Part 2 Pool Of Body Parts

CaptonMatthew

Dead on Arrival
In part 1 of poll of body parts Max and Steven were about to take a swim in there pool. When the two brothers went out side to have a swim Max find the pool littered with several different body parts.

Capton Brass went back to Nick and Sara and said , hey guy's there has been another lead in the case , I need you both to head out to 1809 Argyle st , we have another 419.

Nick then replied , hold on a second i thought this case went closed captain? Brass replied , well now its just been reopened and you and Sara are the only two who have been working this case. Sara and Nick both hoped in to a car and sped off to the location and knocked on the door. A lady ran out from the back and said , oh thank god you guys are here you wont believe what is in my pool?

Sara said , well thats why we are here Mame. Nick jumped off the porch and followed the lady close behind her in to the back yard. Sara was not far behind nick when both of them got to the gate all they could see was pool full of blood and a few body parts floating in the pool. Sara looked at Nick and said , okay is it just me or is this case starting to become a little to creepy?

Nick replied , I could not agree with you more. Sara walked around the pool several times and then pulled out her gun and said , hey Nick and Captain Brass come here right now. Nick and Brass ran over with there guns drawen.

Brass then walked up to the door of the shed and opened it very slowly , and with out any worrning a flurry of gun fire broke out. Nick and Sara headed for cover behind the lawn table.

Brass dove right behind a tree and with one clean shot , he hit the gunman right in the mid section , and said I guess your fixed now buddy.

Shortly after Ems arrived to take the gunman to hospital. Mean while Greg was trying to get a match from the half finger print that Nick pulled from the Max and Stevens pool. Later that after noon Grissem walked in to his office and started looking over some of the case that his team were working on.

Not longer after Nick and Sara walked in and asked Greg if he had come up with anything? Greg said , yes I did get something but it's not the person who you guy that was taken to hospital?! Sara then said , Okay Greg then who's print is it?

Greg then handed the paper over to Nick , Nick looked up and said , you got to be kidding me right? Greg looked Nick right in the eye and said , I only wish i was joking. Nick then handed the paper to Sara and Sara's jaw dropped after what she saw.

Sara said , okay Greg thanks! Greg said , okay but what do we do now? Nick replied there is only one thing to do! and that is to question Kathern Willows about how her print got on the pool.

Stay tuned for part 3
 
But why not post all your parts in the same thread? They're easier to find that way. BTW Catherine's name has a C in it. My suggestion is maybe to see if you can find someone to look over your story with you, most of us use betas to make sure we're not missing anything. You have a great start here, though :)
 
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