The night that changed everything

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  1. Smackfanforlife

    Smackfanforlife Dead on Arrival

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    I really didn't know what to call it. I'm getting low on ideas. But anyway, just a little story that i made up. So enjoy. :D


    The Night That Changed Everything

    It was around 8:30 at night at the NYPD. Half the workers were already home. The only 3 people who were left, besides other lab techs who i dont care about, were Mac,Stella,and Danny. Mac actually decided to go home. Just as he pushed the 'Lobby' button on the elevator, he heard Stella. "Hey Mac. Hold the elevator." She said as she ran. Mac used his arms to hold open the doors. "Wow your strong" She said as she got in. "Tell me something I don't know." He said as he pressed the button again.

    A few seconds later, they saw the lights flash. Then the elevator came to a complete stop. "Well this is just great." Stella said as she pushed the emergency button. She pulled out her cell phone. "I got service, I'll call Danny" She said. Mac nodded.

    "Messser"
    "Hey Danny"
    "Hey Stel, what can i do for ya?"
    "Well me and Mac are stuck in the elevator"
    "You and Mac?"
    "Yes"
    "stuck in the elevator"
    "Yes!"
    "Alone?"
    "YES!!"
    "OOOOOO"
    "Don't play with me Danny!"

    Mac couldn't hear what Danny was saying, but he wanted to know. Stella leaned against the elevator wall, still on the phone, facing Mac.

    "Ya gonna kiss him?"
    "What?! No why would I do that?"
    "Well come on Stel, remember our conversation 2 days ago?"
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    2 Days Ago:

    "Come on Stel, just say it and I'll stop" Danny said as he tickled Stella in her office.
    "No, I...I...I..dont love Mac..."

    A Few Minutes Later:

    "ALRIGHT! I ADMIT IT! I LOVE MAC! PLEASE STOP!"
    "Boom." Danny said as he stopped
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    "Danny, that wasn't fair." She said looking at Mac shaking her head.
    "You love Maaacc. You love Maaacc" Danny said. Stella's face became red, and she and Mac just stared at each other.

    "Do NOT Danny!"
    "Aww come on Stel, We know he loves you back. And I bet your blushing"
    Stella's face became redder as she avoided eye contact with Mac, and looked at the floor.
    "I'm NOT blushing Danny"
    "Are to"
    "NO!"
    "LIAR!"
    "DANNY!"
    Stella whispered into the phone:
    "If you DON'T get us out, I will LIE and tell lindsey that you tell people about your $ex life"
    Danny gasped
    "YOU WOULD'NT DARE! Do you KNOW what Montanna will do to me!? I'll be in the hospital for a month!"
    "Try me"
    "Okay okay I'll get ya out ASAP."
    "Thank you Danny" Stella said ever so sweetly
    "Yeah yeah"

    They hung up. "trust me Mac, you dont wanna know"

    A Few Minutes Later:

    "Wanna Play 20 questions?"
    "I guess. Im not gonna argue, im to bored." Mac said.
    "Ok, did you have feelings for another woman, when you were dating Payton?"
    "Stella..."
    "Mac..."
    Mac sighed.
    "Yes"
    "ooooo. Ok, do you love one of your friends?"
    "Stella, too personal."
    Stella gave Mac the puppy eyes.
    Mac sighed again.
    "yes"
    Stella's eyes went wide, and she slowly formed an evil smile on her face.
    "Uh oh."
    "Who.."
    "No"
    "AW COME ON MAC"
    "Stella...."
    "Please?"
    "Just wasted another question."
    "Why do you do this to me?"
    "And another one. Now you have 17 left."
    "Damn you."

    *Ding* The elevator door opened. "Finally" Mac said.

    "Good, your both still dressed." Danny said.
    "What?" Mac asked looking at the two.
    "Oh nothing nothing. Shut up Danny"
    "Okay... See you to lovers tomorrow. Good luck tellin' him Stel."
    Danny whispered, thinking that Mac didn't hear.

    "Tell me what?"
    "Uh... nothin... Well bye Danny"
    "But."
    "DANNY!"
    "Alright. See you two tomorrow." He said leaving.
    "I'll tell you tomorrow...." Stella said.
    "so, wanna go to my place, have somethin to eat?" Stella asked as the walked out the building.
    "Sure"
    "Looky looky!" Danny said as they walked to Mac's car.
    Stella gave Danny 'the look' and he felt like doing this:

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    "IM SORRY! IM SORRY! I'LL LEAVE! PLEASE STOP WITH THE LOOK! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" As he ran away.
    _________________ ___________________________________

    "Alright you to, I wanna know what's going on, and NOW"
    Stella and Danny looked at each other.
    "Stella loves.."
    "DANNY!"
    "He has to know."
    Stella took out her phone, and pressed the number 3 for Lindsey.
    "WOAH WOAH! I'm sorry! Look Mac, I gotta go, she's gonna make Montanna do something to me, and on your next case, I'll be the DB and Montanna will be the suspect going to jail. Bye!" Danny said as he ran to his car.
    Stella put her phone away.

    A few minutes later they reached Stella's place. They ate, then decided to watch 'Mall Cop'

    "So, who do you love?" Mac asked. Stella's face went a little red.
    "Oh, just some guy, but were really good friends so...." Her voice died out
    "hmm mm.." Just then Mac got an idea.
    He stared tickling Stella.
    "Tell me and I'll stop."
    "N..N...No...."

    A few Minutes Later:

    "Okay okay I give.. It's you... hahahahahahahaha. Please...ahha..s..ahha.stop..hahahaha"
    Mac stopped. Then he gave Stella a kiss on her lips. They kissed and kissed then went to be to...ya know...

    epi:

    2 years have passed since then. And Mac&Stella were married, and had 2 kids. (same as my other stories: Mac Jr,and Ashley)
    They lived happily ever after...

    Okay so It wasn't little. I hope you enjoyed it. It's probley gonna be a little while til my next one, I'm getting a little low on ideas. :(
     
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2010
  2. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    nice work :)
     
  3. Smackfanforlife

    Smackfanforlife Dead on Arrival

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    Thanks. :D
     

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