CSI:NY....."The evil that lives within"

Whoa, I can't believe I almost missed this story. And you really killed off Lindsay? Girl, you're evil, but then again a good writer too! :lol:
 
Chapter 16


As Mac and Don waited, Danny finally awoke. "Mmmm....Linsay", he called out. "Danny...Danny, it's Mac, how are you feeling"? "I hurt, so much pain in my back". Pushing the call button for the nurse, she walked in. "Can I help you with something"? "Yes, Danny is in alot of pain, can you give him something"? "Actually, he can medicate himself, Mr.Messer, just push the pump in your hand, and it will dispence your pain medication for you". "Thank you, he whispered, pushing the pump.



When the nurse left, Mac asked Danny what happened.


"Danny, I need to know what happened tonight". "I know, Lindsay and I had an arguement earlier, she left my place upset, so I felt guilty, and grabbed some take out, heading over to her place, when I got there, I noticed her car door was open, and there was blood on the seat, so I took a sample and headed upstairs".



"What happened next"? "I knocked on her door, but got no response, yet I heard the TV, my main concern was she may have been hurt, due to the blood, so I yelled for her to open the door, or I'd bust it in, neighbour's were watching, as I kicked it in, next thing I know I'm in her bedroom, looking at her in a pool of her own blood".



"Easy Danny, just relax", as Mac seen his tears. "I ran over to the bed, and tried to wake her, the next thing I remember, was a pain in my back, and waking up here". "You didn't see his face"? "No Mac, it all happened so fast, I didn't even hear him, come out of the washroom". "Okay Danny, I want you to rest, I'll be back in the morning, after I meet with Lindsay's parents".



"Her parent's, they are coming here"? "Yes Danny, they want to take their daughter, back to Montana, they've requested it, and I've okayed it, they also were not aware, you and Lindsay were seeing each other, it came to quite a shock for them". "What!! I thought she had told them". "Danny, she told them nothing, never once did she mention you, to them". "Oh....okay Mac, I'm really tired, I just want to rest".



Mac could tell, Danny was very upset, and shocked with this information. "Don's going to stay with you Danny, I'll be back tomorrow". "Sure Mac, see ya". Leaving the hospital, Mac wondered to himself, "why the hell didn't she tell her parents".



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This is really good.
It's not easy to write a serial killer type story, but this is turning out great.

LOVE <3 the Mac/Stella relationship :D
and you did it, you killed Lindsay :eek:

Great job Linda :D
 
Chapter 17


After Mac left, Danny asked Don. "Why don, why do you think she didn't tell her parents, about us"? "I'm not sure Danno, maybe she didn't feel there was any need, bacuse you were just seeing other, and not actually dating". *Sighing*...."But we were". "Danny, let me ask you a question, how often did you, and Lindsay spend time together"?



Thinking about it, Danny knew, he had be honest with himself. "Once, we actually shared one night together, as a couple". "What about the other times"? "There really weren't any, we were both busy, with different schedual's, it wasn't often we seen each other, except at crime scene's or if we passed by each other, in the hall".



"Now...would you classify her, as a girlfriend, or an aquantance"? Thinking about it, Danny had to agree, with Don's logic. "Yeah...I see your point now, it would have been nice though, if she mentioned me". "I know Danny, but she didn't, which shows she only thought of herself, you weren't important enough for her to mention".



"Hmmm...I guess, I thought we had something special". "Listen Danno, I liked Lindsay, so don't get me wrong when I say, I found her very self centered, selfish, and unfeeling, she wasn't even there for you, when Ruban was killed, do you know what she told Mac". "No...what"? 'That she didn't know how handle situations like that, that she was no good talking about it".



As much as Danny knew, Don was right, he still couldn't help but feel guilty. "If I had of gotten there sooner, I could have saved her, I should have saved her Don, but I didn't". Don was getting angry, for none of this was his fault, he wasn't responsible for Lindsay's death, it was just unforseen events.



Looking back at Danny, he seen his tears again. Taking his finger, Don wiped it away. "Come on Danno, don't cry, I'm here for you, I'll help you through it, as long as you are with me, or need me, I'll be here". "Thanks man, thanks".



Sitting in the chair, Don watched Danny sleep. "Don't worry Danny, I'll never let anyone hurt you, ever", he whispered.



