FanFic Poetry #2:Warning...May cause Passionate Combustion!
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Love it, and your icon...where did you ever find that unicorn pic? I love it!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Also, glad you liked the poem, and Manip
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I always like your poems
Really, where did you get the picture? I'm curious.
Oh and I want a sequel to the werewolf fic!
Really, where did you get the picture? I'm curious.
Oh and I want a sequel to the werewolf fic!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
I'll send you the Unicorn pic, and I'm working on a sequal, be patient my Melly
katpin31791
CSI Level Three
Hey Linda, wonderful work as always my friend. I think I recognized some of it. LOL Fantastic as always. Thanks
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
MMMM Love the Smacked manip
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Jenna_Caine
Police Officer
God, I love these, guys... Anyway, I have my first poem for this thread! It's based (loosely) on my fanfic, and it's from my character Jenna's POV, to Eric... Tell me what you think, but please, remember it's my first try, and be nice...?
Mi querido... I can see your fangs extending
With your lust, your love, your longing
Please don't make me wait for you
Just take me now, tell me how you love me true
Tell me without words how much you need me
Show me once more how I can satisfy your need
Your primal urge, instinctive desire
For me to heal your wounds till we tire
And later as we rest with lazy eyes
We'll hold each other close as we watch the sun rise...
:devil: :devil: :devil:
Mi querido... I can see your fangs extending
With your lust, your love, your longing
Please don't make me wait for you
Just take me now, tell me how you love me true
Tell me without words how much you need me
Show me once more how I can satisfy your need
Your primal urge, instinctive desire
For me to heal your wounds till we tire
And later as we rest with lazy eyes
We'll hold each other close as we watch the sun rise...
:devil: :devil: :devil:
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Awsome job Jenna_caine, and welcome to the FanFic poetry club. Pulls you out a shinny new desk, with sharp pencil, and picture of Eric in the corner, this is to inspire you to write more:thumbsup:
. Pulls you out a shinny new desk, with sharp pencil, and picture of Eric in the corner, this is to inspire you to write more:thumbsup:
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Is there a way you can reprint your last poem Linda? I can't read it very well
Jenna_Caine
Police Officer
:lol: Thanks, LMH! I appreciate it. Well, now that I've posted that one, I've got one or two others I've been debating posting, so I'll probably do so soon.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
That's the best I can do Melly
You're welcome Jenna
Jenna_Caine
Police Officer
Oh, whoa... I just realized that I recognize the pic you used for the base of that manip, Linda... It's an Indian warrior and maiden holding each other, isn't it? My dad has it on a magnet in his truck.
Here's another one from me... Lol
Well, first, one of my ideas for Jenna is that she used to date Speed, but they figured out it wouldn't work. :shrug: Best I could come up with... So this is more of a sweet, sad, farewell poem from Jenna to Speedle, but I figured that it fits more in here than in the Speedle thread, since it has to do with a relationship, right? Anyway, here it is...
My love, my Speed
I miss you, it's true
Some pay no heed
As my heart breaks in two
My brother tries hard
To help me bear
This burden of the heart--
I was not there
To try to help as your life's blood flowed
From your wound so deep
I watched elsewhere as luminol glowed
And crowds strained hard to get a peep
Eric, too, helps me cope
He lost a friend, a mentor true
When you died, leaving us to grope
Through the dark world, alone, just us two
Sometimes I feel alone in the shadows
Even Horatio knows not how I feel
Though he's my brother, through whom my blood flows
Eric is the only one who can help me heal
We've both seen you, every once in a while
You've helped us to find what we cannot see
I find it hard to put away your file
But still, I'm happy that you still love me
Thank you so much for watching over us
Though you are dead, you still show you care
Eric and I both miss you so much
Just because you can't see something...
Doesn't mean it's not there...
Btw, the verse about "I watched elsewhere as luminol glowed" signifies the fact that, for my purposes, Jenna was working on another part of the investigation, which is why she wasn't at the jewelry store with Horatio and Speedle.
Also, I was wondering if any of you might be able to help me come up with a "nickname" for Eric/Jenna. You know, like DuCaine, Hiphuggers, EDeN, Smacked, GSR, CatNip, etc, etc... Just wondering/hoping... :lol:
Here's another one from me... Lol
Well, first, one of my ideas for Jenna is that she used to date Speed, but they figured out it wouldn't work. :shrug: Best I could come up with... So this is more of a sweet, sad, farewell poem from Jenna to Speedle, but I figured that it fits more in here than in the Speedle thread, since it has to do with a relationship, right? Anyway, here it is...
My love, my Speed
I miss you, it's true
Some pay no heed
As my heart breaks in two
My brother tries hard
To help me bear
This burden of the heart--
I was not there
To try to help as your life's blood flowed
From your wound so deep
I watched elsewhere as luminol glowed
And crowds strained hard to get a peep
Eric, too, helps me cope
He lost a friend, a mentor true
When you died, leaving us to grope
Through the dark world, alone, just us two
Sometimes I feel alone in the shadows
Even Horatio knows not how I feel
Though he's my brother, through whom my blood flows
Eric is the only one who can help me heal
We've both seen you, every once in a while
You've helped us to find what we cannot see
I find it hard to put away your file
But still, I'm happy that you still love me
Thank you so much for watching over us
Though you are dead, you still show you care
Eric and I both miss you so much
Just because you can't see something...
Doesn't mean it's not there...
Btw, the verse about "I watched elsewhere as luminol glowed" signifies the fact that, for my purposes, Jenna was working on another part of the investigation, which is why she wasn't at the jewelry store with Horatio and Speedle.
Also, I was wondering if any of you might be able to help me come up with a "nickname" for Eric/Jenna. You know, like DuCaine, Hiphuggers, EDeN, Smacked, GSR, CatNip, etc, etc... Just wondering/hoping... :lol:
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