It´s my first fanfiction. I would like to read and reply, because english is not my first language. I try to explore new worlds. Thanks.
******** Prologue *******
The down the events passed in the episode of the 6ª. Season (6.10 Still Life). Grissom and Catherine enter in home, are looking after all of the sides finding trails. ....
CW: It is difficult accept the death whose itself loves.
GG: 'Yeah', mum gave presents of native to the dad, after death of him. It put under the tree and of morning... the paper was all kneaded... and the sweater or the tie would be in the cupboard.
Catherine looks at the Grissom as that frightened, he is speaking of itself.
CW: That age you had in the epoch?
GG: Nine.
CW: A little boy. I am going to begin for the room of the Karen.
And begins it leave, then Grissom continues the history.
GG: It was a professor of botany..
Catherine itself return and looks at him.
GG: Arrived of the school in a humid and hot day, and puied to bed in the sofa, I watched TV. My mother led a soft drink but did not obtain wake up-him. Nobody explained me the reason.
Catherine looks at the Grissom, nothing speaks. The scene is cut here.
**** Chapter 1 ******
They were called for attend a homicide, an infant was found in a deserted road by a walker that passed. He linked for the police and Brass was one of the first it arrive. It linked for the Grissom and asked that someone of the team went there, as Nick and Greg were working in a case of homicide in a hotel, Cath and Warrick in a black magic involving homicide suspicion, Grissom decided to go and called Sara for go joined. It was not prepared for what would go to see.
They were joined in the car of him, nothing spoke. Came down joined and they were walking in the direction of the Brass.
"The walker found the boy there is more or less 2 hours, be finding unlike kinds flowers. When it saw, ran up to road and of the public telephone and linked for us. "–It spoke Brass.
Sara was to first it arrive, saw a boy of approximately 8 to 9 years, short black hair, had the strange way turn head. There was a stone nearby she, apparently, had beaten the head and died. If it went alone that, was with the trousers lowered to the knees and there were signs of rape. She gulped, hated who want that went the culprit of that. Grissom was walking soon behind Heals, when saw the boy, staunched sudden.
It looked a ‘deja vu’, everything that he is going to conceal inside itself even came to surface with that scene. And it saw of news with 9 years and half, expecting mother in the door of the school, when a strange one approached saying that his mother was in the hospital and asked for go seek-him.
He believed and gone with the strange one, that looked a boy of not more of 21 years. He entered in the car and the strange one led for a deserted road, he well that tried to leave of the car but the bolt did not open for inside interest of the passenger. He I get frightened but thought that would be everything well been stayed of mouth closed.
But done not it stay, when the strange pair the car, held him and came from back, removed, at once, the pants and the short of the boy Griss. The strange one was fortress too for fight with him, well that the boy Griss tried but the strange one held his throat and said that otherwise stopped to fight he would break the neck of him.
Griss equal and the strange one raped in the car, after satisfied itself, opened the door and played Griss for outside of the car. There was a stone nearby where the strange one played, was clear and he can see before of to be played that were far from the highway, he beat the head and dismayed.
When woke up was dark, he was all sore, crying raised, tidied its short and pants, and crawled up to road.
Everything this came the mind of Grissom before him arrived in the body. He loosened the suitcase that always carried and began to floor for backwards.
"Hey Brass, you be able to have us called before, is not Grissom?" – It Heals speaking and when looks at Grissom, he is ashen and walking for backwards. "Grissom, what is happening? ".
In this hour, Grissom dismays and everybody run for attend him.
******** Prologue *******
The down the events passed in the episode of the 6ª. Season (6.10 Still Life). Grissom and Catherine enter in home, are looking after all of the sides finding trails. ....
CW: It is difficult accept the death whose itself loves.
GG: 'Yeah', mum gave presents of native to the dad, after death of him. It put under the tree and of morning... the paper was all kneaded... and the sweater or the tie would be in the cupboard.
Catherine looks at the Grissom as that frightened, he is speaking of itself.
CW: That age you had in the epoch?
GG: Nine.
CW: A little boy. I am going to begin for the room of the Karen.
And begins it leave, then Grissom continues the history.
GG: It was a professor of botany..
Catherine itself return and looks at him.
GG: Arrived of the school in a humid and hot day, and puied to bed in the sofa, I watched TV. My mother led a soft drink but did not obtain wake up-him. Nobody explained me the reason.
Catherine looks at the Grissom, nothing speaks. The scene is cut here.
**** Chapter 1 ******
They were called for attend a homicide, an infant was found in a deserted road by a walker that passed. He linked for the police and Brass was one of the first it arrive. It linked for the Grissom and asked that someone of the team went there, as Nick and Greg were working in a case of homicide in a hotel, Cath and Warrick in a black magic involving homicide suspicion, Grissom decided to go and called Sara for go joined. It was not prepared for what would go to see.
They were joined in the car of him, nothing spoke. Came down joined and they were walking in the direction of the Brass.
"The walker found the boy there is more or less 2 hours, be finding unlike kinds flowers. When it saw, ran up to road and of the public telephone and linked for us. "–It spoke Brass.
Sara was to first it arrive, saw a boy of approximately 8 to 9 years, short black hair, had the strange way turn head. There was a stone nearby she, apparently, had beaten the head and died. If it went alone that, was with the trousers lowered to the knees and there were signs of rape. She gulped, hated who want that went the culprit of that. Grissom was walking soon behind Heals, when saw the boy, staunched sudden.
It looked a ‘deja vu’, everything that he is going to conceal inside itself even came to surface with that scene. And it saw of news with 9 years and half, expecting mother in the door of the school, when a strange one approached saying that his mother was in the hospital and asked for go seek-him.
He believed and gone with the strange one, that looked a boy of not more of 21 years. He entered in the car and the strange one led for a deserted road, he well that tried to leave of the car but the bolt did not open for inside interest of the passenger. He I get frightened but thought that would be everything well been stayed of mouth closed.
But done not it stay, when the strange pair the car, held him and came from back, removed, at once, the pants and the short of the boy Griss. The strange one was fortress too for fight with him, well that the boy Griss tried but the strange one held his throat and said that otherwise stopped to fight he would break the neck of him.
Griss equal and the strange one raped in the car, after satisfied itself, opened the door and played Griss for outside of the car. There was a stone nearby where the strange one played, was clear and he can see before of to be played that were far from the highway, he beat the head and dismayed.
When woke up was dark, he was all sore, crying raised, tidied its short and pants, and crawled up to road.
Everything this came the mind of Grissom before him arrived in the body. He loosened the suitcase that always carried and began to floor for backwards.
"Hey Brass, you be able to have us called before, is not Grissom?" – It Heals speaking and when looks at Grissom, he is ashen and walking for backwards. "Grissom, what is happening? ".
In this hour, Grissom dismays and everybody run for attend him.