He was at the used clothing store, picking out a pair of clean pants, and a new shirt. Changing in the hall, he headed back outside, knowing he now had nothing, except his replica knife. Walking down the street, he stopped at a diner, and had something to eat.



"Hey...lady...can I get a burger and fries". Popping her gum, she said...."sure man, anything else"? Loking at her up and down, she smiled. "You're kinda cute, you single"? Blushing, he said..."I am, what time you get off"? "5 minutes, would you like to go back to my place, and watch a movie".



Michael was shocked, never had any woman, made it so easy for him. Rubbing his knife, between his legs, he answered...."sure, that would be great, we take the burger's back with us". "Sounds good to me, see ya in five". "Tracy....who is that"? "Some guy, who is soon going to find out, what it feels like to be drugged, and robbed", she laughed. "I swear Tracy, one of these days, you are going to trap the wrong man, and he's gonna kill you".



Little did Tracy now, that this night, would be her last.


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Poor Danny, he really liked Lindsay and now she's gone. So is Don going to make his move on Danny ? :lol:

nice update
 
Chapter 18


Closing after her shift, Tracy grabbed her coat and left with Michael. "Where's your place"? "Just over across the way here, it's just a small one bedroom, but I like it, it suits me". Unlocking her door, she invited Michael in. "Just sit the burger's on the table, I'll be right back, I'm just going to slip into something more comfortable".



While Michael watched her go into the bedroom, he followed her, snuck up behind her, and knocked her out, with the butt of his knife. Checking to make sure she wasn't bleeding, he picked her up, strapping her to the bed. "Good job Michael, now do not wait this time, you must kill her right away", said his dad.



Raising his cross into the air, he said the prayer, brought down the knife, and stabbed her through her aorta. Watching the blood squirt out, he undressed, and bathed himself from head foot, while rubbing himself, till he released. Snipping off a piece of her hair, he went into the bathroom and showered.



After his shower, he dried himself up, cleaned up the room, making sure he left no trace of himself. Than covering up her body, he grabbed the burger's and left.



11pm



Mac, Stella and Flack arrived, finding Sheldon already there. "What do we have Sheldon"? "Well...28 year old female, stabbed through the aorta, as you can see the blood on the ceiling, showing it flowed upward, I've also found bloody handprints on the sheet". "Anything we could make an comparisson too"? "Fraid not, but he may be getting sloppy or very desperate, as I found seman on the victim, and the sheets".



"Hmmm...that's not like our serial, he's to smart for that". "Not really Stella, he's become desperate now, that he doesn't care, for details anymore". "Any idea where she works"? "Yeah Mac, she's got a job across the street, at that little grill". "Thanks Sheldon, Stel, let's go, I'd like to talk to whoever waitress's with her".



Leaving Sheldon, and Don, they headed across the street, to the Bar and Grill.


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Whoa this story keep getting better and better and esp. more interesting. Sure you're not moonlightning for the writers here Linda? :lol:
 
Chapter 19

When Mac and Don arrived at the Grill, they spoke with the young girl. "Excuse me, my name is Det.Taylor, I'd like to ask you a few questions about Tracy". "Umm..why"? "Listen, your friend was murdered this evening, we need to know who she left with". "Ohhh... not Tracy, your joking right"? "I'm afraid not, did you see who she left with"? "Yeah....a young guy, late twenty's, 5"7, medium build, orange hair, green eyes".



"Would you know him, if you seen him again"? "Yes...why"? "I'd like you to go downtown with this officer, and talk to our sketch artist, would you do that". "Sure, but you'll have to wait, my shift ends at 11pm". "Okay, he'll pick you up, please don't leave without him". "I won't".



"By the way, did Tracy have any family"? "No, none, just me, we both only had each other". "Thank you for all your help. As Don, and Mac headed back to the lab, they noticed a guy crossing the street, matching the description from the waitress. "Mac...do you see him"? "I do, pull over Don".



"Excuse me, hey, stop". Getting out of the car, Mac chased him down, and tackled him to the ground. *Ouff*, what the hell man, I ain't done nothin". "Then why did you run"? "Cause I knew you's were cop;s, and I hate cops". "Well...get use to us, because you've won a free trip downtown". "Fuck...".



