CSI:NY....."The evil that lives within"
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MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
And another one bites the dust. :devil:
I just love this bantering between Don and Dan. Poor guys, won't know what's gonna hit them! :lol:
I just love this bantering between Don and Dan. Poor guys, won't know what's gonna hit them! :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Chapter 36
When Danny pulled up to Camilla's flat, he got out, opened her door, and walked her up. "Thanks Danny, I'll see you in the morning"? "Sure....hey Camilla, how would you.....". Hearing the door open, Danny seen the man step out. "Oh hello sweetie, you're home late". "I know, sorry, this is detective Danny Messer". Shaking his hand, Danny knew his chances were shot.
"Oh Danny, you were saying"? "Yeah...maybe some night, we could all get together for drinks, night Camilla". Smiling, she felt bad for Danny, for she seen the look on his face, it was one of disappointment, closing the door, Danny thought to himself...."huh...I can have some fun here".
Heading back to the station, Danny seen Mac as he was leaving. "Did we get him Mac"? "We did Danny, he's gone for good, it's over". "Thank God, okay Mac, see you tomorrow". Walking into the station, he seen Don closing the file on his desk.
"Hey....drink man, my treat". Don wondered what Danny was up too. "What's up Danno, you have that look". "Nothing man, do you want to go for a drink or not"? "Sure...let me grab my jacket". "Hey Don...you like Camilla"? "Yeah, she's okay, very beautiful, that's for sure".
"You know what Don, I'm going move out of the way, you can have her, I'm not ready for another relationship yet, so you go ahead". "You sure Danny, honest"? "Yeah man, you go ahead, you have my blessing". "Is this some kind of trick Danno, this seems way to easy". "Nah man, go for it".
When Mac got home, he found Stella had the table all ready with dinner. "Mmmm...smells wonderful sweetheart", as he wrapped his arms around her, kissing her neck. "So I hear you caught the animal". "We did Stel, at least the children and parents can breathe easy tonight".
Over at the bar, Don was still trying to figure out, why Danny had given up so easy. "What's the matter Don, you look confused". "Hmmm...no, just trying to figure something out". "Come on man, you still don't think I'm pulling your leg, do you"? "I don't know...it all seems to easy".
Laughing...."trust me Don, she's all yours".
End Chapter.
When Danny pulled up to Camilla's flat, he got out, opened her door, and walked her up. "Thanks Danny, I'll see you in the morning"? "Sure....hey Camilla, how would you.....". Hearing the door open, Danny seen the man step out. "Oh hello sweetie, you're home late". "I know, sorry, this is detective Danny Messer". Shaking his hand, Danny knew his chances were shot.
"Oh Danny, you were saying"? "Yeah...maybe some night, we could all get together for drinks, night Camilla". Smiling, she felt bad for Danny, for she seen the look on his face, it was one of disappointment, closing the door, Danny thought to himself...."huh...I can have some fun here".
Heading back to the station, Danny seen Mac as he was leaving. "Did we get him Mac"? "We did Danny, he's gone for good, it's over". "Thank God, okay Mac, see you tomorrow". Walking into the station, he seen Don closing the file on his desk.
"Hey....drink man, my treat". Don wondered what Danny was up too. "What's up Danno, you have that look". "Nothing man, do you want to go for a drink or not"? "Sure...let me grab my jacket". "Hey Don...you like Camilla"? "Yeah, she's okay, very beautiful, that's for sure".
"You know what Don, I'm going move out of the way, you can have her, I'm not ready for another relationship yet, so you go ahead". "You sure Danny, honest"? "Yeah man, you go ahead, you have my blessing". "Is this some kind of trick Danno, this seems way to easy". "Nah man, go for it".
When Mac got home, he found Stella had the table all ready with dinner. "Mmmm...smells wonderful sweetheart", as he wrapped his arms around her, kissing her neck. "So I hear you caught the animal". "We did Stel, at least the children and parents can breathe easy tonight".
Over at the bar, Don was still trying to figure out, why Danny had given up so easy. "What's the matter Don, you look confused". "Hmmm...no, just trying to figure something out". "Come on man, you still don't think I'm pulling your leg, do you"? "I don't know...it all seems to easy".
