CSI:NY....."The evil that lives within"

MacsLovlyAngl

MacsLovlyAngl

Head of the Graveyard Shift
This story contains violence, mild language, and mild passionate love scenes.

The character's are not mine.

Takes place in NY: Story is about a serial killer, who Mac and his team must stop, before he strike's again.



It was dark, this place he had taken her, she couldn't see, couldn't tell if it was day or night. Listening carefully, she heard the click of the door, hiding behind it, she hoped to make her escape. *Cough...cough*....as the door opened, and she kicked him, hard enough to drop him on one knee. "BITCH*....."I'll kill for that".



Running as fast as she could, she tripped on the step, tumbling down to the bottom, she dragged herself back up. "Come on Carrie....you can do it, just one more step, and you'll reach the door", she cried to herself.



Just as she turned the door, he grabbed her, tossed her to the ground, tearing at her clothes, until he had her fully exposed, pulling out his knife, he sliced her across her chest as she bled out, bathing himself in it, he orgasmed, and moaned out a squeal, as she lay there dead, in the cold NY night.


4am....


Arriving at the crime scene, Mac was tired, it had been a long week, a week full of paperwork, crime scenes, and enless nights with no sleep. "What have we got Stella"? "Female victim, 28 years old, sliced across the chest, I'm telling you Mac, I've never seen anything like this, there is blood everywhere".



Walking in looking at the female DB, Mac knew this was going to be a serial case, he could tell, he knew, he always knew, by the details, the blood, the crime scene, that screamed this was a animal, who enjoyed playing with his prey, before killing them. "Mac....you okay"? "I will be Stel, don't worry about me, I'll be fine".



Searching the area, Mac found the room he had kept the young girl in. "Oh Christ....she didn't even have a toilet Mac". "I know Danny, we have a sick one on our hands, I want picture's taken of this room, everything Danny, including the bed". "You got it Mac". Putting on his gloves, Mac looked around the room, hoping to find something, anything that stood out.



"Excuse me....Det.Taylor, I'm the super here, you needed to see me"? Looking over, Mac noticed the super was very nervous. "You okay sir, you look like you're about to pass out". "I'm fine, just never seen so much blood". "Listen....did you hear anything, or see anything". "Nah...I heard nothing, wasn't home you see, I got here just before you arrived, I called the police".



Still staring at the guy, Mac had a gut feeling, something wasn't right, something he couldn't put his finger on. "Just one more question.....who rented this apartment"? "Don't know...I just collect the money every week". "Don't you live here"? "No...I told you, I just arrived to collect the rent". Knowing he had no evidence at this time, except what was in his gut, Mac told the guy he could go.



"Hey Mac....have a look at this". Walking over beside Danny, Mac seen it, written in feces, on the window....."HELP ME".



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Chapter 2



With the crime scene cleaned up, Mac headed home, even though he hadn't been sleeping well, he knew tonight he would. Walking into his flat, he heard her voice, before he even seen her. "Hello Marine, crazy day, how about I give you a full body massage". Smiling sinisterly, Mac removed his shirt, as he laid down on the plush carpet. "Mmmmm....oh yeah, that's the spot, mmmm... christ that feels good". "I bet it does Marine, as she continued rubbing the muscle's across his back, arms , and waist.



"Are you hungry Marine"? "Mmhmm...starving, what did you make"? "You'll see, stay here, I'll bring it to you". Mac loved this night, for it wasn't to often he had time with his special lady, who brought magic into his painful lonely nights. Walking back in, in her apron, and nothing else, she bent over the table, showing all her beuaty to her Marine.



"Come here Marine...I have something for you". Pushing himself up, he stood, stalked over, and grabbed her in his arms. "Mmm....so you are my dinner"? Taking the steak on her fork, she placed it between her teeth, as Mac bit down on it, before kissing her seductively. "Hiss.... she purred, oh....that's it my Marine, she whispered grinding against him. Feeling the room spin out of control, he picked her up, and sat her upon his lap.



