if you could make a csi spinoff what would it be
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LocardPrinciple
Hit and Run
I was working on a Washington DC idea but I never got it off the ground. With the three Star Trek stories I'm doing, and the novel I'm trying to write, my CSI story kind of took a back seat. I'm now working on a new idea and will post something when I'm ready, but I have no idea when that will be, unfortunately. I'll probably use a backdoor story for the first one though.please write your own CSI story using a city or state that you choose makeup characters decide what their roles would be ballistics,dna,trace substances,medical examiner ect. write your story and post it here to show everyone your creative CSI minds! Have Fun
LocardPrinciple
Hit and Run
I was thinking about it last night and I came up with an idea.
Set in the fictional second city of Apollo, Rhode Island, CSI: Apollo centres around the work of the Fast Response Team of CSIs who cover the entire state by helicopter, speedboat and SUV.
A list of characters will soon appear (I hope) in its own dedicated thread. I have other projects to work on at the moment, but this will happen.
Set in the fictional second city of Apollo, Rhode Island, CSI: Apollo centres around the work of the Fast Response Team of CSIs who cover the entire state by helicopter, speedboat and SUV.
A list of characters will soon appear (I hope) in its own dedicated thread. I have other projects to work on at the moment, but this will happen.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
LocardPrinciple
Hit and Run
There is already a Spin of thread here in the General CSI section
But this is about writing spinoffs not just creating them.
RIPTimSpeedle
Witness
CSI: Los Angeles
Team:Angelina Jolie (Lead Supervisor)Bruce Campbell(Second in command)
Ali Larter (CSI Level 3) Jensen Ackles (CSI Level 2) Chad Micheal Murry (CSI Level 1) Emmy Rossum (Lead dectective)
Anything and everything can happen in Los Angeles the city of angels.
This CSI team is already up and running on their first case right now with the help of the New York team and Miami team.
The Los Angeles skyline shown fron 5 different angles in flashed of the Los Angeles Highways and open dirt valleys.
A long street outside a bunch of large warehouses. Late at night the rain is coming down soaking the red sedan heading down the street towards a metal doorway of one of the warehouses. The sedan's lights are off trying to keep itself hidden in the rain fall. The sedan slowly creeps to a halt mounting the kerb and it's brake lights flashing on for only a few seconds before the handbrake parking light comes on.
Inside the car there is a man in a long dark trench coat and black pants and a grey jumper. As he takes his hand off the handbrake he wipes his wet hand on the bottom of his trench coat. Over the radio the radio caster is talking about the last feature.
RADIO CASTER: Now how about the rain? Still going after an hour and it should continue to the morning. So anyway back to our main piece the latest fossils that date back to the age of the dinouars are going to be going on show from tuesday at the Nature History museum right here in L.A. And now for you listeners this is Bill Withers with Ain't No Sunshine.
Just as the musi begins to play the man leans over and switches the radio off as he pulls his keys out of the car. As he takes off his seat belt his gun holster on his belt is freed. The man glances over at the warehouse door through the rain swept driver's window. He pulls his weapon out. It's a Beretta. He ejects the clip and checks the clip quickly before sliding the clip back into the Beretta and pulls back the top, sliding a bullet into the chamber ready. He flicks the saftey on and slides the Beretta back into his holster as he pulls something out of his pocket. The man opens the glovebox and throws the item inside before shutting the glovebox again.
MAN: I can do this.
The driver quickly gets out of the car and turns locking it. As the rain begins to come down on him he drops his car keys into his trench coat pocket and pulls his grey jumper down to cover the holster.
The man pulls his trench coat collar up and hurries across the street looking round for any witnesses. As he gets to the door he glances back up and down the street then carefully opens the door letting light shine out the doorway into the dark street. He steps inside the brightly lit room.
As the door shuts the rain swept street is plunged back into darkness again. Then there is silence. The silence only lasts a few seconds when suddenly there is two loud bangs. Then silence again with only the rain that can be heard.
The screen goes to black as The Who, The Relay song begins to play as it shows CSI: Los Angeles.
A bright white light is pulled away from the screen and shows the face of Supervisor CSI Amber Donoghue. She is in her late thirties as she is checking over the body with latex gloves on as her curly brown hair just past shoulder blades slips over her shoulder. Her bright blue thin almond shaped eyes scan over the victim. She is both tall and slim but at the moment she is crouched over the body so her tall frame is hidden. Next to her is her silver CSI case.
Amber flashes her pen light torch over the large room with the body not far from the doorway. There is a large stall of boxes on the right hand side wall and a table with cut wires glasses and jars on the left side of the room. Amber is wearing cream coloured pants and a white blouse with a cream coloured waist coat to match with white boots with her weapon holstered on her right hand hip and her badge on her waist coat pocket.
Just behind her there is noise as detective Karrie Symonds enters the room. Karrie Symonds is in her mid twenties with honey blonde streaks in her naturally long brown hair and sparkling blue eyes. The detective is wearing a black pair of pants with white pin stripes and a red blouse with a black jacket with white pin stripes aswell and black high heeled boots. The detective has her Beretta in holster on her left hand hip with her badge on the right side of her belt. Karrie enters looking at Amber as she holds her notepad.
