CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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Oh..wow...So, Katie gets off by breaking down, meanwhile, Anni's suffering with a gsw to the side. At least she has Speed to help her along :D . Suffice to say, I think the friendship between Katie and Anni is ah...over. I could be wrong...but somehow, I doubt it.

:) Scotty, building...hot...sweaty...:drool: Man...to be there..lol

And Lori has no idea what she's asking for...:lol:

:thumbsup: Excellent update!
 
Wow! Katie really went nuts and laid Anni up for a while! Probably was a good thing she was a bad shot! I can't believe she didnt get locked away without the key! But that Justice for ya!

Speeds so cute when hes in protective mode! lol!

I'm with Lori it doesn't matter if he can build it or not, as long as hes half Naked who Cares!

and the Shopping trip with Steph! oh Boy! I can see this one comming a mile away! Lori will wish she was back in combat after she gets done with this trip! I don't think any place on earth will be far enough for her to get away!

Great update geni!
 
Thanks so much for the reviews. :D

^^ Anni and Katie have always had a weird relationship, you never know. :lol:

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Brooklyn, grocery store, 10am

Lori: *pulls out cart* Okay, ready?

Steph: *smiling, nods*

Lori: Okay. *picks up Steph, plunks her into cart*

Steph: *kicks feet*

Lori: *pushes cart*

Aisle 5

Lori: *reaches up, grabs mustard*

Steph: *reaches over, picks up mustard*

Lori: *throws mustard into cart*

Steph: *drops mustard*

Lori: *looks down*

Steph: *giggles*

Lori: *kneels, picks up mustard*

Further down aisle

Lori: *pushing cart*

Steph: *holds hand out*

Tags flip

Lori: *grabs Steph's hand* Stop it.

Steph: *crosses arms, pouts*

30 minutes later, aisle 7

Lori: *staring at soups* Okay...*taps chin*

Steph: *leans elbow on cart, sighs* Momma, hurry up.

Lori: Hush. *picks up soup* Hmm...no, I don't want cream of brocoli. *puts can back* How about this one. *picks up can* ...No, this one's $1.99. Too expensive for soup.

Steph: *kicks feet impatiently*

Lori: *grabs soup cans, looks down* What's the difference between cream of chicken and creamy chicken?

Steph: Momma.

Lori: *grabs soup* Chunky chicken...*looks up* meaty chicken? What's wrong with normal chicken?

Steph: Momma.

Lori: *places soup on shelf* How 'bout this one. *grabs can* Beef stew. *turns can around* ...May contain beef products. Well I sure as hell hope so.

Steph: *sigh* Momma.

Lori: *throws soup into cart* I wonder if we need any beans...

Steph: MOMMA!

Lori: *looks at Steph* What!

Steph: IT'S HOT! *yanking at jacket*

Lori: Then unzip it. What's your problem, you got pianos tied to your fingers? *unzips Steph's jacket*

Steph: *throws jacket into cart*

Lori: *pushes cart*

Steph: Momma, we done yet?

Lori: No.

Steph: *sighs, leans back in seat*

Aisle 14

Lori: *throws cracker box into cart*

Steph: *looks at cookies, gets wide-eyed*

Lori: *reaches up, grabs box*

Steph: *reaches for cookie box* Cookiecookiecookiecookie.

Lori: *pushes cart*

Cookie box disappears from view

Steph: *frowns, drops arms*

Aisle 15

Steph: *tugs Lori's arm* Momma.

Lori: *staring at jars*

Steph: *tugging Lori's arm* Momma. Cookies.

Lori: *picks up jar*

Steph: *points to other aisle* Cookies, Momma.

Lori: *places jar into cart*

Steph: *kicks feet, screeches*

Lori: *looks at Steph* Stop that.

Steph: *frowning* COOKIES!

Lori: We're not getting cookies so hush up.

Steph: *crosses arms*

Fruit/Veggies section

Lori: *places apples into bag*

Steph: *rolls oranges off shelf, giggling*

Lori: STEPHANIE!

Steph: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *slaps Steph's hand* No.

Steph: *looks down at hand, rubs it*

Lori: *pushes cart*

Steph: *looks at bananas, smiles*

Lori: *stops cart, grabs bag*

Steph: *picks up banana, presses on it, places it up to ear* Hi Mister Teddy. We shoppin'.

Lori: *snatches banana from Steph*

Steph: *sigh*

Lori: *pushes cart*

Cereal aisle

Lori: *throws box into cart*

Steph: *reaches up, snatches Dunk-a-roos* ...*looks back*

Lori: *staring at shelf*

Steph: *looks down, rips open box*

Lori: *picks up cereal*

Steph: *reaches into box, dips cookie into frosting*

Lori: *throws cereal into cart*

Steph: *eats frosting off finger*

Lori: *walks back over to cart* STEPH!

Steph: *lifts head*

Lori: *snatches box away* Y-...*frowns* NO! This costs MONEY!

Steph: *staring at Lori*

Lori: *throws box into cart* You want to walk home?

Steph: *shakes head*

Lori: Then behave. *pushes cart*

Milk/Eggs aisle

Lori: *opens freezer*

Steph: *reaches down into cart, grabs at Dunk-a-roos*

Lori: *lifts milk*

Steph: *grunts, makes grabby hands*

Lori: *puts milk back, reaches for carton*

Steph: *smirks* ...*stands, jumps into middle of cart*

5 minutes later

Lori: *turns around*

Steph: *dumps cereal everywhere, pulls out toy*

Lori: *frowns*

Steph: *sticks hand into yogurt, licks hands*

Cash register

Lady: *looks at Steph*

Steph: *bouncing inside cart*

Lori: *throws empty boxes onto till*

Lady: ...These are empty.

Lori: She ate them all.

Lady: *rings in empty boxes*

Steph: *dumps magazines from stand*

Lori: *pulls out wallet*

Lady: *looks at Steph*

Steph: *opens gum package, shoves gum into mouth*

Lady: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *frowning* Want a kid?

Lady: ...I take it you'll be buying the gum too.

TBC....................
 
OMG! It's worst than I thought it could ever be! Lori's all like...' la la la, um...soups, mean while, Steph's trashin the store! And from the buggy at that!:lol: I did find it hilarious that Lori asked Steph if she wanted to walk home and that she was paying for empty boxes. I guess she won't take for granted going shopping with Stephanie again. Poor, Poor Lori...

excellent update!
 
Ha Ha Ha Ha ! i new she was in for it! if that had been my mom, She would have busted my ass in front of fod and everybody for the first thing i grabed off the shelf! We didn't get away with that! Well maybe I did a little! Well Ok maybe alot more than my brother! Well he was the damn rotten goodie goodie that would sit in the chair all day if you told him too! Not me! but I still would have got my ass busted right then & there even if it didn't stop me! lol!
 
Thanks for the fantabulous reviews! :D

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New York, hardware store, 1pm

Scott: *staring at barbeque*

Guy: *walks over* Can I help you sir?

Scott: *smiles* Sure. I'm looking for a barbeque.

Guy: Well you've come to the right place. What kind are you looking for?

Scott: Uh...*looks down at barbeque* that one looks good.

Guy: What kind of place you staying at?

Scott: What do you mean?

Guy: You in a house? Apartment? Condo? Mom's basement? There are some places you can't have these bad boys unless you're looking to torch the place. And are you wanting natural gas, liquid propane or charcoal grills?

Scott: *blinks*

Guy: *points* You got the classic right here, that's charcoal. Get yourself some brickettes and light 'em up. Especially great for smoking fish. Then over here, you've got your SS Deluxe Gas model. This size is awesome for a small family home because it's compact enough for storage and still supports enough meat. Now over here, you've got your Electrolux propane and this one's just perfect for parties and more complicated recipes.

Scott: H-How do you um...get the propane into the tank?

Guy: *stares at Scott*

Scott: *laughs* I'm just messing with ya.

Guy: *laughs* Good one!

Scott: I'll take the gas model.

Guy: We got all kinds of gas models. You want the SS Deluxe, the 1000 Deluxe or the Supreme 7000?

Scott: They aren't the same thing?