"Now my little homemaker, I have a gift for you, to thank you for pampering me". Taking his hand, he placed it under her apron, causing her to bite down on his shoulder, as she released. "Please Mac, I need to feel you within me, I don't want to play anymore". Lifting her once again, Mac sat her back upon his lap. "Easy love, he whispered, take your time, I don't want to hurt you".



"You could never hurt me Mac, just as I could never hurt you". Breathing deep, Mac could feel her tightness surround him, her beauty, her warmth, her love, never in a million years, did he ever think, he could be happy again, but she proved it true, that love does happen when you least expect it. Feeling their orgasm build, they kissed wildly, in abandon, pouring their souls into each other, in warmth, in love, in tenderness.



Sighing softly, she said....."I love you my sexy Marine". "I love you too, my lady".



End Chapter.
 
Chapter 3



The following morning, Mac left his lady to sleep, while he headed into work. "Morning Mac, did you sleep last night"? "I did Don, very peacful for once". "Mac....I've found two blood sample's, one belonging to the victim, and one unknown". "Do you think it could be our killer"? "I don't think so, unless our serial is a female". "Are you telling me we have another victim, out there"? "Could be, can't say for sure". "Okay...thanks Adam".



"Good morning everyone". "Morning Stel, you're in a good mood today, another hot date last night"? "Wouldn't you like to know Danny". "Yeah...I would, as my night was boring". Laughing Stella left to see Sid. "Jeez Mac, we need to watch her, I've never seen her so happy". Ignoring Danny's rant, Mac excused himself from his team.



"Morning Sid, anything on our female DB"? "Nothing out of the ordinary Stella, basic slice, very deep, cut through the arteries, that's where all the blood came from, but I did find something, a piece of metal lodged within her chest". Showing stella, she thanked him, and took it up to Lindsay. "Hey Linds, can you check this, and get me a report asap"? "Sure Stella, I'll get right on it".



Just as Stella left the lab, she recieved the call from Mac. "Stel....we have another crime scene, over at the "Holy Trinity Church". "Okay Mac, I'll grab Danny, and be right there". Hanging up the phone, Stella found Danny, and headed out to the crime scene. "Christ....not another one, said Danny. "Afraid so....female approximately 28 years old".



As they were processing the Chief showed up on scene. "Mac....what are we doing about this, I'm getting alot of calls, from concerned citizens". "We're working on it, as soon as we know something, you'll know something". "Make it soon detective, time is of the essence". The team could see Mac was getting peeved. "Calm down Mac.....just let him ramble". Sighing deep, Mac put on his gloves, and looked for trace.



"Mac....over here, I've found something". Walking over, Danny held up another piece of metal. "Hey... our first victim had a piece of this, in her chest, Lindsay is processing it". "What do you think it is Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, hopefully it's part of our weapon the suspect is using, Stella get this back to Lindsay, have her compare it to our first piece". "On my way, see ya guy's".



"I'm telling you Mac.....she's way to happy". Smiling Mac said...."he must be a good one".



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Chapter 3



Arriving back at the lab, Stella found Lindsay. "Linds....did you find anything on that first piece of metal"? "I did...it's made from pure steel, but the odd things is, this type of sword, dates back to 18th century, it was used by the Knight's during their battles, which explains why the sword may be chipping apart". "Are you telling me we have 18th century wanna be killer, on our hands"? "No....what I'm telling you, is that your serial could be an antique collector, a museum worker, or even a metal's worker".



"Great....so what do I tell Mac"? "You tell him to start checking Antique dealer's, that's where I would start". "Thanks Linds, see you later". Picking up the phone, Stella called Mac. "Hey Mac, it's Stella, Lindsay has a lead on that metal, it's steel, but the pieces date back to the 18th century, so I'm going to check out the Antique dealer's". "Stel....wait for Danny, I'll send him to meet you". "Sure Mac, see ya". Hanging up the phone, Stella waited patiently for Danny.



