CSI:Team Truama Part 2

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Speedle03

Dead on Arrival
Nick:Hey!Gris.
Grissom: Yes Nick
Nick:What does this look like to you?
Grissom:I dont know Nick,let's get it to Greg

While Nick is swabing the sticky wet substance Grissom finds something interesting.It is a pointed end of something metal.
Grissom:Hey Nick,have you looked at the body at all.
Nick:Just got done boss
Grissom: Ok hand me the fork
Nick:why?
Grissom: I found a pointy piece of metal might be part of the fork.
Nick hands his boss the fork.
Grissom:Just as i thought,but why is the pointed part that broke off not in the body?
Nick:
well,there are several stab marks maybe it chipped off while he was stabbing him?
Grissom gets up and walks next door to a vacant room.
Grissom:Hey brass how tall do you suppose the cieling in this vacant room is?
Brass:Oh i dont know six and a half maybe seven feet.
Grissom:and in the crime scene?
Brass:Looks about six two.
Grissom: So why have one cieling lower than the other?
Grissom: Wait Nick, is there scratch marks above the bed ?
Nick: Yea there is. The fork scratched the ceiling!
Grissom:But that still doesnt explain why the ceiling is lower in here.
Nick:maybe its for midg..
Grissom glares at Nick for almost saying the word.
Grissom:What have i told you Nick?
Nick:I know I know dwarfes or little people not midgets.
 
Well i hope you guys likes part 2 of my CSI story. there was an episode where there was a little people convention and a dwarfe got murdered and nick says"so back to the midgets"
and grissom says"nick dwarfes or little people" i had to put a reference to that episode i liked it
 
Speedle03, that was interesting but a little rushed.

I thought it was ok but you said there was going to be some story here? What does the room look like? Are there pictures on the walls?? How much blood is there.

Next time, it might help if you double space each new line of conversation so it isn't so difficult to read. Also, you should post the whole story in one thread, not multiple threads otherwise the mods might start to get antsy.

I was just expecting something longer is all.

But I'd like to see the rest.
 
ill give you a little preview of the next section the body is described while doing the autopsy and they will investigate the room a little more in the next one also i will just try to keep it to one thread thanks for the help
 
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