Love Hurts (CaRWash - sequel to Match Maker)

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  1. WeWantTOGO

    WeWantTOGO Prime Suspect

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    * 7 months later*
    *At Calleigh's place*
    Ryan: Cal! Hurry up its just mini golf!
    Calleigh: You want me to look good for you?!?
    Ryan: Actually.....
    *Calleigh comes out of the bathroom*
    Calleigh: Don't finish that. Let's go.

    *2 hours and 1 game later*
    Ryan: I won!
    Calleigh: No you didn't, Ryan. You just don't know how to keep score correctly.
    Ryan: You're just jealous that I won and you lost.
    Calleigh: You're such a child.


    *2 weeks later*
    *At Ryan's place*
    Calleigh: Ryan, hurry up. And tell me you're not cleaning again.
    Ryan: Fine, I'm through.
    Calliegh: Good, let's go, I am looking foward to going to a club and hopefully I'll enjoy it this time.
    Ryan: Wait, you have never enjoyed yourself at a club before? It's pretty hard not to.
    Calliegh: Not with you. No. The only fun I had was dragging a drunk you home.
    Ryan: Have you ever drank vodka before?
    Calliegh: No, why does this apply to me never enjoying being at a club before?
    Ryan: Because someone has to stay sober enough to drive home.
    Calleigh: Oh no, Wolfe, you are not getting drunk again. Although you were fun to mess with.
    Ryan: What'd you do to me the last time I was drunk?
    Calleigh: Nothing. So not too much tonight, okay?
    Ryan: Okay. I wonder what Horatio is like drunk.
    Calleigh: Now that's a sight I don't want to see.

    *at the club*

    Calliegh: Now Ryan remember try to lay off the drinks because last time I couldn't even have one because I would be too drunk to take you to the car.
    Ryan: Fine,fine, I won't how about we dance first then?
    Calleigh: This oughta be fun.

    *3 hours, barely any drinks later*
    Ryan: I need alcohol, Calleigh.
    Calleigh: No, you don't. Why don't we go over to my place? Find something to do there.
    Ryan:Okay, let's go, but can I have one drink please?
    Calliegh: No! Your staying sober!
    Ryan:Fine. let's go
    *At Calliegh's house*
    Calleigh: What do you want to do?
    Ryan: Something you won't let me.
    Calleigh: Gosh, you're so immature sometimes, Ryan.
    Ryan: Yet you still love me.
     
  2. aimsavol

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    LOL! They are so hilarious together! Keep up the good work!
     
  3. GunsNRoses259

    GunsNRoses259 CSI Level One

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    I love it, can't wait to read the next chapter...
     
  4. WeWantTOGO

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    chapter 2

    *3 months later*
    *At Calliegh's house*
    *Phone rings*
    Calliegh: Duquense.
    Peter Elliott: Hey Calliegh.
    Calliegh: Peter?!
    Petere Elliott: Yeah. Hey Cal. How have you been?
    Calleigh: I've been good. What about you? And why are you calling me?
    Peter Elliott: Just wanted to talk.
    Calleigh: Oh well I can't talk for long.
    Elliott: Why?
    Calliegh: I have a date with Ryan
    Elliott: Oooh, new boyfriend?
    Calliegh: As a matter of fact yes, so tell me why you called I know you well enough to know its not nothing
    Elliott: My wife left me, okay.
    Calliegh: Ouch

    *Doorbell rings*

    Calliegh: Well, that is Ryan, I will call you tommrrow bye,

    *hangs up phone then opens door*

    Ryan: Hey.You sounded like you were on the phone. Did I interrupt you?
    Calleigh: No. No, I was just getting off when you got here.
    Ryan: Oh okay.
    Calleigh: So you ready to go?
    Ryan: Yeah but first I want to talk.
    Calleigh: Talk? About what?
    Ryan: Well, we have been dating for seven months, and I was wondering, if you would like to move in with me?
    Calliegh: Wow, that is a serious step, I will think about it and tell you at the end of our date, now I really want to go bowling!
    Ryan: Fair enough and you call me a kid?
    Calleigh: You act more like a baby than a kid.
    Ryan: Point taken. Let's go.

    *at the bowling place*
    Ryan: I'm bored.
    Calleigh: You're only saying that because you're losing, Wolfe.
    Ryan: Maybe so, Duquense.

    *the next day*
    Calleigh: So, Ryan, I've been thinking about your offer.
    Ryan:And..
    Calliegh: I would love too and I think its a great idea!
    Ryan:Really that is great!
    Calliegh: So when can I move in?
    Ryan: As soon as you get your stuff together.
    Calleigh: Wow, That's great.
    Ryan: I know. I love you too.
     
  5. GunsNRoses259

    GunsNRoses259 CSI Level One

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    About time that they decided to move it...haa
     
  6. WeWantTOGO

    WeWantTOGO Prime Suspect

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    chapter 3


    *the next day*
    *Ryan's place - moving*
    Ryan: Ow. Ow.Ow. Heavy box.
    Calleigh: That's the lighest one.
    Ryan: What do you keep in these things? Lead?
    Calleigh: Possibly. I'm not entirely sure.

