CSI:Miami Road Trip- We've Travelled a Long Way

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ok, this is slightly off topic, but I just wanted to post it anyway. Today I was out shopping with my mum, and I was in the DVD section, and I saw this box set for the complete first season of "SOAP" (I kid you not, that was what it was called) and my first thought was 'Did Donahue write that show?' and my second thought was 'I didn't know season 4 of Miami had come out here already' :lol:


anyway, back to the RT...I wonder who Katie had the affair with...Oooo, was it Tyler? Because if it was, Katie, you seriously have to stop stealing my men :lol:
and I look forward to the next update, even though I'll probably be asleep at the time, so I look forward to reading it whenever I read it.
 
I can't believe Katie had an abortion....what was she thinking of?, if she wants to ruin any relationship that she has going with Speed, then she is going the right way about it. :mad:
 
carlz31 said:
*gasp* Katie had an affair. *gasp* Boa shot Delko. *GASP* Katie had an abortion?! :eek:
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haha, that reminded me of Will and Grace lol. *Clears throat* Anyways...awww I'm sick. And I actually do have a phobia of getting sick. Like if I hear someone or someone throw up. I do to. lol. But you soooo know that Speed was the one that was glad I was ok and not Calleigh. lol. Update soon please.
 
calleighspeedle said:
I can't believe Katie had an abortion....what was she thinking of?, if she wants to ruin any relationship that she has going with Speed, then she is going the right way about it. :mad:
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Well yeah, I'd say that pretty much ruined the relationship right there. BUT, I'm not evil like Donahue so who knows.

And just so you all know, I'm neither 'for' abortion or 'against' it. I don't judge people so a lot of this does not reflect my own opinion. :)

Anywho, thanks for the GREAT reviews, and I'll have more soon.


Here it is :D

Angels And Demons

[Hummerhome]

Calleigh: Okay good news everyone. I got her to take the medicine.

Delko: YAY! *jumps up and down* ...*looks around* Okay so I got a little excited. Sue me. *sits*

Horatio: I can barely see the road with all this rain.

JC: Turn on the window wiper things.

Horatio: Easier said than done my dear. Have you seen the buttons on this thing?

JC: Just press random ones.

Horatio: We could self-destruct.

JC: Well...Why don't you press the button that says 'windsheild wipers'?

Horatio: ...I never thought of that. *presses button*

JC: They're not moving.

Horatio: Maybe I have to press it again. *presses button*

JC: ...Maybe you pressed it wrong.

Horatio: You can't press a button wrongly.

JC: Sure you can. Maybe it's jammed.

Horatio: I don't jam things. That's Speed's department.

Speed: Hey....I do not jam EVERYTHING.

Calleigh: Name on thing you haven't jammed lately.

Speed: The door.

Calleigh: Which door?

Speed: Any door.

Delko: I like The Doors.

Speed: Not the band, the piece of wood with the knob on it.

Delko: Oh, because I was going to say 'the time to hestitate is through' but oh well.

Speed: That's a terrible quote.

Horatio: Let's not start quoting The Doors.

Calleigh: How about The Who?

Delko: The Guess Who?

Horatio: NO ONE.

Delko: Fine, be that way.

Carly: This rain sure is comin' down.

Anni: Yeah it's like...WAR OF THE WORLDS OUT THERE!

Carly: You got that from Katie didn't you?

Anni: Yeah.

Horatio: Be glad it's not snowing.

Speed: It doesn't snow in Florida.

Horatio: Not that you know of.

Speed: Have you even been to New York? It blizzards there.

Horatio: I used to live there. I was a cop there, and my ex-wife was a pros-

Speed: Horatio...That's not true.

Horatio: I know but I wanted to give myself a back story.

Speed: You don't have one.

Horatio: Back stories are fun. I should have one.

Delko: I have one. I'm a cuban person from Cuba.

Speed: ...Eric you were born in Miami.

Delko: How would you know? It's not your back story.

Speed: How are we even friends? How does that work?

Delko: I don't know, we just hit it off as soon as we met.

Speed: We did not.

Delko: Yes we did.

Speed: I hated you when I met you.

Delko: Well I liked you.

Speed: Good for you.

Horatio: I liked all of you. You all have pizazz.

Calleigh: Pizazz?

