CSI:NY The family she never had...

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BonaseraFan

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The story is about the relationship between Don Flack and Stella Bonasera, which suddenly grew more serious as Stella unexpectedly grew pregnant with twins.
After the birth of the two girls, Stella feels that she had finally gotten the family she always wanted, and everything turns even better when the girls just automatically evolves a great relationship with the entire CSI-team. The two girls grow to be the most precious thing in her and Flack’s life. But one day this happiness disappears, as one of the girls are torn away from their family…


alright, i really didn't know what to call my story, and the beginning might seem pretty boring, its my first fanfic. But i will do my best to keep the story alive. Please post FB.



Chapter 1. A walk in the park.

“I had such a great time tonight..” Stella looked at the stars, she always loved walking through central park, “Well. It isn’t over yet, this is our 5th date you know.” He blinked, Stella laughed, “Don Flack, never gonna’ change, are we?” She kissed him, that kiss reminded her of their first date, about 3 weeks ago:

Flashback:
Where on earth is he? He were supposed to be here 10 minutes ago? The thoughts were flying around in her head, Maybe this was a mistake, she shouldn’t have asked him out in the first place! Just as she decided to give him 10 more minutes before she would leave, she received a text message: “Longing for me yet? I got caught in traffic, ill be right there. - Flack.” She smiled, he hadn’t forgotten about her. Just as she was about to answer his message he walked in the door, “You were actually longing for me weren’t you?” He laughed, kissed her cheek and sat down by the table.
A dinner later:​
“I’m so glad you came.” Stella smiled as they were walking around in central park, “Me too.” Flack looked at her, his eyes were filled with passion, she touched his cheek, waited for him to make the next move, he held her head, pulled her close and kissed her, the way their lips touched, the passion and heat that were hidden in this kiss made her feel like she could fly.
End of flashback

Flack lifted her and turned around, as he put her down they both fell. There they were, laying on a path, in central park, laughing. When she were spending time with Flack she felt like she changed completely, always having fun, thinking less about the more serious aspects of life.
Before she knew, they were on their way to his place.
They had barely entered the apartment before they started kissing intense, she couldn’t keep control of herself any longer…





I'll post more soon,
 
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Chapter 2. The beginning of a dream.

She felt flack stroke her hair.

“That was about time you woke up, but then again, I can see why you are exhausted, that was one hell of a night.” She laughed, he was right though, it was quite a night.

“Then why aren’t you in the kitchen making me breakfast?” she sent him a teasing look, he returned her look and said; “I did half the work you know?” She kissed him, “Then I’ll help you make breakfast.” She went out of bed to get dressed, “Hey” Don’t do that!” Flack looked at her, she were confused, “What?” He laughed, “Don’t get dressed,” She looked at him with a confused look on her face, as he continued: “What’s to say? I like the view!” She threw a pillow at him, picked up her pants and t-shirt and got dressed. “Get your ass in gear detective! I’m hungry”

3 weeks later.​
This couldn’t be true! She had taken the test 3 times yesterday just to be sure, positive, positive, positive, and her period was 2 weeks late, there could hardly be any doubt.
The thoughts kept spinning through her head as she waited for the doctor to tell her the results, she wasn’t exactly sure what she wanted the answer to be, she wasn’t ready for a baby now, but if she were pregnant she would keep the baby, things might not always go as planned, but then you will just have to change plans, plain and simple. “You are definitely pregnant…” As she heard the doctors word one by one she felt kinda happy, she were turning older, this might be her only chance to have a kid. “I’m having a baby?” She couldn’t believe what she heard the first time, “Well actually, it’s twins.” Twins?!? She repeated the word in her head several times. “I’m sorry, twins?” The doctor nodded, “Yes, congratulations.” She thanked the doctor, and after he had told her all she needed to know for now, she went home.
She were sitting in her favourite armchair, 3 hours until she had to go to work, she was working the late shift this week. No more late shifts in the future she couldn’t be working from 8:30Pm to 5 in the morning with twin babies.

