"Gum Drops: The Un Seen Scene

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  1. nicksarafan2

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    Title: “Gum Drops: The Cut Scene”
    Show: CSI: LV
    Style: Romance, Humor
    Rating: PG-13
    Pairing: Snickers
    Spoilers: “Gum Drops”
    Disclaimer: I don’t own CSI or any thing that involves it.
    Summery: this is my take on supposed scene that was cut after George Eads took Billy Petersons part when he couldn’t be there. It takes place in the hotel.

    The hotel,

    “what do you mean you only have two rooms?” Nick asked in a tired state, he stood talking to the old man who owned the place.

    “that’s all I got, one queen room and a twin room, take it or leave it” he said flatly.

    Nick sighed in defeat, “ok fine we’ll take ‘em” Nick said as he sighed the guest book, he turned to the other two.

    “alright I’m taking the queen room, you boys get to share” Sara said wile taking the key to the queen room.

    Greg laughed when Nick rolled his eyes, “oh Nick does not want me to share a room with me” Greg teased.

    Nick sighed and they walked to there rooms, Nick and Greg stopped by there room and Sara continued on to her room with her over night bag and her kit and her coat.

    She struggled to get the key in the door, Nick saw her struggling, he tossed his stuff into the room, “hey Greg I’m going to help Sara out” Nick said Greg didn’t care he went into his room.

    Sara was surprised when nick took her stuff out of her arms, “oh hey thanks Nick” Sara said happily, she opened the door, Nick stood there waiting for her to enter. “oh your very gentlemanly” Sara said as she walked in, Nick fallowed.

    “oh this is cozy” Sara said slightly sarcastically, she looked around the badly decorated room, Green curtains, a comforter that matched it, a oddly colored red carpet. A small round table and chairs.

    “ooh yeah this place is… at least the bathrooms clean” Nick said wile peaking in the bathroom. “sorry it was the only place in town that wasn’t booked up” Nick said apologetically.

    “it’s ok Nick it’s been a long stressful day, any place is nice” Sara said wile peaking in the bathroom, “and good job Nick on the gum thing” Sara said.

    “well we haven’t found her yet” Nick said wile taking off his coat, he sat on the edge of the bed.

    “right” Sara said as she made her way over to the bed, she didn’t know why nick thought she was still ok, but she just left it be, she didn’t want to discuss it again.

    Nick leaned back on the bed and grabbed the remote, he turned on the TV, Sara couldn’t help but smile at how cute he looked just watching TV.

    Sara stated to pull some stuff out of her suitcase, “hey Nick why don’t you want to share a room with Greg” Sara asked as she looked through her stuff.

    Nick looked at her, “oh it’s not Greg really, it’s that I don’t like sleeping in strange places, also I here Greg snores like a buzz saw” Nick said with a chuckle.

    “yeah once I heard him sleeping in the break room it was bad” Sara said wile pulling sheets out of her case, Nick looked at her and raised an eye brow, “Oh I like to bring my own sheets and pillow cases” Sara said after seeing him look.

    “oh I can only guess why” Nick said wile standing and walking over to her, she handed him a stack of sheets, he put them on a chair and pulled the comforter off.

    Sara helped him pull the sheets off as well, “oh gosh nick you’re a CSI you should know about other peoples DNA… bodily fluids, who knows what the last person who stayed here did in this bed” Sara said.

    Nick appeared disgusted, “thanks, you have forever ruined hotel rooms for me” Nick said wile dropping the sheet on the floor in complete disgust.

    Sara laughed as she took her sheet and nick was opening her kit up, “what are you doing?” she asked, Nick turned around with the UV light in hand and the red safety glasses on. “your nuts Nick” she said with a laugh.

    Sara took it from Nick, “ok I have to get ready for bed, take a shower” Sara said wile gently pushing nick to the door.

    “hey now, I can’t stay?” Nick asked, as she pushed him to the door, “I can just hang out in the…” he stopped when she pushed him into the hall, she waved and closed the door.

    Nick sighed and walked back over to his room, he knocked and Greg opened the door, “hey Nick, Sara settled?” Greg asked as Nick walked in.

    “yeah she’s safe in the room, Oh I see our room is not much better” Nick said wile looking at the room with the same decor, only two twin beds.

    Nick noticed the bed by the window had Greg’s stuff on it, so nick sat on the other bed.

    “yeah there isn’t any cool Vegas feel in here” Greg said wile holding his toothbrush in hand.

    Nick laughed lightly, he laid back on the bed, “hey Nick guess what I found on the TV” Greg said happily.

    Nick groaned wile heading to the bathroom, “Greg must you watch porn?” Nick asked, not in the mood for any weird stuff.

    Greg looked at him funny, “who said anything about porn? I’m watching Sponge Bob Square Pants” Greg said wile sitting to watch it.

    Nick laughed and went into the bathroom his bathroom kit in hand, “have fun Greg” Nick said with a smile as he closed the bathroom door.

    Nick got into his bed, he’d asked house keeping for extra clean sheets just to be safe, he had changed into his pj bottoms and a T-shirt, he sat there looking through case files.