After placing the suspect in holding, Adam caught up with Mac. "Mac....is that the serial"? "I'm not sure Adam, we are just waiting on a DNA sample, do you have anything for me". "I will, as soon as you get me his sample". Passing the vial to Adam, he left.



"Mac....Cindy is here to see the sketch artist". "Great, let's set up a line up first, I'd like to see if she picks him out". "Sure...give me 5 minutes". "Hi Cindy, before you see the artist, I'd like you to check out a group of men, and tell me if you see the suspect, that left with Tracy". "Okay...but can he see me"? "No...he can't, don't worry okay".



Looking at the guys lined up, Tracy didn't recognize any them. "Nope...he's not here". "Are you sure, none of these guys are the ones that was with Tracy"? "I'm positive, detective". "Okay, thanks, you can see the sketch artist now". "How'd she do Mac"? "Not good, she said none of the guys, were the one that left wth Tracy".



"Now what Mac"? "Now we wait for the DNA sample". "Mac.... we have a match, the semon on our dead girl, matches the suspect". "Thanks Adam". Arriving at the interrogation room, Mac told the suspect..."have a seat please". Sitting down, the guy said nothing. "Can you tell me, do you know this girl"? "Of course I know her, she's my afternoon delight".



"I'm sorry, your what"? "Every afternoon, I go into the washroom, she meets me there, and we play, I love it, cause she lets me squirt all over her, you know". Mac wasn't sure what to say, "Are you telling me, that you and Tracy had regular sex"? "No...we had oral sex, and it was the best".



Mac was becoming sickened, the only thing that stopped him from knocking sense into the guy, was Don. "Mac...". "What is it Don"? "We have the sketch, he's not the guy we're looking for". "What! you're kidding right"? "Fraid not Mac, this is who we are looking for".



As Mac stared at the picture, he knew, they had to let David Sterine go. "You can go". "Bout time, toldya it wasn't me".



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Chapter 20


He was watching the evening news, when he seen his picture across the screen, knowing he was made, left him no choice, but to head out to the Pharmacy, and grab a bottle of brown dye. Once he paid for it, he headed over to the costume store, purchasing a fake moustache, and beard.



Heading back to his rental unit, he stopped at the hotdog vender, and grabbed himself a dog. Unlocking his door, he walked into his apartment, headed into the bathroom, and dyed his hair brown, then attaching his moustache and beard, he looked into the mirror.



"Great job Michael, daddy would be proud, you like a new man". Leaving the washroom, he ate his hotdog, put on his jacket, and left to find his next victim. Rounding the corner of the Motel, he seen her, on her knees, trying to fix her tire. "Excuse me maam, do you need some help"?



Looking up, the young girl smiled, and said...."Yeah...I seem to be having trouble changing my tire". "Well allow me, I can help you with that". Getting down on his knee, he took the jack, fixing her tire. Then looking around, seeing no one in site, he knocked her out, and threw her into the car.



Stella loved the mornings she awoke in her Marine's arms, always she felt safe and charished. Moving closer into Mac's heat, she grinded herself against him. "Mmm...behave Stel...". "I am behaving Mac, just trying to get comfortable". Pulling her in closer, Mac whispered..."it seems to me, you are looking for some attention". Smiling, she turned herself to face his handsome face.



"Morning my Marine, I love you". Looking into her eyes, he whispered....."I love you to Stella, now go back to sleep". Not wanting to sleep, she tickled Mac's lips with the tip of hr finger, causing him itch. "Come on love, stop". Still teasing him endlessly, he bit down on her finger. "Ouch...what was that for"? Opening one eye, he smiled, that my love, was a love bite, now behave, I'm tired".



Still not giving in, Stella kissed his heated lips, teasing him, until he responded. "Please Mac.....touch me, she whispered seductively against his lips. Gripping his hands in her curls, he passionately gave in, plunging his tongue into her mouth, causing her to purr out.



With desire burning between them, Mac climbed upon her, and entered her warmth, as she cried out form the pleasure, he was forcing upon her. As they moved in rhythm, Mac flipped her on top, allowing her hair to shower them, from the outside world. "Take me love, show me how much you love me, allow me to feel your passion, to feed on it, I need you Stel, all of you, I love you".



Mealting from his passionate words, Stella's eyes filled with tears, and as they fell onto Mac's face, she whispered her love back to him. As their beauty, and desrie surrounded them, they poured into each other, bringing forth, their bond of love.


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