CSI:Miami (CaRWash) by CSIWATCHER
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CSIWATCHER
Police Officer
Alright yeah here's the next chapter, it's quite short, I have more done...but this seemed like the best stopping point...so here ya go!
“Okay, this may take some time.” Heather said with a winning laugh. She was excited to put hacking into action, without having the police down her throat. Calleigh and Frank looked at each other with awe. They couldn’t believe that a kid this young could actually be this computer apt.
“Kay, I got it!” Heather said. Calleigh and Frank shot up from their chairs and looked over her shoulders. Dan also came around to see what was going on. “Whoa! Suspect number one, come on down. Look it’s the Checker Greenfield! Ha…am I good or what.” Heather said as she placed her hands behind her head. Calleigh and Frank took the address and left. “Oh…this asshole is going down.” Heather said to herself when they left.
At the address, Calleigh and Frank, along with about ten other officers stormed through the front door. As soon as they kicked down the doors, five men stood from their seats suddenly, from the sound of the door bursting open. They held up their hands when they saw the officers. Calleigh and Frank proceeded through the rest of the house, they found many drugs but no Ryan, and no Checker.
In the interrogation room, Calleigh sat in front of one of the men at the house. Frank stood beside the door leaning on the wall against his shoulder. “Where’s Checker, Nando?” Calleigh asked the man. Nando shrugged and replied, “I don’t know any Checker.” Calleigh was getting pissed and she could tell Frank was as well. “Really? Cause you were in his house.” she said. “Look lady, if I rat on this guy…you know as good as I do that I’m a dead man.” Nando said as he hit the table.
“Look…if you don’t, and this CSI dies…you might any ways.” Frank said. Nando looked worried and he had a right to be. “That guy was a CSI?” he asked. Calleigh and Frank looked at his and nodded. “Look, I didn’t know. I just thought he was someone that pissed Perez off. Okay…if you promise me a deal, I’ll tell you where they went.” Nando said seriously. Calleigh leaned forward on her elbows, she was considering it.
“If you do, I’ll think about it. If you don’t then I wont.” she said and he shook his head. “No…there has to be a deal if I’m putting my life on the line.” he said. “If you don’t you wont even get me to consider it, so really you don’t have a choice…and the more time you waist the less chance we get him alive.” Calleigh said. “He’ll be alive. Someone that pisses Perez off, goes to Perez and only Perez.” Nando said. “But they took him to the docks, Checker has a boat, he’s Perez’s lackey, he always takes men on that boat. Your CSI isn’t the only man he has on that boat. People piss Perez off everyday, but Checker only goes on his boat once every three days. He takes them to a boathouse. That’s where Perez lives. Right before every shipment, he tells Checker the coordinates…he’s thorough.” Nando finished. Calleigh raised an eyebrow and replied, “Not thorough enough.”
“Okay, this may take some time.” Heather said with a winning laugh. She was excited to put hacking into action, without having the police down her throat. Calleigh and Frank looked at each other with awe. They couldn’t believe that a kid this young could actually be this computer apt.
“Kay, I got it!” Heather said. Calleigh and Frank shot up from their chairs and looked over her shoulders. Dan also came around to see what was going on. “Whoa! Suspect number one, come on down. Look it’s the Checker Greenfield! Ha…am I good or what.” Heather said as she placed her hands behind her head. Calleigh and Frank took the address and left. “Oh…this asshole is going down.” Heather said to herself when they left.
At the address, Calleigh and Frank, along with about ten other officers stormed through the front door. As soon as they kicked down the doors, five men stood from their seats suddenly, from the sound of the door bursting open. They held up their hands when they saw the officers. Calleigh and Frank proceeded through the rest of the house, they found many drugs but no Ryan, and no Checker.
In the interrogation room, Calleigh sat in front of one of the men at the house. Frank stood beside the door leaning on the wall against his shoulder. “Where’s Checker, Nando?” Calleigh asked the man. Nando shrugged and replied, “I don’t know any Checker.” Calleigh was getting pissed and she could tell Frank was as well. “Really? Cause you were in his house.” she said. “Look lady, if I rat on this guy…you know as good as I do that I’m a dead man.” Nando said as he hit the table.
“Look…if you don’t, and this CSI dies…you might any ways.” Frank said. Nando looked worried and he had a right to be. “That guy was a CSI?” he asked. Calleigh and Frank looked at his and nodded. “Look, I didn’t know. I just thought he was someone that pissed Perez off. Okay…if you promise me a deal, I’ll tell you where they went.” Nando said seriously. Calleigh leaned forward on her elbows, she was considering it.
“If you do, I’ll think about it. If you don’t then I wont.” she said and he shook his head. “No…there has to be a deal if I’m putting my life on the line.” he said. “If you don’t you wont even get me to consider it, so really you don’t have a choice…and the more time you waist the less chance we get him alive.” Calleigh said. “He’ll be alive. Someone that pisses Perez off, goes to Perez and only Perez.” Nando said. “But they took him to the docks, Checker has a boat, he’s Perez’s lackey, he always takes men on that boat. Your CSI isn’t the only man he has on that boat. People piss Perez off everyday, but Checker only goes on his boat once every three days. He takes them to a boathouse. That’s where Perez lives. Right before every shipment, he tells Checker the coordinates…he’s thorough.” Nando finished. Calleigh raised an eyebrow and replied, “Not thorough enough.”