Guy: ...*starts to laugh* Ah, you're trying to get me again! *punches Scott's arm*

Scott: *laughs nervously* But you didn't fall for it!

Guy: Damn straight!

Scott: You know what, maybe I'll shop around a bit more before I make a decision.

Guy: That's a good idea. Don't have to decide right now.

Scott: I'm also uh...I need to build a deck out back and I'll need to order some wood.

Guy: Sure. What are the dimensions?

Scott: ...Dimensions?

Guy: Of the space. 12x14, 14x8, L shape, double level, pool deck? You putting stairs on it? Is it raised or ground level? Will it be fenced in? What kind of pattern you plan on stacking it? Angled, standard, herringbone, opposed...OH and then you'll need a good weather sealer.

Scott: *scratches head*

Guy: Or you might try a poured concrete deck, that way you bypass the trouble of ordering in wood that comes with ants. Those little buggers sometimes get in with pressed wood too. Don't know how they do it but I've had many a complaint.

Scott: Uh...

Guy: You do know what you're doing, right?

Scott: *laughs* Of course I know what I'm doing. I'm a man, building's in my blood.

Guy: AH! *slaps Scott on the back* Good man! So get me those specs and I'll order up the wood for you.

Scott: Actually, I think I'll have to go back and measure a second time. Seems I didn't take into account the uh...uh...distance from the house to the fence. I don't want to build my deck into someone's yard by mistake.

Guy: How could you miss that?

Scott: My wife was nagging me about money and babies. The usual.

Guy: *laughs* A married man, eh? Yep, them bitches never quit. They always want more more more! You'll learn that real soon. My advice? Ditch 'em early and stick to call girls. For one, they give it up for ya on a moment's notice and you don't have to wake up next to 'em every morning! How do ya like that! HA!

Scott: *smiles*

Guy: Oh hell, find a foreign girl. They have skills like you wouldn't believe.

Scott: *tilts head*

Guy: Anyway, enough with the hooker talk. Come back with your specs and I'll hit you up with the supplies.

Scott: Thanks, I appreciate it.

Guy: You need anything else?

Scott: Well I'd like to build a shed too.

Guy: Wood, fibreglass paneling or steel?

Scott: *sigh* ...

Brownstone, 4pm

Scott: *walks through door*

Steph: *sleeping on couch*

Scott: *looks down at couch* Lori, I'm home.

Lori: In here!

Kitchen

Scott: Steph seems pretty tired. You wear her out?

Lori: No. *points to empty boxes* Count Chocula and Captain Crunch wore her out thanks to a sugar crash.

Scott: I take it 'shopping' didn't exactly go according to plan.

Lori: Did you have more luck?

Scott: Maybe we should have switched.

Lori: Nah, it's kind of fun failing miserably together.

Scott: *wraps arms around Lori's waist* Well I certainly wouldn't want to do it with anyone else. *kisses Lori*

Lori: *smiles*

TBC.............................
 
Oh....awww...:guffaw: Scott in a home improvement store... with the sales associate from hell , apparently. It tripped me out to see that Scotty had no clue in what was going on and he just let Gigantor (the sales associate, because I picture him as this massive man with a stupid grin on his face...) prattle on and on about propane grills , wood specs and concrete, none the wiser. It wouldn't surprise me in the least bit if he contracted out and had others build it. But hey, he could still walk around with his shirt off, just so Lori could :drool:...

I loved how they got together at home and whimsied about their respective losses. I never thought about this, but Lori probably would've rocked at getting the items to build, hell even built the damn thing, and Scotty could've hit it out of the park with grocery shopping and keeping Steph in line.:lol: Just goes to show you how much these two belong together.

Great update!
 
Well I guess that Episode of Tool Time With Scott the toolman Finch is gonna be on hold until he actually figures out how the hell to build something! For godsakes don't give him any power tools! theres no telling what he would do with them! hes liable to cut something vidle off! Lol!

Loi needs to leave Steph at home next time or let Scott take her shopping. Shes gonna go brike paying for empty box and they'll all starve! With the exception of Steph who seems to eat everything in site. Lol!

