This Crush Ain't Goin Away

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  1. beautifuldisaster

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    Another song fanfic. I don’t know if I like this one as much as the other ones but you can let me know! The song is called Crush by David Archuleta. I thought it described them really well!!! Hope you enjoy!

    *(Natalia hangs up her phone)
    *(Eric hangs up his phone)
    ~~I hung up the phone tonight something happened for the first time

    *(Sits up in bed)
    *(Sits up in bed)
    ~~Deep Inside it was a rush, what a rush

    *(Getting ready for another day at the lab)
    *(Getting ready for another day at the lab)
    ~~Cause the possibility that you would ever feeling the same way about me is just to much, just to much

    *(Getting into her car)
    *(Getting into his car)
    ~~Why do I keep running from the truth, all I ever think about is you

    *(Pulling out of driveway)
    *(Pulling out of driveway)
    ~~You got me hypnotized, so mesmerized, and I just got to know

    *(Driving on the road)
    *(Driving on the road)
    ~~Do you ever think, when you’re all alone, all that we can be, where this thing can go, am I crazy or falling in love, is it real or just another crush

    *(Pulls into the parking garage at the lab and sees Eric)
    *(Pulls into the parking garage at the lab and sees Natalia)
    ~~Do you catch your breath when I look at you

    *(Pulls into a parking place)
    *(Pulls into a parking place)
    ~~Are you holding back like the way I do

    *(She sits in her car with her head down on her steering wheel
    *(He sits in his car with both hands on the steering wheel and his head back against the headrest)
    ~~Cause I’m trying, trying to walk away, but I know this crush ain’t going away

    *(She gets out of her car and walks up to the lab)
    *(He watches her get out of her car and watches her walk up to the lab)
    ~~Goin away

    *(He walks into the break room and finds her eating her lunch)
    ~~Has it ever crossed your mind

    *(He sits down and eats lunch with her and they talk about their day)
    ~~When we’re hanging, spending time girl, are we just friends or is there more, is there more

    *(After their done they both get up to go throw away their food but she slips and falls onto him and he catches her)
    ~~See it’s a chance we’ve gotta take

    *(He’s holding onto her waist while she has a grasp onto his neck and their eyes are locked onto eachother’s)
    ~~Cause I believe we can make this into

    *(He inches his head forward until his lips meet hers)
    ~~Something that will last, last forever, forever

    *(He whispers all of this into her ear)
    ~~Do you ever think when you’re all alone, all that we can be, where this thing can go, am I crazy or falling in love, is it real or just another crush, do you catch your breath when I look at you, are you holding back like the way I do, cause I’m trying, trying to walk away, but I know this crush ain’t going away

    *(As she lets go of him and walks out the door and he watches her)
    ~~Going away

    *(She’s walking down on the beach)
    ~~Why do I keep running from the truth all I ever think about is you

    *(Eric runs out out the door)
    ~~You got me hypnotized, so mesmerized

    *(Natalia stops walkin)
    ~~And I just got to know

    *(She turns around)
    *(Eric catches up to her)
    ~~Do you ever think when you’re all alone, all that we can be

    *(He laces his hands into hers)
    ~~Where this thing can go, am I crazy or falling in love, is it real or just another crush

    *(He puts her hands around his neck and he puts his hands around her waist)
    ~~Do you catch a breath when I look at you

    *(They start dancing)
    ~~Are you holding back like the way I do, cause I’m trying, trying to walk away, but I know this crush ain’t going away

    *(As he leans down to kiss her in the sunset)
    ~~This crush ain’t going away
     
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  2. mjszud

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    I like how you do your fics, very interesting & different, plus Im a huge music lover so I enjoy reading these!!

    & all the more it's EDeN & you know I love that!! :p Great job!
     
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  4. beautifuldisaster

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    thank u! i didnt really know if anyone would like this one cuz i just kinda put it together in like 5 min so.... but i loved that song and i thought it described them very well and i knew i had to do one so..... but thanx again and im glad yall enjoyed it!
     

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