CSINEWYORK000
Lab Technician
Hey Guys! 
I'm back with a new story. Hopefully my writing improved since my last posting.
This fanfiction is not based on any episodes, however, there maybe things in here that are familiar from the previous post, but its not continuation(sp.)
Side Note: I am not a proffessional writer, my writing maybe a bit cut & dry. But there is a lot of action, and a lot of things happening -so hopefully it would be an interesting read.
Comments and suggestion are welcome.
Side Note:2This segment is the beginning of chapter 1,additional paragraphs/segmets will be added later on - this is all one chapter.
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EXT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY
View of STATUE OF LIBERTY.
Downtown New York. Apartment Building.
Sirens wail in the distance.
A NYPD police car turns the corner and speeds down the street.
A half a dozen different police and detective vehicles parked alongside the street,more than a dozen officers stand in the street.
Dective Mac Taylor and his teami investigate a crime in a corporate building - W 75th St. A dead body lies in the supply room.
Mac: This doesen't seem like a typical crime scene...
Stella: but then again - nothing in New York is typical.
Detective Don Flack re-enters the scene.
Flack:Meet Peter Stevens, 40 years old, he's an employee.
Detective Taylor studies the body and the surrounding area.
Mac: COD is a sharp force trauma to the back of the head.
The strange thing is - there is no blood.
Flack:He was likey killed somewhere else in this building and probably dumped in this room.
Stella Yeah, but how do you carry a body through a busy building without any one noticing?
Mac:(Looking up) I think we are about to find out.
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EXT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY.
Crime scene. The team continues to investigate.
Flack: I talked to a few people - and one heard anything, nobody even noticed he was gone.
Stella:Wallet is still in his pocket - everything is intact, I guess we can rule out robbery.
Mac:So we are looking for a more personal motive.
Detective Taylor is interrupted by the ringing of his cell phone
Mac: Taylor.
(conversation)
Alright, we'll be there.
Closes cell phone
We got another crime scene at Columbus and 94th.
Its urgent - we need to get over there. I'll sent Danny to process the scene.
Detective Taylor and the team leave to the next crime scene.Danny meets the team as they exit he building
Detective Danny Messer arrives at the crimescene...and begins to look for clues as to what happened
Meanwhile....
NEW YORK - DAY.
Colombus 94th W.
Apartment building. Police and detective vehicles parked throughout the street,officers are guarding the crime scene.
INT. Apartment building #224.
Three bodies,a family, slain.The body of the mother lies in the kitchen,the body of the father on the couch, and the child in his room.
Stella:Wow,the entire family, and never even saw it coming.
Flack: I spoke with a few officers, victims are related.No one reported any disruption, or violence. I'm going to look more in to it - get some answers.
Detective Flack's phone rings....Name Reads: Elizabeth.
Flack: Flack
Elisabeth:Hey Don, It's Elisabeth.
I called Danny a few times, I didnt notice when he left...
so I called, but he dosent answer.
Flack:He's at a crime scene.He's probably busy
or can't hear it ring....I'll call him find out whats going on.
Elisabeth:I'm starting to get worried.
Thanks Don. Bye.
Both hang up
Suddenly, Detective Mac Taylor's phone rings
MAC: Taylor.
The sound of traffic and Siren in the background
Police officer:There has been an explosion at 75th St W. Fire resque and ambulance are on the way.
both hang up.
Stella:What is it, MAC?
Mac: There has been an explosion 75th.
Flack: That's where Danny is................
TBC...........
I'm back with a new story. Hopefully my writing improved since my last posting.
This fanfiction is not based on any episodes, however, there maybe things in here that are familiar from the previous post, but its not continuation(sp.)
Side Note: I am not a proffessional writer, my writing maybe a bit cut & dry. But there is a lot of action, and a lot of things happening -so hopefully it would be an interesting read.
Comments and suggestion are welcome.
Side Note:2This segment is the beginning of chapter 1,additional paragraphs/segmets will be added later on - this is all one chapter.
-----------------------------------------------------------
EXT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY
View of STATUE OF LIBERTY.
Downtown New York. Apartment Building.
Sirens wail in the distance.
A NYPD police car turns the corner and speeds down the street.
A half a dozen different police and detective vehicles parked alongside the street,more than a dozen officers stand in the street.
Dective Mac Taylor and his teami investigate a crime in a corporate building - W 75th St. A dead body lies in the supply room.
Mac: This doesen't seem like a typical crime scene...
Stella: but then again - nothing in New York is typical.
Detective Don Flack re-enters the scene.
Flack:Meet Peter Stevens, 40 years old, he's an employee.
Detective Taylor studies the body and the surrounding area.
Mac: COD is a sharp force trauma to the back of the head.
The strange thing is - there is no blood.
Flack:He was likey killed somewhere else in this building and probably dumped in this room.
Stella Yeah, but how do you carry a body through a busy building without any one noticing?
Mac:(Looking up) I think we are about to find out.
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EXT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY.
Crime scene. The team continues to investigate.
Flack: I talked to a few people - and one heard anything, nobody even noticed he was gone.
Stella:Wallet is still in his pocket - everything is intact, I guess we can rule out robbery.
Mac:So we are looking for a more personal motive.
Detective Taylor is interrupted by the ringing of his cell phone
Mac: Taylor.
(conversation)
Alright, we'll be there.
Closes cell phone
We got another crime scene at Columbus and 94th.
Its urgent - we need to get over there. I'll sent Danny to process the scene.
Detective Taylor and the team leave to the next crime scene.Danny meets the team as they exit he building
Detective Danny Messer arrives at the crimescene...and begins to look for clues as to what happened
Meanwhile....
NEW YORK - DAY.
Colombus 94th W.
Apartment building. Police and detective vehicles parked throughout the street,officers are guarding the crime scene.
INT. Apartment building #224.
Three bodies,a family, slain.The body of the mother lies in the kitchen,the body of the father on the couch, and the child in his room.
Stella:Wow,the entire family, and never even saw it coming.
Flack: I spoke with a few officers, victims are related.No one reported any disruption, or violence. I'm going to look more in to it - get some answers.
Detective Flack's phone rings....Name Reads: Elizabeth.
Flack: Flack
Elisabeth:Hey Don, It's Elisabeth.
I called Danny a few times, I didnt notice when he left...
so I called, but he dosent answer.
Flack:He's at a crime scene.He's probably busy
or can't hear it ring....I'll call him find out whats going on.
Elisabeth:I'm starting to get worried.
Thanks Don. Bye.
Both hang up
Suddenly, Detective Mac Taylor's phone rings
MAC: Taylor.
The sound of traffic and Siren in the background
Police officer:There has been an explosion at 75th St W. Fire resque and ambulance are on the way.
both hang up.
Stella:What is it, MAC?
Mac: There has been an explosion 75th.
Flack: That's where Danny is................
TBC...........