Delko: Pizza?

Horatio: No I liked your spunk, the cut of your jip, you guys were the bees knees.

Delko: Bees have knees?

Speed: What's a jip?

Horatio: ...Nevermind.

TBC........
 
Let's hope that Katie and Speed can mend their relationship, if any couple deserves happiness it's them. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for them. ;)

Great job on this story speed cochrane. You have managed to handle the topic on abortion very sensitivly as alot of people have varied opinions on this but you have handled it very well. :)

Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to your next update. :D
 
Thanks calleighspeedle. :) ;) I try to handle things as objectively as possible, and make points on both sides. But since this fic is for fun, the big controversial subjects will be taken a bit lightly instead of me boring everyone with big words and long..Boringness. Anyway enjoy.

And I'll have another update soon, but I've edited my previous post with one...I just took forever to write it. :lol:

*hands out pizza and soda* Sit on the RT couch and have some lupper. ;) (Lunch/Supper..I don't know why I'm explaining it but...Oh well I feel the need to explain everything.)
 
*takes Pizza and soda* YUM Pizza! I love pizza!

Haha, the bees knees :lol: wow, Horatio is old...
and the Doors...YAY EMPIRE RECORDS!!! *jumps up and down*
a-hem, I mean, please update soon
 
"Its like War Of The Worlds Out There" Teehee, I should like take that to the place where you copyright stuff and like make t shirts or something lol. "bees knees" I haven't heared that one in a while. update soon please.
 
Yeah Katie you should trademark that. Then we can all have t-shirts with your sayings on them. Of course you would get 'the mustard is on aisle five' :lol:

Wrapped Around You

[Hummerhome]

Speed: Eric, put down the pillow.

Delko: I'm making it into a puppet.

Speed: You don't like puppets.

Delko: *lifts finger* Correction, I don't like sock puppets.

Speed: What do you think a pillowcase is?

Delko: *looks down* ...AH! *throws pillow*

Speed: OW! *rubs face*

Delko: Whoa I didn't miss.

Speed: You were aiming for my head?

Delko: ...No.

Speed: *frowns*

Delko: Meep! *runs*

Speed: *stands up* Say your prayers Eric because those are the last words you're ever going to cough up besides a lot of blood.

Delko: DON'T KILL ME!

Speed: *runs*

Delko: AH!

Horatio: Gentlemen...

Delko: HORATIO HE'S GOING TO KILL ME!

Horatio: Speed, don't kill him.

Speed: I can't help if he happens to fall into a bullet.

Carly: *covering eyes* They're running around in circles and it's making me dizzy.

Anni: Just look down at the floor.

Carly: I can't. Their shadows are running too.

Delko: SOMEONE STOP HIM!

Speed: NO ONE CAN STOP ME!

Delko: Even bullets?

Speed: Especially bullets.

Delko: ..TOO SLOW! *runs into Katie's room*

Speed: MY NAME'S SPEED! I'M NOT SLOW!

[Katie's room]

Delko: *stops*

Speed: *runs into Delko* Ow.

Delko: ...Is she okay?

Speed: What do you mean?

Delko: She looks kind of...White.

Speed: What are you, racist?

Delko: No as in...Doesn't look too good. *walks over*

Speed: What do you mean, doesn't look too good?

Delko: Katie?..Katie are you okay? ...She's not waking up.

Speed: Maybe she's asleep.

Delko: Her skin is freezing.

Speed: Hold on, I'll go get Horatio. *leaves*

Delko: Good idea.

[Out in Hummerhome area]

Speed: Hey H, there's a problem.

Horatio: Did you shoot Eric? Because I don't have time to deal with that.

Speed: It's Katie.

Horatio: What about her?

Speed: I think you need to come in here.

Horatio: *sigh* Okay. JC, take the wheel.

JC: ...Me? Like...Me?

Horatio: I trust you, don't worry.

JC: Now THAT'S awesome. *takes wheel*

Horatio: Now don't drive us into a ditch.

JC: *salutes* I shall do my best.

[Katie's room]

Horatio: *walks in* Oh boy.

Delko: She has a pulse.

Horatio: Obviously that medicine isn't working.

Delko: Should we take her to a hospital?