    Ryan: Ha, ha very funny, seriously what do you keep in these boxes?
    Calliegh: Give it to me you big baby
    *Takes it and carries it into to the Hummer with no problem*
    Ryan: How did you get so strong?
    Calliegh: Shopping.
    Ryan: Mybe I should try that.
    Calleigh: Please don't.

    *2 hours and 40 boxes later*
    Ryan: I can't feel my arms. Or my legs. Or any part of my body for that matter.
    Calleigh: Oh shut up. Go to bed if you're that tired.
    Ryan: Only if you come with me.

    *phone rings*
    *both look at their phones*
    Calliegh: It's me. Duquense. Oh hey. Can you call me back I am moving. To Ryan's. K bye.
    Ryan: Who was that?
    Calliegh: Elliott, his wife just left him so he is kind of upset, now let's go to your place so we can unload these boxes.
    *Ryan groans*
    Calleigh: The faster we get done, the faster you can sit down.
    Ryan: Great...


    *1 hour 30 minutes later*
    Ryan: Do not expect me to help unpack all of your 100 boxes, Calleigh.
    Calleigh: I'm not. Now go. I'll finish.
    Ryan: Thank you.

    * Calleigh's phone rings---again*
    Calleigh: Stalker.
    Elliott: I'm not. I just want to talk to you.
    Calleigh: Okay shoot.
    Elliott: You know I've been thinking about some stuff.
    Calliegh: What kind of stuff?
    Elliott: You and I.
    Calliegh: What do you mean their never was an us.
    Elliott: I know, but I always noticed you liked me and I felt like we had chemistry.
    Calleigh: Yeah, I liked you, Peter. But not anymore. I'm happy with Ryan now.
    Elliott: I assume you mean Ryan Wolfe. The guy you used to hate. Right?
    Calleigh: People change.
    Elliott: I always loved you, Cal. Even back then.
    Calleigh: Yet you got engaged and married and didn't so much as tell me. That just about shouts love right there.
    Elliott: In your words, people change.
    Calliegh: I know, but like I said I am happy with Ryan, I have to go finsh moving all these boxes
    Elliott: Okay, but if you change your mind call me.
    *hangs up*
    Calliegh(to herself): Like that will ever happen I love Ryan too much to leave him. Don't I?
    Ryan: Calliegh you okay!?
    Calleigh: Yeah, why?
    Ryan: You were..umm.. talking to youself.
    Calleigh: Yeah I was bored. No one to talk to.
    Ryan: Here I'll help.
    Calleigh: I thought you were tired.
    Ryan: Yeah but I don't want you going all mental on me.
     
  7. GunsNRoses259

    GunsNRoses259 CSI Level One

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    is Calleight douting wheather or not she loves Ryan!! The story chaptre thing is call love hurts. On No.
     
  8. WeWantTOGO

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    chapter 4

    *the next day at the lab*
    *in the morgue*

    Calleigh: Alexx, you in here?
    Alexx: Yeah, sweetie. I'm over here.
    Calleigh: Hey, can I talk to you?
    Alexx: Sure. About what?
    Calliegh: Peter called me yesterday, wanting to get back with me because his wife left him, now I am doubting my relationship with Ryan.
    Alexx: Well, that could definantly be a problem there. Listen, I can't tell you who to chose but I can tell you this, Why do you love Ryan?
    Calliegh: Because, everytime I am with him I feel like I am a kid again, and he is nice, funny, and not to mention hot,
    Alexx: Okay why do you like Peter?
    Calleigh: Well he's nice. He's easy to be around but not extremely childish just good company. He is very genuine.
    Alexx: Like I said, I can't make this decision for you. But I will tell you this: if you do choose Peter, Ryan's gonna get his heart broken badly. Personally, I think Peter's bad news for you and this lab. But it's your decision to make, not mine.
    Calleigh: Okay, thanks Alexx.
    : Alexx: Oh and Calliegh, follow your heart.
    Calliegh: Thanks.

    *Phone rings*
    Calliegh: Why are you stalking me?
    Elliott: Ha ha very funny, so how have you been doing?
    Calliegh: Good if you would stop calling me.
    Elliott: How about I treat you out to Starbucks for lunch, not a date or anything just lunch between two colleagues.
    Calliegh: Sounds fine,
    Elliott: I'll meet you there in 10?
    Calleigh: Okay.


    *at Starbuck's*
    Elliott: So have you thought about what I told you?
    Calleigh: Yes. I think that it's safe to give this relationship a chance being that we both care about each other.
    Elliott: And you're sure about this? I mean what are you going to tell Ryan?
    Calleigh: Yes, I'm sure. And I'll think of something.
    Elliott: Great.
     
  9. xTriggerx

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    WHAT!!!! OMG r u serious! WHY'd she do that! OMg... sorry im freaking a little

    the only thing is there a little OOC but this story is so awsome i dont even care!

