csinickhill
Civilian
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C.S.I Miami
Alex Tripp and Haratio are standing over a little girls body, the girl is lying in a pool of blood, next to a sand pit.
Alex: H something’s wrong here, this girl has no wounds this is not her blood.
Tripp: what?
Haratio: ok Alex get the girl back to the morgue find out how she died!
Tripp: H there’s like 5 pints of blood here. Haratio takes of his shades
Haratio: then I guess - haratio puts his shades back onI know where missing a body
Music wont get fooled again
At the park, as Haratio just picked up a blue fibre from the sand pit, Delko arrives at the scene.
Delko: is it true H this isn’t are vic’s blood?
Haratio: that’s correct Eric, we need this whole park procesed because were missing a body.
Delko: ok I’m on it.
Haratio hears a noise in the bushes goes over to have a look and see’s a women with blood coming from her head, struggling to breath.
Haratio: get me a medic!!!
Eric we may loose her, we need any evidence off her clothes fast.
Delko: ok H, get a medic now!!!
Haratio: mam - mam was you here with your daughter?
Lady nods her head say’s yeah under her breath.
Delko: she’s gone- she’s gone H god dam it we lost her.
Haratio: then I guess I gunner get this guy for murder --- TWICE
In a wrestling ring at an empty arena Ryan and caliegh are asking a promtor questions.
Ryan: so what was going on, why were they in here?
Promoter: well the champ who you see there dead was practising major spots for there match tonight, well all of a sudden bang he’s shot, but there’s no one here.
Caleigh: well someone was and I’m gonna find out who
Ryan and caleigh go over to the body.
Caleigh: boy this was execution style Ryan he has been shot right in between the eyes. Who ever did this was skilled.
Ryan: ok well I guess I’ll take I’ll take the stairs and seating area, you take entrance and ring.
Caleigh: you got a deal
At the morgue
Alexx and Haratio are with the mother and child.
Haratio: ok lets start with the little girl.
Alexx: ok, well her name is holly, she’s beautiful, two years old and died of exphixiation, and I found this fibre in her mouth.
Haratio: that’s blue, I found one like that in the sandpit at the park, I’ll see if it matches. Ok what about the mother?
Alexx: well her name is Sara, she died of blunt force drama to her head 13” inch wound across he forehead.
Horatio: that a wedding ring Alex? So I need to find the husband. And see how he is!
Back at the wrestling arena
Calliegh finds nothing but blood splatter, so she goes to help Ryan.
Calliegh: ok sweety, what have you found?
Ryan: There’s that many people here at night, there’s loads of things, I’ve also found GSR on the entrance curtain and a bit of chewed tobacco which is soaked in DNA.
Calliegh: ok let’s get it back to the lab.
At the lab
Horatio matches the two blue fibre, Eric walks down the hallway and H shouts him in.
Haratio: we found this fibre in the little girls mouth, it matches the one we found in the sand pit.
hope this is a good start to a story let me know if you want me to carry on
C.S.I Miami
Alex Tripp and Haratio are standing over a little girls body, the girl is lying in a pool of blood, next to a sand pit.
Alex: H something’s wrong here, this girl has no wounds this is not her blood.
Tripp: what?
Haratio: ok Alex get the girl back to the morgue find out how she died!
Tripp: H there’s like 5 pints of blood here. Haratio takes of his shades
Haratio: then I guess - haratio puts his shades back onI know where missing a body
Music wont get fooled again
At the park, as Haratio just picked up a blue fibre from the sand pit, Delko arrives at the scene.
Delko: is it true H this isn’t are vic’s blood?
Haratio: that’s correct Eric, we need this whole park procesed because were missing a body.
Delko: ok I’m on it.
Haratio hears a noise in the bushes goes over to have a look and see’s a women with blood coming from her head, struggling to breath.
Haratio: get me a medic!!!
Eric we may loose her, we need any evidence off her clothes fast.
Delko: ok H, get a medic now!!!
Haratio: mam - mam was you here with your daughter?
Lady nods her head say’s yeah under her breath.
Delko: she’s gone- she’s gone H god dam it we lost her.
Haratio: then I guess I gunner get this guy for murder --- TWICE
In a wrestling ring at an empty arena Ryan and caliegh are asking a promtor questions.
Ryan: so what was going on, why were they in here?
Promoter: well the champ who you see there dead was practising major spots for there match tonight, well all of a sudden bang he’s shot, but there’s no one here.
Caleigh: well someone was and I’m gonna find out who
Ryan and caleigh go over to the body.
Caleigh: boy this was execution style Ryan he has been shot right in between the eyes. Who ever did this was skilled.
Ryan: ok well I guess I’ll take I’ll take the stairs and seating area, you take entrance and ring.
Caleigh: you got a deal
At the morgue
Alexx and Haratio are with the mother and child.
Haratio: ok lets start with the little girl.
Alexx: ok, well her name is holly, she’s beautiful, two years old and died of exphixiation, and I found this fibre in her mouth.
Haratio: that’s blue, I found one like that in the sandpit at the park, I’ll see if it matches. Ok what about the mother?
Alexx: well her name is Sara, she died of blunt force drama to her head 13” inch wound across he forehead.
Horatio: that a wedding ring Alex? So I need to find the husband. And see how he is!
Back at the wrestling arena
Calliegh finds nothing but blood splatter, so she goes to help Ryan.
Calliegh: ok sweety, what have you found?
Ryan: There’s that many people here at night, there’s loads of things, I’ve also found GSR on the entrance curtain and a bit of chewed tobacco which is soaked in DNA.
Calliegh: ok let’s get it back to the lab.
At the lab
Horatio matches the two blue fibre, Eric walks down the hallway and H shouts him in.
Haratio: we found this fibre in the little girls mouth, it matches the one we found in the sand pit.
hope this is a good start to a story let me know if you want me to carry on
just one thing: it's Horatio not Haratio 