Horatio: I think that would be a good idea. Speed, tell JC to floor it to the next hospital. There should be one a couple of miles down the road.

Speed: Sure. *leaves*

Delko: She doesn't look good H.

Horatio: Try to wake her, and if that doesn't work keep checking her pulse.

Delko: You got it.

Horatio: Thank you.

[Out in Hummerhome]

Horatio: Okay guys, here's the plan. We're going to be taking a little detour to the hospital.

Carly: Is Katie okay?

Horatio: I don't have the answer to that, but we'll know as soon as we get her into the hospital.

JC: It's comin' up on the right.

Horatio: Pull in.

JC: ...Pull in? This thing weighs a babillion gajillion pounds. You can't just pull in.

Horatio: Do your best.

[Hospital, 20 minutes later]

Doctor: Lieutenant?

Horatio: Yes sir.

Doctor: We admitted her. There appears to be an infection in her lower abdomen. Has she had any surgery recently?

Horatio: Minor surgery.

Doctor: Well we'll keep her here over night and give her some antibiotics to help with the infection.

Horatio: Is she going to be okay?

Doctor: It's hard to say. In a matter of minutes some patients can go septic, others get better in a few hours.

Horatio: I understand.

Doctor: Oh, and another thing...I hate to ask but someone has to pay for the medical bill. I'm assuming you two aren't together or related in anyway.

Horatio: Her husband is outside, I'll go get him.

Doctor: Great.

[Few minutes later]

Receptionist: Okay sir, sign here, here, initial there, and then print your name there.

Speed: Yeah I got it. *writes*

Receptionist: It'll be 600 dollars.

Speed: *stops writing* ...Say again?

Receptionist: 600 dollars plus tax.

Speed: *sigh* ...*grabs wallet* Haven't you people ever heard of free healthcare?

Receptionist: Canada is about 900 kilometers that way. *points forwards*

Speed: ...Thanks for the tip.

Receptionist: Ooh a badge. Are you a cop?

Speed: No I wear this for fun. I can scare more hookers that way.

Receptionist: *laughs*

Speed: Yeah I'm glad it amuses you, the hookers aren't too happy.

Horatio: *walks up* Speed, let's go.

Speed: I'm coming.

[Waiting room]

Horatio: Did you want to see her?

Speed: Why?

Horatio: She probably doesn't want to be alone at a time like this.

Speed: Why can't you see her?

Horatio: I guess I could, but I thought y-

Speed: No. I paid for her doctors, and now I'm leaving.

Horatio: But y-

Speed: You want to comfort her, go ahead. *leaves*

Horatio: *sigh*

Calleigh: *walks up* Is she alright?

Horatio: She'll be here overnight at least.

Calleigh: Well I'm going to go upstairs and grab a soda. Do you want one?

Horatio: Do they have coffee up there?

Calleigh: Sure.

Horatio: I'll take a coffee.

Calleigh: No problem. *leaves*

Horatio: *takes off shades* Seriously, I'm indoors. It's like I have tourrettes.

TBC.......
 
Teehee, Horatio: *takes off shades* Seriously, I'm indoors. It's like I have tourrettes. That made me giggle. And awww I Have an infection well those are never good. And Speed doesn't want to come see me. Well he is really mad isn't he? lol. Update soon please!
 
Yup yup, he sure is. And I love Horatio. What a funny guy.

That reminds me, I was watching Game Over today and miss coffee was on it, and I just started laughing really hard when she said 'He took me to meet his parents'. I think my exact words were "HE TOOK HER HOME TO MOM!" :lol: ...And then I don't know, Horatio was very nice to her and that made me happy. And this has nothing to do with the rt, so I'm going to go ahead and do my part and update.

I Can't Undo All Those Days

[Hospital]

Horatio: *drinks coffee* So Calleigh, did you go see her?

Calleigh: Yeah. She doesn't look that great but she's awake so I guess that's good.

Horatio: I'm sure she didn't plan on waking up here.

Calleigh: Probably not. Hey did you talk to Tim?

Horatio I did and he's in the Hummerhome.

Calleigh: Doing what?

Horatio: I didn't ask.

Calleigh: He's not even going to visit her?

Horatio: *shrugs* He can do what he wants.

Calleigh: Oh come on Horatio, if someone you loved was in the hospital, wouldn't you visist them even if you were mad?