While Stella was busy with Danny, Mac headed back to the office. "Lindsay....explain to me about the sword please". "Sure Mac....it dates back to the 18th century, used by the Knight's in battle, this steel is so thick and heavy, that it could slice a man in half, with one swing". "So what you're saying....is our serial is not only sadistic, but also a knight"?



"No....for all I know, your serial could be using a smaller version, a knife made from solid steel, but smaller, look Mac, all I know, is this type of metal, dates back to the 1800's". "Okay... thanks Lindsay, and good job". Leaving the lab, Mac headed over to see his friend Sam Stone, who owned a variety of 18th century swords.



After checking several Antique stores, Stella and Danny were getting hungry. "Stel...how bout we get some lunch, I'm starving". "Sure Danny, I think there's a little hotdog stand across the street". Crossing over, Danny seen a suspect behind a building, selling Crack. "Stella...call Flack, get some untis over here, we have a drug deal going down". Picking up the phone, Stella called it in, while following Danny, behind the building.



As they listened, Danny made his move. "FREEZE", he yelled, as he jumped the first suspect, causing him to smash his chin against the ground, while Stella contained the other suspect. "Damn you , you fucking pig, what the hell, you knocked out my teeth". "You have the right to remain silent". "Screw you pig, he shouted as Danny put him in cuff's, and continued reading him his right's. "Good job Danny, nice jump, maybe we should change your name, Super Danny". "Funny Stel....very funny".



Walking the dealer's to the squad car, Flack said...."no matter where you go Danno, you always find trouble". Laughing Danny said....."no Don....it finds me".



End Chapter.
 
Chapter 5



Stella knew he was going to be late, but that was okay, it gave her time to have a shower, and clean, before he arrived. Running the water, she entered the shower, allowing the spray to wash away the difficult day she and Danny had had. Thinking back to the event, she had to laugh, for it wasn't often, she got to see Danny flying through the air like Superman. Turning off the taps, she wrapped the towel around herself, and another around her hair.



Walking into her room, she pulled back the black satin comforter, reveiling the black satin sheets. She loved the feel of silk, the coolness of them, while being hot and heavy from wicked sex. Thinking of her lover again, Stella brushed her curls, slipped into her white silk teddies and housecoat, taking one last look before leaving the room.



Turning on the TV, Stella watched the news, as she slowly drifted off to sleep. While she slept, she dreamed of a wedding day, a day that would once be hers, and her lovers, if he ever got around to asking her. Stella knew her man had been through some times, but she also knew, she had helped him survive the heartache, and pain, that had never left his heart.



Meanwhile.....



Mac was loaded down with paperwork, he had two cases to close before he could head over to see his new love. "Damn...I hope she forgive's me if I don't make it", he thought to himself. "Mac....can I talk to you for a moment"? "Sure Linds, what is it"? "I need some time off, my mom is sick, and dad needs someone to look after her, I wouldn't ask, but she......". "Linds....that's fine, how long do you need"? "If possible two weeks, maybe more".



Sighing deeply, for he knew the team would have to pull the weight, he said.... "that's fine Lindsay, just make sure you call, if you're not coming back after the two weeks". "I will Mac, and thanks". "Your welcome". Signing the last case file, Mac put on his jacket, grabbed his keys, and headed out the office. "Hey Mac......". "Christ...not now Don", he whispered to himself. "What is it Don"? "I was wondering, would you like to come for a beer with Danny and I"?



"Not tonight Don, but thanks for the offer, I just want to go home and relax". "Okay Mac, see you tomorrow". Getting into his car quickly, before he was delayed again, he drove out of the lot, hoping it wasn't to late, to see his girl. As he arrived at her place, he noticed the apartment was in darkness. Looking at the key she had given him, he wondered if he should finally use it, even though he had her permission, he still felt like, he was invading her privacy.