AMBER: Didn't take you long to interview the witness.
KARRIE: He said and i quote I got a call about noise at my warehouse. I came in and found him. So i freaked and called you guys. Sorry girls. End quote. Some help.
Karrie flicks her notepad shuts and slips it into her jacket pocket. Just then two more CSI's enter through the door. A young woman in her late twenties comes in with her white latex gloves on and a silver CSI case. Jean Strawson has long flame red hair down to her waist with Green eyes and dark olive skin. As she nods over to both Amber and then Karrie. She is a CSI level 3 wearing black pants and a white fitted t shirt with a a brown leather jacket on her tall 5'10 frame. Her badge is round her neck and her holster is clipped onto her belt round her back.
Behind her is Stephen Wright with short brown spikey hair and deep blue eyes. He is in his mid twenties and is a level 2 CSI wearing dark blue jeans and a black shirt. His board shoulders helping his shirt fit better. His belt has both his holster and a CSI badge. He is wearing his latex gloves and has a silver case and a camera round his neck.
STEPHEN: Hey ladies. Hey Karrie.
KARRIE: Back at you Ste.
AMBER:You two take the room. I'll work the body.
Both Stephen and Jean both take a side of the room each. Jean heads over and begins to check over the boxes as Stephen begins to check over the table next to Karrie.
Both Stephen and Jean click on their pen lights and begin searching round. Jean spots some white dust on the floor.
She kneels down placing her kit down and pulling out a plastic bag and a small knife. She scraps some of the dust up and slips it into the bag sealing it.
JEAN: I have some white powder here. It doesn't look like drugs but i will know more when i get back to the lab.
Stephen begins checking the wires and looking at the glasses on the table. He spots a couple of finger prints.
STEPHEN: I have a couple of fingerprints here. Might get us a name.
Amber reaches inside the victims trench coat and pulls out his car keys. She turns to Stephen and passes them over.
AMBER: You check out his car. It should be nearby. Let me know what you find.
Stephen takes the keys and nods.
STEPHEN: No worries boss.
Stephen heads ouside and begins to head over to the only car that isen't a police car a red sedan.
Amber turns back to the body and lifts the man's head. There is one round to his spine just below the neck and another round to his temple. The man is the same man from the intro.
AMBER: He was shot twice. He has no ID on him.
KARRIE: In a building like this sounds like a drug deal gone wrong to me.
Amber reaches down the side of his body and feels a holster. She pulls out a Beretta and ejects the clip counting the bullets.
KARRIE: He was packing?
AMBER: And he didn't even get to fire.
JEAN: Ambushed?
Just then Amber's phone goes off and Amber pulls it out her pocket it shows the caller as Stephen.
She flicks the phone open and answers it.
AMBER: Yeah. Right ok. Thanks.
She flicks her phone shut and places it back in her pocket.
AMBER: We have to get the body out of here now before this place is calling with feds.
KARRIE: Why?
AMBER:Our dead body is an F.B.I officer.
Both Jean and Karrie look in surpise at each other.
The rest of the story can be found on this link.
http://talk.csifiles.com/showthread.php?t=56296
And i hope to read your feedback soon.
Thanks
Team:Angelina Jolie (Lead Supervisor)Bruce Campbell(Second in command)
Ali Larter (CSI Level 3) Jensen Ackles (CSI Level 2) Chad Micheal Murry (CSI Level 1) Emmy Rossum (Lead dectective)
Anything and everything can happen in Los Angeles the city of angels.
This CSI team is already up and running on their first case right now with the help of the New York team and Miami team.
The Los Angeles skyline shown fron 5 different angles in flashed of the Los Angeles Highways and open dirt valleys.
A long street outside a bunch of large warehouses. Late at night the rain is coming down soaking the red sedan heading down the street towards a metal doorway of one of the warehouses. The sedan's lights are off trying to keep itself hidden in the rain fall. The sedan slowly creeps to a halt mounting the kerb and it's brake lights flashing on for only a few seconds before the handbrake parking light comes on.
Inside the car there is a man in a long dark trench coat and black pants and a grey jumper. As he takes his hand off the handbrake he wipes his wet hand on the bottom of his trench coat. Over the radio the radio caster is talking about the last feature.
RADIO CASTER: Now how about the rain? Still going after an hour and it should continue to the morning. So anyway back to our main piece the latest fossils that date back to the age of the dinouars are going to be going on show from tuesday at the Nature History museum right here in L.A. And now for you listeners this is Bill Withers with Ain't No Sunshine.
Just as the musi begins to play the man leans over and switches the radio off as he pulls his keys out of the car. As he takes off his seat belt his gun holster on his belt is freed. The man glances over at the warehouse door through the rain swept driver's window. He pulls his weapon out. It's a Beretta. He ejects the clip and checks the clip quickly before sliding the clip back into the Beretta and pulls back the top, sliding a bullet into the chamber ready. He flicks the saftey on and slides the Beretta back into his holster as he pulls something out of his pocket. The man opens the glovebox and throws the item inside before shutting the glovebox again.