The thoughts kept swirling in her head: Should she call Flack, ask him to get over here? No she need to get used to the thought herself first. What will he say? Does he even want to become a dad? The last three weeks had been wonderful, they had spend nearly every minute of their free time together, but would he leave her now? Or would he go through this with her? Maybe she would finally get a happy family? Would she be able to handle the pressure of her work and twins at the same time?
She would have to cut down on her hours, that’s for sure.
Just then her cell started ringing, “Hi Stella, it’s Flack, I was wondering if you would like to grab some Pizza before your shift? My place in 20 minutes? ” She were just about to thank no, when she realised that he deserved to know. “That would be great Don, not to spicy, and I kinda have something I need to tell you in person.” She said goodbye, hung up the phone and went to take a shower and change clothes.


More to come... ;)
And actually as i've written more and more i kinda start to grow with my story, im getting more confident that it will turn out to be great. (Confidence is guud :D)
 
Chapter 3. Moment of truth.

She was standing outside his door, should she tell him first, or eat first then tell him, oh god, she hoped he hadn’t opened a bottle of wine or something, she decided to tell him when the right moment came along. She knocked at the door, 2 seconds later Flack was standing in the door opening, “Hi Stel” He kissed her and made a gesture for her to go inside.
Luckily he had served pizza and diet Coca Cola.
They sat at the table, and ate the pizza in silence, she kept thinking that this might be the last time they would be together as a couple. She decided to get it over with, “Don… I have something I need to talk to you about.” He looked at her, he seemed pretty nervous as she continued, “I… well…it’s…” He looked at her, “Come on Stel’ spit it out, you can tell me, you know that.” She was hoping that he would support her through the pregnancy, and that they would be a happy family. “Okay, I’m pregnant!” She saw how the nervous look on his face turned in to a big smile, he seemed happy. “Wow, Stella, that’s wonderful.” He took her hand, as she continued, “Well, it’s not that simple, we… it’s… we are having twins.” He went to her side of the table, she stood up, and he kissed her.
“Stella, it’s fantastic, when did you find out,?” She was surprised by his happiness, but also relieved, maybe they were going to be a happy family! She smiled, “This afternoon, I had just been at the clinic when you called me.” He Started dancing around with her, she would never have thought that he would be this happy, she kissed him, he looked at her, smiled and said: “Stella, I love you so much, this is wonderful, I mean we get to be a family!” She shared his joy, she were getting a family, her own family, something she’d never known of before, well she saw the CSIs as her family but this was different. “I love you too Don!”
She pictured to toddlers playing around, calling her mommy, and Flack Daddy. She loved the idea of a perfect family, even though she had doubted it less than 15 minutes ago, she was sure that this was what she wanted.
“ Flack, I was thinking, maybe we could have some kind of get together for the team, I would like to tell them the news, before it turns obvious you know. I was thinking, in a couple of weeks, when we’ve had a chance to get used to the thought.” Flack smiled, “I think that would be a great idea, should we announce that we are together at the same occasion?” They laughed, “That would be hilarious, ‘Hi guys, we’ve invited you here, because we wanted you to know that I’m pregnant, we are having twins. Oh and by the way, Flack and I are a couple.’ Let’s do that, I can’t wait to see their faces” They kept laughing for a while, before she went home to get ready for work.



Beginning with happy starts, and stuff like that, but i should probably warn you as im about to write Chapter 12 in micorsoft word, ive needed a kleenex or 5. Here i am off again, crying like a baby.
 
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Thanks i'll do that.


Chapter 4. In the name of love.

Stella was rushing around the kitchen, making dinner for 8 people took some time, Flack was just out buying the last few things they needed, wine, beer and diet coke for Stella.

The team would be here in half an hour, she just needed to finish up her cooking before setting the table, she turned of the oven and closed the fridge, all right, dinner’s ready, it had to be perfect, it was very rare that the entire team would be together of duty, since someone had to mind the lab, but tonight, everything was taken care of.