Laughing...."trust me Don, she's all yours".
End Chapter.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Crafty Danny! Flack will get you back im sure :lol:
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
Trap set, mission acomplished. :devil: But will he take the bait? :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Chapter 37
The following morning, Danny and Don showed up the same time, as Camilla. "Morning guy's, how was your night"? "It was great, I'll see you later Don". Smiling wickedly, he headed inside. "What's wrong with him"? "Hmm, I don't know, Danny's funny like that, listen Camilla, can I ask you something"?
"Sure...but before you do, I think I know what may be bothering Danny". "You do..what"? "Last night, when he took me home, he kind of met my fiance, I think it shocked him". "Fiance"? "Yeah...he moved to NY with me, so we wouldn't have to bother with those long distance relationships".
Don howled....."Christ...leave it to Danny, damn I'll kill him". "Hmm...what's so funny Don"? "It's true...we both had thoughts of you, but last night, Danny told me I could have you, now I know why, he was hoping I'd make a fool of myself, with you".
"Are you serious, do you to always play these games"? "Most times, yeah.....listen, how would you like to help me with a payback". "Hmmm....could be fun, what do I have to do"? "Just pretend you like me, you know, like we have something going on, and tell Danny, that was your brother last night".
*Laughing*...."Don, you are wickedly evil". "I know, but paybacks a bitch".
Before Mac left for work, he and Stella discussed their wedding plans. "Mac....what do you think, spring wedding, or summer wedding"? "Whatever you want love, it doesn't matter, you decide, this is your day". "So you are telling me, I can make the date"? "Yes stella, you can", as he kissed her.
"Then I pick today". "Today...are you kidding, we can't set it up today Stel". "Sure we can Mac, I don't want a large wedding, just you, the team, and I, at City Hall". "Are you sure Stel....there's no hurry you know". "I know Mac, but this is what I want, and you said it was my choice".
Smiling...."okay love, let's go get the license".
End Chapter.
The following morning, Danny and Don showed up the same time, as Camilla. "Morning guy's, how was your night"? "It was great, I'll see you later Don". Smiling wickedly, he headed inside. "What's wrong with him"? "Hmm, I don't know, Danny's funny like that, listen Camilla, can I ask you something"?
"Sure...but before you do, I think I know what may be bothering Danny". "You do..what"? "Last night, when he took me home, he kind of met my fiance, I think it shocked him". "Fiance"? "Yeah...he moved to NY with me, so we wouldn't have to bother with those long distance relationships".
Don howled....."Christ...leave it to Danny, damn I'll kill him". "Hmm...what's so funny Don"? "It's true...we both had thoughts of you, but last night, Danny told me I could have you, now I know why, he was hoping I'd make a fool of myself, with you".
"Are you serious, do you to always play these games"? "Most times, yeah.....listen, how would you like to help me with a payback". "Hmmm....could be fun, what do I have to do"? "Just pretend you like me, you know, like we have something going on, and tell Danny, that was your brother last night".
*Laughing*...."Don, you are wickedly evil". "I know, but paybacks a bitch".
Before Mac left for work, he and Stella discussed their wedding plans. "Mac....what do you think, spring wedding, or summer wedding"? "Whatever you want love, it doesn't matter, you decide, this is your day". "So you are telling me, I can make the date"? "Yes stella, you can", as he kissed her.
"Then I pick today". "Today...are you kidding, we can't set it up today Stel". "Sure we can Mac, I don't want a large wedding, just you, the team, and I, at City Hall". "Are you sure Stel....there's no hurry you know". "I know Mac, but this is what I want, and you said it was my choice".
Smiling...."okay love, let's go get the license".
End Chapter.
MarineGirl#1
CSI Level Three
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
yeah yeah I'm with Senna.!
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
:lol: Jools your right, pay back is gonna be good 
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Chapter 38
As Mac and Stella headed out, they got the call. "Mac...it's Danny, we have a DB over at the "Gerald Schoenfeld Theater". "Okay Danny, we'll be right there". "Listen Stel, you are going to have too come with me, but you are to stay in the car, understood". "Come on Mac, I'm fine now, the infection is gone".
