas crime lab, and we're here to investigate the dissapearence of your daughter."
Before Grissom barely got the word daughter out of his mouth, the man and woman almost at the same time said, "She is not our daughter! We adopted her two years ago because we were going to get special benefits from the orphanage."
Grissom looked at Warrick, and Greg looked at Nick. They were sort of blown away that they didn't even really seem to care she was missing, and that made them all extra suspicious. But anyway, they all went inside the Thompson's house, and as they did Grissom said, "How long was she in the orphanage before you both got her?"
"How are we suppose to know? I do know though she was shifted around from home to home a lot! I think she lived in twelve different foster homes between the age of ten and thirteen."
Greg looked at them and said, "Whoa, that's a lot."
"Whatever, she'd of gone back when we got her too if it wasn't for the fact that our son loved her so much. He was always standing up for her at school and stuff. I don't know why, she was the most selfish and careless person around."
"Mr. and Mrs. Thompson, do you have a resent picture of her we may have to help idenify her?"
Grissom asked, hoping for a good answer, but instead this is what he got.
"Heck no, we don't take picture, can't you see there's no pictures out anywhere, and even if we did we wouldn't have any out of Sam, that's for sure."
"Well can you at least tell us what she looks like then, what school she goes to, and let us talk to your son?"
"Josh is at school right now, which Sam shuld be too, but tthis morning we woke up, and Sam wasn't here, we found a note in her room saying she had left, and some drops of what looks like blood on her windowsil. But anyway, she just turned 15 today, brown hair, blue eyes, about 5 feet 5 inches tall."
Warrick, Nick, and Greg all stopped in their tracks, especially Greg. Grissom looked at them all and just stared at them. Warrick decided to say the next thing, which was, "Does Sam's last name happen to be Hudson?"
The Thompson's aren't looking at Warrick, their looking at Greg. Greg looked like he was about to die right there on the spot, but they glanced back over at Warrick as they said, "Yes. Why?"
Grissom is looking at Warrick, and then they all turn to Greg, which I might add is red as fire now. Greg got this very angry look on his face as he raced over in front of the Thompson's as he started to raise his voice and said, "You're both liars!!!! Sam is not a bad kid, and she's for sure not selfish, all she ever says is great things about you two and everyone else!! She's the sweetest girl ever, and that's also her necklace you stole from her!"
Greg is now fuming, looking at Mrs. Thompson's neck.
Anyway he looked back up at her as he started yelling again, "I gave that to her two days ago at church for her Birthday today, and you took it! Along with no telling what else! But I can tell you one thing, if you hurt Sam in any way, or you had anything to do with her missing, you will wish you hadn't of, that's for sure!"
Grissom grabbed Greg's shoulders and pulled him away from Mr. and Mrs. Thompson, then Nick and Warrick came up to help. They had very angry looks on their faces too, but not because of what Greg had done, but becaus they must have known Sam too. Anyway, Grissom kept pulling on Greg's arm as he said with a growl, "Let's go!!"
Greg broke out of Grissom's grip and stormed out of the house. Nick and Warrick followed. And Grissom did soon after. But he had to apoligize first.

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To be Continued.......

I hope you like so far, it's only the beginning :)
I changed the subject, I hope that's okay. :confused:
 
Re: Greg's emotional side----my story

There isn't many people on at the moment, just wait till tomorrow when there are like 50 ppl on the forums :D
 
Re: Greg's emotional side----my story

Grissoms_Angel said:
There isn't many people on at the moment, just wait till tomorrow when there are like 50 ppl on the forums :D

Like me :D

Hi i'm one of the mods and since i've never see you here, i guess you're a newbie writer :D You can introduce yourself on the "welcome to fanfictionland" thread ;)

About your story: I think it's a good start so far, well there are some mistakes but as long as the story is well written, that's okay! I can't wait to read more :)
 
Re: Greg's emotional side----my story

Alrighty, I'll try chapter two, it should get better, enjoy.:)

Chapter two
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So all the guys headed back to the lab. Grissom was madder then ever, knowing they needed to process the evidence as soon as possible, but he also knew he had to deal with Greg's behavior before the police are after him.

Greg took off first no doubt, leaving Nick to ride with Grissom and Warrick. As soon as they all got back to the lab they saw Greg's car, Grissom jumped out of the drivers seat and in a hustle went inside the building. Nick and Warrick followed.

Grissom walked back by the break room, and Catherine, Sara, Hodges and Greg were all in there.
Greg was sitting in a chair with one hand covering his eyes, everyone else was standing up. But Grissom really didn't even take the time to notice everyone else, he was just ready to explode, and he did.