She lit the candles on the table, she straightened the tablecloth, closed the door to her bedroom, now all she had to do was to wait for Flack to return with the wine.

She felt her heart beat faster, she were pretty nervous about what the team might say, but Flack was there all the way, she knew that. Speaking of which, he just entered the apartment, “Here you go, I have red wine, white wine, beer, and diet coke for you luv!” They laughed, the last couple of weeks had been fantastic, Flack had been running around, caring for her every time he had the chance, he was going to make a great dad. She opened the wine, put it on the table, made sure that everything was perfect, from the plates to the food.

Then the doorbell rang, she went to open the door, Sid and Hawkes came in, “Hey guys” She hugged them one by one, and showed them in to the living room. She had barely told them to take a seat before the doorbell rang again, “I’ll take that, Sit down!” Flack sent her a look saying ‘I’m serious!’ So she did, she heard him greet Adam, Mac Danny and Lindsay, he told them to come inside, and find a seat.

They were all sitting in her living room, she looked at Flack he nodded, they stood up, he placed his hand around her waist. Stella caught everyone’s attention and started: “Alright then, we’ve invited you here because we have a special announcement to make…” She took a deep breath but Danny interrupted before she could say more, “Ooh, that sound’s serious” Flack sent him an angry look, “Shut it D!” Stella continued: “Well, basically… Flack and I have been together for about 2 months…” apparently Danny felt that he had to comment it: “Come on Stel you can do better than him?” She looked at him, ”Danny, Quiet, there’s more…“ Everybody stared at her, the curiosity was obvious. “…And I’m pregnant, with twins, I wanted you to know before it turned obvious.”

Flack kissed her cheek, and smiled, it seemed that everyone was stunned, then Sid got up from his seat, hugged Stella, and shook hands with Flack. “That is absolutely wonderful, how far along are you?” Stella smiled, “about 5 weeks.”

Then the others returned to reality, Mac was the next to hug her, she kissed his cheek, “Mac you’re crying!” She wiped a tear of his cheek, as he said: “I’m just so happy for you, you finally get the family you’ve always talked about. He padded Flack on his shoulder, “Congratulations.!”

Hawkes and Adam looked at each other, as Danny said; ”Wow, Mummy and Daddy.” He laughed. Hawkes and Adam congratulated them too, before they all went to the table to eat the food Stella had spend hours preparing.
 
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Chapter 5. Paperwork!

“Stella, Stella! Get back to your desk, there’s no way I’m gonna let you go in to that lab!” Mac was running own the hallway to catch her. “Mac, seriously, I cant just sit there and go through reports on old cases!” She hated paperwork, Mac knew that.

“Stella hang in there, it’s your last day at work right? Not much more paperwork to do. Flack is going to pick you up anytime now, you need to be home, relax, take care of you self, you’re more than 7 months pregnant!” He was right, she hated it when he was right.

“Stella! Time to go home right?” Flack came walking down the hallway, he had moved in with her 5 months ago, they were living in her apartment, it was the biggest of them, but they were looking for something bigger, there wasn’t room for her, Flack, and two babies in her apartment.
They were actually going to look at a place this afternoon. “Stella, listen to Don, go home.” Mac looked at her, she hugged him quick, packed up her stuff and went with Flack home.


The real-estate agent was waiting for them outside an apartment, “This apartment is ideal for an upcoming family, there is a bedroom, two rooms, living room, kitchen and bathroom, If we start here…” They went in to the kitchen, it was white the table were oak, she loved it, the living room was big and light, the 2 rooms were alike, square, but fairly big, and also light, the bedroom was just stunning, it was white too, with golden panels on the wall, wooden floor, she loved this place, and so did Flack, she could see it in his eyes. They didn’t need to think much about it, it wasn’t luxury, but they could afford it and they loved it, they were sure, that is were they were going to live and be a happy family. They could move in anytime they wanted to.
 
Chapter 6. Welcome to the world.

She heard Flack in the hallway, “What? You can’t be serious? Did I miss it?”, she smiled to her self, as he came in to the room, “I’m so sorry Stel’ I really am! We had a lead on were to find that guy who killed the three high school girls a week ago, everything happened so fast. I’m so sorry!”

