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Dead on Arrival
OMG! I JUST READ ON FACEBOOK THAT PAYTON IS BACK!!!!! NOW MAC WILL HAVE TO CHOOSE: THAT GIRL IN THE GREEN COAT, PAYTON, AND OF COURSE OUR FAVORITE: STELLA!!! Go to the link if you haven't and comment who you want him to choose:
http://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=106002236105757&id=369775813243
Okay, so I decided to do a story on it.
Who will he choose?
I DO NOT OWN CSI:NY OR THE CHARACTERS! Enjoy.
Who will Mac Choose?
It was a normal day at the NYPD. Everyone was doing fine. Then Mac heard a knock at his office door. He looked up to find Payton. "WTF" He thought. He waved her in. "Payton? Is that you?" "Hi Mac" They stared at each other,neither beliving that this was really happening. Then he heard someone else enter his office.
"Hey Mac" Aubrey said
"Aubrey?" Mac asked
"Who?" Payton asked
" Hey Mac I..wtf?" Stella said as she walked in.
"Stella?" Payton asked
"Payton?"
"Who?"
"Who the hell are you?" Payton asked Aubrey.
"Who the hell are you?" Aubrey repeated to Payton.
"And who are you?" Aubrey asked Stella.
"Im Stella. Say it with me Stel-la."
They all turned their heads to Mac.
"Maacccc" Stella said.
"Honeyyy" Aubrey said
"WTF!" Payton and Stella said at the same time after Aubrey spoke.
"Oh god" Mac groaned.
"Mac, who's it gonna be?" Payton said.
Mac looked up staring at the three woman who had their arms crossed in front of them. All glaring angrily at them.
"uhhhh" Mac said.
"Well we'll give you sometime. You guys wanna go chat at the Deli?"Stella said. "Sure they both replied. "See us when your ready Mac" Payton said as they left.
"Oh dear god." He thought and thought.
(the 1st part of his brain is bold, the 2nd part is in italic and the 3rd is underlined)
"Pick Stella"
"Uhh obvesouly he should pick Payton!"
"Payton? Stella?WTF you guys! "He should pick Aubrey!"
"STELLA!"
"PAYTON!"
"AUBREY!"
"SHUT UP!" Mac told his brain. He did a heavily sigh, then finally made up his mind. He headed to the Deli.
Meanwhile at the Deli:
"I think Mac will pick Stella."
"What? Me?"
"Yes, I think so because, well, promise you both wont tell"
Aubrey and Stella nodded as Payton continued.
"Me and Mac were..you know...in bed, and he...." Payton looked at the floor. "He.. screamed Stella's name" Payton said looking at the floor.
Aubrey and Stella had their jaws litterally hitting the floor.
Just then Mac walked in. "Hi" mac said nervously. Payton glared at him, while Stella and Aubrey's mouth's were still open. "What?" Just then"
'SMACK!' "PAYTON WTF!" Mac said as she slapped him. "WHY?!?!!?!" She said before leaving. Mac sat down. "Ima go." Aubrey said. "Stella's the one Mac. I know you know it." She whispered in his ear before leaving.
"Stella what's up with your jaw?" Mac said forcing Stella to snap out of her daydream. "Oh uh nothing, something that Payton told me."
"Ok-ay then. Look, I...I finally came to my senses. Your the one Stel" Mac said forcing her to look up. "Maccc.... you sure?"
"Yes... I love you Stella" Mac said as he place his hand on her hand.
"I love you to Mac. You know, my place is closer." Stella said with a grin.
Mac's face lit up. "Check please!" Mac said.
As they were in the cab:
"Good going Mac! Told you! Oh yeah, im right! I'm the AWESOME part of this brain!"
"AH GO TO HELL! HE SCREAMED STELLAS NAME, WHILE WITH PAYTON!"
"HAHA!"
So Mac and Stella started their new future as a couple.
The End.
It would be cool if this really happens. But were not that lucky.
Im on ff.net and im smackfan13.
http://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=106002236105757&id=369775813243
Okay, so I decided to do a story on it.
Who will he choose?I DO NOT OWN CSI:NY OR THE CHARACTERS! Enjoy.
Who will Mac Choose?
It was a normal day at the NYPD. Everyone was doing fine. Then Mac heard a knock at his office door. He looked up to find Payton. "WTF" He thought. He waved her in. "Payton? Is that you?" "Hi Mac" They stared at each other,neither beliving that this was really happening. Then he heard someone else enter his office.
"Hey Mac" Aubrey said
"Aubrey?" Mac asked
"Who?" Payton asked
" Hey Mac I..wtf?" Stella said as she walked in.
"Stella?" Payton asked
"Payton?"
"Who?"
"Who the hell are you?" Payton asked Aubrey.
"Who the hell are you?" Aubrey repeated to Payton.
"And who are you?" Aubrey asked Stella.
"Im Stella. Say it with me Stel-la."
They all turned their heads to Mac.
"Maacccc" Stella said.
"Honeyyy" Aubrey said
"WTF!" Payton and Stella said at the same time after Aubrey spoke.
"Oh god" Mac groaned.
"Mac, who's it gonna be?" Payton said.
Mac looked up staring at the three woman who had their arms crossed in front of them. All glaring angrily at them.
"uhhhh" Mac said.
"Well we'll give you sometime. You guys wanna go chat at the Deli?"Stella said. "Sure they both replied. "See us when your ready Mac" Payton said as they left.
"Oh dear god." He thought and thought.
(the 1st part of his brain is bold, the 2nd part is in italic and the 3rd is underlined)
"Pick Stella"
"Uhh obvesouly he should pick Payton!"
"Payton? Stella?WTF you guys! "He should pick Aubrey!"
"STELLA!"
"PAYTON!"
"AUBREY!"
"SHUT UP!" Mac told his brain. He did a heavily sigh, then finally made up his mind. He headed to the Deli.
Meanwhile at the Deli:
"I think Mac will pick Stella."
"What? Me?"
"Yes, I think so because, well, promise you both wont tell"
Aubrey and Stella nodded as Payton continued.
"Me and Mac were..you know...in bed, and he...." Payton looked at the floor. "He.. screamed Stella's name" Payton said looking at the floor.
Aubrey and Stella had their jaws litterally hitting the floor.
Just then Mac walked in. "Hi" mac said nervously. Payton glared at him, while Stella and Aubrey's mouth's were still open. "What?" Just then"
'SMACK!' "PAYTON WTF!" Mac said as she slapped him. "WHY?!?!!?!" She said before leaving. Mac sat down. "Ima go." Aubrey said. "Stella's the one Mac. I know you know it." She whispered in his ear before leaving.
"Stella what's up with your jaw?" Mac said forcing Stella to snap out of her daydream. "Oh uh nothing, something that Payton told me."
"Ok-ay then. Look, I...I finally came to my senses. Your the one Stel" Mac said forcing her to look up. "Maccc.... you sure?"
"Yes... I love you Stella" Mac said as he place his hand on her hand.
"I love you to Mac. You know, my place is closer." Stella said with a grin.
Mac's face lit up. "Check please!" Mac said.
As they were in the cab:
"Good going Mac! Told you! Oh yeah, im right! I'm the AWESOME part of this brain!"
"AH GO TO HELL! HE SCREAMED STELLAS NAME, WHILE WITH PAYTON!"
"HAHA!"
So Mac and Stella started their new future as a couple.
The End.
It would be cool if this really happens. But were not that lucky. Im on ff.net and im smackfan13.
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