FanFic Poetry #2:Warning...May cause Passionate Combustion!

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  1. FanFic Poetry #3 -The Passion Never Ends

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  2. FanFic Poetry #3 - Burning in Passions Fire

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  1. ladyhunter

    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    Thanks Horatiosangel yes, gotta love South Park :)

    LMH your are so AWESOME! I really like the Mac/Stella one it rocks and it's so true :)
    Although I don't ship (Don't really watch Miami) Calleigh and Horatio, it's good too!
     
  2. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Here we go...Some Gil/Cath for hhunter :D :D :D
     
  3. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    Nice work, all of you :D
     
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    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    A big Thank you to lovingmyHoratio
    they are AWESOME!
     
  5. EyeHeartH

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    I just finished my evening stroll, and since tonight was cloudy and obscured the usual view of a very starlit sky (I live in the city when I'm not in school, but when I'm at school I live in the middle of nowhere). So here's a little DuCaine starlight love. Since Miami is a fairly large city, you wouldn't be able to see the stars, but just imagine for the sake of the poem that you can ;)

    Among The Stars Did They Espy

    The gentle rain subsided
    To reveal starlight's majesty
    And to her ear he confided
    "What lovely sight to see"

    Standing on the balcony
    Of his palatial abode
    Heart swollen in matrimony
    Sheathed in a mere silken robe

    "Horatio, the stars shine bright
    After among them you have graced
    For your heart brought out the light
    As if into the sky it placed"

    "Calleigh, it hasn't always been
    For before our love ignited
    My heart was dark and hard in sin
    Until our hearts were united"

    Grabbing his hand she took her place
    And stared deep into the sky
    Diamond stars illumed her face
    Which all around the two espied
     
  6. ericloca

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    EyeHeartH, luvin wonderful poems !!!

    Confession

    Love began as a spark , grew in a flame
    I cannot stop my heart , she is the one to blame
    Because her beauty is invading my mind
    Seeing her sweet face rendered me blind

    There is no girl on planet as pure as this girl
    White her white simple dress , lips shinning as a pearl
    Brown hair on her shoulders , chocolate eyes
    Innocent smile , mouth that never said lies

    She drops a book from her hand
    I lift it for her and I front of her I stand
    She smiles and thanks me sweetly
    I lean on a wall ; she’d weakened me completely

    A simple sight of her makes me wanna melt
    My mind is full of something that I’ve never felt
    I think I am in love with this brown eyed
    Because my heart beats so much faster inside

    Three years passed , I never told her what I feel
    And this secret made a hole that may never heal
    I need to tell her before it kills me , before it’s too late
    To confess my love , say to her she’s my soul mate

    Today it’s the party; she’s alone on the side
    She takes a glass of juice ; I invite her outside
    She follows me and we walk in a park
    I give her my coat because it’s cold , it’s dark .

    I take her hand and look into her eyes
    I just whisper ’I love you ’ I take her by surprise
    She jumps and hugs me tight ; she smiling
    ‘Me too’ she answered ; I feel my world is shinning .
     
  7. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    EyeHeartH...Welcome back, and what a lovely poem :D :D :D

    Danielle, I see you found your inspiration..very nice, :D :D

    Some from me shortly, Just finishing them up :) :)
     
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    Beautiful poems everyone! :)
    Danni, lovely as always. :)
     
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    nice work all of you :)
     
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  12. ericloca

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    Yeah , hun I found my inspiration . Pau , luvin , thanks for commenting on my poem .
     
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    I do like everyone else's poems too. All of you are so talented

    Good Job everyone :D
     
  14. Need4Speed

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    :lol: actually that's where my name came from...I kept thinking that to myself and i was all like hey that makes a pretty catchy name....so that's how i got it :D
     
  15. ericloca

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    I will consider this a Sandle poem . For me this is a very special poem ; actually a dedication for my aunt Sarah (a coincidence) who's fiance died four years ago and she married a man who's wife died .

    Learn to love again

    He was lost into the dark inside his heart
    He thought he could never start
    To love again . But then he bumped into
    A girl that he once knew
    A friend from college , the girl with blue
    Shinning eyes . Her name was Sue
    He invited her for a coffee and she happily said yes
    They went to a place and he saw she was wearing a red dress
    Like his wife used to wear . He let a tear fall down his cheek
    She smiled and looking at her he saw she looked sick
    But then she told him she was very sad and depressed
    Because her lover passed away and left her with a request
    To fall in love again . But it didn’t seem that she could
    Grant his wish ; her heart was broken in pieces and would
    Someone even like her again ; she cried and he let her rest on his shoulder .
    And it reminded him that his wife’s death made him look older
    Old memories came back : her smile , her laughter , her touch
    And memories of the youth he sometimes missed so much
    Could he really start his life once again ? Can she help him
    Forget the pain ? He should try it even if the chances were slim
    He took her phone number , and promised to call . He looked in
    A mirror and stared at his face , praying that he wasn’t making a sin
    By finding someone to replace Sara with . But then he understood
    That Sara wanted for him to be happy , and that was what he should
    Do . Listen to his mind that was telling him he must begin
    To love again ; to listen to his heart and to the voice within .
    He dressed in a black suit at every date and bought her a rose
    And when they danced they blushed because they were so close .
    She was so sweet , but the sadness in her heart couldn’t be hidden
    And nor his broken soul , but he saw he could be happy , even if he didn’t
    Understand in the beginning , but now someone else was in his mind
    And he had to forget the pain of the past , to go on and leave it all behind
    And she helped him as much as he helped her . They brought light
    In each other’s lives , and together they found out that a new life
    Wasn’t impossible . And so they decided to became husband and wife
    And realized that at one moment the sparks they thought that disappeared
    Forever grew in strong flames and so they saw love again appeared .
    After so many years , they are still together and staring at the rain
    They are glad they had the chance to learn to love again .
     
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