MAN: I can do this.
The driver quickly gets out of the car and turns locking it. As the rain begins to come down on him he drops his car keys into his trench coat pocket and pulls his grey jumper down to cover the holster.
The man pulls his trench coat collar up and hurries across the street looking round for any witnesses. As he gets to the door he glances back up and down the street then carefully opens the door letting light shine out the doorway into the dark street. He steps inside the brightly lit room.
As the door shuts the rain swept street is plunged back into darkness again. Then there is silence. The silence only lasts a few seconds when suddenly there is two loud bangs. Then silence again with only the rain that can be heard.
The screen goes to black as The Who, The Relay song begins to play as it shows CSI: Los Angeles.
A bright white light is pulled away from the screen and shows the face of Supervisor CSI Amber Donoghue. She is in her late thirties as she is checking over the body with latex gloves on as her curly brown hair just past shoulder blades slips over her shoulder. Her bright blue thin almond shaped eyes scan over the victim. She is both tall and slim but at the moment she is crouched over the body so her tall frame is hidden. Next to her is her silver CSI case.
Amber flashes her pen light torch over the large room with the body not far from the doorway. There is a large stall of boxes on the right hand side wall and a table with cut wires glasses and jars on the left side of the room. Amber is wearing cream coloured pants and a white blouse with a cream coloured waist coat to match with white boots with her weapon holstered on her right hand hip and her badge on her waist coat pocket.
Just behind her there is noise as detective Karrie Symonds enters the room. Karrie Symonds is in her mid twenties with honey blonde streaks in her naturally long brown hair and sparkling blue eyes. The detective is wearing a black pair of pants with white pin stripes and a red blouse with a black jacket with white pin stripes aswell and black high heeled boots. The detective has her Beretta in holster on her left hand hip with her badge on the right side of her belt. Karrie enters looking at Amber as she holds her notepad.
AMBER: Didn't take you long to interview the witness.
KARRIE: He said and i quote I got a call about noise at my warehouse. I came in and found him. So i freaked and called you guys. Sorry girls. End quote. Some help.
Karrie flicks her notepad shuts and slips it into her jacket pocket. Just then two more CSI's enter through the door. A young woman in her late twenties comes in with her white latex gloves on and a silver CSI case. Jean Strawson has long flame red hair down to her waist with Green eyes and dark olive skin. As she nods over to both Amber and then Karrie. She is a CSI level 3 wearing black pants and a white fitted t shirt with a a brown leather jacket on her tall 5'10 frame. Her badge is round her neck and her holster is clipped onto her belt round her back.
Behind her is Stephen Wright with short brown spikey hair and deep blue eyes. He is in his mid twenties and is a level 2 CSI wearing dark blue jeans and a black shirt. His board shoulders helping his shirt fit better. His belt has both his holster and a CSI badge. He is wearing his latex gloves and has a silver case and a camera round his neck.
STEPHEN: Hey ladies. Hey Karrie.
KARRIE: Back at you Ste.
AMBER:You two take the room. I'll work the body.
Both Stephen and Jean both take a side of the room each. Jean heads over and begins to check over the boxes as Stephen begins to check over the table next to Karrie.
Both Stephen and Jean click on their pen lights and begin searching round. Jean spots some white dust on the floor.
She kneels down placing her kit down and pulling out a plastic bag and a small knife. She scraps some of the dust up and slips it into the bag sealing it.
JEAN: I have some white powder here. It doesn't look like drugs but i will know more when i get back to the lab.
Stephen begins checking the wires and looking at the glasses on the table. He spots a couple of finger prints.
STEPHEN: I have a couple of fingerprints here. Might get us a name.
Amber reaches inside the victims trench coat and pulls out his car keys. She turns to Stephen and passes them over.
AMBER: You check out his car. It should be nearby. Let me know what you find.
Stephen takes the keys and nods.
STEPHEN: No worries boss.
Stephen heads ouside and begins to head over to the only car that isen't a police car a red sedan.
Amber turns back to the body and lifts the man's head. There is one round to his spine just below the neck and another round to his temple. The man is the same man from the intro.
AMBER: He was shot twice. He has no ID on him.
KARRIE: In a building like this sounds like a drug deal gone wrong to me.
Amber reaches down the side of his body and feels a holster. She pulls out a Beretta and ejects the clip counting the bullets.
KARRIE: He was packing?
AMBER: And he didn't even get to fire.
JEAN: Ambushed?
Just then Amber's phone goes off and Amber pulls it out her pocket it shows the caller as Stephen.
She flicks the phone open and answers it.
AMBER: Yeah. Right ok. Thanks.
She flicks her phone shut and places it back in her pocket.
AMBER: We have to get the body out of here now before this place is calling with feds.
KARRIE: Why?
AMBER:Our dead body is an F.B.I officer.
Both Jean and Karrie look in surpise at each other.
The rest of the story can be found on this link.
http://talk.csifiles.com/showthread.php?t=56296
And i hope to read your feedback soon.
Thanks