Grat update Geni!
 
speedfanatic05 said:
I never thought about this, but Lori probably would've rocked at getting the items to build, hell even built the damn thing, and Scotty could've hit it out of the park with grocery shopping and keeping Steph in line.:lol: Just goes to show you how much these two belong together.

I was thinking much the same thing as I was writing it. :D Hee.

Thanks so much for the reviews!

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Miami, condo, 7pm

Anni: *steps out of shower, grabs onto towel rack* Ugh.

Speed: *knocks on door* You okay?

Anni: Fine. *wraps towel around self, opens door* Have you been waiting there the whole time?

Speed: No. I went and made you tea.

Anni: *smiles* Aw how sweet.

Speed: *takes Anni's arm*

Anni: *walks over to bed, sits*

Speed: *sits* You need more medication?

Anni: *nods* Yeah, I think so.

Speed: *reaches over to nightstand, grabs pills*

Anni: You're okay with this?

Speed: What do you mean?

Anni: Takin' care of me. I know you probably have better things to do with your time.

Speed: *hands over glass of water*

Anni: Thanks.

Speed: *lies down on bed*

Anni: *downs pills* That the tea over there?

Speed: Yeah, I can get it for you if y-

Anni: No no. *lies down* I'd rather just chill for a minute.

Speed: *looks over*

Anni: *smiles* I have everything I need right here.

Brooklyn, brownstone, backyard, next day

Scott: *pulls out measuring tape, kneels*

Lori: *opens door, sips coffee* What in the hell are you doing?

Scott: Measuring the space I need to build a deck.

Lori: *laughs*

Scott: *lifts head*

Lori: Come on, you're not actually going to attempt that, are you?

Scott: I've decided I'm going to follow through. It's the only way to learn.

Lori: *looks at watch* You're supposed to be at work.

Scott: *stretching out tape* Huh?

Lori: ...You know that big pointy building? Kind of high and full of offices? You're needed there to boss people around.

Scott: Gas leak.

Lori: Again?

Scott: They're investigating and they want everyone above the 50th floor out. *leans downward* Are these steps attached to the house?

Lori: *sits on steps, crosses legs*

Scott: *lifts eyes*

Lori: I don't know. *leans forward*

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: You think it'll be a problem?

Scott: *swallows* ...Uh...p-probably not.

Lori: Well here, let me see if I can lend a better eye. *stands, jumps down steps*

Scott: *sits up*

Lori: *kneels beside Scott* Flashlight.

Scott: *hands over flashlight*

Lori: *clicks on light* You sure you want to build a wooden deck? Concrete might be a little more sound, especially with the weather we get. *flips hair over shoulder*

Scott: *blinks*

Lori: Besides, it'll match the steps. *looks at Scott* What do you think?

Scott: ...What were we talking about again?

Lori: *smirks* The deck. Why else would we both be sitting in the dirt like this?

Scott: Okay. You win. I'll do this later.

Lori: *smiles*

Kitchen

Lori: *sits*

Steph: *stuffs face with cookies*

Scott: *snatches cookie box*

Steph: *looks up at Scott*

Scott: *eats cookie, winks*

Steph: *smiles*

Lori: Scott, don't encourage her. *grabs box*

Scott: It's Saturday. She can have cookies on the weekend.

Lori: You know what I used to have on weekends when I was little? Beatings. What about you?

Scott: *pulls chair over, sits* Baseball practice.

Lori: *frowns*

Steph: *gives cookie to Lori*

Lori: *looks at cookie*

Steph: Make ya happy, Momma.

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *smiles*

Lori: *eats cookie*

Doorbell rings

Scott: *looks out window* Dark blue Impala.

Lori: *blinks* Oh shit.

Scott: What?

Lori: *stands* Okay don't get mad but I may have given our address to a friend.

Scott: You don't have any friends.

Lori: *runs over to door*

Scott: *lifts brow*

Foyer

Lori: *opens door*

Tom: *leaning against banister*

Lori: *smiles* Tom. What an unpleasant surprise.

Scott: *walks over*

Tom: *looks at Scott*

Lori: What brings you here? *crosses arms*

Tom: *lifts pill bottle* You left this at my place. Thought you might need it.