Stella stroked his cheek, “Calm down Flack, aren’t they just perfect, It’s two girls” she looked at the baby in her arms, and the baby the nurse was holding.

They had already decided what they would call them, if it had been boys it would be Nicholas and Sebastian, but now that it were two prefect girls they called them Rebecca and Penelope.

The nurse handed Flack the little angel, Flack was crying, “Hi luv,” the little girl held tight onto his finger as she slowly fell asleep, that were Penelope.
The two girls were nearly identical, except that Rebecca had a cute beauty mark under her left eye.

Stella was rocking the little girl slowly in her arms, she were already asleep. She looked at Flack, “Well aren’t you a gentleman, do you even know what I just went through, and I don’t even get a kiss?” He looked at her and kissed her, she smiled “Mmh, much better.” He laughed, Stella looked at the little girl in her arms, she were so beautiful.

“You can take your lovely girls home tomorrow, we would like you to stay overnight.” The nurse smiled as she left the room. Stella and Flack just sat there, with their gorgeous little angels for about 20 minutes, not much talking needed.

Then they returned to an often discussed subject, their surname, was it going to be Rebecca and Penelope Bonasera Flack, or Rebecca and Penelope Flack Bonasera, after long time of discussion, they agreed that it would be best to call them Bonasera Flack.

Just then Danny knocked at the door and entered the room quietly, “They are adorable.” He stroked Penelope’s cheek, “I heard you missed it Flack?” Flack blushed, “Yea you heard right, Stella pulled through it without me.” Danny laughed quietly; “I’ve said it before, and now I’m gonna say it again: Stella’s the only real man in this relationship.” She smiled, “Do you want to hold her?”

Danny seemed a little nervous at first, but as Stella handed him Rebecca, he grew more confident, Rebecca opened her eyes, she made a sound that sounded a lot like a laugh, she grabbed Danny’s finger and held on tight. He smiled, “I think she likes me. Uncle Danny, doesn’t that just sound great?” “It sounds perfect.” Stella smiled as Danny handed Rebecca back to her.






I know theese chapters seem quite ordinary, but just wait, they get better and better, in my opinion, but sadder and sadder
 
Chapter 7. Meet and greet.

The happy couple walked down the hallway towards Mac’s office, he was currently discussing something with Sid and Hawkes, Stella knocked at the door, Both Mac, Sid and Hawkes melted as they saw the two girls.

Mac walked cautiously towards Stella, stroked Rebecca on the head, “They’re adorable” Rebecca grabbed Mac’s tie with both her tiny hands, and started biting in it.

Meanwhile, Sid and Hawkes were very busy, complimenting Penelope. Stella sat down at the couch when Rebecca had finally decided to let go of Mac’s tie. Mac sat down next to her, “And how is the new mom?” He smiled, as she said: “Exhausted, when Penelope is a sleep Rebecca is awake, when Rebecca is a sleep, Penelope will wake her up and then go to sleep.”

Mac placed his hand around her shoulders, “They seem like angels right now.” She laughed, “They are, this past week has been fantastic, I’ve never before been as happy as I’ve been since I had those two wonders.”

Flack sat down on the other side of her, “They are absolutely perfect, they look a lot like their mother, but they have my eyes.” She kissed him, “Mac, is Lindsay in the lab right now?” She knew as a fact that Lindsay would be very unhappy if she didn’t get to see the girls. “Yes, I think she’s in the lunch room.” He smiled, as Stella and Flack walked towards the lunch room.

“Aww! They are gorgeous!” Lindsay came walking towards them, she stroked Rebecca on the head, and stroked Penelope on the cheek. “I hate to ask this but…” She started but Stella cut her of, “This is Rebecca, and Flack is holding Penelope.” Lindsay looked relieved, “Thanks, I wouldn’t be able to tell the difference.”

She looked at Penelope, Flack handed her to her, Lindsay held the baby close to her body, she was rocking her slowly back and forth.