Turning off the engine, he exited his car, walked up to the front door, and informed secuirty who he was there to see. "Good evening Det.Taylor, a little late tonight"? "Yeah....paperwork Bob, how's your night been"? "Very quiet, but I like it that way, gives me time to watch the game". "I hear you...anyways, you take it easy, and I'll see you later". "Sure thing detective, take care".



Pressing the elevator button, Mac pushed the button for the 10th floor.



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Chapter 6



As the elevator headed up, his cell phone rang. "Great...not now, Taylor". "Hi Mac, it's Sam, how you doing"? "Sam...good, how are you"? "Not bad, busy, but never to busy for a fellow Marine". "Thanks...listen, I'm a little detained at the moment, but, could we get together tomorrow for coffee, maybe around 10am"? "Sure, is something wrong Mac"? "No...I just need your help with a case". "Okay...I'll see you at 10am, night Mac".



Closing his phone, he stepped out of the elevator, removing the key from his pocket, as he stared at her door, he was having second thoughts, even though he knew he needed her, he really didn't want to wake her. "Come on Mac, she gave you her key, use it", he thought to himself. Turning the key, he opened her door, walked in, and locked it.



As he inhaled deeply, he could smell her perfumed scent throughout her apartment, a sensual spicy scent that drove him wild. Taking off his coat and shoes, he walked into her bedroom, and just admired the vision before him. He swore she was a angel, for there she was laying her tummy, uncovered, in nothing but her white silk teddy.



Quietly removing his clothes, he placed them on the chair, leaving his t-shirt and boxers on. Turning towards the bed, he stood over her, very softly caressing her sunkissed skin, watching her goosbumps form. "Mmmm.....is that my Marine"? Climbing in beside her, Mac covered them with the comforter, and pulled her into his arms.



"Long night Marine, I didn't think you were coming", she whispered. "I almost didn't, but I realized, I didn't want to go a night without seeing you". Wrapping his finger's in her beautiful curls, he raised her head, bringing their lips to meet. "I need you Stella, more than I ever thought, I could need another woman, you've become my saving grace". Stella teared up, "I love you too my Marine, more than I could ever express".



Mac closed his eyes at her words, he felt heartened that Stella loved him, he also hoped one day, he'd be able to return those words, oh he knew he loved her, he just wasn't ready to say them. Kissing her passionately, igniting the fire that fueled their love, they became wild, as Stella climbed upon him, showering her hair around them, locking out the hatred, and violence of the world.



Placing his hands on her hips, Mac guided her into his soul, softly, sensually, they felt the friction, the heat, the beauty of their love surround them. Lifting her arms, Mac removed her teddy, exposing her beautiful body for him to see. Caressing her now, up and down her silken skin, watching her burn in ecstacy, from the fire he forcing upon her. "Mac.....she purred, with tears in her eyes.



Knowing she was ready, Mac flipped her, wrapped his hands in her hair, and forced hr with gentleness to look at him. "Stella....."I love you"......he whispered onto her lips, as they aligned their souls into the night. Not wanting to release his hold, Mac sensually looked at her, and seeing the tears, he asked....."Why are you crying love"? "I'm crying from your words Mac, you whispered you loved me, words I wasn't sure I'd ever hear".



Giving her one last kiss, he said......"I do love you Stella, I've always loved you, I just never realized how much till tonight, you've given me everything, and never once have you asked for anything in return, as you waited patiently for me to say the words, you needed to hear, and I'll never take them back Stella, ever, I do love you, always".



Turning on his side, Mac wrapped Stella into his arms, as he said...."sleep now love, the words have been said....and I'll never take them back". Curling closer into him, Stella whispered...."nor I my Marine, I will love you forever".



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Chapter 7


Ten years earlier....


He loved his books, ever since he was a child, and his father had taught him how to wield a sword. He'd never forgotten the night, he seen his father take his 18th Century sword, that had been passed down, from generation, to generation, and sever his mother's body right in half, as he bathed himself in her blood, calling it the "healing ritual, for warrior's.



