Cry

Ok, I made this up very quickly so you EDeN fans would have something till I can update my other story "Only Hope"! This is a songfic! At the end of the song I put them talkin just to give it a twist!!! So I hope you enjoy!!!! The song is called Cry by Kelly Clarkson!!!!

(Calleigh and Natalia were in the lab workin on a case when Calleigh asked how she was since she and Eric broke up)

"If anyone asks"

"I'll tell them we both just moved on"

(Natalia walked out of the room and everyone was starin at her)

"When people all stare"

(As she walked by them they talked bout her and Eric)

"I'll pretend that I don't hear them talk"

(As she turned the corner to the break room she saw Eric)

"Whenever I see you"

(She swallowed hard and she opened the door to the break room and slammed it shut)

"I'll swallow my pride and bite my tongue"

(She went over to the sink and looked at herself in the mirror and turned on the water)

"Pretend I'm okay with it all"

"Act like there's nothing wrong"

(She splashed water on her face)

"Is it over yet"

"Can I open my eyes"

(As she pats her face dry and walks over to her locker)

"Is this as hard as it gets"

(She falls down on the ground and starts to cry)

"Is this what it feels like to really cry"

(She lays her head on the bench and lets another tear fall and takes a deep breath)

"Cry"

(Eric and Ryan are on a scene together and Ryan asks him about him and Natalia and how he was doin)

"If anyone asks"

"I'll tell them we just grew apart"

(Eric let out a big sigh)

"Yet what do I care if they believe me or not"

(He’s thinkin back on the time when he and Nat spent their first night together)

"Whenever I feel your memory is breaking my heart"

(He walked back to the Hummer to head back to the lab)

"I'll pretend I'm okay with it all"

(Eric pulls the door shut)

"Act like there's nothing wrong"

(He lays his head and closes his eyes on the steerin wheel of the Hummer)

"Is it over yet"

(He looks up and opens his eyes)

"Can I open my eyes"

(As he looks over at the passenger seat and saw her and remembered a ride him and Nat shared together)

"Is this as hard as it gets"

(As a tear falls from his eye)

"Is this what it feels like to really cry"

(As he lays his head back on the headrest in the Hummer and lets more tears fall)

"Cry"

(Natalia’s talkin to Calleigh about the same thing over and over and Calleigh finally stops her and tells her she needs to go lay down for a little while)

"I'm talking in circles"

(Eric tells Ryan he’s fine and that he doesn’t need to worry bout him anymore)

"I'm lying"

(Ryan says ok and don’t say anything else as Eric looks back at Ryan and lets out a sigh)

"They know it"

(As Eric walks away from Ryan)

(Natalia’s walks over to the couch in the breakroom and falls down on it)

"Why won't this just all go away"

(Eric stops and looks out the window as the sun is settin)

"Is it over yet"

(As Natalia opens her eyes at the sound of the door openin and finds Eric stnadin in the door way)

"Can I open my eyes"

(Eric walks over to Natalia and holds her)

"Is this as hard as it gets"

(As Natalia starts cryin into his chest)

"Is this what it feels like to really cry"

(Eric kisses the top of her head as he lets a tear fall)

"Cry"

Eric- "You have no clue how much I've missed this"

(He said as he pulled her even closer to him)

Eric- "Hey..."

Eric- "I was wonderin if maybe you would like to start over?"

(Natalia looked down and let out a sigh)

(Eric lifted her head up and moved his face closer to hers until his lips met hers)

Eric- "You really have no clue how much I've missed that"

(He said as he laughed and wrapped his arms around her waist)

(Natalia wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled his head down to where his lips met hers again, this time kissing more passionately)

Natalia- "You have no clue"

(She said as she broke the kiss)

Eric- "So does that mean you're exceptin my offer?"

Natalia- "What do you think?"

(She said as she kissed him again)

Eric- "I'll take that as a yes"

(Natalia smiled as he laced his hand into hers and the walked out of MDPD hand in hand)

THE END

 

I like these little songfics, it's like a little fanvideo. Great song choice, BTW.

 

its an awesome song!!!! i love it!!!! go on youtube and type in cry kelly clarkson!!!! im gonna ask someone to make a video to it!!!!!

 

oh its fine!! i dont know where i can get the clips from! if i knew where to then i would do them myself!!!! =) does anyone on here know where i can get them?! this song would def make a good vid for them though! i can just see it now!

 

My suggestion would be to contact Rissarose & ask her, she's made tons of EDeN videos. If you can't get to her through PM (you have to have so may posts) then you could look her up at youtube. I think her name is SpiritX on that site & you could contact her there. Good luck with it, I hope to see a video sometime soon

 

I'm rather new at FF again. I wrote some songifcs myself. A boy, did i get some pointers. :lol:
In my opinion I I think you caught something here, maybe a gem. But I would like to point out to you that - and this is just my opionion - (cal me blonde:lol: ) you need to sepearate lyrics more form your storyline. Other that you're doing fabulous :thumbsup: