The unexpected child, will she tear them apart? D/L

ericisacutie

Lab Technician
Well I think I have one more good fic in me to finish this week off, I hope y'all enjoy!
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Do you believe in love that's 15 years old????
Or will it just end another?????


Chapter 1

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It was about 6:30pm when down town NY city started getting really busy. It was a Friday night, so all the CSI's knew it was going to be a busy night, so Mac had everyone working.
But what they all didn't know was that the night was going to be longer then they thought, especially for one CSI.

Danny Messer had been going steady with Lindsay Monroe for about six weeks now. Mac told them when they hooked up they wouldn't ever be able to work cases together again, or while they're together anyway. They agreed, they just wanted to be with each other. But anyway, Danny was in the lab with Adam looking through the scope at hairs they had to try and match from an earlier case that day.

Mac and Stella were in the autopsy room looking at their DB they also had from earlier.
Lindsay was out in the hall behind the counter getting ready to head out for a knew case with Detective Don Flack, but she ended up getting stopped. She was waiting for Flack to show up so they could leave, but when he finally did they still couldnt.

He came strolling down the hallway with a girl next to him. He had hold of her left arm because there was some sort of cut on her other arm. So Lindsay saw them and she stepped out from around the counter.
She looked at Flack not knowing what she should say, whether it should be hello, oh no, or what's going on??

So Flack looked at the girl, and then back at Lindsay and he said, "I found her out back snooping around the back door to the lab."
The girl looked at Lindsay as she said, "I wasn't snooping. I swear, I just couldn't get up the nerve to come in here."

Lindsay looked at the girl and said slowly, "Um, what can we help you with?"
The girl looked up at Flack with a half scared look on her face, then she said, "I was just wondering if, Mr. Danny Messer worked here."

Lindsay nodded yes and started smiling. Flack rolled his eyes because everyone knows Danny and Lindsay both just start smiling when the others name is mentioned.
So she smiled and said, "Yeah, he does. Do you know him?"

The girl blinked as she said, "Yea, well not really, but sort of. Can I see him please?"
Flack raised one eye brow to Lindsay, then he said, "Does Danny know you?"
She gulped at the sound of Flack's voice, then she said in sort of a stutter, "I-I, don't know."

Flack wasn't sure about this girl, but Lindsay saw she was hurt, so she took her away from Flack and had her sit down.
She handed her a towel to hold on her arm and then she said, "I'll go get him for you, what's your name?"
"I really rather not say, if that's ok."

Lindsay nodded and then made Flack walk with her down the hall to get Danny.
She turned the corner and walked into the room where Danny was and said, "Danny, there's a girl out in the lobby wanting to see you."

Danny looked up at Lindsay and Flack and he said, "A girl? What kind of girl?"
Lindsay knew it would only take moments for Flack to start smarting off, and she right.
"Well I don't know Messer, the kind that has long hair, painted nails, lacey clothes exc."

Danny put a fake smile on his face as he started a fake laugh. "Hahaha, funny. What's her name?"
"She wouldn't say, she just said she wanted to see you."
He nodded and then stood up and said, "Okay then, Adam I'll be back in a second."

So Lindsay and Flack stayed and Danny walked down the hall toward the lobby. He turned the corner to where he now saw a young girl sitting in one of the lounge chairs.
She looked down the hall and saw a man walking toward her. She reconized him, but she just wasn't so sure he'd her.

So Danny got right to the edge of the lobby and the girl stood up. He walked right in front of her and he stuck his hand out as he said, "Hi, I'm Danny, how can I help you?"

The girl didn't say anything, she just stuck her hand out and met his. As they gripped each others hands Danny looked down at her arm but didn't say anything. She looked up at Danny, he was a few inches talker than her, bt not many.
She still didn't say anything, but Danny did.

"What can I do for you?"
She didn't say anything, then he said, "What's your name, and how old are you?"
The girl looked around Danny's shoulder to see if anyone was coming, when she saw that it was clear she looked back up at him and said, "Do you know an Anna Ship?"

Danny got a confused look on his face, then he said, "No, I don't think so, why?"
She closed her eyes, then she reached toward her neck and pulled a locket out from around her shirt callar. She un latched it and handed it toward Danny.

