THE BACHELOR (CSI Franchise version)

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I'm Baaaccck!

Thats right. I have been looking for new fresh ideas, and I was thinking of writing romantic comedy, and then it hit me, I had this great idea once, so why not have a go at it again - That's right THE BACHELOR is BACK and it's HOT!

But but before we begin all of the fun, let me just take you on a tour of our Bachelor mansion. It is located in Los Angeles,California - The mantion opens up a beautiful view of the Pacific Ocean.

And so here it is..............

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And this is the view from the back........

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And this is the suites that the bachelors will be staying at, they will be sharing rooms, two people per room.......

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And the bathroom......

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The pictures are linked due to their size.


I will return for more updates to stay tooned...........
 
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And now, our bachelors and bachelorettes......


Don Flack - An NYPD detective. Flack is a homicide detective with the NYPD, known for both his dry wit and his determination to hunt down suspects.

The bachlorettes that he has chosen:

Abigail - 28 years old, Customer service Rep.

Haley - 30, Doctor, M.D.

Emilia - 30, police officer.

Keira - 29, and is a Travel manager.

Grace - 31, works in Marketing.

Danny Messer - Third level Investigator from Staten Island, NY.
Danny has displayed a tendency to follow his intuition when solving a case.

The bachlorettes that he has chosen:

Madeline - 29, Retail Sales person.

Lily -21, Model.

Krystal - 27, Advertising.

Adrianna -29, artist. Her work is well known.,and has recived awards.

Hannah - 23, Columnist.

Eric Delko - is the fingerprint, tires and drug identification expert of the Miami-Dade Crime Lab, as well as their underwater recovery expert.

The bachlorettes that he has chosen:

Sophie - 30, perfumer.

Caitlyn -30, Financial Manager.

Isabella - 28, waitress.

Kylie - 26, product Developer.

Emily - 22, Fashion.

Nick Stokes - his first three years out of college in the Dallas Police Department, then transferred to the Dallas crime lab, spending one year as CSI level 1 before transferring to the Las Vegas crime lab. He specializes in hair and fiber analysis.

The bachlorettes that he has chosen:

Isabelle - 35, Translator.

Leah - 27, make up artist.

Sophie - 30, successful attorney.

Gabriella - 26, Childcare.

Caitlyn - 30, graphic Arts Design.




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EXT.Los Angeles, California.

VARIOUS CITY.

Woman: Hello, My name is Kirsten Gallaghe,

And I'm your host for "The Bachelor".

And today we meet our first Bachlelor - His story

takes us all the way to Yonkers, New York. Detective Don Flack

descended from a long line of police officers. And after 10 years of serving

in the force, this bachelor is ready to settle down.

Cut to interview...

Don Flack: My name is Don Flack and I'm from Yonkers,New York.
I have been working for the law enforcement for 10 years,now.

Cut 2:

Do I consider myself a romantic...? Um..sometimes...I can be.

I like the idea of romance and spending quality time with a person. Smiles.

Kirsten: Today Don meets his first date - Abigail, a 28 year old Customer

service Representative.

Cut to Interview...

Abigail: My name is Abigail, I'm 28 years old, and I am a Sales

representative. I would describe myself as outgoing person,fun.

Cut 2:

On the first date, um, probably just a casual conversation over coffee.

Kirsten Gallaghe: Now, its time for their date...

EXT. BACHELOR MANSION - NIGHT.

Beautifully lit garden outside the mantion. Gazeebo.

Don is waiting for his date to arrive.

Shortly, Abigail arrives in a beautiful yellow silk dress (classic style) Don

greets her.

Abigail: Hi, I'm Abigail.

Don : I'm Don.

You look very beautiful.

Abigail: Thank You.

So I've heard you are a detective.

Don: Yeah, 10 years, now.

Abigail: Wow, you probably have encountered a lot of things during that time.

It's a dangerous job.

Don: Yeah, there have been a few close cases. I have been hurt on the job.
But at the same time, I love my job, and getting hurt is part of the
process.

Abigail: Wow. It's amazing how you are able to keep going, very brave.

Don: How about you?

Abigail: Well, my job is not as dangerous.(Both laugh) I'm a Sales Representative at a company. So, I have to be creative, come up with unique ideas and work with people.

Don: I work with people too, except they have a criminal record. It's interesting how much you learn about people having a job like this. People have the most unbelievable motives. Some are just plain weird. Makes going to work exciting...

Both laugh.
 
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Abigail: So what do you usually do during your time off?

Don (laughs): I don't remember the last time I had one of those.

Abigail: Awww...

Don: Sometimes, I stay at home, other times I do charity events.

Abigail: That's nice.

I usually I spend my time at the mall,Or take Marvin for walks.

Don: Marvin?

