Detective Elisabeth Evelyn Rose

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Lab Technician
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NEW YORK – DAY
A business man checks into the 70 Park Avenue Hotel at 38th Street. Walks towards the elevators up to his room. In our view is the door to room 3142. The man opens the door to his hotel room – In the room is a woman who checked in earlier.
Woman: It’s about time you got here.
Man: Sorry. It’s business nothing personal.
They kiss....things become passionate...
NEW YORK. DAY.
A body in the basement. Flack and Stella wait behind the CSI tech who snaps the photos. She removes a ring and places it in a bindle.

(Stella turns and heads over to Mac, who just walks in.)

STELLA: Hey.

MAC: Hey. What do we have?

They both walk towards the body.

STELLA: About, uh, ten thousand sheets and one dead body.

(Mac looks in at the body. The woman’s neck is slashed.)

FLACK: Safe to say she's not an employee.

STELLA: Maybe she's a tourist. Tough way to see the city.

MAC: So she came in with the sheets. Where do they come from?

FLACK: Hotels. Don't worry, there's only about 70,000 hotel rooms in this
town.

STELLA: Right. Gives us a 70,000-to-one chance of finding out where she came
from.

MAC: (nods) I'll take those odds.

STELLA (Walks around the crime scene) : So, I’ve heard you hired a new CSI.

MAC: Temporarily.

STELLA: Huh, Is that a new term for an inter n.

MAC: She’s not an inter n, she’s a detective, besides we need all the help we can get.

STELLA (Looks back at Mac with a smile) : Ah, I see.

MAC Ignores STELLA’S comment, they continue to process the scene.


Back at the Lab...


Hawkes and Mac put the body down on the plastic sheet on the floor. Hawkes
moves some hair aside and looks at the slash on the victim’s neck.

HAWKES: I'd say this laceration transected the left carotid.
It's hard to tell what type of weapon the killer used, but ... this
looks ...

STELLA: ... personal.

HAWKES: Yeah. And ... pathological.

Hawkes indicates the cuts on her arms and legs.

MAC: These are precise cuts.

STELLA: Speaks to control over her body.

MAC: Killer had control over her somehow.

STELLA: "Lynford Hotels." They have about what, twelve places in the city?

MAC: It's a unique blood pattern.

STELLA: The volume of the blood is consistent with arterial spray.

MAC: So she wasn't just wrapped in this sheet and dumped.

STELLA: No, she was lying on this sheet when her throat was cut.

MAC: Some kind of void in the blood pattern

STELLA: Larger concentration being here. And this looks like the blood is
dripping off the side of the bed.

MAC: Right now, all we have to go on is this sheet and our victim's body.

STELLA: Right. Divide and conquer? I'll start with ...

MAC: missing persons.

STELLA: I could have just as easily said the sheet.

MAC: Our victim is an attractive young woman with manicured nails and expensive lingerie. We found her in upscale hotel sheets. Odds are someone's looking for her and you to make sure that they don't have to look any longer than necessary. I'll take the sheets. I'll meet you back at the ME's office.

STELLA: You're good.

BACK at the morgue...............


While HAWKES and MAC examine the body – an unknown woman comes in into the lab.

ELISABETH: Good Morning Detective.

MAC(Looks at ELISABETH): Can I help you?

ELISABETH: My name is Elisabeth Evelyn Rose – I’m your new CSI.

HAWKES looks impressed. As he watches them talk pretending to continue to examine the body.

MAC: Detective Mac Taylor. What took you so long?

ELISABETH: Traffic. Sorry.

MAC isn’t amused by her comment.

MAC: Well we need you to start right away. We found a body of a woman in a hotel basement.

This is our ME – Dr. Sheldon Hawkes.

HAWKES: Hi.

ELISABETH: Hi.

They shake hands.

MAC: The rest of the team is on the scene.......and that’s where you will start.


Back at the crime scene....

DANNY: This is why I never stay at hotels...a lot of things can happen.

FLACK ( smilling): You know they got room service 24 hours, right.

DANNY: Funny. Well I’m sure this ain’t part of it.

FLACK: Sure is a lot of blood.

STELLA is knelt near the bed – where the pool of blood is. Flack is standing next to her.

STELLA: Her throat was slid , and there were signs of defence wounds.

DANNY(Looking around the room): I guess we can rule out suicide. BOOM!

Danny found a cigarette butt on the floor near a night stand.

FLACK: What did you find?

DANNY: A cigarette butt lying on the floor. Our killer is a smoker.