Lori: *smile fades* ...Right. *snatches bottle* Um, it's okay I got a new prescription. Thanks for...driving a thousand miles though.

Scott: *clears throat* What was your medication doing in his house?

Lori: *scratches head* Why don't you come in and have a coffee or something. *runs away*

Tom: *steps up*

Scott: *stares at Tom*

Tom: You gonna let me through there, Scotty?

Scott: *steps aside*

Tom: *walks in*

Kitchen

Lori: *fiddling with coffee pot*

Tom: *walks over*

Steph: *smiles, points* TOM!

Tom: *looks at Steph*

Scott: *narrows eyes*

Lori: *pours coffee*

Tom: If you must know, I was actually planning on heading to Jersey to see some friends. Your place was just a pit stop along the way.

Lori: *hands over cup*

Tom: *looks down at cup* This isn't hot.

Lori: You're hot.

Tom: *lifts head*

Lori: NO, no. I...*covers eyes*

Scott: *frowns*

Tom: *places cup on counter* It was very hospitable of you to invite me into your home and offer me something to drink but I need to get back on the road. Maybe I'll...see you later.

Lori: *looks at Tom*

Tom: *smirks*

Lori: *looks down at floor, smiles*

Scott: *lifts brows*

Tom: It's nice to see everyone around and kicking.

Steph: *sits up in chair, waves* BYE TOM!

Tom: *waves*

Scott: *glaring*

Tom: I'll show myself out. *turns around, walks away*

Lori: *runs over to table, sits*

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: HEY. You called your *covers Steph's ears* slutty boss 'perky' in front of me, I'm allowed to act like a hormonal idiot sometimes too.

Scott: *walks over, sits at table*

Lori: When we were separated, I crashed at his place for a couple weeks because the house was being rented out to this film company, not to mention they shut off the water and electricity and Tom was the only person I knew close enough to work and believe it or not, we did friend things like going to movies and watching television. I didn't have a support system unless you count my ever-disappointed father, my nutty mother or my extremely busy uncle who had enough to deal with at home.

Scott: *sips coffee*

Lori: And YES okay, he's a very nice looking guy but nothing happened.

Scott: *staring at Lori*

Lori: *rolls eyes* Fine, almost nothing happened. I was lonely, depressed, desperate and not thinking clearly so I kissed him. I just...I needed a man, okay? Yeah. I can admit that. But he stopped me and he told me I couldn't stay there anymore so I managed to con my uncle into letting me stay with him until I could call you up to get rid of that damned white elephant in that pricey neighborhood.

Steph: *pushes Lori's hands* Momma, stop it. *rubs ears*

Lori: Believe me, Scott. That's everything.

Scott: *places cup on table*

Lori: ...Except he helped me pack up my stuff to ship up here and he kissed me. BUT aside from that, nothing happened.

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Okay, you're peering into my soul again and it's creeping me out.

Scott: Stephanie, living room.

Steph: *hops off chair, runs into living room*

Lori: ...Are you mad?

Scott: Do I look mad?

Lori: ...Is this a trick question?

Scott: You're here. It's pretty clear to me what you want.

Lori: *nods* I want this. This family. You.

Scott: But he's also here. He drove a thousand miles to see you.

Lori: That's not my problem.

Scott: No but if you 'see him later' as he previously put it, it might become your problem.

Lori: I'm not going to do anything with him.

Scott: Just be careful, Lori. *stands, walks away*

Lori: What's that supposed to mean?

TBC...............................
 
Oh awww...Speed's being the helpful, doting husband. I do believe some guilt is working there, but hey, take it as it comes, Anni! LOL. Now , if they can just be like this without homicidal lunatics walking around, then that would be just peachy. Notice I said if....

A word to the wise, Lori...DON'T GO and see Tom. If you value your life and love with Scott, you will not go and see this heartbreaker. Yeah, he might be hot and all, but you were without a doubt, insane without your family. Think about that real hard and get back at me...

Wow, that oddly felt like a memo to Lori :D What ever works, lol.

Excellent update!
 