Abigail: Yes, Marvin my dog, a golden retriever.(Laughs) You didnt think

he was a person did you?

Both laugh.

Don: Pfft, Nooo.

Abigail: Do you own pets?

Don: No.

Abigail: You probably don't have time - right?

Don:Yeah. So - how about we go for a walk.

Abigail: I'd love that.

They walk out of the gazeebo arm in arm.

Abigail: It's a beautiful night.

They walk through the garden that is lit by nighlights and a full moon.

They arrive back at the mantion, Don, takes her front of the bachelorette.

Abigail: I had a nice time.

Don (Smiles): Me too.

He leans in to he a good-night kiss on a cheeck.

Abigail: Goonight.

Don: Goodnight.

They part ways.
 
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EXT.BACHELOR MANTION - NIGHT.

INT. Danny/Don dorm.

Danny standing in front of a mirror deressed in blue shirt and jeans.

Don opens the door and walks in.

Danny: Hey, back so soon?

Don: Hey.

Danny: So, how was the date?

Don: It was pretty good.

Danny: Listen, I'm going downstairs to the bar for a beer,

wanna come with?

You can tell me all about your date.

Don: Sure.

Both Leave.

INT. Bachlorette House.

Girls are in the main lounge in their PJ's, talking. Abigail walks in.

Maddeline: Hey.

All: Hey!

Isabella : Sooo...how was it?

Emily: Is he cute?

Abigail: He's a good looking guy.

Gabriella: Alright!

All laugh.

Caitlyn: How about some details........

Abigail: He's from New York, he's a detective.

Lily: Cool....Does he have any tatto's.....?

Abigail: Uhmm...I'm not quite there yet.

he's a nice guy, genuine.

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INT. MANSION BAR.

Danny and Don are sitting beside one another with beer, talking.

Danny: Tell me about Abigail...?

Don: She's a sales Representative at some big company.

And she has a golden retriever named "Marvin".

Danny: So what, you guys talked K9 the whole time?

Both Laugh.

Don: Nah, Danno.

She's a nice girl, were just starting out slow.


Danny: Yeah, guess so.

Don: So, youre going on your date tommorow night.

Danny: Yep. Although I don't why I came here at all.

Don: Uhhh..to meet girls, score a date.

Danny: I thought I had something in New York. Ya know.

Don: Lindsay?

Danny: I don't know, It's like I wanna be with her, but she doesn't wanna be

with me.

Don: Well, It's her fault. Not yours. Like you said she's the one that doesent

want to be with you.

As for the reason why youre here......to have fun, to meet someone, and forget

about the stuff that happened in New York.

Danny:Yeah, youre right. (Danny raises his beer glass) To new beginnings ...

Don: To new beginings.

Danny: Cheers.




TBC..........
 
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Sorry It took me so long............

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EXT.BACHELOR MANTION - MORNING.

Danny, Don and Nick are in the kitchen area.

Danny is behind the counter making breakfsat, meanwhile Don and Nick
are eating cereal att the table.

Danny: Nice way to start the mornin', huh, Don?

Don: How much beer did you have last night?

Danny(Smiles): Why? Think I'm hung over on beer.

Don: just sayin'.

Danny: You said a lot of things that made sence,ya know.

Don(nods in agreement): So who's your lucky date for tonight?

Danny: Madeline, I think thats her name. You know,they don't tell you

much.

Don: It's not too bad, keeps things inteeresting. If there is anything I

need to know abouit her - I wanna hear it from her.

Danny: You always play the truth card, eh?

Don: Call me old fashioned but........

Nick interrupts..

Nick: I think its a good way to start a relationship, No?

Isn't that the idea anyway, You start with the right foot.

Danny: Wooow, he speaks. Laughs.

Don: are you going on a date tonight?

Nick: Yeah, I am. With Isabelle.
 
Danny: Not bad. Some of us get to hang out -others get to sweat their

first date out.

Don: Don't hurry with that theory Danno, youre in the same boat.

Danny: Not worried about it. Were in a nice place, don't have to pay for

dinner, just keep the conversation simple & casual.

Nick: So youre here just to play the game ?

Danny: Well, Its not like I have to marry the girl, a girlfriend, maybe.

Are you actually here for Mrs. Right?


Nick: No, But I keep my options open, you never know just might meet the right one.

Danny: You know, I never figured you for the romantic type.

Nick: Well thats because You should never judge a book by its cover.

Anyhow......I'll catch you two later.

Nick gets up and leaves.......

Don: Huh......Someone here is actually here for a reason.

Danny: What, you agree ?

Don: I don't need to tell you. Eventaullay we have to settle, science isn't all there is.

Danny: I've known you for a long time, Don. But I swear sometimes you throw a curve ball, and........
 
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