*Calleigh couldn't believe it. right then and there Jake Berkley had just forced her to kiss him. she felt disgusted. she just wanted to wish it was all a dream. She headed to her favorite bar. the one she, Speed and Eric used to go to before....the shooting. she sat at a booth in the back and saw someone she didn't expect* Calleigh:Ryan? what are you doing here? Ryanh Calleigh. hey. i-i wasn't expecting to see you here. Calleigh:and what is that supposed to mean *she gave him a flirty smirk and she could tell he was getting nervous* Ryan:n-nothing. i just never saw you here before. Calleigh:i haven't been here in a while, since Speed... Ryanh. *Calleigh sighs and Ryan can sense something is wrong. He sits across from her and orders two beers* Ryan:calleigh, what's wrong? Calleigh:nothing Ryan:no, it's not nothing. i've known you long enough to know when something is bothering you. Calleigh:it's Jake. i can't believe he would do that. i just feel...disgusted. and i wasn't even looking for him. i was looking for.... Ryan:for who? Eric? Calleigh:no, not Eric. Ryan:who then? Calleigh:you. Ryan:me? Calleigh:yeah. there's something i need to tell you. Ryan:what? Calleigh:Ryan, i love you. *this made Ryan really nervous be he couldn't help but smile because his long unanswered question has finally been answered. Calleigh Duquesne loved him* Ryan:you....you love me? wow. i can't believe this. I love you too Cal. Calleigh:wait did you just say you love me too? Ryan:yeah. *they were leaning in about to kiss when...Jake burst into the bar* Jake:what the hell are you doing with him!? Calleigh:Jake, back off. i don't love you i never have. i only dated you becase i felt sorry for you. so leave us alone. I'm in love with Ryan. Jake:so that's how it's going to be huh? so that kiss meant nothing? Calleigh:Jake you forced me to kiss you. and i have this to say. you're a horrible kisser in need of a breath mint! Ryan:just back off Jake. Jake:what are you going to do about it? Ryan:have you arrested. Eric and H are still on the clock. they'd gladly have you arrested for harrasment. Jakek, ok. I'll back off. Ryan:i never want to see you near her again. or i'll make it my mission to get you. so get! *Jake leaves the bar, very angry* Calleighh Ryan! i can't believe you stood up for me like that. Ryan: it's the least i could do for someone as beautiful as you. now where were we? Calleigh:right here... *they kiss* TBC........
Keep writing er.. typing please! You can't just have a great build up then just leave us hangin :lol: I love the hint of Ryan jealousy towards Eric, it really makes it exciting Great job
Ugh I wanted to kill Jake when he interrupted their 'almost' kiss Great job, finally they kiss! Send that in to the writers
HAHA! lol! i wish i could. and i'm glad you like it. now we just have to see if the other CaRWashers like it *crosses fingers*
I like it keep writing i'm not really a big CaRWash fan but that's just because i want him for myself but now i'm all for them so keep writing
just so you all know i'm going to be at summer camp for a week and the best part is i have three counselors who are uncanny look-a-likes to Speed, Ryan and Eric! and get this...the one who looks like Eric....his name is Eric!! and they all like and watch the show!!! so i won't be able to update. but as soon as i get back i'll update!
i have enough time for one more update!!! *Later that night* Calleigh:i had a great time Ryan. and thanks again for sticking up for me. *she kisses him* Ryan:no problem. Calleigh:i don't think we should tell the others yet. Ryan:yeah, at least not until everything is settled down and things are back to normal. Calleigh:Ryan, i miss you. Ryan:but we just spent the evening together. Calleigh:i know, i meant at the lab. Ryan:well i'll still be around. as soon as i finish going through my cases i'll have my job back. well that's what Stetler said. and Calleigh, thanks for the support when no one else was there for me you were, you're fantastic. Calleigh:thanks babe. *they kiss* i'll see you tomorrow. Ryank. i love you. Calleigh:i love you too. Ryan:hey can i uh walk you to your car? Calleigh:you know i couldn't resist that. *she gives him a flirty smile and hold his hand. Ryan looks at her hand holding his, then at her. just staring into her beautiful green eyes* *they got to her car* Calleigh:see you tomorrow. i love you Ryan:i love you too. *they kiss* *a few weeks later. Ryan adn calleigh have managed to keep thier relationship under wraps so far* *Eric was in the layout lab with Natalia and he noticed how flirty Ryan and Calleigh were being. he sat there and wondered what that was all about* Eric:would you look at the two of them? she never used to flirt with him like that Natalia:Eric, uh yeah she has. ever since i got here i noticed those two always flirting with each other. where have you been? Eric:really? i guess i've been so involved with taking care of Mari to notice a possible relationship between two of my friends. and now that she's uh....yeah.. *he couldn't bear to say it. but Natalia got the message* i'm noticing everything else in the world. Natalia:If you like Calleigh, then why don't you talk to her. Eric:no, she doesn't like me like that. i even saw her kiss Berkley right in front of me. Natalia:well to me it looked like he forced her into it. so talk to her before someone else does. Erick. thanks 'Talia. *he goes to talk to Calleigh. at the moment she's talking to Ryan* Erich hey Ryan Ryan:hey man. how's it going? Eric:i'm good. you? Ryan:i've been better and it doesn't help that i've got IAB on my a** every teo seconds. Eric:uh Calleigh? Calleigh:yeah? Eric:do you have a minute to talk? alone. Calleigh:sure. Hey Ryan uh do you... Ryan:no i don't mind. i've got to get back to reviewing my casework anyways. I'll see you later. ok? Calleighk thanks *she gives him a flirty smile as he walks away* Eric:so u Calleigh waht i wannted to talk to you about was uh...i was wondering if maybe you wanted to do something together. Calleigh:are you asking me out? Eric:uh. yeah. Calleighh. uh Eric i'm sorry but i'm kind of involved with someone. Erich really? who? Ryan? Calleigh:i didn't say that. Eric:you don't have to. the smile you just gave him said it all. Calleigh:look Eric, you had your chance to make a move and you didn't and Ryan did. so i hope you understand. but we can still hang out. just as friends. Eric:you know what you're right. so uh yeah lets uh just drop it for now. ok? Calleighk. but just promise you won't say anthing. we want to wait till everything is back to normal before we go around telling people. Eric, please. Erick. i won't. Calleigh:thank you. now if you'll excuse me i have some ballistics to process. *she leaves Eric standing there. and she doesn't even look back.* *in the ballistics lab* Ryan:knock knock. Calleigh: *smiling* hey! Ryan:guess what? Calleigh:what? *he shows her his badge and gun* Calleigh:you got your job back!?! Ryan:yeah finally after like three weeks of going through all this crap. Calleighh Ryan that's great! *she looks to see if the coast is clear and then when it is she hugs him* Ryan:well i'm off to tell H the good news. I'll see you later babe. *he makes sure no one is around then he kissed her* calleighk. are we stillon for tonight? :devil: Ryanh you know it :devil: i lvoe you. Calleigh:i love you too. *Ryan leaves the ballistics lab* TBC........... hope you like it!! i promise as soon as i get back i'll update!!!
oh that was great i can't wait for you to update it the only thing that seemed weird was ryan calling calleigh babe it just seemed weird coming from him lol but it was really good i love it