"Stella...you still have stitches, until they are removed, you will stay in the car". "Fine...I said okay". Looking over at her, Mac had a feeling, she wasn't about to stay anywhere. Parking the car, Mac got out, and headed over to where, Danny was waiting with Camilla.
"Hey Mac...female victim, her friend found her in the booth there". "Hello...I'm Det.Mac Taylor, can you tell me what happened here"? "Ummm..yeah, I was inside, with my brother, and his friend, and ummm...when we came out, we like found her laying here".
"We....but I thought it was just you"? "Oh...ummm... yeah, it was, just me, yeah". As the hauler's lifted the body, Mac noticed the puncture wound in her back. "Hold up, turn her over". Turning her over, Mac removed the bottom part of her shirt, and seen the large hole.
"What does that look like to you Danny"? "Hmmm....looks like it was done with something sharp. "Okay, take her, you young lady, are coming with me to the station". "What, why, I didn't do nothing". "Let's go, into the car". "Okay.. it wasn't me, my brother's friend said if I told, he would kill me".
"If you told what"? "It was an accident, Peter was just trying to ask her out, but she got angry, really angry, cause she didn't like him, so he opened the back of the booth, and she fell back on the counter, if you look inside, you'll see the blood, and some skin, when she backed into it".
"Danny...put her in the squad car", said Flack. "But I told you what happened, hey...come on". Shutting the door, Danny said...."we just need to ask you a few more questions, and to call your mom". "What do you think Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, it's clear something happened here, what..I don't know yet, but I'll figure it out, and make sure you get our witness a child advicate". Nodding his head in agreement, Danny drove the young girl downtown with Don.
When they got back to the station, Danny headed downstairs to change. "Mmmmm....Don...yeah....that's it, touch me there, auuuugh....deeper". Walking in, Danny seen her wrapped in Don's arms. "Hey...wait a minute, I thought, you, last night....".
"Oh....you mean my brother Gord, yeah, he's very protective". "Your brother, but I thought he was your fiance". "Looks like you thought wrong Dannny, but thanks for stepping out of the way". "Damn Don...I gave her to you, I change my mind, give her back".
Laughing, Danny realized he was being had. "Oh...very funny guy's, real funny". Walking over, Don took Danny by the neck, and said....."watch your back Danno, paybacks are a....". "Yeah I know....Christ man, I know".
As Mac and Stella headed out, they got the call. "Mac...it's Danny, we have a DB over at the "Gerald Schoenfeld Theater". "Okay Danny, we'll be right there". "Listen Stel, you are going to have too come with me, but you are to stay in the car, understood". "Come on Mac, I'm fine now, the infection is gone".
"Stella...you still have stitches, until they are removed, you will stay in the car". "Fine...I said okay". Looking over at her, Mac had a feeling, she wasn't about to stay anywhere. Parking the car, Mac got out, and headed over to where, Danny was waiting with Camilla.
"Hey Mac...female victim, her friend found her in the booth there". "Hello...I'm Det.Mac Taylor, can you tell me what happened here"? "Ummm..yeah, I was inside, with my brother, and his friend, and ummm...when we came out, we like found her laying here".
"We....but I thought it was just you"? "Oh...ummm... yeah, it was, just me, yeah". As the hauler's lifted the body, Mac noticed the puncture wound in her back. "Hold up, turn her over". Turning her over, Mac removed the bottom part of her shirt, and seen the large hole.
"What does that look like to you Danny"? "Hmmm....looks like it was done with something sharp. "Okay, take her, you young lady, are coming with me to the station". "What, why, I didn't do nothing". "Let's go, into the car". "Okay.. it wasn't me, my brother's friend said if I told, he would kill me".
"If you told what"? "It was an accident, Peter was just trying to ask her out, but she got angry, really angry, cause she didn't like him, so he opened the back of the booth, and she fell back on the counter, if you look inside, you'll see the blood, and some skin, when she backed into it".