Not understanding at first, his father showed him the book, "Knight's of the Unforgiven", and explained to him that young girls with clean souls, cleansed the Knight's spirit, allowing him eternal life, keeping away the evil spirit's that tried to steal a Knight's soul. "10 kills, he used to say, and the spirit's are forced back to hell, for another 10 year".



Welding up with tears, he remembered his father's dying words......."I failed son, I only made it to 8, you need to save yourself now son, take the book, and hide the family sword, before the evil spirits come for it. Trying to pick up his father's sword, he dragged it, but before he got out the door, the evil ones had yanked it from his small hands, leaving only his 18th Century small version his father had given him .



"Take him into custody, and have a Psych evaluate him". "Yes sir....come along son, you need to follow me". Leading him to the cruiser, they placed him inside, informing the officer, to go right to the station. As they left, the boy seen his father being dragged out in cuffs. "Where are they taking my dad"? "I'm not sure son, just sit back and relax, everything will be fine.



Arriving at the staion, they took the boy into a room, and left him sitting there, until Psych arrived. "Hello young man, my name is Sara, and I'm here, just to talk with you". "Why.....I have nothing to say". "Your name is Michael, right"? "So....". "You are also 10 years old, and you lived at home with your mom and dad"? Turning away, Michael ignored the Psych.



"Listen Michael... we can do this here, or in the hospital, choice is yours". "What do you want from me, I know nothing". "Michael are you aware your father is mentally unstable, that he hurt alot of women". Michael knew what she asking, but he had also been told to keep quiet, and never tell about the Knight's, for he was to take over, if anything ever happened. "I told you, I don't know, please, can't you just leave me alone".



Knocking himself, back to reality, Michael watched for the girl, to leave the Campus.


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Chapter 8


He had another one, he had snatched her from the Campus, locking her in the rental room, above the store, he stripped her, cut her hair, and locked her in the room. Walking into the bathroom, he took her hair, and attached it, to the other pieces he had collected. After safely putting them away, he walked over to the grungy looking sofa, sat down, and opened his book "Knight's of the Unforgiven".




Reading the chapter allowed, it read......"He only had six more ladies to kill, he knew his time was coming to meet his maker, bending on his knees, he prayed to the sky, that he be allowed to suceed in his quest. Taking his mighty sword, the Knight slammed it into the ground, as he screamed into the night".



Hearing the girl crying, the killer put down his book, and grabbed the gag from the table. "Listen to me bitch....you are disturbing my story time, this makes me angry, and I cannot kill you yet, but if you don't shut up, I'll do it now, UNDERSTAND.......". Shaking her head in fear, the young girl curled up on the floor, and cried herself to sleep.







Meanwhile.......



Danny was at the Airport saying good bye to Lindsay. "You have a safe trip Lindsay, and I'll be here to pick you up, when you get back". "Thanks Danny". Hearing the call for her flight, she kissed Danny, and left without looking back". "Hey Danno....let's go get that beer". "Yeah man, coming". Getting into the car, Danny watched as the plane took off in the air. "Don't worry Danny, she'll be fine". "I know Don, let's go".



Arriving at the bar, the boy's ordered a pitcher, and two glasses, while watching the game. "Hey Don, what do you think of this serial killer"? "I don't Danny, well I try not to, but I have a feeling he's going to kill again, before we get a handle on him, or anything about him". Taking a swig of beer, Danny had to agree.



Stella awoke to find her bed empty, looking at the clock, it read 4am, as she sat up, she seen Mac staring out the window, looking over NY. Getting up, she walked over, wrapped her arms around his tightened stomach, and said....."what's the matter Mac, are you having trouble sleeping again"? Leaning back, he wrapped his finger's in between hers, linking them together.



"No....I guess my mind is on this new serial, we have running around NY". "I know Mac, but worrying about it, isn't going to change anything". "I know Stel....believe me, I know". Turning to face her, he picked her up, and carried her back to bed. "You are shivering sweetheart, he whispered, as he wrapped her tightly in his arms.




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