“Hi Penelope, I’m Lindsay.” Penelope grabbed her finger and closed her eyes. Lindsay handed the baby back to Flack.

As Stella and Flack went to look for Danny and Adam, they came walking right towards them. Adam looked at them, “Wow, they.. so… They are beautiful.” Danny looked at them and said: “Hello again buddies.”

Penelope yawned so they decided to go home…


Chapter 8. Two years of happiness.

“Mooooommyyy!” Stella turned around, “I’ll be right there Penny!” She looked at Rebecca, “Can you be a good girl, and stay right there until daddy returns?” She nodded and Stella went To Penelope’s room, even though she knew that she couldn’t exactly trust Rebecca’s word, she was always the centre of attention, Penelope had always been more shy.

“What is it Baby?” Penelope looked at her, “grampa come soon?” Stella smiled, “Yes baby, grandpa will be here soon” It was actually kinda cute, Penny and Becca had called Sid grandpa since they started Speaking. Sid loved it, he visited often, the girls adored him.

But today was different, the twins were turning 2 years. Flack was picking up their gift’s they had ordered it weeks ago, but it wasn’t delivered to the store until today.

She went back to the living room were Rebecca was busy dancing around the table, they were just gorgeous, both of them, they were completely identical, except from Rebecca’s beauty mark.

People always said that they looked just like their mother, and they did, except from their wonderful blue eyes, they had Flack’s eyes, and they already had her brown curly hair.

“Mommy?” Rebecca looked at her, “Yes honey?” Rebecca smiled, “I want cake naw?” Stella laughed, “Becca, You will have to wait for the quests to arrive, okay?” Rebecca agreed with a grunt, she were just like here mom, if she didn’t get what she wanted she’d go angry, and don’t give up.

Rebecca continued her chatting: “Boss and grampa coming?” Stella stroked her daughters hair, “Yes they will be here soon.” At first Mac was a little offended to be Boss, when Danny, Adam and Hawkes were uncle, and Lindsay were Auntie. But he grew with it.

“Anyone want presents.” Flack slammed the door behind him, his face was completely hidden behind the gifts. “Daddy!” The twins ran towards him and hugged him, or his legs actually.

Then they looked at him, “Presn!” Stella laughed, her girls were already great at speaking, but it could have some pretty fun results. “What do you say?” They looked at her, “Presn Pleas!”

Flack placed the presents on the floor, “This one is for you Becca, and this one is for Penny.” They ripped the wrapping of the boxes, Flack and Stella helped them open the boxes, Penny was thrilled by the object inside the box, “oooorw! Bike!” They had bought the cutest pink tricycles for them, on the side was a sticker saying Penny, and Becca.

It didn’t take long for the girls to learn how to drive around in the living room, They hit Stella’s legs several times while she was setting the table for the perfect birthday party.

The doorbell rang, and the twins raced to the door, they weren’t tall enough to reach the handle so they waited for Flack to open it.
“Grampa!” They hugged Sid, he always laughed when they called him grandpa. “Hi girls, see what I brought for you?” he handed them each a present, they ripped the wrapping of again, it was the sweetest teddy-horses, a pink one for Rebecca and a Purple one for Penelope. They hugged him again, “Dank you!” They each took a hand and dragged him inside. Sid was really great with kids, he really enjoyed his role as Grandpa to the twins.

Just then Danny and Lindsay arrived, “uncle Danny, Aunt Say!” They had trouble pronouncing her name. Mac, Hawkes and Adam had also arrived, and they sat by the table getting ready to celebrate the twins 2nd birthday.




I posted 2 chapters in 1, i douldn't wait posting chapter 8, i love the Sid-interaction in this chapter. :D
 
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Chapter 9. A romantic evening.

Flack had taken Stella with him to a fancy hotel, Mac was looking after the twins they had turned 5 years now their first day of school was on Monday.