FLACK: That doesen’t exactly narrow our search.

DANNY: But the DNA on the cigarette will.

STELLA: No sign of our murder weapon.

A Young woman enters the crime scene.

FLACK: Uh, excuse me Ma’am, behind the tape please – this is an active crime scene.

ELISABETH: No, I’m a CSI.


DANNY & STELLA look up. DANNY looks quite interested.

STELLA: You must be Elisabeth.

ELISABETH: Hi.

STELLA: My name is Detective Stella Bonasera.

They shook hands.

That’s Detective Don Flack. Don Smiled. Slightly blushed.

“Hi” he managed.

DANNY: I’m Detective Danny Messer. Hi, How ya doin’?

ELISABETH smiled at his accent.

ELISABETH: Elisabeth Evelyn Rose.

DANNY smiled.

ELISABETH: So, where do I start?

STELLA: Right now were just looking for any evidence that leads us to our killer.
I’m checking the bedroom, Danny is on the hallway...

ELISABETH: I’ll take the bathroom.

STELLA chuckled.

FLACK: Good luck!



ELISABETH takes off to the bathroom.

DANNY walks back into the bedroom.

DANNY: How long do you think is she gonna last before MAC fires her.

STELLA: DANNY, be nice.

FLACK: I think the better question is how long is it gonna be before you hit on her.

DANNY Laughed. STELLA looked shocked.



TO BE CONTINUED.................
 
STELLA, FLACK, and DANNY wrapped up the crime scene, and collected all necessary evidence.

STELLA( to Elisabeth): Were done here......

Elisabeth(walking out of the bathroom): Yeah, same here.

Flack : Did you find anything..?

Elisabeth: Negative.

Stella: Hopefully we’ll be able to find something when we process the evidence.

Back in the Lab.........Stella walks into Mac’s office.

Stella: Hey Mac!

Mac: Hey Stella, any good news?

Stella: No, no evidence of the killer – the attack was brutal,
how can someone walk away clean.

Mac: Maybe not, found finger prints on the wrap – and got a name Jake Thomas. An employee
At one New York’s finest banks. With a history of violence.

Stella: Right....sounds like we need start asking questions....

In one of the room Flack interrogates Jake Thomas.


Flack: What is your relationship with Mary Jefferson?

Jake: I don’t even know her.

Flack: Yeah, well our evidence tells us otherwise. You spent the night with her
at a nice hotel and murdered her.

Jake: Murder? I didn’t murder that girl. And yeah we did spend that night together.
I mean she’s hot.

Flack: Well something was wrong cuz she’s dead.

Jake: I got off work that day, tired, got a hotel room, called her up told her I wanted to meet her. she was my little vacation. I bought a bottle of champagne and forgotten it the car went off to get it –came back she was lying on the floor dead – blood everywhere.

FLACK:And you don't know what happened? Your finger prints were found on wrap the cover her body. And you have a history of violence - do you honestly think that I'm buying this story.

Jake:What the hell, how do you think i feel,I found the girl dead! I covererd her body with a wrap cuz I didnt know what to do. I didnt want my boss or my wife to find out aboy it.

Flack: Wife? Kidding' me. So what you decided to wrap her and leave her there.

Jake: No, there was a knock on the door I hesitated, it was the consierge. I told him everything was fine waited for him to leave, and then...

Flack: Then you took her body to the bacement. You should of called the cops.

Jake: I wanted to but my wife.......

Flack: Officer take him.
 
Mac waited for Flack outside.

MAc: How did it go?


Flack:He was with her the night she was killed, but he didnt kill her.

Mac: So we a got a third suspect.

Flack:Can you believe this guy has a wife? And the girl he was with was a secret.

Mac: Maybe she found out his secret.......


TBC....................
 
Flack & Stella visit Jake's wife in their apartment.

They take the stairs to the third floor.


Erica Thomas was in the kitchen when she heard a knock on the door.


Flack: Mrs. Thomas open up - NYPD.

Erica opens the door.

Flack & Stella flash their badges.

They both enter the apartment.


Stella: Mrs. Thomas - "Erica" we need to talk to you about the murder of Mary Jeffers.

Erica: Who's Mary Jeffers?

Flack: You mean to tell us you don't know her?


Erica shakes her head.


Erica: Was she someone from the office?


Stella: NO, they were much closer together than that.


Flack: They spent the night together at a hotel.


Erica: What? Jake? No, I don't believe that. Jake is a good husband - he would never do anything to hurt me.