Horatio: I probably would. But then again, I'm not in that position.

Calleigh: He's being selfish.

Horatio: How so?

Calleigh: His wife is in the hospital and she could die, and he's sitting in the Hummerhome like a three year old because of a fight they had. If I were him, I'd be in there right now with her.

Horatio: *drinks coffee* Mhm. Well I'll go see how she's doing. *stands*

Calleigh: Alright.

[Hospital room]

Horatio: *walks in slowly* Hey.

Katie: *looks up* Hey.

Horatio: How are you feeling?

Katie: I hate hospitals.

Horatio: Everyone does.

Katie: I'm guessing Tim doesn't want anything to do with me.

Horatio: *sits* Well, he paid the bill.

Katie: Gee how big of him.

Horatio: The doctors say you'll be alright, but they want to keep you here overnight.

Katie: If I was in a better mood, I'd point out that you just rhymed.

Horatio: Life is poetic isn't it?

Katie: Yeah if your name is Shakespeare or Hamlet or...Horatio I guess.

Horatio: At least something's in my favor.

Katie: Maybe I should just die and leave you guys alone.

Horatio: ...Where did that come from?

Katie: I'm just sick of holding everyone back all the time and getting everyone angry at me.

Horatio: No one's angry with you.

Katie: Tim is.

Horatio: No, he's angry with what you did.

Katie: What differnce does it make? He hates me.

Horatio: Well the rest of us are here to support you, so get some rest okay?

Katie: Fine.

Horatio: *stands* I'll see you a little later.

Katie: Sure.

Horatio: *leaves*

[Waiting room]

Calleigh: *smiles* Hey you're back.

Horatio: You look happy.

Calleigh: I found a magazine about guns. You know, this place is alright.

Horatio: *sits* The smallest things please you Calleigh.

Calleigh: It's true. *flips through magazine*

Speed: *walks in* Hey H, can I talk to you?

Horatio: *looks up* I thought you weren't coming back in here.

Speed: I'm not going to yell for you from outside.

Horatio: What did you need?

Speed: Eric broke the windsheild wipers and JC dismantled the radio.

Horatio: You didn't stop them?

Speed: I didn't know I was babysitting them.

Horatio: Okay, I'll take care of it. *leaves*

Speed: *sits* Hey.

Calleigh: *flips pages*

Speed: Are you mad at me?

Calleigh: Does it look like I'm mad at you?

Speed: Uh...Yeah, yeah it does.

Calleigh: You're very perceptive.

Speed: Is there a reason you're mad at me?

Calleigh: *reads magazine*

Speed: *grabs magazine*

Calleigh: *looks up* Do that again and you'll lose a hand.

Speed: Why are you mad at me?

Calleigh: You know, it's interesting that I can still look you in the face and at least talk to you. *gets up* Excuse me. *leaves*

Speed: *frowns*

TBC..........
 
Ohhhh go Calleigh! And Teehee H man rhymed. And awwww I wanna die. Well not me but Rt Katie does. lol. And don't even get me started with Ms. Coffee in Game over and her little problems. Honestly! How do you NOT know that a police officer was killed. In my state whenever a police officer dies its on like every channel. I guess that hair dye went to her head. No i'm just kidding I blame the writers lol. Update soon please.
 
Well it's a good thing you don't actually want to die or I'd hunt you down and..Save you. :lol:

Welcome To The Fallout

[Hospital Waiting Room]

Horatio: Hey Speed, it's midnight. You've been in here all day.

Speed: I know.

Horatio: Well everyone else is asleep in the Humerhome. I came here to check up on Katie and get some coffee. The stuff here's addicting.

Speed: Yeah. *flips through magazine*

Horatio: What are you reading?

Speed: This magazine about guns.

Horatio: Learn anything?

Speed: Yeah not to get too caught up in how the trigger works or you'll be here until midnight.

Horatio: Why don't you go to the Hummerhome and get some rest.

Speed: I don't need rest.

Horatio: So you're just going to stay here all night reading about guns?

Speed: No way. That receptionist keeps checking me out. I wonder if I can get her number.

Horatio: Very funny.

Speed: Well I was going to go upstairs for a soda, did you want me to bring you back a coffee?

Horatio: Sure.