"What in the world is your problem Greg!! We were at a crime scene, and you do not do that at a crime scene, specially when there's suspects there we need to question!"
Greg didn't say anything, and about that time Nick and Warrick walked in and Catherine said, "Do you mind if I ask what's going on here?"
Grissom whipped his head around and said, "I'll tell you what's going on here, my CSI is about to be dropped from this case cause he's loosing his mind!"
Sara walked up to Grissom and said, "That's a little harsh isn't Grissom, he seems pretty upset."
"No, it's not near harsh enough Sara! If you don't learn to be harsh you will never survive in a job like this!"
Sara raised both eyebrows, and then just stomed out.
Grissom watched as she left.

Catherine just shook her head, and followed.
Hodges wasn't about to move though, unless he was made to.
Warrick and Nick stared at him, then Grissom said, "Do you mind Hodges?"
He looked over at Warrick and Nick and then walked out.
Greg was still sitting in the chair not saying anything, but you could tell just from the mood in the air he was angry and sad both. But that didn't even seem to cross Grissom's mind.

Anyway, Grissom walked over to Greg and said, "What is your problem, you've had cases like this before, why is this one so different?"
Greg finally uncovered his eyes, which were red as fire along with his face, then he stood up and said, "Because this isn't just some case Grissom, I knew her, and so did Nick and Warrick."
"That shouldn't matter Greg, Nick and Warrick didn't burst like that, and that should just mean that you'd be that more anxious to want to find her and get all the imformation you could, not threaten our suspects."

Nick and Warrick just looked at each other, then Grissom turned to them as he said to the open, "Now, I don't expect this to happen again, but if any, and I mean any of you even have the doubt that it will, then I'm taking you off this case right now, so be honest. Nick?"
Nick nodded and said, "I'm with you boss."
Grissom turned to Warrick, and Warrick nodded too.
Then Grissom turned back to Greg, and said softer then he'd talked all day, "What about you Greg? I want you to know I picked my guys for this case because I wanted them to help me, cause this girl might not be dead. But I can't have you acting that way, understand?"
Greg sniffed, nodded lightly and said, "I'm with you Grissom, but we have to find her, please."
Grissom turned around and started walking, then when he got to the door he said, "I'll give a 100% Greg, but that's all I can promise you."
Grissom left, then Warrick and Nick looked to Greg and said, "He means that Greg, he really will give a 100%, just like us, we promise."
Greg shook his head still with an angry look on his face, then he said, "Good, you guys give your %, and I'll give mine."
Greg walked out of the break room, and headed back for the cars again. Nick and Warrick followed.

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To Be Continued.........

What'cha think so far???:)
I also want to say everyone has done such a great job on this board with their posts, I'd love to be as great as y'all some day. Thanks for reading :)
 
Re: Greg's emotional side----my story

okay, time for chapter 3, hope you like it. :)

Chapter 3

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So all the guys went back to the crime scene, and Grissom made Greg apoligize.
"I'm sorry Mr.and Mrs. Thompson, I didn't mean to acuse the both of you that way, it's just I'm really worried about Sam, like the both of you are."

Mr. and Mrs. Thompson just chuckled at Greg, and then they said, "We sure wish we had someone who cared about us that much when we were teenagers."
Greg started to get that angry look back on his face again, then the Thompson's chuckled again and went in the kitchen where the police men were.
Greg looked back at Grissom and just shook his head. Then he went back to Sam's bedroom where the note and the blood was.


Warrick went back there too. When they arrived in the room it was the straightest teenagers room you'd ever find. Warrick went over to the window to swob the blood, and Greg went to check out the note on Sam's bed. He picked it up as he read, "I'm not sorry at all for being so selfish, I hate everyone!! I'm moving out and never coming back, because I don't care about anyone!! -Sam Hudson


Greg looked at Warrick, and Warrick said in a whisper, "Sam didn't write that note, did she Greg?"
Greg shook his head in pure anger and threw the note inside an envolope. Greg turned around, and he was facing Sam's dresser. He walked over to it and picked up her hairbrush and put it in the bag, then as he was about to walk over to Warrick, he noticed two pictures on her dresser.
One of her with Nick, Warrick, and Greg from church. And one of her and just Greg.

