GSR's Wedding Vows By PiperGrissom ------------------------------------------------------------------- Grissom- "Sara, I have loved you for many years. In that time, I grew as a man so that I may be worthy of your love. I didn't desrve you, I still don't, but here you are, strong, brave, caring, beautiful, brilliant and passionate. I can look into your eyes and all I see is your love for me. Know that I will belong only to you for the rest of our lives. I will comfort you, help you when you are in need, support you in everything that you do and I will always respect you. I want to grow old, alright older with you, I want to have childern with you, I want to be your husband until the day I die. I know that you expected poetry, or a famous quote, but, let me say this, nothing ever written is worthy of expressing my deep love for you. With this ring, I thee wed and join my life to yours." Sara- "Gil, you are the only man I have ever loved, you are my home, my heart and my soul. I lived for you. I survived for you, I will love you until the end of time. I want to have a family with you, I will grow old with you. You are my strength and I'll be yours, you are my life and I'll be yours. I will support you in anything you do, I will comfort you when you need it, I will give you your space when you crave it, I will be only yours, as I have always been, until the day I die. I did expect a quote, but your own words, are more beautiful than anything a poet could have written. Gilbert Grissom, I love you with everything I am and all that I will be. With this ring, I thee wed and join my life to yours."
I like your little story very much. You find really the right words for Grissom and Sara. Very emotional written. So romantically and empathetic. Yes, the two are the correct pair. Further so in the future !