He was very confused at that time, he had no idea who this girl was or why she asked to talk to him. So he gently took the locket from her and looked at it. About ten seconds later he opened it.
His eyes glued themselves to the picture that was in it.

The girl standing there in front of Danny said softly, "Now do you rememeber?"
There was a picture of a younger Danny and woman in the picture with the date 1991 in it.
He finally seperated his eyes from the locket and back up at the girl as he said, "I remember Anna, I met her sixteen years ago, but haven't heard from her in 15 years. Where did you get this?"

The girl closed her eyes, then she said slowly, "I-i'm Samantha Ship."
Danny's confused look turned back into a normal look as he said, "Oh, she had a daughter, she must have gotten married to John afterall."

The girl shook her head to the side as she said, "No, she never got married. Mr. Messer, my last name isn't truely Ship. I never knew my father, so I just kept my mom's name.
But, my mom was in a really bad accident, and she past away about a year ago."

"Oh, I'm sorry. She was a great person."
"Yea, she was, for a while anyway. But now I want to change my name back to what my dad's name was. She told me who he was right before she died, I just haven't been able to bring myself to do it yet."

Lindsay came back from around the corner, but stopped when she saw that Danny and that girl were still talking.
She started to turn back around, but stopped herself when she heard Danny say, "Well what's your real last name then?"

The girl stared Danny right in the eyes, then she said, "Messer."
Danny's eyes widened and jaw dropped, as did Lindsy from way back. The girl didn't say anything else, she just stood there face to face with Danny.

And Danny couldn't bring himslef to say anything.
But he did have thoughts running through his mind.
Since the last time he saw his old girlfriend Anna was 1992, and she never got married. And this teenagers name is Messer, he couldn't bring himself to think it, but it was true, he was a father, and he never knew anything about it.

Lindsay turned back around and slowly just walked away tears building in her eyes.
She had no idea that he had a daughetr, and she didn't know that he didn't know either, so she just completely flipped inside.

And Danny...... Danny just stood there frozen, thinking to himself what he had really done 15 years ago...........

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TBC

I'm sorry if it was too long :(
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

No it wasn't too long...interesting start. More soon!
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Thanks MacsGirlMel!!!! You're always so nice

Chapter 2

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So as Danny just stood there frozen in his spot staring at what he was just informed was his daughter, he still couldn't say anything.
The girl Sam also just stared at Danny, but she didn't make eye contact. Her hands started shaking to Danny's reaction. He wasn't saying anything, not one word, and he didn't even look like he was happy he had a daughter, more like dissapointed.

But as teh seconds past, Sam felt like she should leave, so she looked up at him for just enough time to say, "I'm sorry Mr. Messer, I should go."
She turned around and started walking for the door, but Danny finally snapped out of his trance and touched her arm so she would turn back around and face him again.

She did, but she didn't say anything. Danny was still trying really hard to say something, it just really just wouldn't come out. But once Sam got ready to start walking away again Danny pulled his scrambled thoughts together and said, "Wait."

She looked at Danny, then Danny started shaking his head to the side as he said, "I-I wish this wasn't so hard to believe for me, but it is."
Adam started coming around the corner now too, so Danny grabbed Sam arm as he said, "Come on, let's talk somewhere else."
So they went outside and Danny started speaking again.
"I'm not sure what to say right now. Are you sure I'm the right person Sam?"

The girl nodded slowly as she said, "A-afraid so. I'm really sorry, like I said before, I just found out a year ago when my mom died. I've been living here in the city since then, we used to live in Nevada, Las Vegas, but she wanted me to find you, so I promised her I would."

Danny nodded slowly, and then he said, "Okay, let's try and start again. My name is Danny Messer, I'm 34 years old, and I'm a crime scene investigator. And I'm pretty hungry at the moment, how about you?"
She grinned slightly and nodded yes.

So Danny looked back at the door, and said, "Here, come with me."
He led the girl to his car as he unlocked it and said, "You wait in here, this is my car, I have to go tell my boss I'm taking a few minutes off. Do you drive?"

The girl slowly shook her head to the side as she said softly, "N-no Sir, I haven't been taught yet."
Danny nodded and then said ok. Sam got in his car and sat there as Danny assured her he would be back in a minute. SO he walked away and back into the lab.