"Danny...put her in the squad car", said Flack. "But I told you what happened, hey...come on". Shutting the door, Danny said...."we just need to ask you a few more questions, and to call your mom". "What do you think Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, it's clear something happened here, what..I don't know yet, but I'll figure it out, and make sure you get our witness a child advicate". Nodding his head in agreement, Danny drove the young girl downtown with Don.
When they got back to the station, Danny headed downstairs to change. "Mmmmm....Don...yeah....that's it, touch me there, auuuugh....deeper". Walking in, Danny seen her wrapped in Don's arms. "Hey...wait a minute, I thought, you, last night....".
"Oh....you mean my brother Gord, yeah, he's very protective". "Your brother, but I thought he was your fiance". "Looks like you thought wrong Dannny, but thanks for stepping out of the way". "Damn Don...I gave her to you, I change my mind, give her back".
Laughing, Danny realized he was being had. "Oh...very funny guy's, real funny". Walking over, Don took Danny by the neck, and said....."watch your back Danno, paybacks are a....". "Yeah I know....Christ man, I know".
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
lol poor Danny
So what happened with Stella? You didn't say if she stayed or not.
And, can they take the vic's friend back to the station if they aren't sure what happened yet? I thought they needed solid evidence first. *is confused*
So what happened with Stella? You didn't say if she stayed or not.
And, can they take the vic's friend back to the station if they aren't sure what happened yet? I thought they needed solid evidence first. *is confused*
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
lol at Danno
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
1. Stella obviously listened :lol:
2. She's a witness, so I fixed it a little, had Danny explain it to her, and had Mac remind them to get a child advicate.
Okay, all fixed.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
ok thanks Now let's get to the babies lolol
Now let's get to the babies lolol
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Chapter 39
When Mac got back to the car, Stella was still there, with a huge grin on her face. "What's that smile about love"? "I listened". Kissing her smartly on the mouth, they headed to the station.
"Mac...", yelled Danny from the hall, we can't couldn't get a child advocate till morning, so the parents demanded we release their daughter". "Where are they"? "Waiting in interrogation".
Opening the door, Mac seen the young girl smirking through her mother's arms. "Hello...I'm Det.Taylor, I understand you'd like your daughter released immediatly"? "That's right, you have no evidence, or right to hold her, we are taking her with us".
Mac was pissed, he knew that young girl, knew more than what she was letting on, he could tell by her smirk. "That's fine, you can take her, but she's to be back here at 8am, at that time, she will be questioned with the child advocate".
Leaving the room, the parents took their daughter home. "What now Mac"? "We go back to the crime scene, take Camilla, oh and Danny, grab the survelance tapes". "You got it Mac". Heading back to his office, he couldn't find Stella.
"Don...you see Stella"? "Yeah...she headed down to see Sid". "Damn her", he muttered, as he headed down the stairs. "Stella...what are you up too"? "Huh...nothing, I was just catching up with Sid". Mac knew she was trying to get information.
"What have you found Sid"? "Well...she was shoved into the corner of the counter, you can see by the rugged area of the skin, but I also found bruising on her chest, it looks like a direct punch, but it seems to tiny, I've taken pictures, you can see the fist, whoever did this, has knowledge of Martial Arts".
"Thanks Sid, and make a copy of those pictures please, before morning". "Sure Mac, see you later". "Mac...we've picked up Peter Gerald, he's waiting in interrogation". "Thanks Don, has he requested a lawyer"? "No...he's says he knows what happened, and he's willing to tell us everything".
"Stella, why don't you head home love, get some rest". "Im fine Mac, why don't I just wait for you in your office". Giving her that look that said behave, Mac headed to see Peter.
"Hi...my name is Det.Taylor, I understand you've refused to have council present". "That's right, listen, I didn't kill that young girl, I swear, it was Rachel, she was pissed that Shelly had broken up with her brother, and she started yelling about her brother's ring, and wanting it back".
"Go on". "I've never seen anything like it, man it was aweful, you could see her expression, the pain, before she died, she just punched her, directly in her chest, and backwards she went, right into the corner counter, I remember, there was this piece of metal sticking out, I ain't never seen anyone die, it was horrible".