Yeah like Speedfanatic said I'm feelin a little guilt oozing from Speed right now. Just wonding if Anni is gonna continue to eat up the attention shes getting or call him on it. well just have to see. and where is katie anyway has anyone even talled to her? where is she lurkin around at these days! Who is she trying to shot know?

On the flip side!

Why so I he that song take my breath away when Lori sees Tom is at the door! lol! I see Lori running like the wind to Tom to see him later! She has these feelings for him still and I sure Scott can see them! We all know how he feels! Lori Girl you need to make a desition and stick to it because its just gonna be worse in the long run if you don't figure out which one you really want!

Great Update Geni!
 
Holy crap that was a lot to catch up with...

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Why the hell did Katie shoot Anni?!? What is wrong with her?!? And can Katie and Anni get past this?

Actually, they'll probably end up okay, but it'll be something that keeps coming up... "You shot me!" :lol:

Lori totally would kick ass at building stuff, like a deck and a shed. And Scott would be good at keeping Stephanie in line while shopping... :lol:

And Riley came back! Yay! I like her and that she's successful. Did her success actually give Katie a push off the deep end? Interesting...

And Tom's back! That only spells trouble...

Great update! :)
 
Thanks for all the reviews! :D Such an awesome thing to wake up to in the morning. :)

^ Yes, I can definitely see an argument somewhere down the road in the Hummerhome and Anni bringing out the 'YOU SHOT ME' card. :lol:

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Miami, condo, 9pm

Anni: *leaning ear on window* Timmy! Come hear this!

Speed: *walks over* What's going on?

Anni: *giggles* I can hear a 'WOOSH WOOSH'. Almost like the world is passin' us by.

Speed: Those would be...cars passing us by. *grabs Anni's hand* Maybe you'd like to sit for a while.

Anni: Oh no way. I feel great!

Speed: Yeah, I can see that.

Anni: These pills are awesome. No wonder Lori was a drug addict for so long. *sits, twirls around in recliner* WEE!

Speed: *smirks*

Anni: HA! A SMIRK! I SEES IT!

Speed: It's nice to see you so uppity.

Anni: Ah heck, I'm always uppity. OH! LET'S HAVE ICE CREAM FOR DINNER!

Speed: We already had dinner.

Anni: Then let's have SEX!

Speed: *stares at Anni*

Anni: What, you want a kid or not?

Speed: Not while you're under the influence of something.

Anni: I HAVE AN IDEA! *stands, grabs Speed's arm* Let's get a bunch of Josh's old Britney Spears albums and play them backwards so we can write down all the subliminal messages. But you'll have to do the writing 'cause that there's rainbows coming out of that pen.

Speed: What the hell did they give you? 'Shrooms?

Anni: You tell me, mister copper man.

Speed: I'd rather not know.

Upstairs, bedroom

Anni: *lying over bed, upside down* Wow...either it's all the blood rushing to my head but everything is turning a slight shade of red.

Speed: *scrubbing floor* Maybe you should sit up.

Anni: *snickers* I rhymed.

Speed: Yes you did.

Anni: *sits up* WHOA. *holds head* Everything's jelly up there. Kinda tingly. Hey why dontcha get over here on the bed?

Speed: Because I'm busy cleaning up the shampoo from the carpet. You thought the area rug was a dog.

Anni: I always wanted a dog. HEY can we get a dog?

Speed: You've already got one.

Anni: *stares at Speed*

Speed: *looks at Anni*

Anni: HAHA! YOU MEAN YOU! *starts giggling* 'CAUSE YOU'RE A MANWHORE!

Speed: *sits on bed*

Anni: *grabs Speed's cheek* But a CUTE manwhore.

Speed: *nods*

Anni: *hugs Speed* I just know we're gonna be together forever.

Speed: *smirks* I hope so.

Anni: *gasp* LET'S GO BAKE MUFFINS! *jumps out of bed* I CALL THE SPRINKLES! *runs downstairs*

Speed: *smiles*

Brooklyn, alley, 11pm

Lori: *gets out of car, shuts door*

Tom: *walks over* Could you have picked a more secluded spot or what?

Lori: Why are you here?

Tom: To visit friends.

Lori: You have no friends.

Tom: *shrugs* I used to.