When he got in there the first person he ran into was Mac.
He stopped next to him as he said, "I have to take a few minutes off Mac, I'm taking this teenager out to eat so we can talk, I can't explain right now, just please let me, I really need to."

Mac nodded as he said, "Sure Danny, just be back by 9 ok?"
"For sure." Danny said, then he kept walking. He was going back to the lockers in the back to get his coat and wallet.
But then he ran into one more, and that person for sure wasn't thrilled to see him.

Lindsay sat by the lockers looking in hers as Danny walked up and said, "I told Mac I have to leave for a little while Babe, I should be back in an hour or so."
Lindsay stood up like a shot throwing her keys to thr floor as she said in almost a scream, "What else haven't you told me Danny?"

Danny looked confused, then he said, "What do you mean?"
"You know damn well what I mean, when were you going to come around and tell me you had a daughter? Huh?"

Danny shut Lindsay's locker as he said with a tone now too, "Whoa there missy, back it up. How do you even know when I'm not even sure yet?"
"I heard her say she was your daughter, and face it Danny she looks just like you. So I can't believe you didn't tell me."

Danny threw his arms out to the side as Lindsay started to push past him, then he said, "I don't know what you would have liked me to do Montana, because I had not a slightest idea that I could have a daughter, and I was just hit with this, what did you want me to do?"

Lindsay snapped back around toward Danny as she said, "You knew, how can you fool around with someone and not know?"
Danny's mouth dropped thinking what else could go wrong tonight. Then Lindsay shoved him aside and rushed out of veiw. He looked back trying to say something else, but nothing would come out, and on the count she was already gone it would have been him just talking to the wind anyhow.

So Danny walked back out the front door and toward his car parked out in the parking lot. On his way to his car he started kicking at the ground and cursing to himself in complete anger, and Sam watched the whole time, knowing it was all her fault.

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TBC
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

I hope she comes to her senses. Bad Lindsay, bad *spanks her* rofl

more soon!
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Such a great story. Poor Lindsay....
I hope you post more soon :)
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Thanks guys, please keep reading!

Chapter 3

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When Danny finally made it to his car he was very angry, he tried to hide it from the girl, but it didn't work very well.
Sam had hold of her arm still because it was still bleeding.
Danny looked over at her, and then said, "What happened?"

She didn't say anything, but she did look at Danny's face.
He stared at her and then said, "I can't help you unless you tell me, did you fall? Or cut yourself on something?"
Sam blinked slowly at Danny, then she looked at her arm as she said, "No..... It wasn't me."
Danny's eyes widen as he said, "Who did this to you?"

She stared back at the CSI building, then she said trying to get off the subject, "Is she your wife?"
Danny shook his head as he said in another anger tone, "No.. Just a friend..."
He put the car in drive and turned out on their main street. The whole way down the street no one said anything, but then as Danny pulled into the hospital parking lot Sam looked over at him and said, "No! You can't bring me here."

Danny parked the car as he said, "You're loosing a lot of blood, now come on, we need to get it looked at."
Against the girls will they walked into the hospital and Danny saw a nurse he knew very well. He smiled at her as he said, "Can you get one of the doctors to look at this for me, she's been bleeding for around an hour now."

The nurse smiled as she said, "Of course Mr. Messer."
So the nurse and the girl started walking,
Sam looked back toward Danny as she walked away, Danny knew she didn't want to go to the hospital, he just didn't know why.

So a few minutes later he sat down in the lobby and then Mac walked in. He didn't know why, but he looked pretty serious.
So he walked over to Danny and sat down next to him.
He pulled out a peice of paper as he said, "Danny, where is that girl you were with earlier?"
"She's back being seen right now, why?"

Mac looked down at the paper as he said, " I know this is hard for you Danny, but it's true. She really is your daughter."
Danny got a confused look on his face as he said, "How do you know?"

Mac looked down as he said, "She's in the system Danny, and her DNA matches your."
Danny closed his eyes as he said, "What should I do Mac, I can't take care of a kid, I have hard enough time taking care of myself."

Mac put his hand on Danny's shoulder as he looked forward and saw Sam walking out from around the corner with the same nurse that had taken her back a few minutes ago.
So Danny and Mac stood up. The nurse walked Sam over to them as she said, "Mr. Messer, I need to talk to you a minute, in private."