Speed: Alright.

[Upstairs...Which also happens to be where Katie's room is..Haha]

Speed: *grabs coffee*

Doctor1: Hey man.

Doctor2: Hey. Did you sign off on this chart?

Doctor1: A few hours ago, why?

Doctor2: She's not responding to this treatment. I just went in there.

Doctor1: Re-fill the IV.

Doctor2: Yeah right, I went to medical school too.

Speed: *shakes head*

Doctor1: Well what do you want me to do?

Doctor2: She'll probably have an allergic reaction to this.

Doctor1: If she's allergic to it, it would have shown already. Stop worrying.

Doctor2: Yeah well I don't want to be sued.

Doctor1: You won't be sued.

Doctor2: What kind of minor surgery did she have anyway? I couldn't get her medical records faxed over from Miami.

Speed: *looks up*

Doctor1: Who cares, we're treating the infection so it doesn't matter what the surgery was.

Doctor2: I think it matters.

Doctor1: Eh, I'll just say we gave her the new meds and sign it off. I'm going home.

Doctor2: You know that's against policy right?

Doctor1: Who's going to find out? We cheat all the time, and it's probably not life threatening.

Speed: *frowns*

Doctor2: It could be, so you should give her the new meds.

Doctor1: Uh, well the last time I checked you weren't the attending.

Doctor2: You'll never be one if you don't give the right medication to the patient.

Doctor1: I'll just say I 'forgot'.

Speed: *walks over* Hello gentlemen.

Doctor1: Who are you?

Speed: I'm with Miami PD, you know I just couldn't help overhearing your little conversation.

Doctor1: ...What conversation?

Doctor2: Come on man, let's go.

Speed: No, you're staying right here until I get an answer. Which patient were you talking about?

Doctor1: That's confidential.

Speed: *crosses arms* Yeah that's too bad isn't it? So I'll just go upstairs and tell your attending that you're 'forgetting' to give medication to all of your patients because you want to go home.

Doctor1: But I-

Speed: And then I'm going to come back and arrest your ass and you'll probably lose your liscence, your reputation, and your hefty paycheck. That is unless you can manage to stay out of jail, which I doubt you will.

Doctor1: ...I'll uh...I'll go get that medication ready. *runs off*

Doctor2: It's not going to stop him from taking shortcuts.

Speed: Yeah I know. Now which patient is he giving that medication to and don't lie to me.

Doctor2: *looks down at chart* Uh, Katie Speedle.

Speed: What's her condition?

Doctor2: She's stable but we can't get the infection down. She hasn't been responding to treatment so we're trying something a little more strong.

Speed: Which medication?

Doctor2: It's a new treatment on the market. Helicothalene. It's usually used on stomach ulcers, but we've found out that it does get rid of inflamation of the stomach lining, and it has antibiotics that get rid of infections.

Speed: Has it been tested before?

Doctor2: It's shown a lot of promise in recent studies. What's a cop from Miami doing here anyway?

Speed: I'm just...Here for a patient.

Doctor2: So you're not here on official business.

Speed: Should I be?

Doctor2: No.

Speed: *looks into room* Is that the patient?

Doctor2: That's her room, yes. Did you need to speak to her?

Speed: No. Just help her alright? *leaves*

Doctor2: ...No problem.

[Waiting room]

Speed: Here's your coffee.

Horatio: That took a while.

Speed: The machine wouldn't take my money.

Horatio: Why don't you go to the Hummerhome. I can stay and wait here.

Speed: What do you mean?

Horatio: You haven't left in six hours.

Speed: So?

Horatio: So I know that's not because of the receptionist.

Speed: ...I'll see you later H. *leaves*

Horatio: *smirks*

TBC.........
 
Awww well that would mean a lot to me Geni! Considering the fact that your coming all the way from Canada to the middle of NOWHERE! Anywways....ohhh that one doctor I swear If I would have died or die whatever i would sooo come back and haunt him. But that's ok because Speedy took care of it. Teehee. And why did Spring Break pop into my head when he was telling that doctor off? Teehee. But he still won't come in and see me. Ok I need to make a mental note that abortions are bad. lol. Even though I feel people should do as they choose. I'm just saying if it makes Tim angry don't do it and I'm going to stop rambling so update soon please!
 
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