CSIWATCHER
Police Officer
haha...yea i thought that would be something calleigh would say. glad ya'll like it lol
CSIWATCHER
Police Officer
Kay guys this is the next chapter...i think theres only going to be a couple more maybe three...those are going to have more carwash in them...plus more action
“If this turns out to be false, you’re going to pay.” Frank said before he and Calleigh exited. “Okay…we need air patrol along with some boats on the water.” Calleigh said quickly. Frank nodded, and they went to work.
In the air, Frank rode in the helicopter. “Right there! That’s the boat!” Frank yelled, as though he was going to throw up. “Are you okay!” pilot asked. Frank nodded, though he was about to throw up. The pilot laughed.
In the water, Calleigh was on the closest boat to the suspect’s. He had tried to out run them, but it was to no avail. As they approached, officers drew their guns, as well as Calleigh. They jumped out and onto the boat, to find Checker. He had a gun drawn, but there were too many officers. “Put the gun down!” an officer yelled. And he did just that.
Calleigh proceeded down below deck, with six officers behind her. Below, they saw four men tied up, many severely beaten. She saw Ryan at the far end with his hands behind his back, and tape over his mouth. She went straight for Ryan, and the other officers untied the other four.
Back at the lab. Calleigh and Ryan were arguing about he needing to go back to the hospital. Only for him to say he wasn’t going to stay there anymore. “Ryan you need to be there.” Calleigh said. “Look if I can go through what I did, I can be out of the hospital without dieing.” he replied, and she nodded.
As they walked down the hall, Calleigh’s phone rang. “God, I hate answering this damn thing…today nothing good has come from it.” she said before answering it. “Hello? Tripp, did you get him? You did, great.” she hung up. “They got Perez.” she said, and Ryan simply nodded. He continued down the hall, grasping his side from the pain, until he reached the computer lab.
“Heard you’re a damn genius, and hacked into the hospital files.” he said to Heather and she immediately shot her head up. “I knew they’d find your sorry ass. Trying to get off the job that easily, huh?” she joked. He smiled. Today wasn’t so bad after all.
“Well my shift has ended for today, I’m playing tonight with my band. So I wont be around, you going to be cool?” Heather asked. He nodded and turned to Calleigh, and surprisingly Alexx, who had turned up just a second before. “You know, I think I need to sit down somewhere.” he said as he saw Alexx eyeing him fiercely. “Yeah, tough guy. How about we get you home. Calleigh do you think you can drive him?” Alexx asked and Calleigh simply nodded.
“If this turns out to be false, you’re going to pay.” Frank said before he and Calleigh exited. “Okay…we need air patrol along with some boats on the water.” Calleigh said quickly. Frank nodded, and they went to work.
In the air, Frank rode in the helicopter. “Right there! That’s the boat!” Frank yelled, as though he was going to throw up. “Are you okay!” pilot asked. Frank nodded, though he was about to throw up. The pilot laughed.
In the water, Calleigh was on the closest boat to the suspect’s. He had tried to out run them, but it was to no avail. As they approached, officers drew their guns, as well as Calleigh. They jumped out and onto the boat, to find Checker. He had a gun drawn, but there were too many officers. “Put the gun down!” an officer yelled. And he did just that.
Calleigh proceeded down below deck, with six officers behind her. Below, they saw four men tied up, many severely beaten. She saw Ryan at the far end with his hands behind his back, and tape over his mouth. She went straight for Ryan, and the other officers untied the other four.
Back at the lab. Calleigh and Ryan were arguing about he needing to go back to the hospital. Only for him to say he wasn’t going to stay there anymore. “Ryan you need to be there.” Calleigh said. “Look if I can go through what I did, I can be out of the hospital without dieing.” he replied, and she nodded.
As they walked down the hall, Calleigh’s phone rang. “God, I hate answering this damn thing…today nothing good has come from it.” she said before answering it. “Hello? Tripp, did you get him? You did, great.” she hung up. “They got Perez.” she said, and Ryan simply nodded. He continued down the hall, grasping his side from the pain, until he reached the computer lab.
“Heard you’re a damn genius, and hacked into the hospital files.” he said to Heather and she immediately shot her head up. “I knew they’d find your sorry ass. Trying to get off the job that easily, huh?” she joked. He smiled. Today wasn’t so bad after all.
“Well my shift has ended for today, I’m playing tonight with my band. So I wont be around, you going to be cool?” Heather asked. He nodded and turned to Calleigh, and surprisingly Alexx, who had turned up just a second before. “You know, I think I need to sit down somewhere.” he said as he saw Alexx eyeing him fiercely. “Yeah, tough guy. How about we get you home. Calleigh do you think you can drive him?” Alexx asked and Calleigh simply nodded.
CSIWATCHER
Police Officer
I completley forgot about this fic! Sorry guys...I will have this updated within the next week or so. I'm sorry! I've been working on other fan fics on other sites and forgot about this...I'm sorry again. It will totally be updated soon though!
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
How's this? If you don't update, I will stalk you!
labgeekluvr
Lab Technician
This is really good. Heather's cute--love how she chewed Natalia up one side and down the other for being the mole. Love the action too--this could be a real episode. All we need is Horatio standing with his sunglasses on and his hands on his hips 
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