Lori: Yeah when you were buying from them. I wouldn't consider my dealer my friend. And what the hell was that back there? Thanking me for my hospitality.

Tom: Your 'hubby' looked like he wanted to stab me in the eye with a plastic fork. I figured I'd be polite and not give him one more reason, y'know?

Lori: *sits on hood of car* So what are you really doing in town? I doubt it was to make sure I was takin' my meds.

Tom: I need a loan.

Lori: *lifts brow* ...A loan. A loan of what?

Tom: What the hell other kind of loan is there?

Lori: You came up here to ask me for money? What for?

Tom: Don't need to know.

Lori: Um...I have the right to know where my money's going.

Tom: Scott's money.

Lori: *frowns* Same money.

Tom: It's kind of an emergency.

Lori: *grabs Tom's arm, rolls up his sleeve*

Tom: *pulls arm away* I'm not using.

Lori: *grabs Tom's head, tilts it up*

Tom: *pushes Lori's arm* Stop it. It's not for me.

Lori: Is it for you invisible friend Sven?

Tom: *frowns* I don't have an invisible friend.

Lori: Oh. Okay so he wasn't the one watching the porn on your bigscreen then.

Tom: ...I lied. But hey I had you thinking I was schizophrenic for a week.

Lori: *smirks*

Tom: Anyway, that's not the point. I need 10 grand.

Lori: *frowns* How do you expect me to get that kind of cash on short notice AND, might I add without Scott finding out? By the way, I still don't believe it's for someone else.

Tom: Lori, it's important.

Lori: Go to a bank.

Tom: Yeah right and get stuck paying them interest? I don't think so.

Lori: What makes you think I won't charge you interest?

Tom: You don't know how to count worth shit.

Lori: *frowns* You're supposed to be less of a jerk.

Tom: Can I have the money now?

Lori: No. I'm not giving you a dime until you tell me where it's going and I want an agreement written on paper so I can sue your ass when you skimp out on payments.

Tom: It doesn't matter where it's going as long as you know it's helping someone and it will be.

Lori: Who?

Tom: Either get out the cheque-book or run back home to your bright and perfect future.

Lori: You don't get to demand. And besides, there's no way you're getting anything tonight anyway.

Tom: This person needs help.

Lori: *laughs* I am NOT paying off your junkie friends' bills nor am I sending them to treatment so forget it. You want to help them? Give them a business card to the nearest happy farm and delete them from your phone because trust me, you'll be a lot better off.

Tom: *nods*

Lori: Do you think that just because you proclaimed your undying love for me forever ago, it means I'll drop everything and do your bidding?

Tom: You're all I have.

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Tom: It's true.

Lori: No. It's a line. You're perfectly capable of befriending other people. It just so happens I'm the only one who'll put up with your garbage because I'm just as annoying.

Tom: *lowers head*

Lori: Go home, Tom. *jumps off car, opens purse* And get off my car.

Tom: *stands*

Lori: *gets into car, shuts door*

Lori drives away

Tom: *sighs, rubs eyes*

TBC.........................
 
:guffaw: Anni....was sure enjoying those painkillers...whoo...yeah...might want to hide those suckers in the future...

Of all things hilarious though, the one dark spot was when she cast a doomed omen over everything...We all know what that is,...yes... this...

Anni: *hugs Speed* I just know we're gonna be together forever.

That's the equivelent of saying : "I've got plenty of time for that..." and WE ALL KNOW WHERE THAT LEAD TO.... I'm just saying...she just probably put a nail in that relationship's coffin...I know, I'm such a fatalist. But...I'm going to hold out hope on these two.

Really...Lori . JUST . DOESN'T. LISTEN. It was in her best interest not to meet Tom. In an alley. At 11 pm. Nothing good is going to come out of that meeting. Because as soon as she gets home, Scott's gonna want answers...Interesting to see what she's gonna say.

Awesome update,...and before going back to work too! Phenomenal!!
 
^^ I agree... that line seems slightly ominous... haha And Anni on painkillers is freaking hilarious!!! :lol:

I wonder what's really going on with Tom... is he going to be okay?

Great update! :)
 
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