Good-bye Is Just The Beginnin

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  1. beautifuldisaster

    beautifuldisaster Lab Technician

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    This Is A EDeN Fanfic

    It's A Song Fanfic

    It My First

    Hope Ya'll Enjoy It

    If Not Please Let Me Know

    The Song Is Called Goodbye By Miley Cyrus

    So Here It Is....



    ~Natalia's alarm goes off...

    "I can honestly say you've been on my mind since I woke up today, and today"

    ~She glances at a pic of her and Eric...

    "I look at your photograph all the time"

    ~As she thinks back on all the times they shared together...

    "These memories come back to life, and I don't mind"

    ~As she gets out of bed to wash her face....

    "I remember when we kissed, I still feel it on my lips"

    ~Dryin off her face....

    "The time that you danced with me with no music playin"

    ~Gettin dressed....

    "I remember the simple things, I remember till I cry"

    ~Drivin to work....

    "But the one thing I wish I'd forget, the memory I wanna forget, is goodbye"

    ~Next Mornin....

    ~Sitting in bed....

    "I woke up this mornin and played our song, and through my tears I sang along"

    ~Reached for her cellphone...

    "I picked up the phone and then put it down"

    ~Let's out a sigh...

    "Cause I know I'm wasting my time, and I don't mind"

    ~Walks out onto the beach....

    "I remember when we kissed, I still feel it on my lips"

    ~Walkin down the beach thinkin back on the time when they were in the lab and he danced with her with no music playin....

    "The time you danced with me, with no music playin"

    ~And when he held her tight...

    "I remember the simple things, I remember till I cry"

    ~Then the time when they broke up...

    "But the one thing I wish I'd forget, the memory I wanna forget"

    ~Feels her cellphone ringin....

    "Suddenly my cellphones blowin up with your ringtone, I hesitate but answer it anyway, you sound so alone, and I was brought to hear you say"

    ~Walkin back up to her house....

    "You remember when we kissed, you still feel it on your lips, the time that you danced with me, with no music playin"

    ~Doorbell rings, she runs to get it....

    "You remember the simple things, we talk till we cry"

    ~Opens the door to find Eric standin right in front of her....

    "You say that your biggest regret, the one thing you wished I'd forget"

    ~He walks up closer to her and pulls her closer to him...

    "Is sayin goodbye, sayin goodbye"

    "Goodbye"

    ~As he kisses her

    The End

    Hope Yall Enjoyed It!
     
    Last edited: Jul 30, 2008
  2. GregNickRyanFan

    GregNickRyanFan Holographic Moderator Moderator

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    Aww, that was sweet. Good job mixing the song lyrics with what was happening with them in the fic. :)
     
  3. MCRLuver

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    that was very sweet and nicely done. love it and i love the song mixture with the story.
     
  4. mjszud

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    Very nice, I love the song twist!! Sweet - hope you have more for us! :D
     

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