Greg's heart skipped three beats right there, he even started to get emotional again. Warrick walked up beside him, and about that time Nick and Grissom came into the room also. They all looked over Greg's shoulder at the picture, then Grissom said in a soft and what seemed like caring voice, "Maybe I should have Catherine and Sara on this case, I think it would be easier for them, then you guys."
Greg put the picture of them in an evidence bag, and then said in a choked voice, "We should get this stuff back to the lab, and go pay her brother a visit."


So they all grabbed their stuff and headed back for the lab once again. When they arrived Greg dropped all the evidence off, then he went and sat outside for a while. Sara came out and sat beside him. (A Sandle scene) :)
She looked at him, and he looked back. Sara put her hand on his as she said, "I asked Grissom if I could help on the case too."
Greg looked confused, then he said, "Why in the world would you do that, especially after the way he talked to you earlier. I don't understand."
Sara smiled and said, "I did it for you Greg."
Greg looked back at her and smiled slightly, then he reached around her for a hug. And as that happened Sara whispered in his ear, "You're a great person Greg, and friend."

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To be continued...........

How do you like my ending of this chapter so far??
Thanks for reading :)
 
Re: Greg's emotional side----my story

yea, sorry about that Bullet Girl, I'm glad it's better this time.
Alright Chapter 4, bare with me. :D

Chapter 4

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Anyway, Greg and Sara went back inside, and Nick and Warrick were standing inside the lab.
When Greg walked up to them, Warrick said, "Get this Greg, the blood on the windowsil matches the hair on Sam's brush, but the fingerprints don't match."
"What did you compare the fingerprints to?"
Greg was now wondering.


"The prints on the picture of you and her. We compared those prints and the ones on the note, and they weren't a match." Warrick said that with a slight grin on his face.
No one was really sure why, so Sara asked, "Warrick, how is that good though? Doesn't that just mean someone did take her?"

Warrick shook his head and said, "Most probably, but Grissom and I are going back to the house once again to get Mr. and Mrs. Thompson's fingerprints, and we have a warrant if they give us any trouble. At least we know that Sam wasn't the one who wrote that note."
Greg and Sara shok their heads, then Nick walked for the door as he said, "Greg, Sara, we're going to Josh's school to have a talk with him. We'll get his fingerprints there if needed."


So Nick, Greg, and Sara all went off to the school in Henderson to find Josh. And they did, and believe it or not he was very willing to help.
"Josh, I'm Greg Sanders, and this is Warrick Brown, and Sara Sidle, we're all from the Las Vegas Crime Lab, and we need some help from you, it's about your sister."

Josh looked at Greg and said, "Sam? What about Sam, what's wrong with her?"
"She's missing Josh, and we need some imformation so we can help find her."
Nick said that with a very deep tone, then Josh looked at Nick and said, "Missing? When did she go missing? I saw her just this morning before school."
You could see Greg's face lighting up again with a dark shade of red, and Sara knew he was getting mad all over again.

"Josh, I need you to be very specific with us, what happened this morning? What was Sam doing when you left for school?" Greg was now pacing standing still, kind of weird, but yea.
"Well Sir, I got up, and Sam was making breakfast as usual, and I wanted to help, so I went over to the stove and started the pancakes. Then my dad went over to Sam, and pushed her. She fell to the floor, and I leaned down to help her up. Then my mom came in and said leave her be.
She must of hit something because her arm was bleeding."

Greg was now staring so deeply at Josh everyone thought he could see the inside of his head. Josh knew something was going on with Greg, so he asked, "Excuse me Sir, but do you know my sister?"
Greg didn't say anything, but Nick did.
"Yea Josh, we both do, we know her from church, so we want to find her just as much as you do. So just one more question, when you were leaving for school, was Sam there?"
Josh nodded instantly and said, "Yes Sir, she has a different school bus then I do, even though we go to the same school, but her's doesn't show up until about ten minutes after mine does. She walked me to the bus, and I gave her a hug telling her Happy Birthday. And then I watched her go all the way back into the house, and my bus left. That's all I know, sorry."


"Thanks for your help Josh, we'll do all we can to help find your sister, thank you."
So Greg, Nick and Sara all headed back to the cars, and just as they got to them Greg opened his mouth and said, "I knew they were liars, they told us they didn't see her this morning, but they really did. And they hurt her too, I sure hope Grissom and Warrick got those prints and DNA samples, because I'm ready to take this to court, that's for sure!"

"Greg, you shouldn't jump to the wrong conclusion here, you don't know for sure who has a part in Sam's dissapearance."
"Yea I do, exactly! And I won't rest until I can prove it to you guys, and everyone else. Because if Sam is dead, I owe her at least that much!"

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TBC

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