Eric's Misfortune

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adam'stoosexy26

Civilian
Chapter One


Eric had just finished his shift at the Miami Dade Crime Lab and had said goodbye to his friends and boss. He stepped out the cool air conditioned building into the hot and humid Miami air. He was ready to get home and rest as his day was no bowl of ice cream. The team solved 4 different crimes in one day and it seized to amaze him how wonderful the team was.

As Eric got in his blue SUV and drove out of his parking space, he realized he hadn't talked to his sister in awhile. He decided he would give her a call when he got home. The traffic was heavy as he drove because rush hour had just begun and he, although ready to get home, patiently drove through.

He turned on his CD player in the car and flipped through the CD that was in. He loved to listen to music as he drove home because it made him relax. Finding a song he liked, he tapped his fingers to the beat on side on the open window which wind blew his spiky black hair every which way.

He stopped at a red light and waited as it took it's precious time to change. He looked out his window at a silver Caldiac, driven by a slim woman with beautiful brown eyes and long dark brown hair. She smiled at him and he smiled back. The light changed and he continued to drive along, not aware that at his next stop he would not be so happy...

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Chapter Two


Eric turned on Westerlinns Avenue and went down the road only to be stopped by another red light. He tried to hold in the fact that he was frustrated but he really wanted to blow. Instead, he kept tapping his hands to the beat of the song and remained calm. He looked at the light and sighed,

" I really wish who ever invented these, never did!" he thought to himself as the light turned green. He went 3 blocks down the road then turned into Riversville Houses, a nice, quiet suburn where he lived. He went down the quiet road and stopped at his burguny two story house. He parked his SUV in his spacious garage and got out. He sighed with relief and went into his home.

Eric placed his car keys in his usually spot, on his kitchen counter and walked into his air conditioned living room. He then made his way to his bedroom and much like the rest of his house was a spacious room. It included a king size bed, a dresser, a huge door that lead to his private balcony and his own bathroom. He placed his gun and badge on his dresser and went back into his kitchen. He didn't realize someone had followed him inside his home.


Eric strolled into his spectacular kitchen and grabbed a bottle of water from his refridgerator. He then headed into his living room and sat down on his comfortable, tan couch. He flipped on the TV and tuned into the 5 o'clock news. He remembered that he wanted to call his sister, Marisol and picked up his cell. He dialed his sister's number and waited as the dial tone ranged two times before a female voice answer.

Marisol: Hello?

Eric: Hey Mari, just wanted to call to see how you were doing?

Marisol: Well! It has been awhile since I have seen or talk to you! What have you been up to?

Eric: Just tied up at the Crime Lab these days! We solved 3 cases today and I am really glad my shift is over! So what have you been up to? Have you talked to our parents in awhile?

Marisol: Well, I have been busy at work as well! My supervisor is promoting me to head excutive designer and I am so excited!

Eric: Really? That's great! What have you been designing lately?

Marisol: Well I have just finished designing a new dress and it was just sent to the head of the designing board to checked before they sent it to different companies! I can't wait until this hits all the fashion magizines!

Eric: *chuckling* Well i hope the best for you sis! This is great! Have you talked to mom or dad?

Marisol: I talked to them a day ago and they are doing fine but are extremelty worried about you! Why haven't you called?

Eric: I told you! Work, Horatio and the rest of the team has been booked with all kinds of cases! Blame it on the stupid criminals that think they ca..

The man grabs Eric from behind and chlorforms him, and dragged him out his front door and throw him in the back of a black van and the driver sped off.

Marisol: *hears the static and then nothing* Eric! Bro, are you there? Eric! Eric, are you there? Are you hurt?

The line goes dead and Marisol picks up the phone and calls the only one who could possible help her brother- Horatio Caine...


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Chapter Three

Eric woke up feeling extremely dissy and had an headache. He had no clue where he was and wondered what happened. He attempted to lift his head but it came crashing back on the hard floor he was lying on. He tried again and with much success, he was able to see where he was at. He was in a damp, dark room that had only two windows. Eric begun to panic as he remembered talking to his sister then something happened. Eric stood up and walked over to the door that lead out of the room. He turned the knob but it was locked.

Eric *says to himself* What am I doing here? Let me out!!!

Eric begun to yell and scream t see if anyone heard him but there was no answer. Eric begun to worry again, pacing the floor frantically. He hoped someone would answer his screams or find him soon because he got the feeling the place he was in wasn't safe...

Horatio was just about to open his front door when his cell rung. He unlocked the door and walked into his home, seeing Marisol, Eric's sister was calling.


Horatio: *over the phone* Hi Marisol! How have you been?

Marisol: Something has happened to Eric! I was talking to him over the phone when I heard footsteps and a loud crash! I think he might be in danger and I didn't know who to call!

Horatio: *worried* How long ago was this, Marisol? Was he at home!

Marisol: *frantically* Yeah! He was at home! He said he had been real busy with cases and decided to call! When I heard the phone go dead, I immediately called you and that was about 5 minutes ago! What should I do? I am scared for Eric!!

Horatio: Ok hold sweethart! I will go over to Eric's house and check and call my team to investigate! Eric will be ok we will find him! He's strong and will pull through!

Marisol: Ok Horatio! But what should I do? I am worried sick about him! Do I need to come down for questioning or something? Anything to help get my brother back!!

Horatio told Marisol to wait for his call and when he called her to go down to the Crime Lab where he would meet her. He assured her they would find him as soo as possible. Horatio locked his door and rushed down to his Hummer that was parked in his driveway. He pulled out and sped to Eric's house and all the way, he kept thinking if Eric was okay because he was also worried about his friend...






 
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