    Greg was in his bed playing his Game Boy and every time something happened he made a noise.

    Nick sighed when Greg made a ouch sound, “Greggo, can you please quite down, I’m trying to read this file here” Nick said wile taking his glasses off.

    Greg looked at him slightly shocked, “dude, you look like Grissom right now, and it’s freaking me out” Greg said.

    Nick sighed, “I wear contacts when I’m at work… I’m juts going to go to…” nick stopped when a knock came to the door, nick got out of bed.

    He walked over to the door, he peaked out the whole and saw Sara, he quickly unlocked the door, “Sara get in here” Nick said wile pulling her in.

    She stood there in tiny boy shorts and a tank top, she held Nick’s jacket in hand and waved to Greg “hey guys, Nick you left your coat in my room” she said wile putting it on Nick’s bed.

    “Sara you shouldn’t go running through motel halls wile dressed like this” Nick said wile looking over her.

    Sara smiled, “thank you nick for you concerns, but I’m ok, and good night” she said wile kissing his cheek, she walked past Nick and went to Greg, she gave him a hug, “ok see you boys tomorrow” she said wile rubbing Nick’s back as she passed him again.

    She walked to the door, Nick fallowed, she walked into the hall and nick stood there waiting for her to get back in her room, she walked back to her room giggling at Nick’s behavior.

    She stood out side her door smiling at him, “Sara” nick said in that way he did when he got upset at her.

    Sara laughed, “nick I’m not going out, I’m going to bed, and you look cute in glasses by the way” she said.

    “good night Sara, and don’t open that door unless you look through the peep hole first” Nick said with a slight smile, she nodded and closed her door, Nick closed his, he sighed, she looked good in that little outfit of hers.

    Later that night,

    Nick lay in his bed awake, as the loud sound of a buzz saw just buzzed on, Nick looked over, “how can he sleep through that?” Nick asked himself as he turned again.

    “for a guy who’s so freaking skinny, he sure does make a lot of freaking noise” Nick said bitterly as he covered his head with another pillow.

    Nick huffed and picked up the hotel phone, “hey, can I coma over?” Nick asked in a soft voice, “ok thanks” Nick said before hanging it up.

    Nick quietly got out of bed, grabbing his pillow and a blanket, he carefully made his way to the door and after making sure he had a hotel room key, he left the room.

    Nick walked the few steps to the other room door, he knocked on it in a rhythm, it opened a second later, “hi Sara, thanks again” Nick said as she let him in.

    Nick put his stuff on the chair, he turned to the sleepy Sara, “sure, why did you wake me up at 1:00 am again?’ she asked as she tried to fix her hair.

    “I’m sorry, I love him, but the boy snores like two cats in a cat fight over a dead fish” Nick said, Sara laughed slightly, nick blushed, “I’ll just sleep in this chair” Nick said as he tried to straighten the pillow out.

    Sara looked at the dinky chair, then at not so dinky beefy Nick, “no, I will not allow you to sleep on that hard back breaker” Sara said as she went back to her side of the bed, she straitened the bed out a little.

    Then as nick stood there a little flabbergasted, she climbed in and turned onto her side, she then looked at Nick, “are you coming to bed or aren’t you?” she asked.

    Nick stood there, a little shocked, “um ok, Sara I don’t think it’s a good idea” Nick said softly, he didn’t know what to do, and Sara’s request stunned him.

    “no argument Mr. just get in, and don’t sleep right on the edge, I don’t care if you touch me” Sara said wile turning onto her back.

    Nick did as told, he walked over to his side and climbed in, he laid flat on his back, Sara looked at him, ”Nick will you relax, you making me stress out” Sara said with a slight laugh.

    Then she moved closer to nick, she snuggled up to him and pit her hand on his chest and her head on his shoulder, “relax” she whispered softly.

    Nick gulped, he then sat up, knocking Sara off of him, “I’m sorry Sara I just can’t do this” Nick said wile rubbing his face with his hands.

    Sara looked confused, “do what? If you don’t want me sleeping that close just say so” Sara said wile rubbing his shoulder.

    “no, I like you being that close, that’s the problem… you smell so sweet, and your skin is so soft, when you kissed me on the cheek earlier, I wanted to feel your lips longer… I can’t sleep in the same bed with you, and not do any thing” Nick said wile taking a deep breath, “I’m sorry” nick said softly.

    Sara looked at him surprised, he was waiting for her response, she surprised him with the one he got though, she leaned to him and kissed his lips gently.

    Nick was stunned to say the least he wasn’t expecting this to be her response, she put her hands on his face and sucked on his lips and wanted him to give.

    she pulled away, “nick for this to work you have to kiss back” she whispered softly wile looking him over hungrily.

    Nick looked around with his eyes, “wait, what’s going on?” Nick asked his voice a little husky, from being kissed.

    “nick we’re about to make love” Sara said softly, she noticed nick’s surprised face, “Nick for a guy who’s a CSI you can sure miss a lot of stuff” Sara said with a smile.