Danny looked at Mac, then Mac looked down at the girl as he said, "Hey Sam, my name is Mac Taylor, I work with Danny. I want to show you something, do you mind if you come over here with me for a minute?"
She nodded and then walked away with Mac.

The nurse looked at Danny as she said, "Um, Mr. Messer. How do you know Sam?"
Danny swallowed hard as he said, "I just met her a couple hours ago."
"Well.... We found some things, beside the cut on her arm. Which I'm guessing she didn't tell you what it was."
Danny shook his head no. Then the nurse said, "I'm pretty sure it's from a knife. She didn't want the doctor to look at her, she said something to the fact she's had bad experiences with male doctors."

Danny looked over toward Mac and Sam, then he looked back at the nurse and said, "A knife."
"Yes, and there's more. I found bruising all over her shoulders, and......"
Danny closed his eyes as the nurse said, "She has cancer, Leukemia."

Danny felt the insides of his body start to shake, though he just met this kid, he felt something for her, she was his after all.
So he shook his head to everything the nurse said, then he slowly walked toward Mac and the girl.
When he got over to them he smiled softly and said, "Mac, we're going to go grab a bite to eat, then we're going to swing back by the lab. Do me a favor ok?'
Mac nodded and said, "Yea?"

"Make sure Lindsay is still there, Stella too."
Mac nodded confused, but said ok.
He then smiled at Sam as he put his hand on her shoulder and said goodbye.
Danny could see the look in her face, it was pain from the bruises, but she didn't dare say anything. So Mac left, and then Danny said, "Come on, let's go. I want to talk to you."

So they went and ate Sam barely saying anything the whole time, then they got back into the car and headed back to the lab. When they arrived Danny took Sam and went into the break room where Lindsay and Stella was. He looked at Stella and said, "Hey, can I talk to you for a minute outside?"

Stella nodded and then said sure. Danny then looked at Lindsay trying not to get too angry he said, "Can you sit in here with Sam a minute, we'll be right back."
Lindsay didn't say anything, but did what Danny asked.
So Danny and Stella walked outside, and Danny stared through teh window for just a second as Lindsay started talking with Sam............

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TBC
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

I hope he talks to Lindsay soon. Interesting twist with the cancer. More soon!
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Chapter 4

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Stella noticed Danny staring in at Lindsay and Sam, she softly touched his arm and made him jump practically to the ceiling. HE whipped his head around as she said, "I'm sorry Danny, I didn't mean to scare you."
Danny closed his eyes as he let out a big breath and said, "Did Mac tell you?"

Stella nodded slowly as she said, "Yea Danny, he did..... I'm really sorry."
Danny shook his head as he said, "Does Linds know?"
Stella nodded once more as she said, "He explained everything to her, she now knows you didn't know. She just doesn't understand."

Danny looked back at Lindsay, then to Stella as he said, "I need you two to get Sam to tell you what happened. I know she won't tell me, because I am....."
Stella whispered softly, "What Dan?"

He shut his eyes as he gulped and said, "Beacause, I'm a guy."
Stella nodded and then looked through the window. She then smiled at Danny and opened the door again.
Danny stayed out to where he could hear what they were saying, but he stayed out of view. Stella smiled at Sam as she walked in, she pulled a chair up as she said, "What have you guys been talking about? And I'm Stella by the way,I also work with Danny."
The girl nodded, then she looked at Lindsay and said, "School."

Stella looked at Lindsay and said confused, "What Sam?"
She looked back at Stella as she said, "We've been talking about school."
Stella smiled as she said, "Ohhh, you're in hugh school right?"

Sam nodded, then she said, "I know that's not what you both really want to hear, is it?"
Lindsay was waiting for Stella to talk, and so she did.
"Hey Sam, we just want to help you. Danny told me you didn't let the doctor look at you, and you have bruises on your shoulders. Can you tell us what happened?"

Sam looked down as she said, "I-I can't...."
Stella looked at her and said, "Why not Honey? I've been through something like this before too. Did a man hurt you?"
She looked back at Lindsay, then she said, "IS it okay if I just tell you and then you tell everyone else?"
She then looked at Stella and said, "I'm sorry Miss Stella, but......."
Stella smiled and said as she stood up, "It's okay sweetie, Lindsay is a good listener, go ahead, I'll be right outside if either one of you need anything."

