Recalling the Past

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  1. vexus

    vexus Pathologist

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    Disclaimer: Lindsay remembers the past
    Pairings:d/l
    I don’t own these characters, CBS does.

    “Danny, I remember how you gave me a hard time at the zoo and told me to call Mac, Sir”.

    “We both learned that creepy dolls could be a hand-holding lesson.”

    “The name Montana became a whole different meaning.”

    “Walrus documentaries are great coversations starters.”

    “I discovered that experiments are great when done in pairs on a rooftop.”

    “You taught me that fried tarantulas and wasp tamales are actually pretty good.”

    “I learned that phone sex turns you one”.

    “I discovered that football is the way to your heart.”

    “Home may be in Montana, but the wheat fields in New York are great when seen with a partner.”

    “When Aiden was killed, I learned that I’m always a part of the team”.

    “I went to you with the results, and I watched you in pain through the window, but I had your back.”

    “When I was hurt, you comforted me, and calling me Linds made me smile. You gave me a ride, you had my heart.”

    “You took me back to your apartment and you comforted me.”

    “Making love to you opened up my soul”.

    “Walking down the aisle with you, I was your forever.”

    “Watching our daughter take her first steps made you cry.”

    “Hearing the call make me nervous.”

    “Picking out your casket was a bullet straight to my heart.”

    “Our daughter holding the folded American flag close to her heart.”

    “Sitting here, without you is Hell on earth.”


    Lindsay rises from the ground that she is sitting on. She gently rubs the top of Danny’s headstone and places a red rose on top it. Wiping away the tears that have gathered in her eyes, she leans forward to kiss the headstone and walks away, know that she will be Danny soon, real soon.

    The end.
     
  2. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    *sniff sniff* well done but so very sad. *cries*
     
  3. CathStokes

    CathStokes Head of the Day Shift

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    aww, awesome ficcie you wrote there twinv! :D Love it!
     
  4. vexus

    vexus Pathologist

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    Thank you , thank you! You guys get to see it first, I can't get Fanfiction.net to load it up. The site is having difficulties.
     
  5. feenx

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    omg, i love it it made me cry. i need a hug.
     
  6. Cordelia_GRS_Fan

    Cordelia_GRS_Fan CSI Level Two

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    It brought a tear to my eye!! I was smiling the whole way reading that and then when it got to the casket one I actually gasped! lol. That was so sad! *sob* You totally have to write more little fics like this!

    lovelove
    Xx Mia-Sara xX
     

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