Ready, Set, Don't Go

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  1. bethybug

    bethybug Hit and Run

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    Title: Ready, Set, Don't Go
    Author: BethyBug
    Rating: K
    Fandom: CSI:Miami
    Pairing: Slight Natalia/Eric
    Content Warning: None
    Summary: She has to spread her wings too.

    “Daddy, wake up.” Maria Delko jumped on her parents' bed and for a moment Eric felt as though he had been transported back through time. He opened his eyes and stared at her. Her shiny, black hair was brushed into a ponytail and there was make-up on her face. He resisted the urge to tell her to wipe it off, that she didn't need it.

    “I'll be up in a minute.” Eric said, hoping he could put off his daughter's departure.

    “Daddy, I need you to get me to the airport. My plane leaves at ten.”

    “Okay, I'm up.” He said, getting out of bed. “Get out of here and let me get dressed.”

    “Okay.” She left the room and shut the door behind her.

    Eric felt like he wanted to cry as soon as she shut the door. Soon, she would be shutting the car door and getting on a plane to Los Angeles. He wiped the tears that came to his eyes and got dressed quickly before walking out of the bedroom and down the steps.

    “About time you got up.” His wife, Natalia, said, a knowing smile on her lips. “You can't keep her here. She has to spread her wings, too.”

    “Okay, Daddy, I'm ready.” Maria burst into the room, smiling. “Love you Mom.” She kissed her mother on the cheek. “Come on Daddy.”

    The ride to the airport wasn't long enough for Eric because soon they were in the airport's parking lot. He helped get her luggage out. After that was all set, Maria walked to the hallway that led to the plane. He turned to leave but heard his daughter's quick footsteps and turned around eyes.

    “I love you Daddy.” She whispered, giving him a long hug before walking back to the doors and into the plane.

    “I love you too.” He whispered, tears in his eyes.

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    I know it was short but please read and review. Oh and the title is from Billy Ray Cyrus' new song.
     
  2. ladyhunter

    ladyhunter Head of the Swing Shift

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    aaaww that's really sweet

    good job :)
     
  3. bethybug

    bethybug Hit and Run

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    Thanks HHUNTER. I'm glad you liked it. :)
     
  4. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    aww nice :)
     
  5. twiztid4togo

    twiztid4togo Coroner

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    awe that is so sweet and a great story line. I hope there is more and soon. I really like this and it's very well done.
     
  6. bethybug

    bethybug Hit and Run

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    Thanks. I'm glad y'all enjoyed it.
     
  7. Miss_Boa_Vista

    Miss_Boa_Vista Dead on Arrival

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    awwww cute
    super cute
     
  8. bethybug

    bethybug Hit and Run

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    Thanks MISS_BOA_VISTA!
     
  9. SpeedsDaughter

    SpeedsDaughter CSI Level One

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    Very good, and the title suits the storyline. Indeed very cute :) As soon as I saw the title I hurried to read it. I'm such a country music addict :p
     
  10. bethybug

    bethybug Hit and Run

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    Thanks SPEEDSDAUGHTER. And I'm a country music addict too.
     
  11. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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  12. CSIMiamiGurl1988

    CSIMiamiGurl1988 Witness

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    awwww....that's so cute, I hope you add more to it....
     

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