"Okay...calm down Peter, where is the ring now"? "I don't know, she yanked it off her finger, than called the police". "Why did you run"? "I have a record man, plus I'm not supposed to be out pass curfew". "Don...check with Sid, see if those pictures are ready". "Sure Mac".
"So can I go"? "As soon as we clear you". "Here Mac". "Okay Peter, make a fist please". Making a fist Mac had him place it on the picture, as he looked her could see his fist was to large. "You can go Peter, as soon as we have you sign your statement". "Ummm..are you going to tell my parole officer"?
"I'm afraid so, but we will let him know you co-operated in our investigation, that should help". "Thanks man, much appriciated". Leaving the room, Mac whispered to Flack...."go pick up Rachel, we have enough to hold her now". "You got it Mac".
End Chapter.
When Mac got back to the car, Stella was still there, with a huge grin on her face. "What's that smile about love"? "I listened". Kissing her smartly on the mouth, they headed to the station.
"Mac...", yelled Danny from the hall, we can't couldn't get a child advocate till morning, so the parents demanded we release their daughter". "Where are they"? "Waiting in interrogation".
Opening the door, Mac seen the young girl smirking through her mother's arms. "Hello...I'm Det.Taylor, I understand you'd like your daughter released immediatly"? "That's right, you have no evidence, or right to hold her, we are taking her with us".
Mac was pissed, he knew that young girl, knew more than what she was letting on, he could tell by her smirk. "That's fine, you can take her, but she's to be back here at 8am, at that time, she will be questioned with the child advocate".
Leaving the room, the parents took their daughter home. "What now Mac"? "We go back to the crime scene, take Camilla, oh and Danny, grab the survelance tapes". "You got it Mac". Heading back to his office, he couldn't find Stella.
"Don...you see Stella"? "Yeah...she headed down to see Sid". "Damn her", he muttered, as he headed down the stairs. "Stella...what are you up too"? "Huh...nothing, I was just catching up with Sid". Mac knew she was trying to get information.
"What have you found Sid"? "Well...she was shoved into the corner of the counter, you can see by the rugged area of the skin, but I also found bruising on her chest, it looks like a direct punch, but it seems to tiny, I've taken pictures, you can see the fist, whoever did this, has knowledge of Martial Arts".
"Thanks Sid, and make a copy of those pictures please, before morning". "Sure Mac, see you later". "Mac...we've picked up Peter Gerald, he's waiting in interrogation". "Thanks Don, has he requested a lawyer"? "No...he's says he knows what happened, and he's willing to tell us everything".
"Stella, why don't you head home love, get some rest". "Im fine Mac, why don't I just wait for you in your office". Giving her that look that said behave, Mac headed to see Peter.
"Hi...my name is Det.Taylor, I understand you've refused to have council present". "That's right, listen, I didn't kill that young girl, I swear, it was Rachel, she was pissed that Shelly had broken up with her brother, and she started yelling about her brother's ring, and wanting it back".
"Go on". "I've never seen anything like it, man it was aweful, you could see her expression, the pain, before she died, she just punched her, directly in her chest, and backwards she went, right into the corner counter, I remember, there was this piece of metal sticking out, I ain't never seen anyone die, it was horrible".
"Okay...calm down Peter, where is the ring now"? "I don't know, she yanked it off her finger, than called the police". "Why did you run"? "I have a record man, plus I'm not supposed to be out pass curfew". "Don...check with Sid, see if those pictures are ready". "Sure Mac".
"So can I go"? "As soon as we clear you". "Here Mac". "Okay Peter, make a fist please". Making a fist Mac had him place it on the picture, as he looked her could see his fist was to large. "You can go Peter, as soon as we have you sign your statement". "Ummm..are you going to tell my parole officer"?
"I'm afraid so, but we will let him know you co-operated in our investigation, that should help". "Thanks man, much appriciated". Leaving the room, Mac whispered to Flack...."go pick up Rachel, we have enough to hold her now". "You got it Mac".
End Chapter.