Baby Steps

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You has to write a new story.... :D

The begin is condemned good ! ;)

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Tangiers hotel & casino
Suite 402

The suite was about as big as one of the penthouse, three bedrooms, large bathroom, and large living area. The bathroom that joined on to one of the main bedrooms, there were two main bedrooms but just one main bathroom. The bathroom contained an old fashioned freestanding bath, in the corner was a shower that wheelchair bound people could use. It was also a sharp white in color.

Adam was awake as well as one of the girls.
Adam was eating a piece of warm toast with a cup of coffee when the oldest girl walked into the kitchen area.
“Adelaide, why are you up soon?” Adam asked his niece.
Grabbing a coffee cup she answered her Uncle “I want to locate mom. I thought I might try Uncle Alex first, to see if he knows where I can find her.”
“At this hour try his work number. It’s on the table.” Adam stated.

There was a knock at the door Adam went to answer it.
There stood one of Sam’s bodyguards “Mr. McNabb-Sidle, Mr. Braun sent me. There has been a change of plans; I’m to take you to Mr. Braun.”
“One minute.” Adam said walked back into the kitchen area.
He kissed his niece on her forehead and got his jacket.
“Take the cell phone when you & the kids go out. Here have lunch on me and do some traveling by public transport.” Adam said passing Adelaide a hundred dollar bill.
“Thanks will do!”

Gil’s townhouse

In the living room Sara and Lexie were talking, when Lexie smiled and Sara had no idea why.
Lexie hadn’t told anyone why she was in Las Vegas. Why was she there? Well she had just become the new director of the Las Vegas Crime lab. 27 in three weeks and just become the youngest Director of any Crime lab within the United States of America.
It didn’t matter to her, she graduated high school when she was fourteen, graduated from Harvard when she was twenty and had been working ever since.

“Why are you here?” Sara asked as she caught Gil walking down the hallway.
Lexie looked down at Zeke and replied, “Just before having Zeke I got a call from Mayor Alex McNabb saying I got the job my boss put me forward for. I start on Monday”
Walking to the living room with a cleanly shaven face, Gil took his grandson from his daughter’s arms and kissed his leading ladies on their cheeks.
Gil couldn’t work out why his genius daughter wasn’t telling the truth or at least keeping them from the truth.

Before Gil could ask the question, Lexie’s cell phone rang.
“Alexandra Grissom speaking?”
“Ms Grissom, Mayor McNabb here?”
“Sir, I’ll be there tonight I just need to find a babysitter.”
“My wife would be happy to do that for you. You know Sara Sidle is my niece right?”
“I do sir. You also know where I am at the moment. I need to do some shopping for tonight.”
“I’ll get my wife to drop by she’s a great shopper and our oldest is your age.”
“I’ll look forward to it.”
“She’ll be there by ten am. Her name is Donna. I’ll see you at eight pm”
“Thanks Sir. Bye” Lexie hung up.

Gil looked at his daughter then at his future wife.
“My boss. I have a dinner to attended tonight and his wife is taking care of Zeke”
Gil looked like this cogs in his brain were working hard.
“Why not us?”
“Daddy you know you and Sara have to turn up to the new director’s banquet. Donna McNabb is related to your future wife. You know that daddy”
Sara was getting rattled now. Her manner wasn’t as calm as it had been. Lexie reached into her workbag and pulled out some folder.
She opened one.

“Name: Sara Alexandra McNabb-Sidle. Mother of Adelaide Laura McNabb-Sidle, Sister/half sister of Adam, Jessica & Charlie. Father deceased, mother in Prison for murder on husband, now proved to be an act of self-defense. A few minor complaints of behavior towards suspects.”
“You have my personal file?” Sara looked at Lexie in shocked.

“Name: Gilbert Aaron Grissom, father of Alexandra Olivia Grissom, son of Olivia Grissom. Father deceased. Relationship with subordinate possible (signed Mr. Conrad Ecklie). I’m not sure if you know the last part daddy. I have more”
“But the only way you could get into the system was either with a password or you hacked.” Gil spoke stunned.

“Name: Mr. Conrad Ecklie. Ex-wife suing for unpaid child support. Hannah Jones (not his ex-wife) receiving child support. Father of Wendy, James & Freddie, has never met daughter Wendy Jones. Two counts of Rap charges.”
“He has all that under his belt and he’s still running the lab. Why hasn’t the sheriff done anything about this?” Gil stated.
“The Mayor’s idea is to get someone into the directors’ job then the FBI can come in and take out Mr. Ecklie. See one of the rape charges is a federal offence. Oh and Sara, Laura is out of jail and has been for the last eight months.”
They sat there quiet.

Desert Palm hospital

Lilly had gone to visit Lindsey while he had his business meeting.
Lindsey was listening to her ipod; Warrick was in the room trying to wake up Catherine.
When Lilly walked into the room, Lindsey turned off her ipod and smirked trying not to laugh at Warrick & her mom.
Lilly ended up giggling at her daughter’s heavy sleeping.
“Hey grandma. Why did Sam want to talk to Greg?” Lindsey opened her mouth.
“It’s business. Your mother was always a heavy sleeper. Rick, hold her nose and lick her chin.”

Warrick nodded, picked Catherine’s nose while licking her chin.
A giggling sound came from Catherine’s throat as her eyes opened and kissed Warrick by surprise.
“Where’s Greg?” Catherine asked looking around the room.
Lindsey spoke up before Lilly could “He’s with Sam on business”.
 
Haha oh Melbel I love how your story always has like all the characters related some way or another. What great work can't wait for more.... update soon please!!!!
 
I'm going to be brutually honest. You have an interesting idea-- although you might want to elaborate a bit more, and add a bit more about their surroundings, and their feelings. That way people have a bit more to work with in their minds :)

I look forward to more beautiful ideas that you come up with though, so please continue...
 
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