Flack:Maybe he's the person you thought he was.


Stella: So, you don't know anything about her murder?


Erica is silent

Erica: I told you I know nothing about that girl...


Her words are interrupted by Flack's ringing cell phone.

Flack takes a few steps aside to answer the phone call.


Erica: continues.......We've been married for a few months, and everything seemed perfect.


Flack returns into the living area.


Flack:Mrs. Thomas we are going a DNA sample and finger prints from you.


Erica: No, I'm sorry.......

Flack: Unfortunatly you have to - they found the murder weapon, and the epithelials on the mureder

weapon belong to a female....
 
CSI NY CRIME LAB



Elisabeth & Danny are in the lab comparing the DNA samples.



Elisabeth: Well this should determine her guilt.


Danny: What makes you so sure about that? What if it doesent match.


Elisabeth: Because she of all people has motive.


Danny: Nothing gets past you.


Elisabeth:I can say just the same about you Messer.


Danny chuckles.

The computer printed the results.


Danny: BOOM!


Elisabeth: So, is she guilty?


Danny: It's a match.
 
Elisabeth: Great, I'll take that.


Danny:Thats ok, I'll take it.


Elisabeth:( Elisabeth stops DAnny in his tracks) Look its hard enogh that I'm new

- The last thing I need is for you to be on my case.


Danny:(Raising his hands in defeat)Alright,calm down, we can take turns.



Elisabeth smiles and walks away with the results.
 
I'm glad that someone is reading my work. I know its not the best thing - and I put a lot of time and effort. So thank you MacsGirlMel.
 
I like the story so far. You've gotten a lot of the characters right on, especially Danny. :D I'm interested in seeing where this case goes. I like how your story was laid out in the 3rd chapter. :) It was all clear. I recommend staying with one organizational style throughout--though I know you can't exactly go back and change it.

Great job so far, I can't wait for another chapter!
 
Thank you - speed_cochrane. I apologize for inconsistancy.
I will try to improve in the future.

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Sigh - the last chapter of the saga. Or is it?

This case may be over - but there is a relationship in development. Stay tooned to find out what happens to our beloved characters...........

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Back in the interrogation room. Erica is seated at the table, Flack is sitting across from her.


FlacK: Well Mrs.Thomson as they say appearences are decieving.

Erica: What do you mean by that?

Flack: You lied to us, You murdered Mary Jefferson.

And the rules say you got just one place to go.


Erica( with tears in her eyes): I loved him, I can't believe he had done that to me.
I thought I had everything, a dream wedding, a great husband
- who cheated on me.[pause] That girl deserved what she got;
- for messing with my husband.


Flack(stands up with anger): Nobody deserves to die, even if they are rotten.
It is not up to you to serve justice - and now you will spend the
the rest of your life paying for it.

Officer take her.



Police officer leads Erica away.Flack walks out, and walks towards Mac's office.


Flack: I'm so glad this case is done.

Mac looks up.


Mac: Not completely, there is still paper work to be filed.


Flack: Yeah well thats better than looking that girl in the face.

Mac has a sympathetic look on his face.

So I guess youre staying behind?


Mac: There is still plenty of work to be done.


Flack: I see, well me & Danny are gone go out for beer.


Mac nods and continues working. Flack leaves his office.



In the LAb.......


Elisabeth is wrapping up things in the lab. Danny walks in...



Danny: Hey.


Elisabeth:Hi.


Danny: Listen,uh, I`m sorry about earlier.


Elisabeth:Yeah.


Danny: Flack and I are going to go out for a beer,maybe you wanna join?


Elisabeth chuckles.


Elisabeth: I cant - busy.


Danny: Alright, suit yourself.

(Pause)

Elisabeth: Messer, hand on.


Danny looks back surprised.


Elisabeth: Let me get my coat.

Danny smiled.


Danny: You can stop calling me Messer - It`s Danny.



They both exit the lab and into the hallway.

Flack is walking towards them.




Flack( with a confused look): You got companny - Messer?


Danny: Yeah, Elisabeth is going to join us - If its ok with you.



Flack:Are you sure she`s up for that?


All three chuckle.



Elisabeth: Hey, If can deal with you in a lab - I can deal with you in a bar.



EXIT FLACK,DANNY, ELISABETH.



TBC...........
 
Sorry for the delay, everyone. :)


Well this is the end of this story, So let me know what you

think.............maybe there is a chance I might continue.




Thanks.
 
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