    Keep up the great work
     
  10. aimsavol

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    First Calleigh goes mental on the show, and now in the stories too! *runs screaming* just kidding...good work, but please let her realize who's good for her. *begs* Pretty please?
     
  11. GunsNRoses259

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    WHAT!!!! No way, bad Calleigh, don't do that to Ryan, his heart will be broken....
     
  12. that_girl1

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    woah calleigh cannot be serious!:eek:
     
  13. WeWantTOGO

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    chapter 5

    * 1 hour later*
    Calliegh: Shoot! Look at the time, I am supposed to meet Ryan in 10 minutes he wants to show me something specail
    Elliott: So what are you going to tell him exactly?
    Calliegh: Listen, I haven't made up my mind for sure yet, I am going to tell him that I am just hanging out with some old friends and over the week slowly break- up with him.
    Elliott: Okay, I would be mad but this wasn't a date and we aren't going out yet so it's all good.
    Calliegh: Thank you so much for everything, bye!
    *back at the lab*
    Ryan: Where is she?
    Delko: You act she's missing or something, man. Sit down you're making me dizzy.
    Ryan: Well she promised to meet me here like 10 minutes ago.
    Delko: Maybe there was traffic.
    Ryan: Yeah maybe.
    *Calliegh walks in*
    Calliegh: Sorry I am late got stuck in traffic
    Delko: I tried to tell Wolfe that but he didn't listen
    Ryan: Let's go
    Calliegh: So what did you want to show me?
    Ryan: You'll see
    *at Ryan's place*
    Calleigh: What did you want to show me, Ryan?
    Ryan: This. *points to a plant* This is a plant.
    Calleigh: Wow you're smart.
    Ryan: I wasn't done, thank you. Anyway, this is a plant to symbolize our relationship. Our love will die only when every petal of this plant dies so we must water it everyday to keep it strong and growing.
    Calleigh: Ryan, why is the plant moving?
    Ryan: Oh. That's our new puppy. Her name is Rosebud.
    Calleigh: We have a puppy now?
    Ryan: What? Don't you like it?
    Calleigh: Oh I love it.
    *mumbles to herself* What did I do?
    Ryan: What was that?
    Calliegh: How romantic are you?
    Ryan: Thank you. But that isn't all
    Calliegh: It isn't?
    Ryan: Nope, I got reservations at your favorite restruant which we will be going to tonight.
    Calleigh: Oh wow Ryan. You didn't have to do all this you know.
    Ryan: Yeah I know. But I wanted to.


    *later that night at dinner*
    Ryan: Calleigh, what's wrong? You seem a little distant.
    Calleigh: Oh it's nothing Ryan. Don't worry.
    Ryan: Okay.


    *next day at the lab*
    Calleigh: Alexx!
    Alexx: Yes?
    Calleigh: I need help.
    Alexx: What now?
    Calliegh: Trouble with Ryan.
    Alexx: What did he do to you?
    Calliegh: Nothing, except make this decsion even harder on me. He bought me a love plant, a dog and reservations at my favorite restruant.
    Alexx: Well, I can see where that would make you decsion harder, but what is your heart saying?
    Calleigh: I don't know and that's the problem. I love Ryan yet I love Peter.
    Alexx: Calleigh, you're going to have to pick one.
    Calleigh: I told Peter I'd break it off with Ryan.
    Alexx: Well you can't just keep stringing Ryan along like that.
    Calleigh: I know but he'll be crushed when I tell him.
    Alexx: Then break it off with Peter.
    Calleigh: But Alexx, I can't. I think I love them both.
    Alexx: Well, then, I don't know what to tell you which ever one you choose the other one is going to be sad.
    Calliegh: Thanks Alexx.
    *Cell phone rings*
    Calliegh: Duquense
    Elliott: Hey, how about we spend sometime alone tonight and go on a real first date?
    Calleigh: I don't know,Peter.
    Elliott: Well what's up?
    Calleigh: Okay I'll go but what am I going to tell Ryan?
    Elliott: I don't know. Make something up.
    Calleigh: You're not helping.
    Elliott: Just tell him that your meeting some of you college friends
    Calliegh: Fine, but I really need a better excuse than that next time
    Elliott: Next time? I thought you were breaking up with him soon.
    Calleigh: We'll see.
    Elliott: Oh so you're not going to pick between us. You're just going to date us both at once, is that it?
    Calleigh: No. No of course not. I'll do it tonight, okay?
    Elliott: Thank you. I'll see you tonight.
    Calleigh: Okay, bye.
    Alexx: Good luck explaning things to Ryan.
    Calleigh: Don't remind me
     
  14. that_girl1

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    oo Calleigh's a playerette(sp?)
     
  15. GunsNRoses259

    GunsNRoses259 CSI Level One

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    No Calleigh, don't you frickin' loser, ew, i mad, dont know what to say, poor Ryan....
     

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