Flack held his hand in front of her eyes as he led her in to a room, “You can look now.” He removed his hands and she opened her eyes, “wow.” It was beautiful, there were rose pedals on the floor, candles everywhere, and a perfect view over Manhattan, the room was also decorated with white and red roses, there were rose pedals in the bed, and at the bed table, champagne.

He had something in mind, He took her hand and kneeled in front of her; “Stella Bonasera…” He took a box out of his pocket opened it to show her to most wonderful ring, “…Will you marry me?”

She felt the happiness fill her body, “Yes, Yes I will marry you Flack.” He placed the ring on her finger and kissed her hand, he opened the champagne, time to celebrate…’



I must be very bad at writing, since your the only one following my story NattyBatty :D
 
good, i was starting to doubt my ability to write.. :D

here comes the next chapter.

Chapter 10. I want my angel back!

“Have a great first day at school, daddy and I will be waiting for you at the end of the day, have fun, I have to go catch some bad guys now.” She kissed her girls cheeks, “Take good care okay?” The girls looked at her and Rebecca said: “Mommy, don’t worry that much!” Stella smiled, “I love you two girls.” They laughed. “Bye Mommy.” They ran towards the school.

It seemed like yesterday she had been celebrating their 2nd birthday, now they were already going to school, they grew up so fast. But the last 5 years had been the best years of her life, those girls and Flack completed her, she looked at her ring, she really loved him. And the girls, she would do anything to make sure that her girls were safe.

Suddenly she heard Penny cry for her mommy, she turned around just in time to see a car rush away from the schoolyard and Rebecca come running towards her: “Mommy! mommy! He stole Penny!”

She took her dear Becca in her arms, “He stole Penny?” she repeated the words in her head, as she hugged Rebecca. She felt the tears stream down her cheeks as she repeated the same words again and again: “My baby girl!”

She called Flack, “Don, Don listen to me, someone took Penny!” He sounded like he was loosing it as he said: “Took Penny? Our Penny?” Stella confirmed his fears and he continued. “I’ll be right there, and ill call Mac and the rest of the team, I’m sure they will find something that leads us to her." Just before they hung up she heard Flack burst into tears.

They were there within minutes, Flack ran towards her and Rebecca, He hugged them both, then he looked at Rebecca “Are you all right Sweetie?” She nodded “I want Penny!” Flack and Stella looked at each other “So do we baby, so do we.”

Stella carried Becca, to see if Mac and the team had found anything, Mac looked at Rebecca, “Hey Angel. Are you okay?” She nodded eagerly “Boss? Can you get Penny back to me? Mommy says you’re the best!” Mac smiled, “I will do my best.” He hugged both Stella and Rebecca, placed his arm around Flacks shoulder. “We will do our best, you know that.”

Macs eyes were filled with tears too, just like any other member of the team, Lindsay tried to hide her tears behind the camera, Danny was collecting evidence, but he wasn’t afraid of showing anyone that he cared. And Hawkes came walking towards them, just before he stopped he wiped his eyes. “Uncle Hawk!” Rebecca jumped out of her mothers arms and jumped into Hawkes’s.

“Hi there Kid.” Hawkes said. Trying to hide his tears from the young girl, but smart and observant as she were she said: “You can cry uncle Hawk. Mommy and Daddy cries, Boss cries, uncle Danny cries, it’s okay to cry if you’re sad, Mommy said that.” Stella smiled at the thought of her clever daughter, but the minute she looked at her she thought of Penelope.

She looked away, and noticed Sid rushing towards them, as Rebecca saw him she started to cry, she jumped away from Hawkes and ran to Sid, “Grandpa, they took penny!” She cried, she buried her face in his shoulder, he stroked her hair, “I know sweetheart, but we will find her, don’t you think?” Rebecca looked at him, nodded before she once again started to cry.

Even though Stella was extremely worried, anxious for what might happen to her daughter, she felt sorry for Sid, he was practically their Granddad, and he loved them so much. Hawkes had taught Penelope to tell Sid when he was going to what Hawkes usually defined as “That creepy place”. And she actually quite often told him that he were going to that creepy place
 
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