So Stella left and hung by Danny as Lindsay smiled at Sam and said quietly, "You know Sam, Danny is really blessed that you came into his life today, you know why?"
She staretd shaking her head, then she said, "Why? He didn't look very pleased to meet me earlier."

Lindsay smiled as she said, "HE's just scared, just like you are."
Sam nodded, and then she said, "One of my foster parents, he was always really mean. To me and my foster sister, his biological daughter."

Lindsay gulped now too at thinking about what she was about to hear. She tried to stay strong, so Sam continued.
"This morning, when I woke up. My sister wasn't there, I knew our foster dad was mad at us yesterday. That's how I got the bruises. HE's really really strong, and I didn't fight back. My sister did though, she was always really strong, but ever since I lost my mom, and only knew that DAnny worked here, I couldn't find the courage to come talk to him and tell him about me.
But I guess I should have........... My sister died this morning, her dad......"

Danny was about to faint outside the door, he was even starting to get weak in the knees. HE felt something for this kid, and he knew what she'd been through before she even said, "He cut me as I tried to escape, he used the same knife on her..... She just didn't make it, and to think.. She was his real daughetr, and she had to lie about it every day saying she met really bad bully's on her way to school. So now......."

Lindsay teared up as Sam said, "I have to ask you something."
Lindsay wiped her eyes still trying to stay strong, she then took a deep breath as she said, "Yea?"

Sam looked out the window not seeing Danny or Stella standing outsdie, she looked back to Lindsay and said, "He cares a lot about you, I can tell from when he just said your name. So I guess you know or not, will he except me for me, his daughetr, or just another victom?"

Lindsay looked down, then Danny stepped into veiw, Sam didn't see him as she said to Lindsay, "I only have up to a year left, the cancer is too strong.... But I would really rather spend it with my dad, a dad that won't be dissapointed with me......."

Danny slowly pushed the door open, and then Sam and Lindsay both looked up at him. He walked right over in front of Sam. He took her hand as he said, "I'll always be here for you Sam, and though I just met you, I can promise you I will do what ever it takes to amke up for lost time."

Sam stood up too, then she looked Danny is his eyes as she said, "Promise me one more thing Danny."

He looked down at Lindsay, and then back up at Sam as he said, "Anything."
Sam looked at Lindsay as she said, "Don't let her go, she needs you too. Because even though I just asked her about you as I'm sure you heard outside, before she even said anything I knew her answer. SO don't let her go, you're a hero, and we all need you bad."

Danny smiled to Sam, then Sam leaned up and gave her dad a hug around the neck as she whispered, "Mom loved you too, she really did. And she would want you to be with Lindsay, she really would."

Sam pulled away from Danny and then smiled to Lindsay as she stood up. So Sam walked out of the break room leaving just the two of them alone. Lindsay was still crying, then she walked in front of Danny as she said, "I'm sorry Danny, Sam's right. I do need you, I really do."

Danny smiled very slowly, then he took her hand and said, "I'm sorry too, you were right. And though all of this has happened so quickly. There must have been some how Sam knows so much about me, what do you think?"

Lindsay smiled as she said, "It's the light you shine, everyone can see it, I promise you that."

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TBC one more time, what do you guys think??? Should I make the last chapter??
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Wow, I just read the entire story posted so far, and I must say that I liked it a lot! How sweet are they? Oh, D/L loving moments make me so happy :) You really should write the last chapter, I would like to know what end you are going to give this beautiful story ;) And the cancer thing was really well thought ;)
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

thanks guys!!

Last chapter

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Danny couldn't help but put his biggest smile on after he heard Montana say that to him. He had the most beautiful teeth and smile Lindsay was thinking.
Danny leaned in closer to Lindsay, both of them smiling hugely now, he went in the rest of the way and they started their very romantic but not private kiss.

Sam was just outside the door with Stella, so she moved back to the window and saw as they started to kiss.
She could tell they really cared about each other, and she thought how sweet it was. She had never had her first kiss before, so she wasn't sure what it was like. She always told her mom before she died that girls her age should have their first kiss, but no once ever came along, that's what she explained to Stella as they were both now watching Danny and Lindsay together.