    “wiat I’m sorry, I’m just confused, you like me back?” Nick asked, Sara huffed and kissed him again.

    “Of coarse silly, now please” she said softly, she was getting annoyed that he hadn’t caught on yet,

    Nick was surprised, “but I thought… “ Sara cut him by kissing him again.

    “Don’t think, just do” she whispered, “now you have three choices, we can either talk all night, go to bed, or do what I know the both of us want to do now” Sara said softly.

    Nick smiled slightly, he kissed her back, she wound up climbing into his lap, “I take the last choice” Nick said against her lips.

    She ran her fingers though his hair, as they kissed intensely, Nick’s hands gripped her waist.

    Nick rolled her onto her back and he wound up on top of her, they kissed in a feverish attack of each others lips.

    “Oh Sara I had no idea you felt the same way” Nick said against her neck as he kissed it, Sara sighed softly.

    “oh I’m just glad you told me… I guess we thank Greg for this” she whispered softly, as she kissed his lips again.

    “Yeah I guess so” Nick said with a laugh, he kissed her lips some more before moving to her neck and chest over her shirt.

    Nick started to push her shirt up, and was kissing her tummy, she kept running her fingers through his hair.

    Meanwhile next door,

    Greg woke up to the sound of knocking on the wall, he sat up and looked around, “w3hat is that?” Greg asked himself, he laid back down and turned on his side, he couldn’t believe his ears when he heard some one scream with passion, “wow, some ones getting it on” Greg said quietly as to not wake Nick up.

    The next day,

    Nick stood putting his stuff in the back of his Denali, when Sara skipped over, she gave him a quick kiss on the lips, “hi cutie pie” she said with a smile.

    “hey baby, looks like a good day” Nick said softly, he looked over some stuff, Sara stood close.

    “so you get back in with out Greg waking up?” Sara asked wile drawing imaginary lines on his arms.

    “oh yeah he was still sleeping when I slipped into the bathroom to take a shower” Nick said softly.

    “good…” she stopped when Greg walked out, he put his stuff in the back of the truck. “hey Greggo” Sara said sweetly.

    “hey you two, Nick I can’t believe you slept through that noise last night” Greg said with a laugh.

    “What noise?” Nick asked wile looking at Sara, she tried to not laugh when nick looked at her.

    “yeah last night some newly weds were going at it like rabbits, it was crazy, she was screaming…” Greg said thinking about it.

    “ok, we should get going, Sara you ride with Greg” Greg got in Sara’s car, she walked over to Nick.

    “I told you that you were to loud” Nick said she hit his arm gently, “ouch, I guess I shouldn’t make you scream again” Nick asked, with a smile.

    “no Nick, you can do that, but only when we’re alone” Sara said with a smile, she knew Greg was there, so she just gently touched his tummy, “see you soon Nicky” she said before walking away, nick watched her walk away.

    Sara smiled at Nick and he gave her a sexy look with a wink as they closed the doors and drove off.

    The End

    That was my fic, hope people liked it!!! R&R people R&R

    Peace out!
     
  2. NHRFan

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    I like it. Greg has no idea that was Nick was doing to Sara.
     
  3. csikicksurass

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    that was so cute, i loved greg in it!!! exelnta
     
  4. heartagram69

    heartagram69 Head of the Swing Shift

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    haha nice, it would have been funni if they hadn't cut greg off and he continued thinking.... "it sounded like she was saying nicky, and it was coming from your room sara, OMG"

    haha
     
  5. cofi_shot

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    That was fun! I hope you keep on writing stuff like this :D
     
  6. Cordelia_GRS_Fan

    Cordelia_GRS_Fan CSI Level Two

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    lol, that was a cool fic! Poor, clueless Greggo. And yeah, that would have been comical, heart! lmao.


    Xx..::Mia-Sara::..xX
     
  7. Misery

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    Great story!
    I do agree that only a simple thing like sharing a room together would be enough for those two to make a move.
     
  8. SaraSidleStokes

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    thats a great Fic SL I loved it (*smirks* for some reason it reminded me of how Chan and Mon Hooked up on FRIENDS though)
    I can definetly see all that happening and I agree with Misery in that sharing a room together would definetly Make them make a move
     
  9. Lia

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    LMAO.
    I'm not even Snickers and I LOVE this, and I agree with SaraSidleStokes, it does kinda remind me of Monica and Chandler.
     
  10. sissi59100

    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    Me too actually :D

    That was a nice one-shot fic , hope you will write more ;)
     
  11. iluvEricSzmanda

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    I loved that fic! :D Very nice.
     
  12. iloveyou

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    Hehe I loved it :D
     
  13. nicksarafan2

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    I'm glad every body liked it, it was fun to write :D
     
  14. Can_I_be_U

    Can_I_be_U Hit and Run

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    Loved it. I could so see Greg sitting watching Spongebob and playing gameboy (he sort of reminds me of my 11 year old :lol: )

    Oh and Nick in glasses (yummy) I LOVE a man in glasses, there is something super sexy about that. :devil:
     

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