Moments later Mac and Flack walked up. As Flack walke dup beside her he looked down at her and said softly, "Hey, I'm sorry about earlier. I had no idea who you were, so I'm sorry if I was a little rude to you."

Sam smiled then she looked up to Flack and said, "No, it's ok, it's good you take your job so seriously, like Dad and Lindsay do."
Flack and MAc looked through the window as Sam giggled seeing they were still lightly kissing.

Then Mac laughed as he said, "Yea, they sure are taking their jobs seriously."
Sam stayed smiling as she knocked lightly on the window and Danny and Lindsay turned and saw everyone standing at the window watching them, as soon as they looked at everyone they all started clapping.

Danny and Lindsay both turned red as they staretd laughing too.
Then they walked over to the door and went out there with everyone. Everyone started giving Danny a harder time then Lindsay, so Lindsay managed to pull Sam away for a second. She looked at her and said, "I'm glad you found Danny Sam, he already loves you."

Sam leaned up and hugged Lindsay around the neck as she said, "Yea, he does you too."
Lindsay smiled, and then went back over to everyone else. Sam stayed away for a minute as she watched the whole CSI team laugh and have a good time. Then Danny looked over toward her and broke away from everyone. He walked right up in front of her as he said, "I'm sorry Sam..."
"About what?"she asked.

Danny took her locket out of his pocket as he latched it back around her neck and said, "I might have had a small idea that your mom was pregnant. I was so scared though that she might be, that that's when she left."

Sam looked back over at Lindsay as she said slowly, "She didn't tell me that, but I do know I felt something for you before I ever even knew about you."
Danny smiled as he said, "Yea, I did with you too. Cause even if you dont believe it, and from the way I was acting earlier I can't really see how you can, but...... I've always loved you, from the minute I first thought I wanted to have a daughter."

Sam smiled as she looked down, then she reached in her pocket and pulled out a ring. Danny looked at it verey closely as he said, "What is this?"
She opened his hand and gently put it in his hand with a tear in her eye. She then looked back over at Lindsay as she said, "Mom gave this to me right before she died. She said to me, 'Sam, when you find your father, make sure he has this ring to give to your new mother.'

"So I promised her I would, even before I met you and knew you liked someone as much as Lindsay. Cause I figured if you weren't already married I might have to hold on to this for a while longer, but I think you should already give it to her. And make the promise to her and that ring. That you will always be there for her no matter what."

Danny stared at the ring as he started nodding his head. Then he smiled at Sam one more time as he leaned over and gave her a gental hug and said, "I promise."
Sam closed her eys as she said up by his ear, "I love you Daddy...............

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As the next year past Danny got to know his daughter a lot better. And he gave Lindsay the promise ring and another ring..... That's right, he purposed to her on Sam's 16th Birthday. And the whole CSI team was there to witness it.
Sam got to have three dances that night. One with Uncle Mac, sweetie Flack and her Dad Danny.

She still never got that first kiss she wanted to have before she past away, but she realized she got a lot more instead. A huge family! Friends, a dad, and new mom. And even though Lindsay would never replace her real mom, she was still pretty close to filling her shoes, and Sam was glad.

As Danny and Lindsay visited Sam's grave on their one year aniversery, Danny bowed his head as he said, "Thanks to my two girls, I will always have everything I'll ever need. Sam and Lindsay are my whole world, and they always will be/........

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The End...............
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

that is just so sweet ... but i really wish sam didn't die ... she coulda always gone into remission .... *tears welling in eyes* You are a really great writer, and I think you should definitely write another fic soon.
~JC~
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

^^^Thanks sooo much^^^ :)
I'm glad you liked it. if you check on page 2 in fan fiction you should find another one by me called,
"Look at Me and just keep the faith."
Weird name, but it's also D/L.
Thanks again for the kind words, I love to write, and even at 14 I'm glad people like my writing!
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

Aww....I also wish she'd gotten better but still it was a nice fic. *sniff* You're good at 14...Heck, I'm 25 and still can't get the ideas from my head to the page half the time lol
 
Re: The unexpected child, will she tare them apart? D/L

My fics are pretty good but they tend to be heavily NC-17 so I tend not to post them too much .... I use to have one that was a grissom sarah shipper but i kinda ran out of ideas and it died. I am 17
 
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